Reviews by AliceHC24
A Slow Boil by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary: Past Featured Story

a slow boil

Bella's an exchange student hoping to find a job to keep herself employed for the summer, so that she can stay on at an exclusive University. Her best job prospect is a part-time housekeeping position with one Mr. Cullen.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78922 Read Count: 59616
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ok I didn't want to revise till I was done reading all if what you had. Claps all around...lol. I love this one. At first I thought he was a dom but looks like hes not. Even though I think he still might be hiding something. But this is a great story. Please keep posting. Sad how ff.net keeps kicking you guys off. But its our awesome story to read.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh shit. Master is upset. Why must you piss him off? Seriously bella?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

You are slowly torturing me. And I like it.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think like this like a daily basis. And no sadly we are not friends on facebok. :-(

Author's Response:

what do u mean sadly.. friend me... u have to search using my email. its nocturnalem at gmail dot com

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Always about a lady.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 272: Chapter 272

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!! it would not be at all.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

Poor girl. She didn't want to disappoint him. He must be going crazy.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

I like it when you go into detail. Makes things more visual. Not sure about anyone else.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

I will not speak but mentally I am saying just ate because of they voice......

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Son of a bitch.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Next time in the mouth!!! Oh will he make her take her fingers and swipe hem across her boobs to clean herself?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Ugh.....now I will be feeling tingly all over. Thanks Noc. Thanks. Wish I had a sir that would do that to me. :-(

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 293: Chapter 293

So trusting of her master

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Will you wait with your mouth open?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 269: Chapter 269

cream pies....yummy

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171

Mmmmm.....to be his canvus....oooooo....

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

I have thank you. :-)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh fuck. My curtains are drawn and I am rubbing one out. Yeah I know I said it.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

damn...she is about to find out she really loves pain with pleasure.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Better open those curtains butterfly. Master must never be disappointed. EVER. I would open them and face the window and masterbate and ask him how'd he like that? Want a taste?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am submitting. Lol

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Fucking torture you hore!!!! Lol....ugh. love these snip its.

Author's Response:

keep talkin like that and it will get you everywhere...lol

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Son of a bitch. My inner bore says keep the curtains open you bitch. Master needs to see his butterfly fly.

Author's Response:

oh, she has an inner whore too... :P

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

If I knew he was next door I'd be fucking the wall where I knew he would be listening. Take this master. Then he'd make me lick the wall.

Author's Response:

Wow girl... u need to be writing too!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Question....when he he gets his new toy dirty does he lick it clean?

Author's Response:

Question.... what do u write?...lol.... and are we friends on facebook. U make me smile.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

It would thrill me to mo fo!!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

What a hore. Love it.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Now were talking bella!!!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Shes going all out for her master. He shall be pleased. I wonder when he will make an appearance?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I like how you end it like that. Keeps us wanting more....more and more.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Master is pleased. But poor master cannot have human vagina. Can I ask why or will we know soon?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Those are the best orgasms. Done it a few times and made my husband watch. :-)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Me to. Then lick it off the window.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Good girl....damn I need a sir in my life. Sigh

Author's Response:

get one! I got mine a few months ago!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Son of a bitch. Your story is excellent.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Son of a bitch. :-)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Oh shit. Shes human dude!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Absolutely wonderful. Couldn't wait till lunch!!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Calm yourself master. You will have plenty of time.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I know I am still reading. I just have no clue what to say sometimes. 99% of your chapters I read on my phone and when I do comment t it never posts....gives me an error. But I anon my kindle now!! Lol...please keep writing. It brings me joy when I read this fic. But ifi were Edward I'd sneak into her room and lick that dildo....lol!!! Maybe even steal a lick from the source itself. Keep it coming hunny.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Shit you have me wondering why he cannot have sex with her. Visit because of the venom or because of the beast?

Author's Response:

same reason as Edward in the twilight books.. he could hurt her if he loses control. Vamps just don't have sex with humans.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Poor master. :-(

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Cock tease is what you are!!! :-)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Like I said cock tease!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Its hard I've tried. But when I do I find I can't. Makes me mental.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

You do your thang chicken wing!!! :-) you'll let us down if you don't participate.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Its a delicious torture but I'd rather taste master.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Mmmm....love it when the guy makes you clean him. :-)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Yes...and taste a little weird. And I've locked it clean off my husband plenty of times. :-)

Author's Response:

Such a good girl :)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I love the last two chatpters were longer. Made me giggle like a lil girl. Will he make Kate wax an E on her sweet pussy?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Yes so smooth when he licks her from her tight butthole to her sweet pussy.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Dear Sir.
Thank you for letting your butterfly write this beautiful fiction. Or is it? Well I will tell you this your butterfly is exceptional at keeping me on my toes. I bet she does for you to. Question ....do you make her lick you clean when you are done?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

I bit. But Tanya just wanted to freak her out by putting down her name. Bitch.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

And so it begins! Lol...poor Sir. Being near here has made it worse for him. :-(

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Nice chapter to put me to sleep.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

We need to cut a bitch for butterfly.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

I was reading this last night while putting my two yr old to bed. BIG MISTAKE! When I saw this is my brother Edward I was like oh shit!! Lol and then she started to act up and I could not finish till now. So good you got me going!!!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Testing her....and Emmet's just pushing edwards beast

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

For real?! Finally?! Is it gonna be an "oh shit" kinda moment? Damn where's my snacks? See you in the room. Haven't been posting on facebook.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Your welcome! And thanks! Every time you update I get the tingles.

Author's Response:

ok... that's like an amazing compliment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u gave me the tingles!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

As usual. Excellent. And I shall check out that fic. Just the taste has be going.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Technically its a body part. I would like his tongue. He licks her nipples her lips her side just between her hip and ribs. All in between her whispers the naughy things he will do to her when he is done. Because that was just the beginning of things to come.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

I don't even have coffee. As soon as I wake up I check my emails in anticipation of midnight caller. :-)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Damn.....here I was about to find the perfect pair.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

son of a bitch... always miss going to the room. but i do read the a/n notes. there's always a story there! love you hun!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

hhahaha hold up let me see this!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Shit guys gonna pounce her. Lol....that or he will finally make himself known while at work.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

I cannot guess. Wait....he wants her to get dressed and meet him at a bar? Or get up and open the door. Oh wait get up and go up to the penthouse. :-)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

1st. Bella hurry up and get the blindfold. And wait for your Sir. He hates to be kept waiting. 2nd...bet she never thought this day would come. 3rd.....guess Edward is done watching from afar.

And for the POV'S I like it the way you have been doing it. For me it keeps it flowing.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

I'm still with you ho!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Hot what man hasn't.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

I couldn't even begin to tell you what I like. This bdsm sounds fun but scary at the same time. I would love to try it. My hubby knows what a freak I am already.

Author's Response:

Ask him to try it with you, but don't say. "Hey, I was wondering if you want to try BDSM, because he will likely think that you want him to beat you, and he will say no. For some reason, that's what most guys think. Instead, say to him. "I have a fantasy of pleasing you in every way. I'd like to grant you every fantasy, be your play things, and all that I ask in return is that you give me a pet name and allow me to call you Master. And if at any time you or I don't like it, we will say RED and it will be over."  What guy would say no to that? Of course you could substitue Daddy or Sir for Master

 

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Your sir will find that spot and lick it. :-)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Thank you! Next chapter I will have a snack and read like 5 times! Lol

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

What a douche bag. Are you serious when you say 6 readers? What the fuck? Obviously he hasn't fucked for an audience before. Trust me...so good. Makes you cum harder and feels even better. Sirs about to lick her pussy. :-) cup..lol...fucking asshole.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Fuck me! She was so sorry she forgot she didn't have permission to speak.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 307: Chapter 307

beautiful

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Hot damn. Fucking hell....will you update soon?

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

Its like pleasurable to the nth degree.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

Think this chick had like 50....cause damn...

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

Feels good when you squirt. Done it a few times.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

Nice cream pie for his butterfly. :-) love those.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 195: Chapter 195

Hahahaha......man. he needs to say something to her already.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 199: Chapter 199

Now Edward is going to have a lick of his favorite flavor!! Nice pic!!!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 205

Best few chapters yet!!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

Alice .....there's a reason why I love that chick. Finally the man knows!!! Why does it take the men so long? Stubborn asses.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 209: Chapter 209

Never doubt my bitch!!!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 212: Chapter 212

Someones hungry ........

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

The past few chapters I tried reading on my phone. It kept crashing. Dirty mistress. Lol I wonder if he will make her wear no pantries to make Emmet nuts. You know she will still be wet and he will be able to smell her.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

One word. Godamn.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 215: Chapter 215

Lol poor Emmet!!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

Picture is delish...poor Emmet. This is his playroom. He can make em do whatever he says.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

Silly boy. She's gonna ride that boy till next week. Lol...and yea I get all kinds f tingly when I see the update.

Author's Response:

that's awesome that u get tingles!

 

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 223: Chapter 223

Awwww.....sometimes its good to switch roles. Just means you love that other person so much you would do anyhting for them.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 226: Chapter 226

That spot I know what you are talking about. That's some I'm about to squirt and have this weird tingling feeling all over and keep jerking from it. Damn....that's a good feeling.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Oh shit. Will she realize her called her Bella? But what will he tell her? Man please update!!! Shit that was good.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

Even in this story he still does not see...lol...but I wouldn't have it anyway! Love this dude. But seriously Edward let her have a taste. Would could go wrong. ;)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 234: Chapter 234

Alice is about to show him something he can do with his butterfly. Making finally sticking his Dick in her?!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 235: Chapter 235

Hahaja.....see Edward it is possible.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 237: Chapter 237

All shall be answered.