Reviews by RAH07890
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

OMG!  Alice's baby is coming!  Cannot wait to see what they name him or her.  Also, so happy Bella is having twins :)  Ok, baby names!

Girls

  1. Margaret
  2. Katherine
  3. Jane
  4. Matilda
Boys
  1. Richard
  2. James
  3. Thomas
  4. Arthur
Hope these help :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

That was amazing :)  So happy Alice lived, although I didn't think you would kill her off :)  Really cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

That was amazing!  I knew there were 2 babies :)  Loved their names by the way :)  Great job!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

That was amazing!  I am so happy Bella decided against the use of a wet nurse, I never really understood why nobles did that, breast feeding creates a special bond between mother and baby.  I loved it all!  Cannot wait to see what the epi has in store for us :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

That was an incredible epi!  Amazing job, once again!  I loved it all!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Friends

I cannot wait to see what happens next with Edward and Bella!  I really hope they can work everything out!  Soon please?

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Wow. that was amazing :) I really want to see the pictures :)  I loved this chapter so much, it was so wonderful.  Quick question because I seem to have forgotten, how old are Bella and Edward?  Just wondering.  Anyway, cannot wait to see how the next practice session goes (the first one was AMAZING) and how the party goes.



Author's Response:

look for pics in my out take of this story - up in a couple of days. Bella is 23 and Edward 26. Emmett is 29 Rosalie 28. Jasper is 27 and Alice is 24.  thank you for reading plu :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it SO MUCH!  Even if it was shorter, it was still something :D  I cannot wait to see what else happens :D



Author's Response:

thanks for the review love

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I am so happy he is ok!  Please let him continue to be ok :)  I cannot wait to see when they eventually have children ;)  Hope they catch Victoria/Tory SOON!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review - of course he's okay - He's Edward! xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review - of course he's okay - He's Edward! xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow, this story is amazing!  I love it so much! I am so happy Everyone is ok :)  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

That was amazing!  I am so happy for Rose and Em :)  I am also happy to hear that Bella is fine :)  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Wow, that was incredible!  I loved all of it!  Hopefully Bella will learn once again how to behave (properly) with Master Edward.  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

so glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Wow, that was amazing!  I am praying for your Beta's family, hoping they can recover from this and hopefully have another child one day.  I really cannot wait to see what happens next with these two.



Author's Response:

thank you for your kind words, Sweetie and thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

Wow, that was incredible!  I really loved it so much!  I am so happy Charlie and Bella are healing their relationship :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Wow, that was incredible!  I loved it all so much!  I really cannot wait to see what else happens next :)



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

That was amazing!  I almost cried a couple of times throughout it too, but it was still awesome!  I really cannot wait to see how everything works out :)



Author's Response:

thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

That was incredible!  I really almost started crying during Bella's story!  Gah, such a rough life, I really hope they can work things out.  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

thank you so much rah xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

That was INCREDIBLE, as always :)  I really loved it, I was worried for a bit when Mandy and the other girls showed up but it all worked out!  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

thank you for the positive review :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

That was incredible!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait to find out more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

That was incredible!  I really loved it all so much :)  Amazing job, once again!  I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)



Author's Response:

thanks honey!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  Am I dirty to think that Edward shaving Bella was hot too?  I really loved everything :D



Author's Response:

the shaving? My imagination ran wild!  Thanks for your review and comments

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I am so happy she said yes!  I love the ring, so gorgeous :)  I cannot wait to see what else happens next :)



Author's Response:

thank you - lots more to come

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

That was amazing :)  I really loved it so much ! I loved the photo-thing ;)  I loved all of it.



Author's Response:

thanks so much - you are very easy to please xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Wow, that was AMAZING!  Yay for babies finally being here!  Although, I don't think they are preemies (usually it is babies who are born before the 37 week mark).  Jackson was a big boy at 7 pounds at 37 weeks; I was only 5 pounds 7 ounces at 37 weeks!  How much did Alexis/Lexy weigh...maybe I missed it ;)  I really loved their names, so perfect for them!  I also loved their sexy times while waiting on Bella to recover :)  Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Gah, that was INCREDIBLE!  Yay for Charlie/Sue and Alice/Jazz :)  I really loved it all so much :)  I am also happy they finally set a date :)  YAY!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your very enthusiastic review, Babe!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

that was incredible :) I really loved all of it. But, I did notice that Edward's middle name of Masen was spelled Mason in this chapter, I don't know if that was intentional or not :)

Author's Response:

Big Ooops in the name - sorry that's so my bad! I'm glad you liked the chapter xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

WOW!  That was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved ALL of it!  So happy Edward is finally healed :)  Also, loved the Middle Eastern dinner ;)  I cannot wait to find out who is Bella's mom now!  



Author's Response:

thank you so much for reading and reviewing - I'm glad that you liked it xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

GAH, THAT was INCREIDBLE!  I really loved it so much!  Golly Jeepers, Joshua was a BIG baby ;)  I loved it so much!  I cannot wait to see what else happens next ;)



Author's Response:

Hey Honey, 
Thank you so much for your review, and my nephew was that weight and my own daughter was 9.4 pounds - yeah so watermelon through a faucet!

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  That was a great munch!  I was very curious to see waht Edward was, because of the fangs ;)  I really loved the "Bee" :)  I also cannot wait to see their wedding, I cannot believe it is here!  YAY!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review - my research skills are improving all the time - I had to find something that was real I'm glad you liked it. Update soon

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Wow, that was AMAZING! I really loved it so much!  So happy they are back together again and Edward realized how mean he was to Bella ;)  Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for your review and comments xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it SO much!  I am so happy Edward is completely healed :)  YAY!  I cannot wait to see what Bella was talking about...although I have an idea ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Wow, that was amazing!  YAY for Bella and Edward :)  Also, Alice, Jasper and baby Tiffany :)  There was one picture that didn't appear in the chapter :(  Oh well!  Only 5 more chapters?  Guess you'll have to fast forward through the next few months, huh?  I cannot wait to see what else happens next :)



Author's Response:

No, don't worry, I won't fast forward - I'll just keep going to do it right!  So maybe it's going to be 10... I'll know when I get there.

Thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

WOW, there are barely any words left to say.  I really loved it so much and am SO happy for Bella and Edward :)  I cannot wait to see what else happens next!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Wow, that was AMAZING!  So happy Carlisle and Esme are willing to work it out :)  Also happy for everyone else :)  YAY!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Wow, that was AMAZING! :)  I really loved it!  So happy for Carlisle and Esme!  As well as everyone else building their homes on such a beautiful property!  Will Edward and Bella be finding out if they are having boys/girls or one of each?  Cannot wait for them to find out :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review and the comments, they will find out  - next chapter

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Wow, that was AMAZING!  Even if I was really hoping to find out what the Possums were in this chapter, I loved every bit of it!  So happy Bella FINALLY stood up to the bullies of her past!  YAY!  I also loved Dana/Reese, perfect!  Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I LOVE the new house!  So gorgeous :)  I cannot wait to see what else happens next ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  YAY for baby number 3!  Hopefully Irena won't be too much of a trouble.  I found this tiny error here, that desperately needs to be changed "She noticed that her virgina was level with his mouth.  She trembled."  Bella doesn't have a virgina, I don't think ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much -  I will make the change - hand /eye coordination!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Go Bella and Edward!  Will they find out the sex of this baby too?  Just curious :)  There are a few minor mistakes in this chapter...for instance the crocodile "clams" should be "clamps" ;) Cannot wait for more :D



Author's Response:

thanks for the review and the comments - your answers are in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it SO much!  Yay for another boy, but I hope they have another girl eventually too :)  I loved how the uncles dealt with Irena ;)  Hehe!  Cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

OH WOW!  That was AMAZING!  I really loved it SO much!  Loved Noodle's name :)  Also, yay for Edward :D  Cannot wait for more :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved this story!  I cannot wait to see what happens next for them in A Family Like Ours!  YAY!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64145
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Amazing job, once again! :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow, that was amazing!  I am so happy Edward finally met Carlisle, Esme and Patrick Cullen!  I really hope Bella accepts his proposal.  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Awww...they are ENGAGED!  I am so happy :)  Cannot wait to see what else you have in store for us!

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Wow, that was amazing!  Sorry for not reviewing before this chapter but I just realized that this Bella and I have something in common!  We are both trivia nerds :)  I watch Jeopardy every night it is on too, and for the LONGEST time (well, a year and 2 months) at my college, I would sign up for the TV at my dorm so I could watch it almost every night.  I don't have to do that anymore because I got cable :)  It upsets me when I miss Jeopardy too Bella ;)  Anyway, cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Wow, that was a great ending :)  I loved it all :)  This part "Our youngest, Peter Carlisle Cullen, hadn't slept four hours straight in his whole young life." reminded me of my younger brother.  He didn't sleep through the night until he was 4 years old!  Every night(after he could do so), he would wake up and just stare at my mom(never my dad) and say "I just wanted to make sure you're ok Mommy" (or at least try to).  Anyway, amazing job, once again!  I loved it all so much!  

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was amazing!  I really hope you continue it :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Unforeseen Consequences

Oh snap!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: The Real Cinderella

Loved this!  Edward is amazing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: The Next Move

So wonderful and totally worth the wait!  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: The Google Search

That was amazing!  I loved how she found out!  I cannot ewait to see what will happen next!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: The Unspoken Promise

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I cannot wait to see what will happen next for Bella!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: The Royal Duties

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really hope Bella and Edward meet again very soon!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: The Last Straw

Oh wow!  I really loved this!  I cannot wait to learn more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 13: The Pending Assignment

Loved this so much!  What kind of plot theory are you asking about?  Edward's back story?

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You

Wow, this story is amazing so far!  I cannot wait to continue it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire

Wow, that was incredible, once again!  I love Bella's sassiness (is that even a word?).  I also love how she put Rose in her place :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me

Wow, I loved the lemon (even if it wasn't a FULL on lemon).  I was wondering what other piercings these two had ;)  Amazing job, once again :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You

Wow, that was amazing!  I loved it all so much!  I can totally relate to Bella and Edward about the contacts annoying you, I really cannot stand to sleep in mine, so I always take them out before bed.  Anyway, really love that Edward sticks up for Bella and wants to take her to the MTV VMA's :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Your Room

Wow, that was amazing!  I know this will be EXTREMELY awkward to ask and I feel really weird for asking it.  But, since it has been mentioned more than once, I feel the need to ask.  Just how big are Bella's boobs?  I don't have to know but since they have been described as huge, it's kinda obvious we aren't dealing with B cups here.  I only ask because I am very visual when it comes to reading stories, when I read them, it's like a movie playing in my head and I want to know.  You don't have to answer, I just was curious.  ANYWAY, I loved this chapter so much, I am glad Alice told Bella not to worry about Rose.  I hope those words don't come back to haunt her later.  



Author's Response:

Your question isn't awkward at all...I'm glad you asked! She is actually a very full C or a small D. You have to keep in mind that she is barely 5'2" and weighs like 105lbs, so that size would look pretty big. Also, she has long limbs, and is short waisted. Thats why he always says she has long legs. Even though she is tiny, they are long in proportion to her size.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review...I'm glad you are enjoying it!

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me

Wow, that was incredible, as always.  I do have one tiny suggestion, though.  When you use a foreign language, can you put the translation of the words at the bottom (like in the Chapter End Notes area)?  Thanks :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters

I loved this chapter!  Thank you for answering my question :)  It now makes total sense why many girls are jealous of Bella.  I mean, I am 5'0-5'1 and my boobs are big on my small frame (even though they are a B), I cannot imagine being a large C almost a D!  Anyway, I really want to know who messed with Bella's dress, I want to hurt them! Grrr!  I know!  I will sic my 22 pound cat on them!  LOL.  Cannot wait for the costume party :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman

Aha!  Here are the translations! :)  Thanks for that!  I really enjoyed this chapter!  Bella should speak dirty Italian to Edward ;)  hehe

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace

Wow, I was not expecting that ending at all!  I hope that they can make up soon :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sorry

I loved Edward's surprise, that was hot!  I am happy that Rose is getting a little bit nicer.  I wonder what Emmett's deal is though.  Great job!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

Daddy "C" is hilarious!  Mama "E" is funny too.  I think that Bella and Edward should have babies but I am not sure of how soon or how far away that should be ;)  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog

I love the idea of matching tattoos.  Especially the matching tattoos that Bella and Edward are getting :)  What is the new piercing that Bella has?  Is it an anti-eyebrow or what?  Just wondering ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters

OH SNAP!  I wonder what in the world is going to happen now?  Amazing job, once again :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone

Wow, I am so happy Bella and Edward are having a good time so far in Italy.  I am not very happy about Mateo though, grr.  Love that Edward can speak Italian ;)

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

Wow, that was incredible!  I loved it so much!

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Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long

Wow, that was amazing :)  Poor Bella about her mom and Lola!  Just a question, what do the initials in the interview mean?  Do they mean that the camera was pointed at that person or what?  Just asking :)  I wonder what will happen now? 

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell

Wow, that was amazing!  I am so glad Edward told her about the house and the financial situation.  I really hope the interview with Barbara really did go well.  I wonder why Charlie isn't talking to Bella?  Amazing job, once again!  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20

Wow, that was totally worth the wait! Do you have pictures of Lily and Capo on the blog?  Just wondering ;)  Amazing job, once again!  I really cannot believe Colin, such an asshole!  Grr!  I really hope that they can figure out what to do next!  I loved all of this so much!

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: I Want You

Wow, that was incredible!  Edward is so sweet to do all of these things for Bella :)  Charlie reminds me of my own Daddy, I can totally see him doing all of this whenever a guy comes home with me.  I really loved all of this, it was perfect.  I hope that they can figure out why the video is fuzzy and what exactly is going on with Collin "Asshole" Brady.  I also hope that Asshole is gone for good sometime soon :)  

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Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart

That was incredible!  I really am not happy that Colin made Edward pissed off enough to cause Edward to hit him, but I hope that Edward is cleared of all charges!  I have a quick question, can you list all the piercings that Edward has (and maybe Bella too), I keep forgetting.  Anyway, Capo was brilliant!  I really wish I could have been there, I would have laughed so much!  I really cannot wait to see what happens next :)

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun

Wow, that was incredible!  I really loved it so much!  You had me so worried!  I really am happy he is ok :)  I hope they can figure out a way to get Collin to drop the charges (within reason)!  I also cannot wait to read about their possible sexy times while skype-ing ;)  Dirty me ;)  Man, Edward without the piercings must have been different (were they ALL gone, if you know what I mean), do you have a list of all the piercings/tattoos?

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Miss You

Wow, that was incredible!  I really hope Bella is ok, please?  Can I hurt anyone who is responsible for hurting her if she isn't?  I really cannot wait to see what happens next, you have me SUPER worried!

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home

Wow, that was incredible!  I was not expecting him to ask like that, but for them, it was perfect :)  I love Edward's new tattoo, I think sometimes that is a really sexy tattoo :D  I really cannot wait to see how the trial goes, now with this new information :)

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady

Gah, that was SO AMAZING :)  I really loved it so much!  Cannot wait to see what/who might come from that little romp ;)  Cannot wait to see how everything works out :)

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

AMAZING job, once again :)  So happy the wedding is FINALLY here :)  I cannot wait to see about Bella's dress and their rings.  Until Edward mentioned the rings, I thought Edward would also tattoo the date or Bella's name on his left ring finger.  I cannot wait to see if he will (like Bella wants to) put their wedding date under the "B" tattoo.  Hope they can start a family ASAP :)

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Woman

OH MY GOSH!  That was AN AMAZING chapter!  Heck, that is an understatement, but I don't know any other words that would describe how amazing it was ;)  I am SO sorry about the fire!  I was wondering why it was taking a while, hopefully you can write the next one soon :)  I thought their wedding was perfect for them, did Bella get a wedding ring too, or is her engagement ring going to be both engagement/wedding ring?  Just curious ;) I cannot wait to see what happens in the next one!



Author's Response: Thank you! And yes Bella got a ring too! Thank you for pointing that out. I'll have to make sure and describe it in the next chapter.

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Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

OH MY GOSH! NO!!  Please don't let Bella lose the baby or get mad at Edward!  I really loved this so much!  Great job!  I found a picture that may work for Edward when the baby is older...http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lop871tcKe1ql9xwko1_500.jpg.  I am so happy for Bella and Edward!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda

Gah, that was amazing!  Please don't make them wait 5 months to find out it isn't Edward's baby! Please?!?!?!  I really loved this chapter, so happy for Bella and Edward :)  I love the new tattoo...but it might not be best to get it while she is pregnant.  Anyway, cannot wait for more :)

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
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Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This chapter was amazing!  I really hope they find Kate and Emma ASAP and that Kate gets punished severely!

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Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was incredible!  I am so happy Emma is slowly but surely getting closer to Bella.  I wonder what will happen next?

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Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, that was amazing!  I am hoping Bella will get some help for her depression.  I am proud of Edward for not having sex with Bella while she was drunk (although I really don't think that was ever a doubt in my mind that he would do such a thing).  I am glad Masen is finally home and seems to be doing well.  I am so happy that they are engaged :)  YAY!

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Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123450
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
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Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master

This story is absolutely amazing and I cannot wait to see where you take us next :)

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Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Six Months

That was incredible :)  I loved it all :)  I really like the banner or picture you have for this story!

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Second Year - First Six Months

This chapter was amazing (as always).  I am so happy Emily is getting closer to Bella and is getting help from Rose.  I really hope Edward finds a way to get full custody ASAP!  Wonder what will happen next for these two? 

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Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Break - The Second Year

Wow, that was incredible!  I am so happy Edward's divorce is almost final, I can almost taste it :)  I loved every bit of this chapter, thank you so much for updating so quickly (after your trip that is)!!  I loved that Edward is getting a tattoo too, but will he have to change it when they get married?  Really incredible job, love it!  Cannot wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months

That was amazing, I am so happy that Bella and Edward are working towards going public.  I am also happy the children accept Bella as Edward's girlfriend.  I wonder what will happen within the next 6 months besides Bella's graduation.  I wonder how Edward will reward her for that ;)  Also, wonder what Bella did for that time between the opera and Thanksgiving without Big Eddie?



Author's Response:

Bella was able to keep her other toys - she just had to work harder for the big 'O'.

Thanks for reading.

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year

Wow, that was incredible, as always :)  I must admit, that my family is just like the Cullen family on Christmas morning, we wake up before dawn to open presents (mostly because my brother and I can never fall asleep on Christmas Eve.).  Sadly, in years past we have had to open them at around 9:30 because my mom works Christmas Eve nights and usually isn't home until then.  Anyway, WOW, Mrs. Cope?  I am very nervous now about Bella and Edward.  Also, I wonder who was in Bella's apartment?  Wonder how the play party will go?  hehe, CANNOT wait for that :)  Loved it so much!  



Author's Response:

All good questions - thanks for reading!

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Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Loved that Bella is so strong-willed, when she wants to be (or should I say is allowed to be by Edward).  I really did not like reading about Esme's involvement with Tanya but sometimes that happens.  I hope that she can learn that it hurt Edward and still hurts him that she would do such a thing and they can work on making their relationship better now.  I knew the witch-hunt would come eventually, but I am glad that it made Edward realize that he can move on from FCA and go on to better things/places in life.  Cannot wait to see what happens next.  Also hope they find the stalker soon!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it and thanks for reading!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Wow, that was incredible!  I am so happy for Bella and Edward :)  That was a WONDERFUL surprise!  Their rings are gorgeous.  I am happy Edward wants to have a baby with Bella, hopefully she will agree to this.  I wonder how Esme found out about the marriage?  Wonder what will happen now?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Esme didn't know about the wedding until she saw the sign, she is in Seattle to try to make amends.  She is still trying to control the situation and not admit she was wrong.

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Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

That was incredible, even though I say it every time I review, I seriously mean it.  I am so proud of Edward and Bella, they are so strong.  I also so happy James was finally caught, even if I wanted to help join in the beating.  I love that they are moving to Chicago.  Also, loved reading about the Tanya/Bella smackdown, once again, wish I could have helped there.  I cannot wait to see what else happens next with these two.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

Wow, that was amazing!  I loved it all so much.  The house is GORGEOUS!  I wonder what is up with Bella?  I mean, was the passing out after orgasm merely what the French call "La Petite Mort" or what exactly?  I hope that she can go to the doctor and find out soon.  Hopefully this won't hinder their ability to conceive.  I love everything about this chapter, keep up the amazing work :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!!

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

Wow, that was amazing!  I am so happy they found out what was wrong with Bella, that had me worried!  I am also shocked about what happened at the meeting with Esme, but I am so happy she is at least making an effort to be civil with everyone.  I really do not like that Tanya is back :(  Hopefully she won't cause too many problems.  Also, loved all the gifts for Christmas, it was all perfect :)  I really love this story and you constantly surprise me in a good way, I cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

thanks for reading - Beth

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I am so happy they are starting to make a family of their own :)  I am now really curious as to what the threatening envelope for Esme was.  I am also hoping that no one notices the tattoo too much or if they do, that Edward can explain it!  Amazing job, once again.  I really loved it all so much, you are so awesome!  I am also happy Bella is now officially Emily, Ethan and Evan's mom, she is so great with them!  Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading.  I don't know how many people read the A/N at the bottom (I am guilty of not doing it all the time) but I think the next chapter posted will be an outtake in Esme's POV explaining the envelope and the phone call she made. - Beth