Reviews by filmmaker007
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: filmmaker007 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

you should update more often



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease. 


Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out!  http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/


Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!


Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel

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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing. 
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"


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Reviewer: filmmaker007 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

oh my god! you totally have to update way sooner!! Hurry up!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: filmmaker007 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

you have to totally update like yesterday!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: filmmaker007 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

you have to updated so soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Summary:

parental

 He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15388
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: filmmaker007 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drifting

I like to know what happens as she gets older, like 18 or 19 year older. To me, it would be better if you fast forward to her senior year in highschool.

Come Undone by Scorp112 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner winner    


 


She took a risk that didn't pay off, and it left her with nothing. How do you tell someone to come home when you're the one who sent them away in the first place? How does Bella break the news to her ex-husband that the baby she's carrying is his?


 


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12753 Read Count: 3303
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2011 Updated: 08 Jun 2011
Reviewer: filmmaker007 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Update soon

 



Author's Response:

Working on the next part now... :)