Reviews by dreaminginnorweigen
PTB SmutU 2012 by CeeCee Star Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

A collection of all my assignments for the Summer Semester at Project Team BETA's Smut University 2012.

 

Stories will not be pre-BETA'd.  This is a learning project, people.  :P

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Project Team Beta's Smut University 2012
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4680 Read Count: 1952
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dreaminginnorweigen Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Pre-Assignment

I imagine this was hard to write. And I think the pain and guilt you were trying to convey came through very clearly. Nice job writing a lemon that wasn't meant to be sexy. It could be easy in a class called Smut University to always got for the bodice-ripper style sex scene. This was heartfelt and true. Good for you.



Author's Response:

Thank you, darling.  Like I said, it felt like it helped to write it out.  :)

Summary:

Various pairings, each one-shot written is an assignment for Smut University 2012.

 


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Slash, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Project Team Beta's Smut University 2012
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1312 Read Count: 897
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2012 Updated: 25 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dreaminginnorweigen Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Lesson 2

Really nice! I love the anonymity. Very effective in this. You've managed to write a nicely complete story in so few words. I feel the woman's emotions clearly. And you capture the complete obliviousness of the "Dom" so well.

"She has explained what she is looking for, but he repeats something different back to her. She tries again and again he hears something other. "

"He is sated, she is empty. He is proud, she feels used. "

Exellent job!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind review. I am overwhelmed by all the support I've received for this little piece.