Reviews by RAH07890
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514604
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Oh no!  Not good!  I hope that they catch James soon!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

OMG!!!  I hope they find Bella and Victoria soon and safe!   I cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I am SO happy that they found Bella and Victoria!  Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

That was incredible!  I kinda liked reading about James' torture!  I wonder what is up with Bella, Victoria and Edward?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

That was a great ending :)  I am so happy!



Author's Response:

Why thank you... I am so glad you enjoyed it..

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

TMS

This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

FanMadeBanner

This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Amazing job!  Love it, once again!  I think it is Tanya, but cannot be sure ;) 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Awesome job!  I was not expecting that at all!  Glad that Edward is not letting anything happen between him and Angela! :)  Cannot wait to see what Edward decides about anal!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch20 - Repercussions

Amazing job!  I am so sad that Edward is sick but should be getting better soon :)  I think that Phil should get about 20 years?  Why not?  Wonder what will happen next?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Ch21 - Closure

Amazing job, once again!  Cannot wait for Halloween :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ch 23 - Surprises

Aww...that was the perfect ending :) I cannot wait to see what happens in the next story :)  I will try my hardest to be patient while waiting for you to finish the entire story (so you can start posting it).  I am happy Alice and Jasper finally told Esme the truth.  Wonderful job, once again!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116427
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is great so far!  I really cannot wait to see what happens next!  I hope Bella and Edward continue their realtionship :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I LOVE a little dominate, possessive Edward!  He is so hot!  Love it!  I am so glad you updated :)  makes me so happy!  Cannot wait for more of him ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Amazing :)  Cannot wait to read more about sexy hot posessive Edward :)  LOVE IT! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, that was great!  Love Edward's possesiveness so much!  I wonder how he is going to manage going to the dance?  Also, what does he want to talk to Emmett about?  REALLY cannot wait for their date that weekend!  :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I loved this chapter!  The sexual tension is so tight!  As much as I want an Emmett POV, I REALLY want Edward and Bella to get to Seattle already!  hehe, I am a naughty girl who likes a possesive HOT Edward and cannot wait for him to show that side in the bedroom ;)  Great job!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think I need a shower too...a shower with Edward, hehe.  Bella is SO lucky to have Edward all to herself for 2 days ;)  LUCKY DUCK!  Cannot wait for more of this weekend :)



Author's Response:

Yes a shower with Edward would be devine indeed!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, that was amazing :)  I loved that Bella got to see how Edward reacts to her.  I really hope Edward can figure out a way to go to the dance with Bella.  Once again, amazing/great job :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OH NO!  Poor Bella!  I wonder what happened?  I hope she can forgive Edward and realize that he is looking out for her.  I really hope Bella is ok.  I will be patient until the 21st (or afterwards).  Thank you for updating before you left, that is fricking sweet! :) 



Author's Response:

Possessive Edward will be kicked up a notch...so buckle up :)  I keep being ask by some people, are you going to make him mushy?  The answer, Hell NO! LOL.  I love Possessive Edward and so does Bella.  Your very welcome in terms of updating.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved it! I am very glad Emmett found out.  But, I really want Seth punished for what he did!  Illegal much?  Cannot wait for Bella to get better :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved it! I am very glad Emmett found out.  But, I really want Seth punished for what he did!  Illegal much?  Cannot wait for Bella to get better :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am so sorry that people are complaining about updates taking a long time and that they "aren't long enough".  I am perfectly happy with the weekly schedule and think they are perfect in length.  Anyway, on to the actual review ;) 

Amazing job once again! :)  I am so happy Bella is ok.  I am very ANGRY at Seth right now, but I guess that is to be expected.  Really cannot wait to see how he is punished.  I am glad that Edward can be one of the people who brings Bella to school and to work.  I wonder how that will go ;) hehe. 

 

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aww...that was so sweet at the end, well, as sweet as Edward can get.  I am shocked that Renee hit Bella but cannot wait to see what happens next.  I am glad Bella forgave Seth but I know that Emmett, Edward and the others won't be as forgiving at first.  Amazing job!  Cannot wait for next week.  I really want "something else" to happen next ;) hehe.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Keep looking for update notifications, you never know when it'll show in your inbox. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was great!  I am so glad that Bella talked with both Edward and her parents.  I wonder what will happen to Seth?  Amazing job!  Cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow, that was incredible!  Well worth the wait :)  I really cannot wait to see how they find out who it was.  I also hope that whoever it was is punished someway, somehow!   Really loved it :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

YAY!  That was a great update! Cannot wait to see what happens next and what Bella gets Edward for Christmas ;)  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OH SNAP!  I hope Damon won't cause many problems with these two.  I wonder when Edward was going to tell Bella about Tanya?  I have a fic recommendation (as a reader), "Like a Moth to a Flame" by CitizenCullen25, it is amazing, I wouldn't call it "dark" but Edward is a Mob boss and very much a Caveward ;)



Author's Response:

Aww yes, they don't need any extra problems now do they ;) And Tanya just adds a whole lot of glorious angst, doesn't she?! As for your fic reccomendation, Like a moth to a flame,  Love it!!! It's just enough caveward to make you drool. Her last chapter on fan fiction was dark and twisted, i loved it!!! Mobward, rocks!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

NO!!  This cannot be happening!  PLEASE don't let Tanya be pregnant or Bella leave Edward!  I really hope Bella doesn't accept whoever is offering her a ride!  Amazing job!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I want the next chapter to be the visit, I am in total suspense waiting to see what happens next!  Anyway, great chapter!  I am so happy they talked again and are taking it one step at a time.  Damon just irks me though, I wish he were out of the picture!  



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That was incredible!  I loved how Bella found birth control for Tanya! Also, that she hit her!  Amazing!  The next chapter has me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What?  That was incredible!  I am so happy Tanya has something and did NOT give it to Edward.  I am also happy about Bella and Edward's pregnancy, although unplanned.  Amazing job, once again!  Thanks for the quick update :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was amazing!  I really hope Bella keeps the baby :)  I will be patient in waiting for the next chapter, don't worry ;)  Amazing job, once again! :)  I shall be following you on twitter now, yay!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment as well as understanding if there is a wait :) I'll see you on twitter.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh my gosh!  I knew Renee and Charlie would react this way but my goodness!  I really hope Bella and the baby are ok!  Amazing job, once again!  My favourite quote is "Geez little sister, are you going to be crabby like this for your whole pregnancy?"  Just because I think that Emmett hasn't seen the full "wrath" of Bella yet or her PMS moments where I am sure she was crabby!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh wow, I wonder what Bella will say to that?  Amazing job, once again!  I am glad Bella is keeping the baby and is staying with Emmett and Edward.  Staying with them is MUCH better than staying with Renee, who is a selfish brat (even though she is a mother, she doesn't act like it now).  Cannot wait for more.  So glad to hear that your dad is doing better, will continue to pray for him :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

That was incredible!  I love it so much!  I cannot believe Charlie and Renee!  I mean I am a Christian too, but just because someone gets pregnant out of wedlock does NOT mean they should marry their baby's father.  Anyway, amazing job, once again!  I hope your hubby relaxes so you can write more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OMG!  Damon is such a BASTARD!  Can I please kick him in the nuts with my heels?  Please?  Amazing job!  I cannot wait to see what Bella and Edward are having, a boy or girl :)  Amazing, simply amazing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I am so happy Edward believed Bella and defended both her and him.  I wonder what they will do to Damon?  Also, who leaked the info?  Loved it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OH MY GOSH!!! I really missed this story.  It's one of my first "Olderward" stories.  I really hope this drama doesn't stay forever.  Bella doesn't need that in her life.



Author's Response:

Glad you were still around to enjoy it's new chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64094
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

That was amazing!  So happy to see Aro get his "just desserts".  I also loved Edward's house in Chicago.  Absolutely beautiful :)  Cannot wait for more (but will be patient in doing so). 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

Oh poor Bella! I love the names for Baby Cullen!  Cannot wait for Edward to come home and for this drama to be solved :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front

Wow, that was awesome!  I am glad that they are in jail!  :)  I really cannot wait for Edward to get home!  I know Bella cannot wait either and Edward too :)  Amazing job! :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

Oh my gosh Baby G is coming!  I really hope he or she is healthy.  I cannot wait for Edward to get home soon to meet him or her.  Amazing job!  Cannot wait to meet Baby G! :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

I am so happy Gabriella Cherie is here! And she looks like her Daddy, aww! :)  I do remember my mom telling me that my grandmother was so drugged during my uncle's birth and even her birth for that matter (even though she was born in the 50's) that she could barely remember any of it.  Sad :(  Anyway, I am sorry your children are sick/were sick, but am glad they are getting better :)  Amazing job!  Cannot wait for Edward to get the letter and get home :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Back Home

I really hope that Edward is ok and doesn't have to stay away for longer than necessary.  Amazing job!  So happy Baby G/Gabriella is home :D  Cannot wait for more :)  Thank you for updating early :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

Oh wow, I am glad Edward is ok!  Cannot wait to see what happens next!  Amazing job :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

OMG!  I really hope Edward is safe and comes back to Bella and Cherie soon!  Please?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

I am so happy Edward is coming home!  YAY!  And he got to talk with Cherie :)  Cannot wait to see what happens when these two finally meet :)  Great job!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

I am so sad Edward didn't make it to Cherie's party but am so happy that he is on his way home :)  Amazing job!  Will be patient in waiting for the next one :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

I am so happy he is home!  Love that he compared Cherie to a dog, it was just so funny.  So happy he got her a gift too, adorable :)  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

Aww...that was so sweet!  Thank you so much!  I cannot believe only one more real chapter and the epilouge are left!  Amazing job!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

That was a great way to end the story (before the epi)!  I really wonder how many kids they will actually have?  Will check out the teaser soon!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

That was amazing!  Great ending for all of them.  I like how all of the children's names start with a G (even if Cherie goes by her middle name).  Really cannot wait to start reading about Nascar Driver Bella! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85741
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This story is absolutely amazing!  I am so happy about their Miracle baby :)  so awesome.  I cannot wait to see what they have as well as what Alice and Jasper have.  So exciting :) 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That was AWESOME!  I loved it all.  Bella's dress is amazing and I am so happy they are building their own home :)  Cannot wait for the wedding :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That was a wonderful wedding!  What is the name of the song that Bella and Edward danced to?  Just wondering.  I am so happy that Baby Cullen moved for the first time on their wedding day, so cute :)  Amazing job!



Author's Response:

I forgot to mention it in the A/N.  The song is "All of You" by Julio Iglesias and Diana Ross.  Two gorgeous voices blending in a magical way.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Awww...that was awesome :)  So happy that Alyssa Jane is here :) Cannot wait to meet Bella and Edward's baby too!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

That was amazing. I am so happy the baby finally kicked :)  I wonder what special delivery it is?  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

That was amazing, I didn't read the stillbirth scene but that is because I don't handle medical things very well (the irony is my mom is a Respiratory Therapist and my dad wanted to be a nurse).  I am so happy Bella and Edward's baby is coming soon :)  Wonder what else will happen?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Awww...that was so cute!  I am happy they had a boy!  When he wanted to arrive, he wanted to come on his own terms, which was like "When I come out, you won't have to wait very long to see me!"  Amazing job!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That was AMAZING!  I love Daddyward :)  Really hope Bella and Edward can give Daniel another sibling soon (maybe they can get pregnant on their first anniversary?).  Cannot believe only one more chapter remains and it is the final chapter (I forget how to spell it ;), hehe).  Cannot wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Aww...that was amazing!  I am so happy Daniel is going to have a sibling :)  Cannot wait to see if it is a sister or brother!  Really sad this story is coming to an end, but it had to end sometime right?  Loved it :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

That was amazing!  I loved reading about their family as they grew older :)  Perfect!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That view is gorgeous!  Loved their first date and cannot wait for more of them :)  Amazing job!  :D 



Author's Response:

I know! I googled Kerry Park and that was the first picture I saw. I went slackjawed! That is the perfect view for a first date, me thinks ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great so far!!  Cannot wait for more :)  Do you have pictures of Edward's tattoos or are we supposed to imagine them?



Author's Response:

I do have pictures of the tattoos and I'm working on putting them in a banner ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh wow, that was great!  I wonder how they are going to meet again? 



Author's Response:

Dont worry. I have it all in my head waiting to come out ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice!  I like that Carlisle has tattoos too :)  Loved the pics of the tats on your profile!  Cannot wait to see where Bella and Edward meet again :)



Author's Response:

Dont worry... it wont be long now ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awww...I am happy with the way they met!  Although colic is horrible, I hope that Bella gets some sleep :)  Great job!  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

=D Yeah colic is all kinds of horrible but thankfully she has loyal friends ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great job :)  loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

YAY!  They are going out!  I cannot wait for that!  I am so excited :)



Author's Response:

I dont think you'll have to wait long =D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That is an adorable swim suit for Lily!  I loved it!  Also loved that Rose called Bella's one piece a "cellibacy suit", haha!  Amazing job and cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Well, a Nike onepiece doesnt exactly scream sex :P And I know! I saw the little bathing suit and went Awwwww, if only my daughter was still a baby :P

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This was amazing, great!  I am glad that Edward had "the talk" with Emmett!  I understand about taking some time off for the story, take all the time you need (as long as it isn't too long like say 2 months or something) Hope you can get everything under control soon. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Amazing job!  I cannot wait to see what Bella gets Wendy and Car!  Cannot wait for more :) 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aww...that was sweet for Edward to make her feel better about the haunted house.  I cannot wait to see what else happens on the date :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Baha, that was so funny about the three sisters and the haunted house.  Reminds me of one of my best friends, we (my other best friends and I) convinced her to go on Space Mountain at Disney World (even though she was so scared) and during the whole ride she screamed, "I HATE YOU GUYS!!"  It was so funny!  Anyway, loved that Edward and Bella are growing closer but I hope Edward can realize he can be in a relationship with Bella :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That was amazing!  I am so happy they said "I love you"!  Also happy Wendy finally got her fairy! :)  Cannot wait to see what happens on Halloween with these two ;)  Until next time :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was amazing!  Maybe the two of them can have a Halloween party of their own (or go to one on their own?).  I wonder what will be next?  Cannot wait for it :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am so glad Bella and Edward are becoming the parents that their children don't have (Bella is Mommy to Car and Wendy, Edward is Daddy to Lily).  Amazing job!  I wonder when Edward will tell Bella about finances?  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

HOLY CRAP!  I had no idea he was THAT rich!  I wonder what Bella will do?  Amazing job!  Take your time on updating next, enjoy your little girl's birthday :)

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Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yay!  Cannot believe that they are moving in together but am so happy that they are :)  I also cannot believe that it is coming to an end :(  so sad!  Anyway, amazing job!  I loved it all!  :) 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

That was great :)  I am so happy Bella has the inspiration to write again, maybe that can be her career?  Wonder what will happen next?  Loved the picture of the family, so cute (even though I didn't really "see" it, I used my imagination).

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

That was amazing :)  Loved the ending, perfect.  Cannot wait to read your new story too :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

That would be great!  I loved Etched so much and to see more of it would be great :)



Author's Response:

Wow, second vote to a yes :P Thanks for the opinion, honey

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373176
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

Great story so far!  Hope that Edward won't cheat on Bella!  Cannot wait for their marriage :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it.  I really think you'll like where it's gone so far.  I'm quite a few chapters ahead and plan to post twice a week, so with any hope I can keep up the consistent postings!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

I know it is hard Bella, but life with Edward isn't all that bad, it will get better :)  Cannot wait to read more ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

Yay, marriage is coming up!  Cannot wait :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Aww...that was AMAZING!!  I am so happy they finally found each other after all this time :)  Also cannot wait for the wedding night ;) hehe

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

Wow, that was def. NC-17 and I LOVED every bit of it! :)  I will be patient in waiting for the next chapter as I know RL can be annoying.  Wonder what will happen next?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

That was amazing!  I am sad that they had to cut the honeymoon short but in the end it is ok.  Like Edward said, they have the rest of their lives for that :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

Amazing job!  I completely understand about having to cut back on updates.  I cannot wait for next week's update :)  I am so happy for Bella and Edward :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

Wow, that was a great honeymoon chapter :)  Loved it all!  Cannot believe that the next chapter Bella will be introduced to England :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

That was awesome!  I really cannot wait for Edward to come back :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

Wow, that was awesome :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

That was awesome!  Tanya should go to the dungeon no matter what :)  Really cannot wait for Edward to get home :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

Hmm....I think Bella might be pregnant ;)  YAY!  Cannot wait to see what else happens!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

I KNEW IT! :)  YAY!  Really happy Edward isn't going to cheat on Bella with Tanya.  She needs to be put away!  I really cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

That was incredible!  I am so happy Tanya is banished ;)  Really cannot wait to see how everyone else reacts to the news :)  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

That was amazing!  I wonder what will happen when they find Emmett?  Also, so happy to see Bella and Edward stronger than ever :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

That was amazing!  I really cannot wait to see what the Cullen women have planned ;)  Also hope they catch Tanya ASAP!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

Awww...that was a great early Christmas present for Bella :)  Cannot wait to see what happens next!  Wonder where Tanya is?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

That was awesome!  I am so glad you updated :)  Also, wonder who really killed Newton?  Tanya will still be in prison right?  I mean she might not be executed but will remain imprisoned, right?  Cannot wait for more! Also, maybe the reason Bella is showing earlier than most, is because she is having twins...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

That was amazing!  I am so glad James is getting punished and so is Tanya!  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)