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Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2673725
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

I am not sure where to even start! This story was amazing!!!!! I completed this and all the out takes.  I will be starting the sequel next and can't wait. I have literally stopped everything and any spare time is spent reading this.  I am so excited because you have so many stories I can read through the end of the year! You should be published my dear for sure.  I am addicted to FF and this is one of my favorites! Thanks for sharing 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145695
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Fifty Shades....More

That was so beautiful, cute, and emotional all at once! i am referring to chapters 32and 33. i loved so many things about it. You are very talent.  Christian and Ana's banter around him cooking was adorable, especially when she told him to wake up Teddy. :) Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking time for a review. I appreciate it. I like them best when they  banter, myself. 

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Fifty Shades....More

You are doing a great job with the Flynn scenes and revelations about Christian's abuse and how it ties to everything that jas taken place in his life.  Either you are an excellent researcher, or your day job is in the field of behavioral medicine. WOW! 



Author's Response:

A little of both. thanks for reading and thank you for leaving  the nice comments. E. 

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138685
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow! Did Christian kill or have her killed? Did she kill herself? Amazing chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Answers in next chapter.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was a beautiful reunion. It nearly brought me to tears! Beautifully written. Thanks



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you. I can't tell you how many times I have cried while writing this story. 

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was awesome! I loved every word of it!  I am really enjoying the dialogue between Ana and Christian, they sound like they have been together for years. Him teasing her and being annoyed is hilsrious! The hormones raging is also a nice touch with her not wanting any hearts and flowers, but for him to just get on with it. Excellent job well done as usual. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I like hearing what people enjoy reading. It helps me to know what makes it more interesting.

Thanks for lraving a comment.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Loved loved loved it! 



Author's Response:

Love, love, love you for leaving a comment.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

WHOA! I don't know how you always manage to sirprise me. That was so good my heart was pounding the minute Ana called Taylor with no answer. The entire chapter was great!!! The twist with Christian's biological father, man you are good! I am on pins to read chapter 11. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Hope I can relieve your prickles from the pins.  Soon.

Thanks. 

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

All I can say is WOW! Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Written and on the way.

Thanks

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was soooooo sweet! Your writing is beautiful. I found my eyes tearing up as I giggled towards the end. I just love their relationship! Thank you



Author's Response:

I love them too. 

Thanks for leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I feel another plot twist coming! I really enjoy your writing. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Lots of things on the way.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG! Please hurry, I am on the edge of my seat biting my nails. You are so awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks and sit back.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Another great chapter! I get so excited everytime I see an update from you. I can stay in this world with you, Christian, and Ana forever! Your writing is so engaging. Please continue with another story as I am afraid this one is going to end at some point.  You have captired the characters so well and the life you have continued for them is nothing short of perfect with the right amount of ups and downs in the relationship. Thank you for sharing with us! 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awesome! Love that you keep us updated so frequently with new chapters. Thanks 



Author's Response:

I'm trying.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMFG! That was soooooooo intense! I am holding back tears. You are just amazing with words and story telling! PLEASE TELL ME NEXT CHAPTER IS COMING FAST! NOT SURE I CAN TAKE THIS SUSPENSE......These poor kids have been through so much. Fantastic chapter as usual. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

OMFG! Thanks!

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity

I am sorry that readers who obviously love your work threw daggers at you for being so brilliant. If they are this upset, you have done a remarkable job of making us confuse fiction and reality. I honestly feel that Christian and Ana are a part of my life (I know that is pretty sad). Anyway, you are amazing and have taken us on quite an emotional journey. I will ask that you continue to do so without being swayed by a few people who posted in emotional states and were clearly not thinking as they began their attack on you. 

I love this story, including the parts that make me cry. I trust you and know that you don't write anything without a purpose. Please continue your journey and many of us will gladly follow (with Kleenex as needed ;-). Those that are so offended can easily read other stories that are all hearts and flowers. There are a ton out there, however yours are by far the best! Thanks for sharing as always.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Great chapter as usual......I loved the girl time and how Ana just started spilling once Kate put the pieces together.  You do such a wonderful job of letting us live through every moment with them beajse of the thought and detail that goes into each chapter. It is never rushed which I sincerely appreciate!  Are you planning a third story? 



Author's Response:

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Well written as usual. So sad and you were able to still show the love and tenderness between them in such a traumatic time. Thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Well done my dear! Can't wait for Full Circle!!! ;-)



Author's Response:

As for Full Circle, just like Christian, it is up.

Thanks

E.

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806658
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: only1niqui Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

Just WOW! I am sorry this is my first review, but this trilogy was soooooooo amazing I could not put it down!!!!! You are extremely talented and I am over joyed that you have this library of stories for me to choose from, however I fell so deeply in love with the characters (all of them) in the Storm series that I can't imagine loving anything else as much.  If anyone has a recommendation for your next story to read following this let me know.  I also saw a review that said Quiet Storm was removed for publishing!  If that is true please confirm because that would be freaking awesome! Thanks so much for sharing this family with us. It definitely was one f the best reads since FSOG that I have experienced.  I will try to do better with reviews for future stories.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591742
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was so fun to read. I can't believe she was able to refrain from sex with him through all of that! Great chapter,



Author's Response:

She was proud too. It's on the way though. After all it is Christian and Ana. 

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

That was great as usual.  The last two chapters had me talking out loud and my kids thought I was insane. LOL.......I know they will be fine, but man Christian is pissed!  And why would she go behind his back again to save Luke by asking Taylor to help her keep Luke on the side??? I know she feels bad, but she is adding fuel to the already out of control fire. I feel a backdraft coming on!!!!

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start to a new story! They are so freakin' cute together. 



Author's Response:

I just love them.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This chapter had me laughing out loud! OMG Christian was hilarious with the hair reaction. It was great to see them have real parenting moments. Really good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Mr. Fifty does like his control.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That was pretty intense.  I was not sure what to expect when I read you warning about this chapter being for those who wanted the tables to turn, however as usual, you nailed it my dear! No other way he could have reacted. The entire chapter was brilliant. To have him go to that dark place with her was a perfect reaction to her earlier attempt at turning the tables. She unleashed that darkness and they did not realize it was coming.  Yes, those issues still lie deep within and I am glad you acknowledged that. The manner in which you brought it out was absolutely perfect!



Author's Response:

I got so many requests for Christian to become Ana's sub. I don't know why. It had to bring back terrible emotions for him. Good thing he has a very understanding, supportive wife.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter.......I so love funny Christian!  His comment anout the commission about Jeff's commission was absolutely priceless. You had me laughing so hard there were tears and loud noises. LOL Can't wait for next chapter.........BTW, your writing is so great the absence of lemons does not matter (not saying we don't want them lol but enjoy your writing either way)



Author's Response:

I thought maybe readers were getting tired of the lemons. I know they are exhausting to write. I'll try to  up the tartness of the chapters. 

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter as have been this story. I just realized I have not been submitting reviews, but wanted to slow down and let you know I am enjoying he read. I love having drama looming for another couple in the story. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I just love them! It's always nice to see them as a normal family dealing with regular issues of parenting. Nice chapter

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thanks for sharing.  Looking forward to her Sacremento trip, meeting his grandmother, the dinner party, and her giving Christian is his gift for their anniversary. So much to look forward to! 

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Freakin FANTASTIC!  I have some catching up to do and I am beyond thrilled that there were 8 new chapters when I came back. It is going to be a long night and I am looking forward to it! So glad you are continuing this story. Not looking forward to the end as I suspect this will conclude their story, correct?  Are you writing anything after? I could likely fall in love with any story you write because of your talent/skill of bringing characters to life.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was beautiful and hilarious! I love it when you have the kids be kids and Christian have to parent. That Teddy is pretty funny and Grace, OMG what a handful.  It is so fun to see that part of their family.  Still catching up and enjoying every minute!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you area liking it. 

Thanks for taking time to leave a review.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That was very cute. I love Ray because he is a no nonsense kinda guy, and I love the respect Christian has for him. I knew it was the dog lol.......Christian is sooooooooo adorable with his big heart. 



Author's Response:

I love Ray too. Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OMG! More than ever am I glad I have the next chapter to read now and not have to wait until after TG! That would have thrown off my whole day LOL.......EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!!!!!

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

LMAO! I immediately thought of the Breaking Dawn Honeymoon scene as I read your description of their bedroom. Too funny and nice touch with Christian's comment ;-) So glad he is OK. I kept thinking Ana was going to need to call his grandmother to ask about history of heart attacks. I am glad that was not necessary because that is not the way for everyone to find out she has been talking to her.......Can't wait for next chapter!



Author's Response:

Next chapter just posted. Thanks for the review.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Sorry I have not reviewed in a while, but I am still with you!  Your story continues to be amazing and you are my fave author. I took a break for a while to read completed stories because the suspense kills me. I am caught up now and can't wait for next chapter. So much has happened in the last few chapters so I won't try to comment on everything. I will say you have such a way with words and story telling that I can easily see this trilogy being published. I have been addicted to FF now and I have to say that your combination of a great character development, plot twists, humor, and lemons by far put other stories to shame.  Keep it up. I know this is likely coming to an end soon being at 39 chapters.  Can we expect more from you?



Author's Response:

Hi glad to hear from you. Thank you for the lovely review. I know I am at 39 chapters, but I didn't plan well and it will run long. I have one more ARC to get through after the Grandma issue. Grandma will take several chapters. Then I have an epilogue. Epilogue is mostly written. I just have to ties ends up. Then maybe who knows. If people want more maybe I'll do more. 

Thank you so much for following. I appreciate it.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Oh thank GOD!!!!! I was holding my breath and did not realize it from the moment he got home until the end of the chapter.  I never know your update schedule. I just check everyday and then jump for joy when I see a new one.  When do you update? I can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

That was so emotional!  I love love love that he went to talk to his mom, then Virginia, and the pure joy he displayed talking to Ana literally had me in tears!!!  You are amazing and honestly, I thought this was the last chapter as I continued to read because I felt he had come "Full Circle." Now obviously, I will likely fall into a deep depression once this ends so now that the chapter is over and I see there is another one coming from somewhere, I can't wait.  I feel like you because I have no clue what will be next. LOL

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Nice family moments! I love those, thanks for sharing as always.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I just love them!