Reviews by Kern11232
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Phoebe Grey never had many friends growing up. It’s hard to know if people like you for you or your father. Christian Grey is the richest man in Seattle and Phoebe has grown up under the constant companionship of her bodyguard Chuck Travis. Now it’s time for college and Phoebe is finally going to be just Phoebe, college freshman at Columbia University. Will she make friends without her father’s name and money to influence them?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32579 Read Count: 20861
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Skype Date

This story is a real page turner. Amazing work capturing an authentic perspective of what the Grey kids would be like...wow!!...great job.

Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

I wasn't interested in reading about Pheobe because of my obsession with Christian and Anna. But when I became impatient waiting for postings about Fifty Shades I decided to read your story. I must say I was just as captivated with your addition to the story as much I was when I read the original books. Your a great writer. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for that very flattering review.

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138690
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow, this is one of your best chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you are liking this.

E.

Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Another incredibly well written chapter. I felt every emotion you tried to convey in this chapter. My favorite part was Ana taking care of Christian in the tub. Do delicate, loving and authentic for these two. You're an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate the review. 

E.

Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This story is so intense...has me at the edge of my seat. Wow!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.

E.

Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

My heart is in my throat. Who is it?

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591802
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

You NEVER disappoint.



Author's Response:

I try not to.

Thanks

E.

Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

They love just as hard as they fight. The bickering is cute between these two. I'm suspicious about CG's unexpected late meeting though, is something brewing or am I looking to closely? Can't wait til they make up. Your an amazing writer and I absolutely love, love, love all of your stories...you never disappoint.



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you. Meeting doesn't have any more meaning other than he blew Ana off with his answer and gave more detail to Carrick. She needs to smack his  copper head again. That seems to get his attention.

E.