Reviews by cullengirl08
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116427
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, I am so loving possessive Edward.    Though, I am glad that he's starting to get a sense of humor where Bella is concerned and starting to lighten up a bit.    Though, I think half the stuff she says and does to him is to get him started, even if she does it on purpose.   hehe

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well, they seem to be enjoying their weekend.....   I can't wait to see how it continues.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What do I think?   I think Edward is going to go nuts until he finds out that Bella will be okay.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm just glad that Bella is going to be okay.   And Edward's true feelings came out, too.   He loves her.    I think he should tell Bella that.  I really think she'd like to hear it.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh, knowing Edward, I'm sure he's going to be having some words with Seth.   Edward is not one to let this kind of thing go.   Besides, what he did was very irresponsible.   He's just lucky nobody was more seriously hurt than they were.  

 

 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It was a very good chapter and I'm glad that Bella stood up for herself with the parents.   What Renee did was wrong on a lot of levels, but what Bella said was right - they are punishing her for surviving.   Personally, I think just the fact that she was in the accident would be punishment enough, seeing what could have happened to her.   I don't think she should be grounded, though.   And I'm sure Edward is not going to be happy that Seth knew where Bella was and lied to him and that Bella basically hid from him, too.  I'm still trying to figure that one out, but at least she talked to him at the end and he is coming to get her.    That's where she needs to be right now - with him.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the great review. Bella has been such a good girl for a long time and she was right when she said she felt like she was being punished for surviving. Because for all appearances no matter how her parents paint it, its exactly it. She didn't do anything wrong and punishments cannot be placed on 'you were going to' or 'i thought you planned it'. Wrong on so many levels. She did hide from everyone but she was so distraught from what he mother did, she wasn't thinking clearly and when the haze finally lifted, she wanted to be with him, near him.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Please don't let Tanya be pregnant.  Edward and Bella have enough to deal with regarding his possessiveness and his need to be right about everything.   But either way, Bella was right; Edward should have told her about this.   It was not fair to her to keep this a secret.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm thinking that Tanya is not pregnant, but Bella is.  

And as for Tanya, ick.   Bella had her pegged.  There's no way she's pregnant.   She brought condoms and birth control pills.  If you're pregnant, you don't use that stuff.   And then she came on to Bella.   Ewwwwww.   God only knows where that mouth has been. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I guessed that one.  And Edward took the news well; actually, a lot better than I expected.   He was dare I say, happy about it.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Excellent chapter!!!   Renee, though, has got to be the stupidest mother on the planet.   I loved Bella laying into her about slipping her the pills.   And her defense of Edward - perfect.  

 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Well, it looked like Edward got knocked down a few pegs from Aunt Irina.   He really does need to lighten up a little bit, especially now that Bella is pregnant.   The stress isn't good for her or the baby.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Alright, Edward needs to do what he does best and wipe the floor with this Damon guy.     Personally, I'm surprised Edward put up with him for this long.    It is so obvious that he is lying, and if he ever thought he might have had any kind of chance with Bella, he sure blew that!!!!    I really don't understand what he's trying to accomplish by all this.   

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm glad that Edward believed Bella when she said that nothing was going on between her and Damon.   I'm with Edward, though.   Somebody had to put him up to claiming the baby was his and I'm wondering if he is in cahoots with someone from the hospital.    All I gotta say is you gotta be stupid to go against Edward.   I almost feel sorry for this Damon guy - NOT!!!!   I wouldn't want to be on Edward's bad side.    

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I'm thinking what Edward and Emmett are thinking - someone blabbed.   I just feel sorry for the blabbee, cuz they are not happy campers right now.  

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good chapter.  It's getting very obvious that Edward is very protective of Bella.  And I'm glad about that.   She really likes him and is the most comfortable around him.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, it was about time Renee was brought down a few notches.   That woman is just pure evil.    I'm just glad that everybody was there to witness what went down and that she was arrested. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Are we going to see a Bella / Edward kiss?   I'd like that.   I'm thinking that now that Bella is sixteen, Edward will make his move?   Finally?  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm really looking forward to some B & E alone time; there hasn't been a lot of that.   We all know how Bella feels about Edward and now he is starting to have those same feelings as well, things will start picking up between the two of them.   He really cares about her and goes out of his way to make sure she is comforted and well.   And now that they've both had that little kiss, I think they'd both like to try it again.    And I'm so looking forward to Renee getting what's coming to her.     She deserves everything she gets.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What a great night that Bella and Edward had.   It was nice with it just being the two of them, without the others there.   They need to do more of that.   That's really the only way they get to learn more about each other.   When the other's are there, they all just talk about random stuff.   And poor Bella bit Edward's tongue.   But, he took it in stride, like the good guy he is.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

YAY - the wicked witch is gone - to jail!!!!!   Justice has been served.  Now hopefully, Bella can start to heal and try to get over all that Renee did to her over the years.   And hopefully, Edward will be a big part of that healing process.   He's so sweet with her, I can see that he will do all he can to help Bella get past this.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward and Bella are just so cute together.  She's nervous, he's nervous.   They make such a cute couple.  I'm just waiting for them to start spending more time together, so they can get to kinow each other a little more.   I think the more they do that, the more comfortable Bella will be around Edward and will be able to open up to him more.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank god Renee got what was coming to her!!!   How do you treat your child like that?   Poor Bella.   I'm really curious as to what her and Edward are doing.   She feels so much better when she is with him, so hopefully, that will help to calm and relax her after what happened.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm so glad that Edward asked Bella to be his girlfriend and told her his story of how he ended up in therapy as well.   That was the perfect way to introduce her to the idea of going there to try and help her get over what Renee did to her for all of those years.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Look at shy little Bella telling off Jake!!!   I was very impressed by that.   Usually, she is so soft spoken and quiet when she's in situations she's not comfortable with.   But having Jake talk bad about Edward and she was all over that!!!!    Good for her. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I am so happy how close Bella and Edward are getting.   She is really starting to come out of her shell.   And her "homework" with the therapist, with words to describe each person in her life - right on the money - for everybody.    And how sweet to describe Edward as home.    That right there speaks volumes.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

WOH!!!!!   I certainly didn't see that one coming.   Shocker of all shockers.   

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

As much as Charlie needed to tell Emmett and Bella what was going on, I think that Edward should have been there for Bella or once the talk was finished and Emmett and Charlie noticed how Bella was and that she went upstairs, they should have called Edward to come over to see her.    He really is the only thing that calms her down. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I loved Edward's reaction to Bella's gift; PDA in front of the family - way to go, Edward.... hehe

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Aw, I really think Edward should say the " I love you " to Bella; I think it would mean so much to her and she'd most definitely be saying it back to him.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41874
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Reality Check

I think Bella should take Edward back.  Emmett is right; Bella loves him, I just think she freaked out with what she saw happened with Mike and from what Edward told her about his life.   But he was totally serious when he said that he changed when he met her; that she changed him.  And if it wasn't for her, she'd be dead by now, because he's the one who stopped the hit on her.   That alone has gotta tell her that he's kind of sorta changed his ways.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Blazing Suns

Good chapter;  I'm glad that Edward was there at the gas station when Bella had her little meltdown.   And they finally talked and got a lot of things out in the open.   I'm looking forward to seeing what Edward does to get all this mess taken care of so he can move forward with his life.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85741
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Good chapter.  I'm so glad that they Edward and Bella are now married and their vows to each other were very romantic.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Good chapter.  I'm happy that everything worked out okay for Alice and little Alyssa and there weren't any problems.  

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23675
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Where the Boys Are

I am so liking this story.   And I'm glad that Bella called Edward to let him know there was a potential problem and they were able to work things out.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  When you are faced with something scary you stop holding onto things and focus on what's really important.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Serious Talks Ahead

One set of parents down and one more to go.   Actually, Edward handled Esme very well; he had a very good response to each of her concerns and actually is being very adult about this whole experience. 



Author's Response:

Edward is being adult, mostly because he feels he has to step up and he wants to be the man she needs.  He also knows how to handle his mom.  I'm glad you liked this one!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it

Good chapter.   I'm glad that Edward is so involved in the pregnancy and wants to go with her to Charlie;s.   That right there is a man who is in love with the girl and happy about the pregnancy.



Author's Response:

Edward is stepping up every way possible and that will make for an interesting Christmas.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jingle Bells

Cool chapter.   It was very cool how Edward, even in the face of a mad Charlie, still stuck up for Bella and the baby.   And even if Charlie stalked away, I'm sure he was impressed with Edward for doing that.   That took a lot of guts on his part.



Author's Response:

Darn right he wsa impressed, but don't expect to hear ir anytime soon.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Feels Like New Years in July

Aw, Bella and Edward seem to be going a long time without seeing each other.   Surely, there is something they can do to rectify that awful problem.



Author's Response:

It's the beginning of the sememster rush, Edward will be around more soon, he just has to get classes off and running then he'll find a groove again.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance

Aw, how sweet was that.  I'm glad that Bella and the baby are going to be okay, but she was overdoing it and that's not good.  I'm just glad that Edward was there when it happened.   And calling Charlie was a good move to make as well.   It let him know about Bella and also that Edward is with Bella and is part of her life.



Author's Response:

Bella's finally learning that she can't do everything and Edward is there to pick up the slack.  And Charlie got to see him step up and is impressed by it.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift

Jacob is an ass and I'm so happy that he isn't the father of Bella's baby.   What an idiot!!!!  Who yells and confronts a pregnant woman like that?   Bella could have lost the baby after that little episode.   But I'm just happy that it all worked out okay for the three of them.  



Author's Response:

Jake most definitely is an ass and he's gonna get his don't worry!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Too Many Opinions

Way to go Edward for sticking up for Bella and himself. 



Author's Response:

Edward was definitely not going to let Jake near her again and as far as the granny's they were killing her with kindness and he had to calm the advice.  thanks for the love, as always~

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

Good chapte; I"m glad that Bella is all moved in now.   Maybe Bella won't need to find a new job; maybe she can just get her book published and be a writer; she seems to be pretty good at that.   But either way, I'm glad that Edward is being very sweet about Bella and the whole job search.  

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon

I'm really liking the dynamic between Edward and Bella.   Eventhough he is the head of the clan and in charge, for Bella, he is a good guy - extremely protective.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?

Oh, Edward's angry alright, but not with her.  No, I think Jacob is going to beg for death once Edward is finished with him!!!!    I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

Woh, remind me to never get on Edward's bad side.   I can't believe that he honestly thought Jacob thought he could find a way out of this.   From the moment Edward walked in with those black eyes and the way he was talking to Jacob and Jasper, Jacob should have just come to terms with the fact that he was a goner.    And damn if Edward didn't dole out the punishment in eery ways that that Bella and her family were tortured. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

Good chapter.   I'm thinking Bella feels the same way about Edward as he feels about her.    She just doesn't understand the way he is - consumed with vengence over what happened to her.   I'm sure he'll explain it to her.  I have a feeling he's not going to be leaving her side for quite a while.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Fathers and Sons

I think Carlisle picked the wrong person to choose as his enemy.   By choosing Bella, his whole family just turned against him.   Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What Is Normal Anyway?

You gotta love Edward.   I know I do.   He's trying to be more of a human for Bella's sake - and he's succeeding.   But put him in front of anybody else and he does what needs to be done.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

Best chapter yet!!!    I just hope for both of their sakes that Edward isn't gone too long on this little trip.     I think at this point, they really need each other to cope, to get through each day; I think they rely on it.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

i just hope that Edward stops himself before he really hurts Bella.   Because if he's depressed now, that'll be nothing compared to what he'll feel like after that.   I just hope Bella can possibly stop him from himself. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

Edward is !not going to be happy about this!!!!    Where did Jasper go?   He's supposed to be watching out for Bella.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

ADC,fanfic

 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 27771
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16, Happily Ever Now

Excellent chapter.   I had tears in my eyes, just like Edward and Bella.   It was weird to have Edward tell her he loved her back in school, but when he went to tell her, she was with Mike.   But I'm glad that Bella was smart enough to look at it the way she did.   He was so wracked with guilt, he was ready to leave.   i can't wait to see what the future holds for Edward and Bella.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I was very proud of Bella in this chapter; she was a woman on a mission and stuck to her guns.   She didn't back down and in the end, I think Edward loved her a little more for it.   She stood up to Jasper, Esme and Edward and made each of them realize how wrong they were and the trouble that their actions caused.   But overall, I'm just glad that Edward and Bella talked it out and made up.   I know they still have work to do, but they are well on their way and open communication is the key.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope Bella just lets loose and stands up for herself with Rose and tells her to stick it where the sun don't shine!!!!   And I hope Edward does the same thing.    He needs to have a little chat with Rose, too.   That girl needs to be put in her place. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oy.  Yeah, Bella really needs to work on her trust issues.   Hopefully, the more time she spends with Edward and the family, things will get a little easier for her.   If not, I sure hope she invests in some healing creams.   Geez, Edward was furious with Bella.   She really did fly off the handle.   Granted, it was all a misunderstanding, but still.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Good chapter.   Yes, at this point, I think Bella's biggest obstacle is still communiciation.   Alice and even Edward keep driving that point home to her, but it's going to be up to her to master that one.   I think she's finally seeing the true impact of Edward's feelings and with that, hopefully, she will try harder.    She made a horrible error in judgment with the money and she paid for that.   Hopefully, that will learn from that and just move on from it.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm kind of glad that's over, too.   Edward and Bella really need to find the time to be together as just Edward and Bella, especially with him not really being around as much.   I know that Bella wants to please him and wear the collar all the time, but all it ends up doing is getting Bella in trouble for one reason or another and ends up with Edward just being more frustrated than he was before.   They need to come up with a better schedule.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ugh, the drama.   What is the deal with Edward?   Why is he so insecure as of late?    Is something going on with him?   I just hope that Alice finds Bella and brings her back because if not, Edward is not going to be any good at all.   He should have just stayed and talked with Bella.   He's always telling her that she needs to talk to him.   Well, obviously that's a two way street.   If he would have just talked with Bella, he would have found out that she moved all of her stuff into his room instead of him just thinking she packed it all up.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am so glad they worked some things out, though it did get really heated there for a while there.   I totally agree that just doing the boyfriend / girlfiriend thing should be the way to go for now.   It's much to soon to try and balance both.  



Author's Response:

I am so in awe of your stories and here you are reading my silly thing!! Thanks for the review - they were driving me crazy and I had to call Garrett in to stop the madness!! (btw - do you find yourself wishing that your characters were real so that you can pick up the phone and say something like "Get your f**cking act together..." I think I need a life!

xoxo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Eella needs to leave that apartment behind and just move into Edward's place.   She is not in a good environment at all.   She's not in a good area and her own neighbors creep her out.   She needs to talk to Edward about this and just get out of dodge while she can. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Why do Edward and Jasper even let Bella hang out with Alice after what happened in Italy?   She is such a bad influence and everytime they do, it only ends up with the both of them getting into so much trouble.   Alice definitely should have known better about this party; she even gave Bella one of her collars?   Not cool.

And I really think Bella needs to tell Edward about her neighbors.   That is not a good situation at all.   Even she needs to realize that one.  



Author's Response:

sometimes this girl doesn't think further than her nose! Alice is like that best friend that you had at school that made it sound logical as to why you should play hooky  - until you got caught and took the blame, because you could not bare to think of her getting into trouble...yeah that one!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Can she possibly dig any bigger holes for herself with Edward?   Everything she says she just digs deeper and deeper and deeper.   But I am glad that Edward has an idea about that apartment situation, though.   But she seriously needs to get out of there.  What she really needs to do is just stay at Edward's house.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I really feel that after everything that Bella and Edward did today, and the vows and the words that he made her repeat to him that she is doing an incredible disservice to him in not telling him about what is going on with Jim.   She is freaking terrified about her living situation, but she is just going to deal with it herself because she feels that the Cullen's have done enough to help her and she doesn't want to burden them any further?   That is the most stupid and idiotic reasoning I have ever heard.   Edward wants honesty; she needs to be honest and tell him what's going on before something bad happens and he is away filming and not able to help her. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Don't you hate it when your characters dictate their own flipping story???

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I think Bella just needs to go to the spare room and take a break while Edward calms down.   I think he's reacting this way, mostly because he is afraid for her while he's not around and she's not giving him the whole story all the time and leaving things out.   He cares about her so much and just wants her to be safe, but she keeps leaving out the key points; the important things that he needs to know.    I'm really glad she told him, finally, but he did overreact a bit too much and he kind of scared her doing it.   It's almost proves her point as to why she's afraid to tell him things if this is how he's going to react.   It's a double edge sword. 



Author's Response:

Okay cullengirl108 - I KNOW you are reading over my shoulder, now! Thanks for reviewing, you help put some things into perspective for me too. I am forwarding your review to B & E, hopefully they will catch a clue!!

I really appreciate your input :D

xoxo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I'm so glad that Edward and Bella truly talked about everything, and that he and Emmett are going to look into the situation with the neighbors to see what can be done.    And I was wondering how long it would take for Edward to put a stop to Bella and Alice going out together for awhile.   Friends or not, she does seem to land Bella in trouble a lot.   But I do like the idea of Bella seeing Edward every weekend.   Being apart for weeks at a time is just not good for either one of them.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story! You know that I read everything you write and I love it.  Thanks for the constructive review, cg.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Is it a bad thing that Bella is dating Edward?  I'm trying to figure out why Mona and Riley are so upset over this.  



Author's Response:

Hey there - not upset - shocked, suprised...did I get it wrong? (tell me if I did, please!! honesty is great :)

Author's Response:

TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I think Esme had the best advice - move Bella into Edward's house.   At least there is a gate to keep the photogs out.   Plus, it gets her away from the situation at her apartment and would keep Jacob away if he was to go out and start looking for her.  



Author's Response:

thank you! How the hell do you find time to review when you are writing like 20 hours a day!!!???

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What a nice weekend they had.   And I'm so glad that she agreed to move in with him.   That actually went better than I thought.  

Oh, but I definite agree with Edward that Bella should not be going to Forks for Christmas; not with Jake there.   I understand the need to see her family, but why want to put yourself in such close proximity with the guy who treated you so badly?    Yeah, I'm thinking Master Edward needs to speak with Bella about that one.  



Author's Response:

You know how difficult it is to make these characters do what you tell them.....drives me crazy! thanks for the review and for taking the time to read my story - how do you do that? considering how many you are always busy with!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Alright, where to start!!!    Why did everybody just ignore Bella all week long?   They knew Edward was really busy with the movie.    They need to keep in touch and Anderson, he needs to be a better guard and let someone know what's going on when Bella is getting more thin and frail by the day.   And now that Jake is back, Bella needs to move in with Edward now instead of a month from now.  I just hope that Anderson stays around to help.   Jake doesn't seem like a nice guy at all and now that he seems to be buddy buddy with Jim, that just makes the situation worse.



Author's Response:

Hi there CG108 - Aaaw now, please don't be too hard on my characters - they are difficult enough to control as it is!! :)

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Good one.   Edward did what he needed to do to help Bella, to get her back to being herself, and she is well on her way to getting there.    And I'm glad that Edward is taking time off from the movie to spend extra time with Bella, with one of the main objectives of getting out of that apartment and into his house.   I think Edward hearing of yet another run in with James was definitely the push he needed to make sure it was done sooner, rather than later.      



Author's Response:

thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I'm so happy that Bella doesn't have to go back to that apartment anymore.    And Edward's idea that he hire a company to do all the packing and delivery?   Perfect.  



Author's Response: Thank you so much xoxo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Good chapter, as usual.    Where is Edward?   He'll be the only one able to calm Bella down after this latest meltdown.   And I'm sure Esme was just being emotional over all the work Bella did, rather than be upset over it.   And that is just going to cause her to be even more upset over Bella's reaction.    

And Jacob?   He isn't playing with a full deck.  I just hope that they catch on to what is happening before something bad happens to Bella.  

And is Jim and James the same?   I noticed that Edward said that his parents cut him off, so that could be why he's living with Vicky in the same buillding as Bella.  



Author's Response: thanks for the review - Edward at this point was still sleeping - before all the chaos began!! yes, James is Jim.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I am so happy that that is over and was not drawn out.  I don't know if I could have handled it.    I was on pins and needles the entire time.     All I gotta say is that Bella really stepped up and stuck up for herself and everybody else in that house.   And I'm sure when Edward hears the whole story, he will be very proud of her.   Though, I do think it will be awhile before Edward even thinks about leaving Bella for any length of time.    She and him are in no way, shape or form ready for that.   I think they are going to be spending a lot of quality time together lately. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Good chapter.   I'm glad that Aro recognized that Bella is good for Edward and that he told Felix that he and Heidi need to do right by her.    It's nice to see someone in the publicity business actually do the right thing for a change.   

And I'm glad that Edward told Bella about James and Jacob; she really did to know what was going on, and he did a great job in comforting her and making her understand that she didn't do anything wrong in defending herself and the others.



Author's Response:

thank you for the great review as always, bb.

xoxo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

Bella certainly didn't hold back in her words to Charlie.   She said everything that needed to be said, and then some.    And I'm glad that she told him about her relationship with Edward and that he was fine with it.    He understood that it's what she needs and they love each other, so that's really all that matters.



Author's Response:

thanks sweetie - your comments are always so insightful

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Wow, that was a good chapter.   I thought Bella did great with the interview, after Edward calmed her down, of course.   hehe    And I was very happy with their playtime.   It was a good lesson - for the both of them.   I'm interested in seeing what happens with this party they are going to. 

But I do think Bella is making a mistake in not telling Edward about going out with Alice.   Does she ever learn from past mistakes?



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the comments - hmmm Bella and Alice - well she did give her some time to tell Jazz, but then again she and Alice are very protective of each other - hmmm ... my ass is twitching just thinking about what E will do if she gets caught!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I know that Edward was really angry with Bella for not telling him what was going on with Ricky, but I seriously think he took it too far by just (1) giving her the silent treatment (2) leaving and not even telling her what he was doing and (3) not even acknowleging or returning any of her texts.   One thing Edward knows about Bella is her feelings of inadeqacy and fear of abandonment, and that is just what he played on while he was dishing out his punishment.    And he's got to see how wrong he was with that - geez, just take one look at her crying hysterically on the floor.   I think it's his turn to make it up to her now.  



Author's Response:

cg, I hear you all the way! thanks for your review and valuable comments.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

As always, this was a good chapter.  I'm glad that Edward and Bella are getting back to the normalcy that is their relationship after all that happened.   And  that was a good party, too.   I'm glad that Edward put a stop to Mandy and Vanessa; they really were very out of line and definitely should know better than to touch a dom as well as his sub.   But I don't think Edward was out of line with the way he handled them.   There are some people - Mandy and Vanessa - who just wouldn't get it or stop what they are doing if you just said the words in a regular sentence.   Sometimes, you need to be abrupt to get your point across and I definitely think Edward accomplished that.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Why would she be charged with murder?  I thought it was all done in self defense.   And as if Bella doesn't have enough on her plate as it is.   At this point, I really don't know how much more drama she can take.    I think she and Edward need to just get away and have some time together, without any interruptions, so they can let loose and de-stress for awhile.   Their lives have been so strained for so long, I think a getaway somewhere would do them both some good.

And Jasper and Alice were in even worse shape than Bella and Edward were, but at least Edward went and talked it out with them and made some very good points - at both of their expenses - and basically told them to work it out.  



Author's Response:

hi there cg - thanks for the review - I'm sending you a special thanks xoxo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I loved it as usual and am very happy that the whole mess with Jacob is finished.   But what's up with this new thing between Edward and Felix?   I'm curious as to what that conversation was all about.   And I'm with Edward and Bella; I'm not very happy with Paul and his "homework assignments".   He is taking away from them things that are very normal in their relationship and works well between them.   He's not letting Edward contact Bella at all during the day and he wouldn't let him collar Bella on the weekend, which is their allotted time, and something they both enjoy very much.   I really don't understand what he is trying to accomplish with this.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Excellent.   And I loved Kate in this chapter.   She really called Bella out on everything she's done lately and basically made her finally understand what she's doing and that it needs to stop.   And I'm glad that Kate brought up Alice as well.    She has been an instigator and has pushed Bella into certains things that she knew was wrong, but still did.  



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading and reviewing again - you are awesome. I love your feedback each week.

:)

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

It was nice to see Alice apologize to Bella for her previous behavior.   Whatever Kate said to her must have really sunk in that she was being a bad influence on Bella and that it was affecting her relationship with Edward as well.   



Author's Response:

thanks sweetie - we will hear more about that conversation when they all go to Tahoe

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

While I'm not a fan of people watching or being there with Edward and Bella, I have to say Bella did very well, especially with it being her first time.    And I'm sure Edward was very happy with the outcome as well. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Wow, so much going on this chapter; the engagement party was a huge success - Edward really pulled out all the stops, as he usually does.   And I was a bit upset that Edward couldn't make it to Bella's premiere, but I should've given him more credit and known that Edward would do his very best to be there for her - and he was, as always.  

As far as a sequel, I am all for it.   I have loved this story since the beginning and I am happy to say, the feeling has not changed.  



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your loyalty and encouragement.

Bella Voce by Morgan Locklear Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured Story

bella Voce

Paris 1891: Bella is a popular stage vocalist and theatre owner. She's also a very powerful vampire. Edward is a piano teacher who attends one of her performances and captures her attention. Together they explore the Bohemian Revolution and each other

Banner by Mina

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 208805 Read Count: 3654
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2011
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Lesson Learned

Poor Edward.   Why doesn't he just give in and let Bella turn him already?   He'd really be better off and wouldn't get hurt as much.

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm glad that Edward is doing his best to change his mind and is back to being with Bella again instead of plotting to leave her.   He had to see what a bad idea that was to begin with.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So is Edward going to lighten up some now when it comes to Bella?   It sure seems like he is.    Hmmm, I hope that continues.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I just hope that they are able to get her away from Victoria before she does anything bad to Bella.   That and she and Edward figure out what was going on with the phone.   Though, it could have been Tanya deleting his texts and messages.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm really glad that Victoria is no more.   She has left the building and met her maker.   YAY!!!   Bella and the Cullen's can rest easy now, though I'd still like to find out what the deal was with Bella and Edward's phone, though.

I'm thinking he's going to get Bella a Volvo.

 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

hehe - I think I feel sorry for Edward.   He's going to dinner at Bella's house and then fishing with Charlie and Billy.    I'm sure he'll just love that one.  LOL

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29485
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Seeking Comfort

Good chapter.   I'm looking forward to seeing how Edward fits in with all that is going on and what he did that has his parents all in a tizzy.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! We will get to meet Edward very soon :)

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Girl's NIght

Good chapter, though I'm waiting for some more interaction between Edward and Bella.   Eventhough they only spoke for a moment, there was an obvious connection there.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is all EPOV, learning more about him. Chapter 6 you will see them together finally :) Thanks for taking the time to review!

Katie

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Becoming Numb

So, Edward's home life sucks.  And he doesn't seem to be the bad guy that Emmett made him out to be, either.    Hopefully, things will start turning around for him once he and Bella hang out.  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Hope you like the next chapter :)

Katie

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Do you Want to Go?

Aw, I like Edward and Bella together; he's already starting to act differently just being around her.   Emmett, though, I don't know what to make of him.   I can't believe that he lied and said that Bella said something bad about him when she didn't say it.   That was just not right.  And Bella wasn't happy to hear it, either.   I'm looking forward to more Edward and Bella time.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review. We will learn a lot more about Emmett soon, I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Details

Edward's parents are weird, checking up on him to make sure he's telling the truth.    He's basically a good kid, but his own mother doesn't believe him about the school dance?  That's pretty sad.   At least she was okay with his plans, though.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review, and yes, they are weird and they will just get weirder lol. I hope you like the next chapter :)

Katie

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 First Impressions and Second Chances

I'm really happy for Edward and Bella.   And I'm guessing that Bella is getting ready to see the real Emmett pretty soon;   I"m still tyring to figure out what his real problem is with Edward and now obviously Bella, as well.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! This next chapter you will see exactly what Emmett thinks of Edward and Bella being together, should be up tomorrow hope you like it!

Katie

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Friends No More

I think Emmett just ruined his longstanding friendship with Bella by being an idiot and I really don't see her forgiving him anytime soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! Yes, Emmett is an idiot! lol 

I hope you like the next chapter :)

Katie 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 All Falls Down

I think Edward needs to get out of that house and away from those people.   I won't even call them family, cuz they sure don't act like it.   He's the only sane one in there.   I think that before this story is said and done, I have a feeling he's going to be staying at Bella's.   Renee is a good mother and she has now seen what Edward has to put up with and has already told him that if he needs anything, to let her know.   I'm thinking he may end up taking her up on that idea.   

And I'm very glad that Bella has Edward to lean on; I have a feeling she's going to be leaning on him a lot more pretty soon. 



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm keeping my mouth shut on where Edward will end up, but you may be surprised ;)

Katie 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Playing Nice

What is the freaking deal with Emmett?   You know, for someone who was such good friends with Bella, he sure blew it, bigtime?   What an ass!!!    Why is he being this way with Bella? 



Author's Response:

Hey!

Emmett is basically just super jealous of Edward. He thinks he has feelings for Bella but really he just wants what Edward has. They come from a messed up family and he just has no idea how to handle things lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Katie  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Seeing Red

Yeah, Emmett sure is a great friend - NOT!!!   I'm sorry, but whether he's jealous of Edward or not, you just don't go around making those kind of accusations about somebody, especially if you know they are not true.   That's just downright mean.   And how embarrassing was that for Bella - to prove that Edward wasn't abusing her?   Emmett should really be ashamed of himself, but knowing him, he just looks at it as another way for his parents to look down at Edward.   Edward needs to get out of that house - now!!!