Reviews by RAH07890
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123450
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons

I really enjoyed seeing things from Esme's POV, it made me kind of feel sorry for her.  I wonder what will happen now.  I really hope she can mend her relationships with everyone (minus Carmen and Tanya).

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

This chapter was amazing!  I love how they dealt with the tattoo issue, that had me worried!  I wonder if the set of twins that they have are identical or not?  Also, cannot wait to see if they are boys/girls or one of each.  I wonder if Bella's condition will cause problems in labor.  I cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

The twins will be identical - thanks for reding - Beth

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

That was incredible!  I really loved it so much!  Their names are beautiful!  I was wondering how you were going to name them (whether stick with the "E" or a new one).  

Just one quick question, this sentence says ""That's not necessary Ms. Sanders and I would feel better if you called me Mr. Cullen."  but in the first (real) chapter, it says "I am 35 years old and have a PhD in Education", so doesn't that mean he should be Dr. Cullen, not Mr. Cullen? I have seen that in a few chapters but keep forgetting to mention it.  So, I hope that can be cleared up soon :)

 Anyway, amazing job once again, I really loved it so much and cannot wait to see their first time in the playroom after the babies :D



Author's Response:

He can be called Dr. Cullen but the fact that he chooses not to be called that all the time shows him in a more down to earth way then if he insisted on being called Dr.  Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

That was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much!  I am so happy for Bella and Edward.  One minor comment on sentences that make me confused "The babies were coming into their own also.  Simon looked like me with his copper hair and green eyes, Sabrina was a mini Bella with her dark hair and dark brown eyes and Samantha was a mix with my hair and Bella's eyes" You said earlier that Sabrina and Samantha were identical twins so, why does Samantha have Edward's hair while Sabrina has Bella's?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and I am glad you like it.  I researched identical twins and they aren't completely identical.  I found several sites but one explained it the best.  Both babies receive the X from their mother or X/Y from the father.  The Y is always dominant and that's how we get boys but when both are X the males is not necessarily the dominant one, it could be the woman's.  They are still identical - they have the same DNA but different X's became dominant.

I even found a site that said a pair of Chinese twins were proved to be identical even though one is a boy and one is a girl - that seemed a little far fetched but they say fact is stranger thatn fiction!!!

Beth

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later

Wow, amazing job, once again!  Sad we didn't get to see an update on the triplets, but everything else was AMAZING :)  I cannot believe only one chapter remains :*(  Cannot wait to see what happens then!



Author's Response:

Thank you and the next chapter will be another time jump and you will learn about the triplets then - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

Wow, that was an INCREDIBLE ending!  I almost wanted to stop reading when I read what had happened, because I almost started crying so much, but I held on and boy was it worth it!  You could post some outtakes if you are not ready to let them go quite yet, I am sure we wouldn't mind ;)



Author's Response:

I am actually taking suggestions for outtakes people want to see - thanks for reading - Beth

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29923
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, that was amazing!  I really would almost react the same way Bella did.  I really hope you can update by New Years :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see who her attacker was and to see if there will be a lemon in the next chapter, or the epi!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was amazing :)  MotocrossWard is sexy ;) I love that Bella is an Early Childhood Education major (mostly because I am one too).  Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, that was amazing!  I love that Motocrossward is a dirty mouthed kind of guy, normally I don't like it, but with Edward  (or any other man I happen to like), it's kind of sexy ;)  Cannot wait to see what happens on the next date ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved their second date, incredible ;)  Only one minor mistake, this "Desert and meal time entertainment?" should be changed to "Dessert..."  Always remember, you want only one desert (so you use one 's') and you want 2 desserts (so you use 2 's's).  Other than that, amazing job :)  Cannot wait to see what happens at the Cullen house!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, that was amazing!  I wonder who Faith is?  Hmm...  Cannot wait to see what else happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, that was amazing! :)  I loved it all so much!  Their first time together was so hot and awesome!  I loved it ;)  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, that was amazing!  I wonder who Faith is? Guess I will find out in the next chapter ;)  Poor Bella for having to deal with Phil's death and Edward not calling.  I am glad he finally got in touch with her.  Cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, that was amazing!  Renee is definitely a free spirit and it is an AMAZING thing that Seth wasn't with them.  I would feel so awkward there and I am 20!  I loved all of it :)  Cannot wait to find out about Faith!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :0) I'm so glad you liked it!!!

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Edward's POV
"Yea?" I grab my brand fucking new cell phone off the hotel nightstand. The fucker woke me up, this better be important.
"Ed, you awake?" Em's voice comes down the line.
"I am now fucktard." I grumble looking at the 3:30 am flashing on the clock.
"Dude Bella and Rose are wasted, I mean drunk off their asses. I had to carry them out of the bar." He laughs.
"What the fuck Em?" I'm not sure if I'm mad that he called me about drinking women, or that he let them get drunk.
"So we go to Bella's bio Mom's nudist commune cult place, and I mean her Mom greats us butt ass naked. Then we meet this guy with a monster cock, wearing a leather loin cloth. All these people were chanting and dancing naked. It was wild. They tried to get us to get naked and we declined. Well any fucking way..."I interrupt his ass.
"You fucking let them stay there? What the fuck Emmett, you should have loaded them back into the fucking car, and gone back to fucking Seattle!" I yell. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awww...that was amazing!  I was thinking that is who Faith was :)  I am not happy about her situation (Lauren and her husband) but I am so happy she is doing well, FINALLY!  I really hope that Edward, Bella and Faith can all get along :)  Tanya, well, that is a totally different situation!  Amazing job, once again!  Cannot wait to read more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  Cannot wait for the next update ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) So glad you liked it hun. Here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

YAY!  Go Bella and Edward ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

That was amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I loved that date!  I wish I could have one like that ;)  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

SO amazing :)  I really cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

SO amazing :D  I really loved it!  I cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OH WOW, that was amazing :D  I really loved it SO much!  My parents still tell us Santa comes (and my brother and I are 18 and 22, respectively).  My dad claims that Santa visited his house until he moved out and married my mother when he was 24!  Anyway, I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it and cannot wait to learn more about what happened!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254888
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This made me really want Domward to be real, please?  Can he be my Dom?  



Author's Response:

Next time you see a shootoing star....lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Amazing job :)



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Wow, that was amazing ;)  I really loved it so much!  Seth's graduation reminds me of my own from HS (private school), we had 20 people in our class, but we didn't get to each make a speech.  It did last almost 2 hours though, which was longer than my cousin's graduation with almost 300 in her class (public).

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow, that was incredible :)  I am so happy they might be able to get back to normal soon :)  I loved this chapter :)



Author's Response:

They need some normal and some happy time ...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Wow, that was amazing :)  Really loved it so much!  Cannot wait to see what the goals she set were ;)  I have a long list of goals I would want to set, but not sure if there are too many ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :) Great job :)



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This sounds amazing so far!  I really cannot wait to continue it!



Author's Response:

Thanks and welcome to the story ....lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG!  That was amazing, I really loved it, even if the end was embarrassing for Bella and Edward



Author's Response:

hehehe ...I'm glad your enjoying the story...these two go on a small little journey...lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, that was amazing, I really loved everything about it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks....lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That was amazing!  I really loved it!  I think the numbers on her lock might mean a birthday or something that is significant to her :)



Author's Response:

Actually they spell out SAFETY --- (like on the phone, the numbers represent a letter) that's what it is ....thanks for guessing ...lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was amazing!  I really loved it, Edward is constantly surprising me ;)



Author's Response:

He is pretty Damn Sexy isn't he...my perfect man...lol ...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This chapter was very good.  Quick question and I REALLY hope you don't take this the wrong way, but do you have a BETA or an editor?  I only ask because I have noticed little tiny spelling errors here and there (only because I pay attention to little details like that).  I hope this doesn't offend you in any way because this story is ABSOLUTELY amazing.  Anyway, this chapter was awesome, I loved reading about Bella's little moment in the mud, hehe.  I guess she will stick to "truth" from now on, huh?



Author's Response:

I don't take it the wrong way. I didn't get a beta until chapter 16 or 17 (that would be M) this is also her 1st story so from  there on the grammer and all the little tweeking that she does gets better...She also is in the process of going back and working on earlier chapters...so sorry about that. I was trying to write, proof and post all on my own,,,M really has made it easier for me....so thanks again for reading ...lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That was amazing!  I really cannot wait to see what the song is ;)



Author's Response:

They have fun with it ....

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

HOLY CRAP, that was incredible!  :)  I loved it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Really loved this chapter :)  I really love Bella's tattoo, so perfect!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was amazing, but I am getting nervous about the strange happenings in Bella and Edward's life.  I really hope nothing too bad happens, please?



Author's Response:

little things are popping up and will continue to,,,

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, that was intense, even though I didn't read the italics part.  I really hope that one day, they can have a baby :)



Author's Response:

Ummm ...in a later chapter you will get some of what was in italics when Bella finally tells Edward her dirty little secrete....thanks for reading ....lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

That was amazing!  I really loved it all so much!  I cannot wait for Monday :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading i have a teaser for you...

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That was amazing :)  I really cannot wait to read the next chapter, it makes me so excited :)



Author's Response:

The chapter will be Thursday ...as long as M gets it ready for posting ..((don't worry she will --lol)))

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  What is the website for the C-Grip, I cannot find it anywhere ;)



Author's Response:

There are two seprate ones

the basic one that I have pictures on the extra's page is

http://www.vibratorwarehouse.com/snugglepuss_pink.html

and

This is the more expensive with more functions on it

http://www.sextoys.com/vibrator/dual-purpose/we-vibe-ll-wevibe2

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That was incredible!  I really loved all of it, especially Bella getting Edward dressed ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Me neither ...lol ...kidding ...I am glad you like it see you thursday ...lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow, that was incredible!  I really loved it so much! I think my panties aren't just wet, they are SOAKED, lol.



Author's Response:

That's a good thing ...lol ....Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That was amazing!  I really loved it!  Although, I would have done a lot more to Tanya than what Bella did, but that is just me :)  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

I'm afraid that Bella has not heard the last from Tanya...lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

That was incredible!  I really loved it so much!  In those 10 minutes, I think someone got off orally, but I won't say who, because either way is hot.  I really cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

See great minds think alike... I thought some mutal oral pleasure ...usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

That was incredible!  Poor Bella!  I really am worried about her.  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it ...lml

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved that so much :)  I really cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

That was amazing :)  Do we get to see the applicator for the bands, or is it already in the pictures?  I really love it so much :)  Amazing job, once again :)



Author's Response:

The applicator is,'t there? .hmmm I will have to add it ....thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

That was incredible ;)  I really loved it!  I love Spaghetti-O's too :D  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :D



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Wow, that was amazing!  I would LOVE to go Zip-Cording :)  I did something like that over water, but it wasn't as high as 75 feet ;)  I thought Seth was fixed, so he couldn't made, but I guess I just assumed ;)  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

No... Seth is not fixed....

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  When will Bella listen?  Hehe ;)



Author's Response: She was naughty

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I will be patient in waiting for the update, I completely understand :D 



Author's Response:

Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Wow, that was amazing!  That pinky mouse story is so gross!  EWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!  Anyway, amazing job, once again :)



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thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Wow, that was amazing!  I really do not think I like Officer Hawk.  I think James was in on the visit to Bella's house but is using Victoria to help him, since he has that restraining order.  I really cannot wait to see what the truth is when it comes out.



Author's Response:

Good theories I guess we will have to see if they are correct or not ...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :)  Cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

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Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I am sorry you were sick :*( but glad you are feeling better :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Wow, that was incredible!  Don't apologize for the smut ;)  I really loved it so much :)



Author's Response:

I do too... but there is a time and a place for it...having smut just to fill in a page is dumb...but this is an adult story, they have sex and they are just starting their relationship so they have alot of sex....I can't see them going to bed at night without knocking one off... or her sitting naked while he feeds her and then saying "ok...let's get dressed" no way in hell that would happen,,,so i put the smut where i think it would happen.....ok enough of that ...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

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Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  So awesome ;)



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Thanks for reading ...I have this weeks teaser for you..lml

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much :)  I am so proud of Bella for that scene :D  I am not proud of her little stunt at the end, but she is still learning :)



Author's Response:

She is still learning but she is getting it ....thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...

Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow, that was amazing :)  I cannot wait to see what happens with Jess ;)  If I contact you, could you give me the corn pie recipe?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

 

Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved it so much!  I was an uncooperative baby in the womb too, or as I like to say "modest even in the womb", but my mom had a feeling I was a girl :)  I really cannot wait to see what happens next ;)

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Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Wow, that was amazing :)  I am excited about the ring too :)  Cannot wait to see what happens in Victoria :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving a review. I sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank -you...lml

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Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  Gah, I feel like I just have to comment on that couple that gave them that pamplet in the hotel.  I may be a Christian, but to just go up to random people and assuming things and judging them is HORRIBLE and to say "I'll pray for you" and sounding like you are better than they are is not Christ-like AT ALL!  Sorry, that was just a small rant ;)  Anyway, loved the chapter.  I see Leah's points but I also see Bella's points, grr.



Author's Response:

That was a true story and there are people at our church who do think nothing of going up to someone and saying whatever they want because according to them ..it is for the persons own good...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Cannot wait for more!  I did NOT read the beginning, and I am glad I didn't...I might have nightmares (which I have only had ONCE in my life) and I don't want to have those :)  Hope James doesn't cause too much trouble, please?

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Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much! Yay for Edward for trying to fit in :)

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Amazing job, once again!  So happy to see Edward and Bella working things out like this.  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)

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Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  One little thing, the song by Faith Hill is "Breathe", not "Breath" :)



Author's Response:

i know...I still haven't fixed it but thanks for letting me know...louise

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Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  :)  Cannot wait for more!

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Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I think little Seth needs to be fixed now ;)  I am so happy for Edward and Leah talking!  Yay!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Grr...Maggie is annoying me.  I really hope they figure out why James is spending $600/month.  I cannot wait to see what happens next! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I have a small teaser for you...lml

 

“Stay still Isabella” I told her placing my hand on her knee letting my fingers glide softly up the inside of her thigh. “You are to speak freely and tell me about this morning”

 

Bella’s brow furrowed, I thought that meant she was confused as to what I was talking about so I prompted “At breakfast, you gave Claire a bite of food, something happened, tell me about it”

 

“This one doesn’t know what you mean”

 

Bella was over thinking she needed to let go of her inhibitions and tell me what was at the root of her reaction. My fingers drifted over her outer lips while I tried to coax the answer from her “Picture it in your head, the fork coming out of Claire’s mouth…”

 

“She did what your girl said”

 

“Yes she did and what did that do to you?’ I asked while my fingers became more insistent in their movements.

 

Bella whimpered opening her knees a little wider “It made your girl want to tell her to do something else”

 

“What would my girl have her do?”

 

She answered without thinking “She don’t know”

 

That might have been an honest answer, it’s not like Bella has had any training in being the top, hell she was just learning the roll of the bottom. But I wanted to make sure so my question became more direct.  “Would you have Claire do something to you?”

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Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it so much!  I have read about the OhMiBod in other fanfics and this was another great use of it :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Wow, that was amazing :)  Really loved it so much!  Wonder what her personal goals will be?



Author's Response:

I wonder too....lol...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, until next time...lml

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Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this chapter!  So happy to see Edward and Carlisle talk :)  I cannot wait for more between Edward and Bella!  Also, my family just recently went to DC too :)  Have fun!

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Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Wow, that was amazing :)  Really loved it so much :)



Author's Response:

The fluff was fun and family time should include alot of laughing,,,,

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Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

OH WOW...that was amazing :)  I really loved it :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

That was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved them so much!  So happy everything worked out in the end :)

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Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much ;)  I enjoyed it all so much :)  Amazing job, once again :)

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

Wow, this story is amazing so far :)  I really love it so much!  Gee, Marta has something going on, hopefully everything will work out soon :)

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much and am so happy things are progressing well.  Quick question, we know Bella is 24, how old is Edward?  Is his PIN number his birthday?  Just wondering, because some people do that :)

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

OH Wow, that was amazing ;)  I really loved it.  However, question...as Carlie's teacher, wouldn't Bella know Carlie's full name (or at least her first name)?  Because children where I live are registered by their first name in school, like my brother, who goes by his middle name has his first name on all of the school documents and his ID.

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved the secret, it was so amazing :)

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

NO!  I really hope that Jacob leaves soon and leaves Bella ALONE!

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Settling In

Wow, incredible job!  So happy Marta is getting help :)

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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Wow, that eas INCREDIBLE!  I really loved the lemon until stupid Emmett interrupted, hope they can do that again without being interrupted :)  I loved the rest of it too ;)

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident

That was amazing :) I really loved it all.

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!

Amazing job, once again. Oh Emmett ;)

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time

Wow, that was intense, but I still loved it all.

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...

Wow, amazing job, once again. I will admit I thought it was Bella that was pregnant ;) Cannot wait for more

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

Wow, very intense. I want to shake both Renee and Mrs. Cope!! PLEASE? Amazing job, once again.

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style

Wow, amaxing job :) I really loved it and cannot wait to see what everyone got for Christmas

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

Amazing job, once again. I hope no one sees those pics ;)

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

Oh Edward, what am I going to do with you? I want to seriously hurt you right now. I hope everything works out ASAP!!

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

Wow, amazing job, once again. So happy for Bella and Edward :D

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Unexpected Surprises

Wow, I really hope she says yes :)

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

Wow, amazing job again! Loved how Carlie was involved :)

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

NO!!! This cannot be happening!!!! PLEASE don't let this be like this for very long!