Reviews by RAH07890
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Vandalism & The Apocalypse

OH SNAP!  This cannot be good!  I really loved it so much :)  I cannot wait to find out what happens next!



Author's Response:

glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :)  I am so happy Tanya finally set the record straight :)



Author's Response:

definitely moving in a positive direction.   Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Waxward & Sexward

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I agree with Bella, I couldn't handle Sexward Masen twice in one evening either without jumping his bones (even though I am a virgin too).



Author's Response:

it's a true test of character...i'm ashamed to say i'd fail, miserably.  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch

Wow, that was funny, the drunk bit I mean.  I cannot wait to find out what happens next :)



Author's Response:

if you like drunkella...you'll love the next chap..Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Captain Jack & Drunkella

Wow, that was amazing! My uncle, while drunk off his ass, once, instead of going to the bathroom to piss, pissed all over his clothes in his closet ;)



Author's Response:

ugh!  i have an uncle that stood in the middle of the street singing the Ave Maria....i could handle that better than a pissing uncle.. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Tidal Pools & Capistrano

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved it!  I don't think the marriage talk is too soon, my parents started dating in May of '75 and were engaged by Christmas of that same year (and were married in October of '76) also, a friend of mine, her parents were engaged 2 weeks after their first date!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  i agree.  Sometimes you know right away.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: The Southern Gentleman & Caveward

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Wild Turkey & Jedi Training

Oh wow, that was incredible!  I remember when I went to Disney World on my Senior Trip, we got locked out of Disney World, because half of the group was outside the gates and the other half wasn't and we had no way of getting in contact with them.  Thankfully, we didn't have to wait that long before we got to explain our situation to a guard who let us in :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Swing Dancing & The Dearly Departed

Wow, that was amazing!  I think it's Tanya who is speaking at the end.  I personally loved the priest at the Mass on Palm Sunday, hilarious!  I know some other ministers that are like that (in some way) and it's funny ;) (is that sacrilegious to say?)



Author's Response:

he was pretty goofy...but guys like him definitely exist!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Unsolicited Advice & Airline Wings

Wow, that was amazing ;)  Maybe Emmett would prefer to join a Protestant church, if he ever rejoins so he doesn't have to worry about spouting off every single offense to the priest (I mean no disrespect to Catholics, but sometimes it is hard to remember exactly what you did).  I cannot wait to find out what happens next :)



Author's Response:

if you forget some of them, it's still forgiven.  all that's asked is for the person to confess 'to the best of their knowledge', we're only human after all.  i STILL wouldn't want to be in line behind Emmett.  lol.  THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Ringtones & The Prodigal Son

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really cannot wait to see why Rose called Bella. 



Author's Response:

glad you are enjoying the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Boxer Shorts & Serenades

Wow, that was amazing!  I loved it so much :)  I am happy Emmett and Rose are getting married in the Catholic church, I want to see what one is really like (my cousin got married in one but I was too young to go and although she videotaped it, the only copy I have seen was at my grandma's before she died, and now the cousin has remarried, so I don't think she has it anymore).



Author's Response:

it's not really that big a difference from any other church...unless both the bride and groom are Catholic and opt for a 'Nuptial Mass'...which is very long and beautiful.  Unfortunately, those of us who marry non-Catholics..just get the simple wedding ceremony.  That's what we'll have in the fic.  short, sweet and to-the-point.  But trust me, Emmett & Rose's wedding will be funny. (how could it not?)  .  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake: The April Fool

That was INCREDIBLE!  Poor Edward :*(  I would comfort him ;)



Author's Response:

LOL...Edward needs to get even.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Wookies & Good Friday

OH SNAP!  I wonder what happened and how Edward can get himself out of this mess (I haven't read LRM, but I promise to ASAP).  I have so much to do for school and there are only 24 hours in a day but I am not complaining, but explaining why it is taking me a long time to read.



Author's Response:

LRM just give more detail...and Edward is afraid that he's a crazy stalker...his nervousness makes it funny.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Lap Dances & Abstinence

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Emmett, but I hope he can make it :)



Author's Response:

Emmett can survive anything.  THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Pool Tables & Revelations

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  I miss my grandma on the day she died, mostly because it was so sudden (we saw her about 3 hours before she was found dead, she was sleeping, so it wasn't painful but it still didn't make the pain any better).



Author's Response:

i lost my grandpop a year after losing my dad.  Both were tough...especially on my mother since Grandpop (her dad) lived with them for the last 30 years of his life.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Outtake: Ode to The Arse

Wow, that was amazing and funny ;)



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Wow..you are almost caught up with me!  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Some Justice & Escargot

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  If Rose had NOT royally messed with Geri, I would have been more than willing to do so.  In fact, I think she wasn't messed with enough, can I have a turn with her?  



Author's Response:

there's a tiny bit more Geri to come andit's ALL GOOD.  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I believe "poofy" is a word, if only because my family calls my fat cat "poofy".  Adorable ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens in London :)



Author's Response:

lol.  THanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Wow, that was amazing :) I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)  Is there a reason for the specific dates mentioned in the chapter end notes?



Author's Response:

not really...just trying to let everyone know what date we've reached in the story...for anyone wanting to keep track.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Yellow Carnations & First Class

Wow, that was amazing!  If I were Bella, I would be worried about the flowers.  I would also be praying HOURLY for the other retreat members and praying for patience for Father Pat.



Author's Response:

no kidding..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Genuflections & Surprises

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I am sure I would have the same comments as Bella in certain situation ;)  I would also probably kiss the UK stamp on my passport (if I ever went).  A lucky friend of mine has been twice, on a mission trip :)



Author's Response:

it's a wonderful place...I love every part of England that I've visited, and have many very dear friends over there.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :)



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I think a trip with Edward to the Holy Land would be ABSOLUTELY AMAZING :D



Author's Response:

anywhere with E would be amazing.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

Awww, that was very amazing!  I really loved it! :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  Do you have a picture of the ring?



Author's Response:

there is a photo of the ring (and E's bracelet)  on V&V's Facebook page.  The link is on my author profile page.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it!  Bella's revenge was so amazing ;)  I think an outtake of Emmett's retreat weekend would be funny.  I cannot wait to see what else happens next.



Author's Response:

i'll update soon.. Working on LRM at the moment.  THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Edible Art & First Steps

YAY!  That was incredible :)  I am so happy they have a date :)  Will be praying for Bella, as she has one-on-one time with Emmett ;)  Really hope they find out who is sending the flowers soon!



Author's Response:

it'll be a while b4 the flower/stalker deal is resolved.  I'll be posting again soon!  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much :)  Yay for Rose :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)



Author's Response:

more to come soon. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved it so much!  I am so happy for Rose and Emmett :)  Although I do not accept Lillian's reasoning for acting the way she does, I understand it.  I cannot wait to see what happens when Bella talks with Edward :)



Author's Response:

Mrs. W. is just plain nuts.  Unfortunately, she's not alone in the worlds.  Thanks so much!  Glad you like the story.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much!  Amazing job, once again ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

thanks!  more to come soon!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved it so much!  I must say (for fear God will smite me down if I don't) that I feel bad that Geri died, but at the same time, I cannot help but wonder what would have happened if she didn't ;)  I really cannot wait for them to be reunited soon :)  I love Edward's idea of getting married in the morning in Forks and having the reception at his parent's house :)



Author's Response:

we can enjoy her death...she's not real after all.  lol.  not too much longer til E comes home.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved it so much!  Bella is so strong!  I am sorry they have to do some of the Pre Cana classes together, hopefully Father Pat will talk with Emmett before hand about annoying Edward.  I  am sorry about your computer :*(, mine just returned to me after being in the shop for 3 days because of a virus :(



Author's Response:

Actually having the classes together will be a lot of fun...for us! lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

Wow, that was amazing :)  Wow, Emmett, that was certainly an interesting year for you ;)  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

i'm pretty sure all his years are interesting for him, and for everyone withing spitting distance of him. lol.  Thanks!  check out the sneak peek of the next V&V now posted on the blog.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  SO happy Bella is ok and even though, like Bella, I don't like that the ranger is dead, I am happy that she is safe now :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

I tried to be honest with the reaction to being the cause of someone's death...even a bad person's. Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Hallelujah & Zombie Dances

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  That was a perfect prom for Bella and Edward ;)



Author's Response:

we still get to see it from Edward's perspective in LRM...soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations

OH NO!  NOT good!  I am so happy they have made progress!  I also hope that they find out that the girl was lying!  Amazing job, once again :)



Author's Response:

working on next LRM right now...then back to V&V so they can sort out this mess.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Aww...poor Edward, that must be awkward ;)  I really loved this so much!  Amazing job, once again!  I loved the invitations, so amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I also cannot wait to hear the Hooker Turkey story ;)



Author's Response:

thanks.  Glad you like it.  more to come very soon.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Wow, that was Amazing!  I really loved it so much!  That is a slightly funny story but once again, very serious at the same time.  I cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  So happy for Bella ;)  I was not a fan of the fur...but I can imagine it was fake.  I really cannot wait to see why Edward saw Meghan.  I also cannot wait to read the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

you know Bella...it was faux fur.  I actually like fur...except for the time I found this old...and i mean OLD mink stole in my Mom's closet.(it was an antique)..I was snooping around, like little girls do, I opened a box and found that nasty thing...but it wasn't just the fur it was made of the ENTIRE bodies of little dead creatures with glass eyes.  I almost had a freaking heart attack...scared the living crap out of me....worse than any horror movie. lol.  So, yeah, I should actually hate fur.  AND...the above is one of the many reasons I'm twisted. 

needless to say, i've never snooped in her closet since. 

Thanks! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  I think Bella should go on Oprah with Edward :)  Also, SO happy Victor is hopefully gone for good!  One minor problem I found "She works with AIDs patients." should be "AIDS" not "AIDs" :)



Author's Response:

oops on the AIDS...i can correct it in TWCS and the Blog...but Fanfic..eh..i don't know how .  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  So happy Duke and Bella (and Emmett too) are getting along :)  I cannot wait to see what all happens on Oprah ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Always glad to know you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Shock Therapy & The Mother Road

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  So proud of Bella for actually sticking with Oprah and trusting her, even though it was hard :)  Cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Good things still to come!  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Milkshakes & Big Moo

That was AMAZING :)  I really loved it so much!  I LOVE Steak and Shake ;)  It isn't just on Route 66 ;)  Also, Mountain Oysters/Bull Testicles are also called Rocky Mountain Oysters.  I was watching a cooking show and this guy was like "I LOVE oysters, they don't take long to cook at all...(a few minutes later) I heard testicle talk and sure enough, they weren't oysters at all" ;)  Hehe.



Author's Response:

eww...lol.  Yeah, with Emmett around the conversation would have to mention testicles at some point.  haha.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Oh my gosh!  That was amazing :)   I really loved it so much!  Christopher is quickly becoming a character I wish was real ;)  Hehe!  I cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

you must read the latest LRM chapter.  Christopher is a hoot!  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I found one tiny error, here " "I know your experience with be vastly different. Bells"  Should be "experience will..." ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

OH MY GOSH!  That is so evil :( Not cool ;)  I cannot wait for the next one...and Bella and Edward's wedding :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

GAH, that was amazing ;)  I really loved it so much :D



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Wow, that was amazing!  I really love it so much :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Wow, that was amazing! I think I might know Kate's father, but won't say anything ;)  I cannot believe she is pregnant that quickly, but I knew it would happen sometime within the first year ;)  I really loved it so much :)



Author's Response:

I am curious to see who you think it is? 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much.  I wonder if Edward will ever tell Bella the truth?  What about Tanya's daughter, what is going on with her?



Author's Response:

Next chapter...you will learn more about Kate

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

That was amazing!  I really am enjoying this so much so far :)  I cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Wow, that was amazing!  Your first sexual scene was amazing :)  I really loved this chapter.  I am glad Isabella agreed to be with Edward, now I just hope Charles will let Edward court her!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

That was amazing!  I really loved it.  Just a little note, when you say "He lifted her skirt up to her waste", it should be "He lifted her skirt up to her WAIST", not waste.  I know spell check didn't catch that because it is a word but it is not the correct word for this context.  Hope that made sense :)  Anyway, I really loved it all so much :) I am so happy Edward will be the only one to call her "Bella"!  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the catch. I try and go through and fix my mistakes but sometimes I don't catch them all. I went back and fixed it. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved this.  Even though there won't be lemons for a while, I completely understand :)  I really cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

That was incredible :)  I really loved it so much!  Bella is responding in the same way I wish I could to relatives with annoying mates.  Really cannot wait to see more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

That was incredible!  I loved every bit of it.  Can I please seriously injure Alistair?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much.  I know Maria deserved much more than what Bella did, but I agree with Bella, she doesn't need to stoop to her level.  Cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  What will Maria say?  Hehe.  I wonder what Emmett's problem is and why Alice is a little distant?



Author's Response:

I dropped a hint at why Alice is distant. Did you catch it?



Author's Response:

I dropped a hint at why Alice is distant. Did you catch it?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved this chapter!  I am so happy that Maria isn't going to spill the beans.  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  I know I said I really didn't like Maria, but no one deserves to be treated like that, so good for her!  i am so happy for the upcoming wedding :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  I cannot wait to find out more!  That was shocking, but amazing.  Only one minor mistake, "Divorce was something the scarcely happened and if it wasn't for Henry the VII,", it should be Henry VIII (Henry the 8th, not Henry the 7th).  Anyway, keep up the great work :)



Author's Response:

I knew it was Henry the 8th. That must have been a typo that I didn't catch.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved how Bella spoke to the women ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Wow, that was amazing.  I really loved it so much.  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I hope that maybe one day Alice will have the child she desperately wants.  Also, I wonder who Kate's father is?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved how quickly she took to Edward and how Bella brought her out of her shell :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Wow, that was amazing!  Isabella is right, every pregnancy is different, so Edward shouldn't worry so much.  I cannot wait to see what this baby is ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: The Vineyard

That was INCREDIBLE!  I am so happy it was a boy, they needed an heir. :)  I am sad that Carlisle and Esme had to go through all of that though, but you are right, it was common.  Here is a minor mistake I found that might need to change "She couldn't bare another lose." should be "another loss" :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

OH MY GOSH!  That was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved this chapter so much!  I was shocked to find that out (but won't say what it is, just in case someone reads the reviews before reading the chapter, which is something I have done before ;) oops)!  I wonder if Isabella will tell Edward about this?  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved the ending :)  So happy Alice and Jasper FINALLY had a child :)  



Author's Response:

I was really tempted not to give them one, or give them one and kill Alice. Trust me, I thought about it but decided to give everyone a happy ending. I'm not that cruel. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

OH SNAP!  That scares me so much!  I hope they figure out something to do with James, he creeps me out!  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

OH NO!  I don't hate you, I could never do that :)  But, I am now super worried now!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

OH SNAP! I really loved this so much!  I hope you enjoy your time with your sister :)  Take your time updating :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

OH SNAP!  I don't hate Tanya anymore.  That was incredible!  I really hope it was James that died, please?  I really loved this chapter :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really hope that they can find Kate ASAP!  I am worried now!

Six Weeks by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has been avoiding sexual contact with his wife for six weeks. What happens when she lays it all on the line? After Edward and Bella reconnect she finds out she is pregnant what happens during her pregnancy?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25980 Read Count: 22357
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 48 Weeks Part 2

Wow, that was AMAZING!  Perfect first time after Charlie!  I cannot believe it is almost over :(  But, I am sure you will wrap it up very nicely :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 30 Weeks

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :)  I really loved it so much!  GO BELLA :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 24 Weeks

This story is absolutely amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 48 weeks Part 1

Wow, that was amazing :)  So happy for them!  Charlie is a BIG BOY!  My goodness!  I was only 5 pounds 7 ounces at birth!  I am sad that Bella is having trouble with Charlie sleeping, but hope that will be resolved soon :)  Also, wonder how their first time after Charlie's birth will go...will Edward get to try Bella's milk ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 30 Weeks Part 2

Wow, that was amazing :)  Oh Edward, you have to be funny at the class ;)  Hehe...maybe he is doing it so he doesn't feel uncomfortable, some men do that.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 36 Weeks

Wow, that was amazing!  I love the Winnie the Pooh theme :)  I am planning on using it too, one day ;)  I cannot wait to see the baby names :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 42 Weeks

Wow, that was amazing :)  TEN POUNDS!  Geez!  No wonder Bella had trouble giving birth normally!  I cannot wait to see what else happens next with little Charlie and his parents :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 52 Weeks On

Wow, that was amazing :)  SO happy she gets to do this for Esme and Carlisle :)  I wish there was one more future chapter, so we can see what happens with the twins and if Bella/Edward have any more children :)

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...

Gah, that was amazing!  Even if I got to beta this, it was still amazing to read it with the pictures you have in the blog ;)  I really loved it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

GAH, that was amazing!  I really cannot wait for part 2!  YAY!  Tanya is crazy as always ;)  Yay for quick updates :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

OH MY GOSH!  That was INCREDIBLE!  I cannot wait to see what happens next! :)  One minor thing...there are still pictures in the chapter, just don't want you to get in trouble ;)  I loved every bit of this chapter and will reread my favorite chapters (read: all of them) when I can; to keep me entertained until the next update, however long or short that may be :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I can still put them, but I don´t show any genitals.  Someone embracing where you can´t see any private parts are okay! I still see worse, but it´s okay, we´ve still got the blog!  Thanks for reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

HOLY crap, that is HOT!  I really love it so much :)  Keep up the amazing work!



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Wow, that was incredible! I really loved it so much!  



Author's Response:

Wow, I´m so glad that your enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much.  Cannot wait for Bella and Edward to get together ;)



Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying the story so far.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

That was amazing!  I really loved it all :D



Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying it!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

Wow, that was amazing!  I really cannot wait for more :)  Just a little note, can you NOT put your Chapter End Notes in all caps?  It is kind of hard to read them when they ARE LIKE THIS.  Anyway, amazing story, hope to see more soon :)



Author's Response:

Sorry about the all caps. :( I´ll remember that in the future.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  P.S. What kind of a dog is Mojo?  He sounds like a cutie :)



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks!  Mojo is a chihuahua, he´s based on the life of a real dog.  He was my friends and someone poisoned him and we had to put the little guy to sleep. I´ll put a pick up.  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

That was incredible!  I really loved it SO much!  I cannot wait to see their first scene!  Maybe you can post the outtakes separate from the story or update both at the same time ;)



Author's Response:

  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Wow, poor Bella!  I am glad she got to speak her mind for once :)  I also love her relationship with Seth, adorable :) I really am glad the cell phone has been started, I cannot wait to read the first conversation.  I also cannot wait for their first scene (in person).  I really loved all of this.  I am sad I have to wait 2 weeks for the next update but I know it will be well worth it :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Seth is such a cutie! I'm so glad that you loved it, I was really nervous about getting chewed out in reviews because didn't bring the conversation to this chapter.  I really, really wanted to, but it would have been too long.  

The characters from this chapter at some point will play a role in Bella's life so I wanted to get there introduction out of the way, plus let the readers know that unfortunately we haven't seen the last of Jacob Black.  Just a little secret, I'm going to my best to get the next one up in a couple of days.  Reviews like yours make me eager to write!  Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Laterzzz:)

Happy New Year!

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much, especially that HOT phone conversation! I really cannot wait for them to met in person ASAP!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved it so much!  Ahh, Sir and Pet have got me so excited, I can barely contain myself ;)  I was just about to go to sleep when I saw this update in my inbox and I said "Too bad, I am going to read this and then go to sleep".  I know I will have some good dreams now ;)



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Gah, that was SO AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  I didn't need just ONE pair of extra panties, I needed at least 2!  That was INCREDIBLE!  I cannot wait to read the outtake now :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

HOLY CRAP!  That was WELL WORTH me not going to bed on time tonight ;)  I hopefully will have dreams of this ;)  I cannot wait to find out what happens when they find out the truth about each other :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Ok, I will admit, I didn't like this chapter....I LOVED IT!!! HEHEHEEHE!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait for them to meet face to face as Pet and Sir ;)  Please don't take too long to update, ok?



Author's Response:

I promise not to leave you in suspense for too long! Lol! My goal is to keep it as close to a week as possible!  And don´t worry, you won´t be disappointed! 

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Gah, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really cannot wait now ;)  Dr. Domward, exactly how big are you, pervy minds want to know ;)  I really loved this chapter so much!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Gah, that was INCREDIBLE!  Well worth the wait!  I cannot wait to see what else happens in the next chapter ;)  Hehe!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com