Reviews by gunchsmom
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

WOW!!!  Just fantastic!  SOOO worth the wait to get here.  Can't wait to see where you go next.



Author's Response:

I'm not sure where at this point. I have a few things up my sleeve that are written. Who knows.Thanks for  reading.

E.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Phoebe Grey never had many friends growing up. It’s hard to know if people like you for you or your father. Christian Grey is the richest man in Seattle and Phoebe has grown up under the constant companionship of her bodyguard Chuck Travis. Now it’s time for college and Phoebe is finally going to be just Phoebe, college freshman at Columbia University. Will she make friends without her father’s name and money to influence them?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32579 Read Count: 20861
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Touring the City

What a wickedly good chapter!  Classic Christian.....loved it!

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh I hope she wants to talk!  Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

Did you ever know Ana, not to want to talk? Next chapter.

E.

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow great chapter.  I have such a love hate relationship with the tension of the situation but that is what makes your writing so good.  Please continue and update often.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a comment. Resolution on the way.

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Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Please, oh please, oh please let it be Christian in that chair and not someone who came to take Ana because she wouldn't listen to Christian!!  

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved Books 1 and 2....no shock, i'll be loving this one too!  Glad  you are continuing to write.  I love that you are keeping it sexy too!!  Can't wait for more.....



Author's Response:

Weekend in Houston coming up. We know what they'll be doing.

E.

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVE hot and sexy Christian and Ana time!!!!



Author's Response:

A lot of it in this book.

E,

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WOW....simply WOW!!!!!



Author's Response:

WOW! Thanks

E.

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

what an evil ending :).   How am i to eat turkey after that???

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Just Bloody Fantastic!!!!!

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Loved this chapter.  Sexy Christian, Protective Christian, Loving Christian, and Ana flexing her backbone....does it get any better?? :)  

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

wow...what an emotional chapter, despite Chirstian removing emotion from the equation.  I hope his rational side can come to terms with this and see the right path forward.

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

wow....totally emotional AND totally hot chapter....does it get any better?!?!?



Author's Response:

Thanks. I appreciate it.

E.

Phoebe's Wedding by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

A big secret comes to light the night before Phoebe's Wedding that changes everything...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44944 Read Count: 20852
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Crap hitting the fan

Ok...lots of faith and lots of patience right now.....oh, this is so painful!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Takes place after Anastasia has agreed to sign Christian's contract during their conversation in her graduation. Starts when he goes to visit her, to hers and Kate´s apartment, in Chapter 15.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22252 Read Count: 6545
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 01 Nov 2012
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The detour

Really enjoying this story.  Hope you continue!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment!, and like I said the story is finished already, so I won't let any reader hanging or wondering about how it ends.

Also, thank you for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Back on the game

I thought this was a nice way to bring things back around to the original story.  I would have liked the chapter a bit more "lemony" but look forward to what other stories you come up with!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know that lemons should appear in a FSOG story, but I wanted to keep the M rate, and also like I said this was my first fic, so I didn't want to ruin my story by writting a bad lemon. 

Phoebe's Babies by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

... and more unanswered questions! My sequel to Phoebe's Wedding (read that first!). I wanted to wrap things up from my first story!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116370 Read Count: 24949
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2014
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 37: A Talk, A Dinner, And a Show

LOVED IT!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Anastasia and Geneiveve Steele are enjoying their lives in New York City but the past comes back and rears it's ugly head. Original characters and new characters... different plot line that incorporates some of the original.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82376 Read Count: 20446
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2012 Updated: 25 Dec 2012
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: How Stella got her groove back

2 thumbs up!!  Keep going :)

Summary:

To love, to honor and to cherish are the vows that most people take. My vows were to serve, to obey and to submit.......I am a sub.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Fifty Shades Trilogy, Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Original Fiction, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46421 Read Count: 6594
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Feb 2013
Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow, didn't see that coming.  Really liking this story.  Please keep writing.