Penname: Alices White Rabbit [Contact] Real name: Sally Hopkinson
Member Since: 11 Jun 2012
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Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 211430
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Following Directions

Well, I sure as hell hope Emmett knows what he's doing. 'Cause, involving Seth... really don't like that :(

Thanks!!

Sally

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1924]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 405053
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Awww... Houston, we have made contact!! And, the teaser, GREAT!!

Have a wonderful weekend. Thanks!

Sally

Summary: Past Featured Story

(E & B Version) A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149771 Read Count: 32092
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Boy, Jessica will stoop pretty low to get to Jacob. Too bad she will never win. And, poor Alice :( That is so unfair to her. 

That was one wild storm Bella conjured. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wait, what?? Edward's gone!?!? Uh, oh... And, what on earth is Alice talking about? She can't really believe all that crap. 

Thanks!

Sally

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3417]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 692925
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I glad that he is keeping his word about telling her things ... at least the things he can tell her about. I have hope for these two that they will make it. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Yeah! A huge step forward for both of them. Maybe now he really will start talking to her again. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

"I could die...get popped off one day, and that's something I've always been okay with. I've never been scared of death, but I didn't...I wouldn't want to leave my son...or daughter...with no one...I wouldn't want to leave Bella either."  I read this and thought "Yes, he is finally growing up and realizing what his lifestyle may cost him. as

I'm really glad that Edward has told Bella that he will be there for her, no matter what. She really needed to hear that. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

"before Hurricane Bella stormed through me." Loved this description. 

I'm really glda that Edward is wise to CJ. That will keep him alive longer. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Poor boy. He is a mess. Thank God Jasper and Alice made it there. Maybe tey can calm and distract him. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

"Toni Braxton contractions"!! That was a hoot!

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Sounds like MAJOR things in the wind. And, not all of it good. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

"I didn't want to leave the house, but I had to act normal, be normal" So not the healthiest way to deal with all this. But, she does need to get out of the house. Be around people so that she can see that she can be normal. 

She really is still very screwed-up. But, understandable so. It's going to take a long time for her to deal with all this. 

Wonder how long it's going to take Emmett to figure out that he isn't going to find Jake? 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

So far, so good. But, she still hasn't told him the BIG news. Guess that will wait until the morning when he's sober. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Poor Bella. She is such a mess. Why, oh why, isn't Edward home? He needs to get her to talk before she talks herself right out of living. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Oh, these three need to sit down and have a serious conversation about ... everything!

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

I had a feeling the Elizabeth didn't give a rat's ass about Carlisle. I'm glad I was right. She is just doing what she can to protect Edward. I'm glad she was able to make Bella understand how this all works. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

I'm with Bella there at the end. I think Elizabeth is happy because she's back in Edward's life. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

It always amazes me when I read mob stories and family going against family. But, I guess that's the only way they can survive. Really ... survival of the fittest ... or smartest. 

So, Edward is fitting right into the 'family'. But, is Jasper going to go along with all of this? Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

After the last chapter, I figured the fur would be flying soon. And, boy, did it! I felt sorriest for Jasper. Here he was going to propose to Alice and then she shouts "Marriage is bullshit!" 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

It's sort of scary how easily Edward is falling into this life. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Hmmm ... Wonder what that's all about? Cancelling the hit? 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I'm sort of glad that Edward ins't pushing Jasper into working for CJ. He needs to make that decision on his own. But, he obviously still thinks there is more between Edward and Bella. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Aw, little Eddie has finally gotten here! YEAH!

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Thank God, that doctor fianlly got there. Now, Edward and Bella can stop panicking and start pushing that baby out!! 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Holy shit! He had to kill Riley! What on earth was that all about? I thought Riley was one of the 'good' bad guys. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Hmmm ... Wonder what Colleoni wants Jasper for? And, more important, what's up with Riley? 

 

On to the next chapter to find out ... maybe. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Edward really is doing very well with consoling her. Now, if she would just try to be honest with him and Jasper, she would feel a whole lot better. But, it's going to take time. Hope she can dedal with Edward being gone for a few days. 

Thanks!! So glad that you are able to post this story here. 

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I knew that Bella was smart enough to know what Edward had done. I actually loved when she said "I'm free". 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Well, I feel about as awkward as Edward did. What on earth was Riley thinking? 

 

Glad to have you back, BTW. Thanks!

 

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Well, that was a close call. And, Edward needs to think before he acts. It would be a lot safer for him. Especially since he really doesn't know the lay of the land yet. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Bella's reaction (or rather, lack of reaction) was unexpected. I thought like Edward-she would run right to him. Hmmm ...

 

 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

"To new beginnings." That is definitely worth celebrating. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Uh, oh. I hope she's not pregnant. At least not at this point in her life. She still has so much to deal with just to get over the whole Jake thing and just grow up. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Crazy kids indeed. Between Bella's hormones running rampant, Jasper's over-protective brother act and Edward just caught in the middle, I'm surprised there weren't more explosions. 

Well, at least, Edward now knows that Bella is pregnant. Now they both need to mend fences with Jasper. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

At this point, I don't even know who to trust or believe. Everybody is keeping secrets, I think. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

So, CJ is in a heap of trouble now. Wonder if Carlisle will bail him out of this one? 

 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Whoa! WAs not expectng Edward to ice Aldo. Not sure what that's all about. Is he just getting greedy? Or is there more to it?

Glad to see this in my inbox! Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

"What the fuck were you thinking when you said yes to Colleoni?"  That is exactly what I was thinking. I really didn't think that Jasper was cut out for this life. Hope Edward can keep him safe. 'Cause if he thinks Bella's mad at him now ... Man, if anything happens to her brother there is going to a bigger problem.

"It almost felt as though I slept next to a stranger, or maybe I was the stranger, since I didn't recognize myself...what I was becoming."  Glad he though this. He really does need to figure out how he's going to balance everything. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Yeah, the baby's one the way. I'm atually surprised that Edward is being as calm as he is. I thought he would be panicking more. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I am floored that Bella went behind Edward's back and told his mother to come to the christening ... and stay with them. this should be a really interesting reunion between mother and son. 

And, now someone's trying to break-in? 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

"I'd grabbed the bat that sits near the front door," I had to laugh at this a little. When I lived in NYC, I used to keep a baseball bat by my front door. Luckily, I never had to use it. 

Well, they certainly have a mess to clean up now. And, his mother is coming to stay! Can't wait to see how Edward deals with this now. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Wow! That was a lot of unknown history revealed. Who knew that Colleoni held a torch for Edward's mom all these years? That was a huge surprise for me. Can't wait to see what happens when Elizabeth arrives in town. 

Not as surprised at Carlisle telling Edward that he will be his second in command. Can't wait to see what Edward decides about that. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Well, that meeting went well, I think. But, is the fur going to fly once Esme gets through the door? Can't wait to find out. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

"So old," Elizabeth repeated. "I thought the same when I saw your face."  Oh, I really thought the fur would fly with that statement. But, Esme seems to be on her best behavior. 

"She gave me that-it's from AA. She's got two years sober."  "And you're toasting to that with Jack Daniel's?"  I had to agree with Bella here. It was an odd way to toast his mom's achievement. 

Thanks!

Sally

Summary:


 


Bella hesitates at the cliff just before she's about to jump when her hallucinatory Edward tells her to move on. He tells her to be happy and she wonders what he means with that. Just then, Jake appears, looking scared when he sees Bella by the edge. Bella wonders if she's supposed to move on and be happy with Jake. AU, Non-Canon.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15819 Read Count: 2069
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2013 Updated: 05 May 2013
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Futuretake

Great ending. How did Bella not see the coincidence with the name Anthony Brandon? I'm guessing that was the Cullens--especially Edward.

 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved hearing Edward's thoughts. Glad the wolves were able to join with him to get rid of Victoria. Now to wait to see if what she said was true. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

As much as I think she made the right choice, it's still so hard to see Edward on his knees and groveling. But, he's going to have to live with the consequences of his actions. 

I have a feeling Charlie is totally aware of what just happened. I'll have to read on to see if I'm right. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I told you I'd give this a try. It's a very interesting twist on what did happen in the books. I can't wait to see where the story takes me. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Uh oh! Is it Edward or one of the other Cullens? Can't wait to find out. Just glad it's probably not Victoria. 

Thanks!

Sally

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 666]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 232213
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh, I do hope Tonna survived! And, thank God for the fire doors--what a great thing to have. And, yay for Edvard return! I'm sort of hoping the marauders lay down their arms and there doesn't need to be a huge battle, but that may just be wishful thinking. 


Thanks!

Sally    

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hate that Bella has been taken, but I'm so glad she protected Arndis and her children. But, damn, why did it have to be Jamarr??? When Edvard finds out, he is going to go ballistic! 

So glad you are back with this story! Thanks!

Sally

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 68704
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow ... again! Bella is one tough cookie. But, I would never blame her for killing Carlisle or Esme. And, really, Charlie too. Can't wait to see how that goes. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Holy shit! I knew she would eventually kill him. But, to do that? Nope, never thought she would. But, deep down, he deserved that and more. 

Can't wait to see how she gets Leah and Alice out. 

Thanks!

Sally

 

PS: I'm so glad you are continuing to post this story here and not letting the FFN assholes get to you. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

She did it! She survived this madness and rescued Alice and Leah. 

 

Well done! Really looking forward to the sequel! Thanks!

Sally

Summary:

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Sequel to Silent Wishes. Bella and Edward overcame the odds and found their happy ending, but will it last? All they have now are whispered hopes of a future worth fighting for.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47961 Read Count: 16216
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2015 Updated: 21 Sep 2019
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

There is so much hurt in this family. This better be a huge wake-up call for all of them. They're all they've got. They need to fix this. At the end, Edward and Carlisle both had very valid arguments. I do wonder how much of that Alice heard. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So excited to get all the updates on your stories! Sorry RL has been kicking your butt though. 

I'm glad Edward is finally going to get some therapy. And, yay! Charlie is gonna be okay. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

First, it's great to have you back writing this. I've been missing your stories. 

I certainly didn't hate this chapter. I loved when Bella told Victoria to back off the hovering. Hope she can learn to just be friends with Bella and Edward. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm totally pulling for Alice to be okay. Well, as okay as she can be after trying to kill herself. But, she has people around her to help her. She's going to need them! 

Glad Edward's issue is only stress--he can learn to manage that. He NEEDS to learn! 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm glad they are deciding to get some outside help to navigate all their feelings. It can't hurt. 

And, I'm glad you are on the mend. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Emmett. He is really having a hard time with these changes. But, Bella and Edward do need to venture off on their own. And, it's not like they are going across the country! They are only going to Seattle. And, maybe there is just a little bit of jealousy on Emmett's part--they are getting to move on, have a life; he's stuck in his old life. Maybe he needs to make some changes as well--even a small one--to break out of the drearies they have all been in. 

Thanks!

Sally

 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So lovely to have you and this story back. Been missing you! I'm glad Edward and Bella are doing well. But, I hate that Alice is trying to hide her pain. I hope they can all come up with an idea that will help her. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sounds like they have a good plan. And, everyone needs to be a part of it. Glad Edward talked to Carlisle. But, I have a feeling the next conversation will be tough. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm with you. I want to make all of them better. What will they do to help Alice? Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh, poor Alice! My heart is breaking too. *sniffle* So glad Bella shook Edward out of his pity party of one. They are all Jasper has to help him find Alice. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

No!!!! Come back, Alice!

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I want to gather all of them together and give them a huge hug. They are so messed up. But, I have faith they will find a way to come back together and help each other heal.

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh, Charlie's awake again! Maybe this time, it will last. 

All the best with your surgery. I'll be recuperating with you as I'm having surgery in 2 wks. 

Thanks!

Sally



Author's Response:

My surgery is two weeks from today! 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I can imagine how emotionally draining this is for you. It's such a difficult storyline now, dealing with Alice's suicide attempt. But, I did love Jasper's response to Bella asking him what he wanted to do. At this point, I think they all need some pretty intensive therapy in order to cope with everything they have all had to deal with 'cause I don't think any of them is coping very well. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh, my. Someone has gone over the edge. Though, I'm not really surprised Edward snapped a bit. I am surprised he said that about Bella's parents' accident. That was really cruel. But, he's drunk. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

My heart broke a little more for both Edward and Bella. But, asking for help was a big step for Edward--the first step. 

Thanks!

Sally

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48344 Read Count: 27651
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 17 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I wonder what it's going to take for Bella to realize she isn't evil and damned? And, wow, I had not expected that story from Garrett. 

 

PS: Some of us are having issues leaving reviews for Whispered Hope. Sorry. But, it was a great chapter!

 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella certainly has major issues to come to terms with. Maybe baking therapy will help. The fact she feels safe with Jasper should help. But, he's right--she needs to talk to Edward and be totally honest!

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good to have you back! I think this chapter showed so much of Bella's self-doubt, though I have trouble believing Leah will blame her for what happened. At least, I hope she doesn't. And, I'm with Bella there at the end--what price will have to be paid for Bella's safety? 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh, shit! How did nobody know this about Peter. Except, apparently, Alice knew there was something up with him since she was hiding out. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, I'm definitely here for the long haul. Bring on the drama; I'm ready. 

Bella thinks Alice is barely hanging on? I don't think Bella is doing a whole lot better. Can't wait to see what happens when Leah gets into this mix. 

Thanks!

Sally



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bella and Edward certainly have a lot to recover from. I wonder if Bella will ever really come back from this mess. But, at least, Edward is being very supportive. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I figured sooner or later one of the girls was going to snap. Sort of thought it would be Alice. But, it was poor Leah. Wonder how much better it will be if they bring her to the ranch? 

Loved the very small progress Alice has made, though. At least, she's sitting on the same sofa with Jasper. Cu[cakes are great for bribery. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, wow! Bella is married to Edward. Didn't see that coming. I just figured she knew him. I love all the mystery. Well done!

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 27 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Obviously, something happened between Bella and Edward in the intervening years. Can't wait to hear that story. 

Great beginning. Looking forward to more. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, they were so young when they got married! I wonder how she tricked her father into giving consent? Aro was so sweet to say he would have walked her down the aisle. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella still has such a long road to travel before she feels any kind of safe, even with Edward. And, now she has to deal with Leah being in the same house. *sigh* 

 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I know this is so hard for both Bella and Leah, but poor Edward is stuck in the middle, trying to everything for everybody. What's it going to take for all of them to find some peace? Can't wait to see how this gets resolved. 

 

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Sally



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Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is such a no-win situation right now. I'm so sad for all of them. But, mostly, I fear Leah will never get her happy ending, no matter how hard Jack tries.

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I LOVE Emmett! I'm glad he was able to be blunt with Bella where everyone else has been on eggshells. And, Edward and Bella were able to come to an understanding. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I had a feeling that trip with Leah was not going to go well. How will they find her? And, poor Bella--knowing she is out there as a loose cannon. It's so sad, but I have to agree with Bella--Leah is a lost cause. 

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Sally



Author's Response:

I debated a lot on which way to go with Leah,  but in the end, I followed my gut. 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, a few surprises in this chapter. Edward gave in to Bella so quickly--didn't expect that. And, Aro blasted Bella. And, even though Alice is worried Bella won't come back, at least she seems to understand why Bella has to go with Edward. 

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Sally



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Thank you.

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good to have you back with this story. I feel so bad that Bella has to leave the ranch. She was finally healing a little there. And, that nightmare was horrible. Poor thing. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Interesting evaluation from Garrett, but he probably does have her pegged. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh, man, Bella's got a long road to finding forgiveness for herself. As much as the others, except maybe Edward, are pissed at her for going rogue and killing Leah, I think Bella truly thought she had to be the one to kill her. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I really wanted to yell at Bella when she decided to go where she knew Leah would be. But, that is what had to happen. Like Bella, I wish she could have done more for Leah, but as Leah said, she was already dead. 

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Sally

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

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Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 299490
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

I want to give Jasper a huge hug! 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Once again, I'm really glad Jared is on his side, as well as Bella. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh, this is going to be good, Josie! Looking forward to more and finding out who Edward is doing this for. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Damn, she is a witch! Poor Edward. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Damn that woman! She is hateful. I'm sort of hoping Bella can get some info out of Jared. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I found it really interesting that Edward called her back on a throw-away phone. He really wanted to ease her mind about what "he" does as opposed to other escorts. I hope she can eventually come to believe him. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Oh, he is smooth. Very smooth! Can't wait to see how the night goes. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I'm dying to know who the "she" is that Edward kept referring to. A sister? His mother? And, damn, I do not like this Esme. But, I don't think you really want us to, right? I hope she doesn't find his phone.Or find out he pocketed more money than he said. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Hmm, I'm now guessing the person he wanted to go see is his mother. She must have been in the car when his father was killed. If so, does this mean Edward has been in Esme's clutches since he was 14? God, I hope not. 

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Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Loved Bella being tough with Esme. I love that she had the upper hand over Esme. 

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Sally