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Love is the Master by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Levi Daniels comes to speak to Ember Collins' roommate about a case.  Sparks fly instantly and they waste no time getting to know each other.  Levi is looking for more than a sub and Ember seems to be exactly what he wants.  She is new to being submissive and wants to learn as much as she can from the sexy older Dom. 

master

 

When feelings start to emerge can they hold it together?  Will Levi be able to balance his love for Ember with the Dom that she needs?  Can Ember understand that love and submission can go hand in hand?  What happens when another Dom shows an interest in the couple? 

 

Follow these two through their adventures and see where they will take it.  How long will it take for them to learn that Love is the Master?


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101977 Read Count: 24754
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Dec 2016
Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Can I keep you?

Wow .. just found your story and loved it.  Looking forward to future chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591628
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I'm so glad Mia is starting to get better.  I was worried at the beginning as she started getting worse.  WOW, Teddy is already starting school?  I can't believe their summer is over.

 

I can't get enough of this family and look forward to each chapter ... keep em coming when you can.  Thanks!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

Yeah Grace!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

What a day so far and the party hasn't evenstarted yet. LOL

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

This is one of my favorite chapters .... I love seeing Ana and Christian in their daily lives getting stuff done interacting with the kids. 

Tommy crying when Christian had to leave was endearing.  I like the guys only day...wonder what the girls will come up with to do????

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

I loved watching Ana manage Christian ... I was really afraid, like Ana, we would have Colombia all over again.  Go Ana!!!

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Christian learning to change a diaper was great.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Poor Teddy.  

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Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

From the sound of it ... it looks like Susannah and Elena were incahoots with each other??? That doesn't sound good ... I am wondering if there is more to that story.

 

Poor Tommy ... I hate that Lorna also contributed to his abuse.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

I wouldn't put any past Christian.  I am a little worried when Ana said something about being cocerned with what could happen when they are boyh outta town.   Hhhmmm ...

As always ... another fabulous and iintriguing chapter and looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Man, this story keeps getting better and better ... I look forward to every chapter... And this didn't disappoint. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Yeah your back!!!  Nothing is sexier than a man who loves his kids and wife and isn't afraid to show it.  Sexy chapter ... loved it.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Glad Teddy got his drums today ... and Taylor playing them was a supercool touch (and surprise! ).  I hope Christian feels better soon ... I miss him. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Yeah ... Christian didn't disappoint! !! 

 

This serieis amazing ... I always look forward to your updates.

 

P.S. thanks for explaining 'lemons' ... I've been wondering what it means. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

God I love how this turned out ... great chapter.  Now I'm looking forward to when Teddy finally sees his dad ... he's missed him so.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

What a perfect day after the long angsty week they just survived.   And Christian was just perfect.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

God I can seem to get enough of my favorite couple.  Great story ... Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I totally forgot about poor Tommy and Lorna. I'm so glad she called Ana. I hope Christian still in a good mood and supportive of this.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

If Lorna can't get her shit together,  I hope Tommy's able to stay with the Grey's. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Oh my gosh ... what a cliff you left us hangin' on.  Please don't leave us hangin' too long... the suspense of what's happened with Tommy is going to kill me.

 

Glad the business deal is over, it's been a long time in the making.

 

II

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Little Bo Peep is so cute. I'm scared about Christian's reaction. But if anyone can help a less fortunate child, it's them.  

Epilogue??? EEKKKKK!!! I can't imagine my weekends without one of my favorite couples.  "...Please don't take my sunshine away."

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Quite the inquisitive kid, that Teddy.  Cute chapter.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Christian seems wasted but I was hoping we would be treated to seeing Christian taking off Ana dress with his "fucking teeth" ...  maybe???

 

I think my fav was the entire cocktail party .... funny shit.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

That was great writing ... I was crying right along with Ana.  I loved how Christian,  once he settled down, was being so nice to Tommy and trying make Tommy feel comfortable around him.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I love the reference back to the original book ... one of my favorite scenes was when they went soaring. 

 

I love how well Tommis blending into their family.  

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

oh my gosh that is quite the cliff you ledt us hangin from.  Loved the chapter ... CANNOT wait for the next one.  :)

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

It doesn't appear that Christian plans on Tommy leaving anytime soon.  I really love that Christian was playing the piano for him too ... seems like a nice family-ish bond is growing between Tommy and the Grey's.

Short but lovely chapter.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

This story keeps getting better and better.

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Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Christian rocked this chapter ... the good lovin' he shared with Anna and then taking the phone call and playing the piano to help soothe Tommy ... that was just the best ever!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

I was so hoping that they would stop by finance or run into those chics again so we could see their shocked expressions when they realize what they said in front of 'Mrs. Grey'.  LOL

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Hilarious!

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Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Jealous Ana is seriously cute!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Yeah ... more Christian.  :)  And Tommy calling them mama and daddy was perfect.

 

hope your wrists start to mend.  Thanks for continuing this story for us ... it's so good I look forward to every chapter.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Loved having more of Christian being .. well, Christian.

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Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

The first half of this chapter was hilarious.  No day is boring with the Grey's.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I love this story and look forward to Saturdays each week.

I can't wait to see how this meeting with Mr. Parker goes ... will Christian be able to keep himself or his hired hands out of the situation???

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Whew, that was muy caliente!!! 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Wow, I what a cliffhanger ... what is going on with Christian?  Was his call to John in relation to his concern's with Ana meeting her client at the hotel or the flowers or just all of it? And when did he have time to schedule that call?  I mean he seemed fine when he got home.  hhhhmmm .... and that ending?  Dang, that is quite the cliffhanger you leave us danglin' from.  I am SO looking forward to the next chapter ... can't wait.   And can I just say how much I love how easily Tommy is fitting in with the Grey's and how I love that he call's Ana and Christian Mommy and Daddy ... too cute.  Not to take away from Teddy and Grace ... they are just as adorable in their own way too. Great chapter....loved reading every second of it.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Thanks for the long chapter ... I loved it!  Now I can't help wondering what's going on with Christian. I really hope it's nothing too bad.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Wow, a surprise mid-week update ... THANKS!  And thanks for not making us wait a full week to find out exactly what Christian was up to.  Whew!

Looking forward to 107.  :)

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Wow, a lot was covered here.  I felt bad for Ana whe Tommy was takking about his mama.  And I didn't get a good feeling about Georgia ... I have to wonder if she's going to bring trouble for my fav couple.

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Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Another day in the life of the Grey family ... I love these kind of chapters ... so sweet to watch them all interact.

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Cool! I'm looking forward to reading about Teddy visiting Grey House ... should be fun.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Oh my gawd ... what's going on with Mia?!?!  I hope the baby is ok.

 

This chapter was nice, I like scenes with Ana and her dad ... they are so endearing.  We get a lot of the Greys so it's really nice whenwe get to knownthe Steeles too.

 

 

Thanks!

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Oh my!  That would be really tragic if anything happens to Mia or Sarah.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Wow ... I can't even imagine what's going down at the office.  Guess we'll find out next week.

 

Can't wait!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Any chance 115 can come sooner????  It's going to be so hard to wait and see what happens.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Poor Teddy ... he's a good kid who seems like he was standing up for himself.  I hope Anna doesn't go too crazy over this and understands the situation for what it is. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Love the lemons!  I can't wait to see how the visit to Teddy's school goes. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Go Ana! I adored family time when Christian is playing with the kids.  It's nice to see no matter how busy he is, he always makes time to spend with his family.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Wow ... so much going on here.  Ana and a "new" baby.  hhhmmmm ... i wonder how she'll get sucked in.  I would love it if they could expand their family, especially to those who are not as fortunate as them. 

And why was Ray calling??? 

I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter.  I SO love this book.

Thanks and Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

I'm glad Tommy wasn't too sick.  LA should be fun ... can't wait.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

What a nice fun break from the everday drama.  Glad to know Tommy's adoption is going to be finalized soon.  Speaking of drama, I hope the baby-mama isn't going to show up and cause problems.  I liked what Christian said about her though ... saying that maybe she loved him enough to let him live a life she knew she couldn't provide.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Ok, the bathroom scene was HOT, but Kate being stuck in the stall, having to listen to them, was freakin' hilarious. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Lorna starring in a porn, that was funny....sad but funny too.  Gracie was just too cute for words.

 

I have to say, I'm a little distressed when you end this with saying "...working our way to the end ...".   I don't want this to end - I'll admit, I'm selfish that way.  When something is good and you look forward excitedly each week to a new chapter, you don't want to stop...well at least I don't anyway.  :(   You do such a god job at writing Ana, Christian and the whole clan.

 

 

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Aahhh, what a great day that turned out to be.  My fave was when they were in the judges' chambers ... Tommy crying broke my heart.  That whole scene was touching.  Great job ... I loved reading every minute of it.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Wow, Myra pregnant. Didn't see that one coming. Sounds like a great party ... Yeah Tommy!!!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

I love the family gatherings.  I was laughing at that whole conversation where Christian was trying to avoid telling his famikynwjo Leila was.  LOL

Bring on the lemons!!!  :)

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

Oh my gosh .... only Christian would send her flowers that are from his dick.  LOL That cracked me up.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Everyone needs a break.  Glad you're back.  Loved the chapter ... can't wait to see Tommy's reaction when he sees his pictures with everyone elses.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Christian and Grace moments are the best.

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Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

I have to Google the car to see what it looks like ... hot!

I really hope Ana, Christian and the kids are willing and able to add Bo Peep to their family ... everyone needs a HEA.  :)

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

I think my favorite part was Teddy telling his mom that he overheard his teacher talking about how hot his dad is.  LMAO.

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Poor Ana ....I want to kick Elena's ass too.  I they're done having to do anything 'Elena' related.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Loved the trip down memory lane and thanks for the extra long chapter.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Loved the walk down memory lane.  Thanks.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Oh I do hope Peep will be ok.  Sounds like Grace and Tommy might be warming up to the idea.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

I love that the "sneeze" talk made such an impression on Teddy that he is now educating his siblings.  Poor Tommy, I hope he doesn't get down cause his "make-me" mommy and daddy are not around.

Still hoping all will be well with Mouse.

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Oh my gosh, I didn't see that coming.  I'm so happy they changed their minds.  :)

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

Yeah, Ella-Bella's home!!!

Reviewer: SHump Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

So lovely to catch up with my favorite family.  I'll be looking forward to the next installment.