Reviews by Coffeeluva
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625457
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Yay!!! They have found each other.

 

Perfect

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116434
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Just found your story.... Awesome!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Predictable isn't bad at all, nothing worse that a story line that doesn't make any sense at all, this one works nicely!!

 

Great chapter, well done!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

WTF, seriously what the hell is going on with Damon, where the hell did that come from!!!!

This doesn't look good Edward is either going to go off on Damon or Bella, and with damn good reason

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Aw and here come DaddyWard!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

<3 U

 

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

<3 you hard Shel!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Brilliant as always

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Best Story on TWCS!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Another Great Chapter

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Fantastic

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

time for more lovin

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Finally the sexing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

<3 PSG

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

James is a bastard................end off



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

YAY!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great start

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

<3 Charlie

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

<3 you hard Shel

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Jacob is a wanker with a small weiner

 

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Awwwww

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

How many???

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

FFS only for you would I do this shit

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

<3 U

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Shel Rocks, TFFA Freakin ROCKS

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Just keep swimming, just keep swimming

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Another Bites the Dust

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Gotta love Jasper

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

swimming swimming swimming

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Shesh!! How many bloody chapters are there in this thing

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Did I tell you already how much we love Tanya

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

and another gone and another one gone

Reviewer: Coffeeluva Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Did you notice already I am not normally a huge reviewer??