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A collection of all my assignments for the Summer Semester at Project Team BETA's Smut University 2012.
Stories will not be pre-BETA'd. This is a learning project, people. :P
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Project Team Beta's Smut University 2012
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4680 Read Count: 1952
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Pre-Assignment
* "God Bella you're so fucking tight," I don't why this (you're so tight) is so hot, but it is.
* I'm never a Jacob girl-I know a lot of people are. I'm not judging. That being said, the thing that gets me with the Bella/Jacob kiss in Eclipse is that she notices he's not being gentle and she doesn't have to be careful either. Powerful and rough is GOOD. I like that you referenced things from the original story in yours (being careful, my smile, warm hands).
* I liked that you didn't make Bella a virgin in this. That she'd had sex once (presumably with Edward) and it wasn't that good. How nice for Jacob that he got to redeem it for her.
* "Hope for you?" Of course, Silly. I liked this a lot. It was original and believable. It was very straight forward, but there's nothing wrong with that.
* Thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you!! I'm not an ExB lover, but there are a few out there that make me pants and my heart thumps. So I know exactly how you feel. That being said, thank you for the honest review. I am pleased you liked my beginning.
I'll be skipping to yours in just a few my darling!! :P
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Submarine
* "I was nervous. I was excited. I was every in-between" Genius line!
* I liked this. I think I wanted more on her feelings about him as a friend before she agreed to anything-the hot tub sex, the date and round two. He's one of her best friends, but I don't know specifically what she enjoys about him or anything. I'm not a wolf girl, and it takes a little convincing for me to get there with unconventional pairings.
* I really enjoyed her discovery of his erection. Very realistic dialogue you wrote there! Thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
Really?! AWWW, thanks hun! I've never had any dialogue I've ever written be "genious" so I'm honored you think so. *blush*
I debated on going into some detail of feelings, but I wasn't sure if you guys just wanted me to get on with the show (like I was dragging it on in complete bordom).
And thank you, sweetheart. I'm glad you think it was realistic enough to pass as decent! :)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Consequence
* Painful. Wow, thanks for sharing.
* "Communicating what’s in my head and making it come out of my mouth to make sense is more difficult then you’d think. "-OH, how I relate to this!
* This was good. Thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! These are thoughts coming straight out of my head but I know these are the same thoughts Bella has. Its perfectly clear by the way she acts. I definately feel much better about this assignment. Now I need to get reading myself! :)
Various pairings, each one-shot written is an assignment for Smut University 2012.
Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Slash, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Project Team Beta's Smut University 2012
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1312 Read Count: 897
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Lesson 2
* Who are these two and what is their background?
* I love your premise-what a great conflict idea.
* Thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
I left their identities open on purpose...a bit of mystery. Thanks for your kind words. I really appreciate your review!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Lesson 5
* "big boy" hahahaha- that was awesome!
* reverse cowgirl is pretty good, isn't it?
* I liked the awkwardness and the trying to replicate porn. Thank you for writing.