Reviews by Pam811
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366885
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Pam811 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: That's How You Know

Can't belive Bella has any friends. she's a vile self centered bitch. UGH, witht hat attiude and mouth I'd punch her in the boob and tell her to go away far far away.    Sorry I really liked the story but I'm finding Bella's self absorbed attitude to be a little much to handle.  It just gets a little more every chapter, you try to play it off as independance but it's not its just bitch.



Author's Response:

Sorry you feel that way.  Especially since most of what Bella says is a joke.  Thanks for giving the story a try, though. I hope you find another story you like somewhere else on the site.  Not every person understands the way every character is written so thanks for trying!

Dark Moon by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella told you the story of our life together, which according to her human memories was correct, she told the story, as she believed it to be. The problem with human memories is that they fade and become blurry over time. Vampire memories are stronger and more reliable. Not to say that Bella didn’t tell the story as she remembered it, but I remember it a bit different than she did.

There was quite a bit she had no knowledge of. A lot of things that happened with my family that she couldn’t know about and I never revealed to her. This is the story she wouldn’t have known to tell. My hope is that it will clear up a few misconceptions…

 

 

Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115560 Read Count: 6233
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Pam811 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Birthday

I'm totally disapointed I thought this was going to be New Moon from the CULLEN POV not Jake, again.



Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint, but never fear one more chapter and were back to EPOV. I hope you hang in there because the Italy scenes were my favorite to write in this story and I think they came out beautifully. Thanks for reading and reviewing your opinion is nice to have.