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I Live by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary:

 

Rebelling against Edward's crushing protectiveness, Bella raced for La Push. Goal in sight, she crashed, shattering her truck and her body. Jasper, discovering Bella gravely injured and bleeding profusely, pulled her from the wreckage. Fighting the lust for her blood was only the first battle. Violence, language, adult themes. Jasper/Bella

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Alice/None, Bella/Jasper, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Peter/Charlotte
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 374713 Read Count: 56489
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Jan 2015
Reviewer: cwtallan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: I Howl

great story well written,



Author's Response:

ch 33

 

Thank you, Sweetie. I appreciate you taking time to read and write a review. Glad you like the story, too!

~MizzRick~

 

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Chapter 34 has been sent to the betas at Project Team Beta. They've even accepted it into transit. (Thank goodness.) They get to have it about a week. That's in their rules and stuff.

 

A snippet of chapter 34, I Conquer. I took this bit from about the middle.

 

Chapter 34, I Conquer

 

Jasper's POV

 

"Bella, you will listen to me," I whispered harshly in her right ear. I pulled her head to the left and placed my teeth at her throat under her jaw. She froze and even her rapid panting stopped.

 

I held her there, her back pressed firmly against my chest and stomach, taking in the scent that called to me; the scent that promised belonging, home, and sanctuary, and wished I didn't have to make her submit to me. I wished there was something else, anything else, I could do besides force her to her knees and put my teeth to her throat. But she was a newborn, and I had learned long ago there was no way to reason with them when their instincts had taken over or they had decided to be obstinate.

 

I felt her fear and absorbed it, touching her with my feelings of possession and my craving for her as I let my anger quickly flicker across the edges of her awareness.

 

Sliding my teeth across her neck, barely making contact with her skin, I made my way to her ear. "You are mine, Isabella, and you will do as I say."

 

"I won't!"

 

"You will."

 

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