I see that you told another commenter that you plan to finish this when you have a computer again. I read the entire story today and I look forward to reading more. I really hope that Bella tells Edward how she doesn't really feel she will ever belong. I don't know how I really feel about Rosalie in this relationship. I understand that she is dealing with her past but I don't believe she is done with making Bella feel that she doesn't belong. I'm a little squicked out by how easily Edward is able to switch between his partners but I guess that's why I am not right for a poly relationship! :-) 

Thanks for writing!

I'm so confused. They seem to have gotten back together without acknowledging what happened. Why did she leave in the first place?!? Something's not right here...

Ah! Her name! 

Loving this. 

Where are Esme and Carlisle? Who is finally going to give Edward the wake up call and show him how he is treating her? Bella is right - he is treating her like a doll, a plaything that he can take out and enjoy when he feels like it. What an ass. He doesn't deserve her. 

And I'm sure that he still doesn't understand what he has done. Watch him chalk her reactions up to her age or lack of experience. It's time Edward learns that you get out of a relationship what you put into it. I'm very angry with him. Very. 

Looking forward to the next update!

At this point I honestly couldn't care less what happens to Maggie. She didn't force Edward to treat Bella like a toy. What an ass. I hope Bella tears him a new one. 

My dream is that the rest of this story is written and will be posted so that I can read it all at once. Sigh. 

I wish they would start actually talking to each other. There have been too many people meddling in their relationship. At least you have promised an HEA. 

Thanks for writing! Looking forward to your next update!

I know that Edward was hurt, but to still hold Bella accountable for words said in anger and exhaustion isn't quite fair. Their communication was awful all along. I can empathize with Bella's inability to tell Edward about her love when they were young but what kept him quiet? Telling your wife that you love fucking her when you never said you love her will obviously lead her to feel that there aren't any romantic feelings on Edward's side. I also hope that Bella holds him more accountable for never sharing his dreams about his music with her before sending the demo out. It's not a hard conversation to tell her about the opportunity before going after it. But I guess leaving her with the sick kids is easier. She's taking too much of the blame. What I really want to see is Seth kick some sense into Edward now when he will actually listen. Frustrated sigh. 

I am very invested in this and love how you write. Thanks for the update!

I didn't know that this story was exactly what I was looking for! I love it and can't wait for more!!!

Oh, I hope you are going to continue this story! I was very sad to not see a next button at the end of this chapter. I'm very happy that I stumbled upon you today! Thanks for writing!!!

Oh how I hope they meet soon. Thanks for th story!

More please? I do wonder about Tanya using Bella's whole name on the card. I would worry about her finding Bella...

At least we know Sir is watching Bella and would hopefully be able to protect her from Tanya. 

Thanks for writing!

I was able to find the completed one-shot and read it. I'm enjoying this expanded version so much more! 

I really do love this story. I hope Edward realizes soon that she is his mate. I look forward to the revealing of his identity. Can't wait for the next update! 

Thanks again for writing!

I guess I favorite the stories I like rather than the author. Is that what you were asking? 

Love the story. Look forward to when she gets to see that it is Edward. 

Good answer! Hopefully Edward has come to terms with his feelings and won't mess this up!

I am so curious that it's killing me! I think someone died. Looking forward to more!

Kick ass Bella! Kick so much ass!

Ooh! If you're posting this here does it mean you are going to finish it? I've had it on alert on ff.net for a while and I'm excited to see it here! Yay! This Edward makes me hot and I can't wait for more!!!

I read this yesterday on ff.net and now again here. I wonder now about the bag. An easy answer is to say there is a toy inside, but I wonder if Mase didn't also leave a note or his number or something as well. At the very least, Bella is a smart chicky and can easily look up the contact info for the company and get in touch with him that way. I like the idea of Bella pushing her limits a little before she sees him next. It bothers her how often people are telling her that she's innocent, so maybe she needs to pull a Sandi from Grease and knock him on his ass when he comes back next year. Can't wait for more!

I still think these two are so freakig adorable together! I was so excited to see that Mase was back that I squealed a bit before reading. As for where the characters are taking you, I look forward to the ride. As long as it isn't too angsty. I want these two to be happy little deviants! 

Ooh! Ooh! Is he in love with Dmitri? 

I miss Edward. Looking forward to this story moving along! Thanks for the update!!!

Good for Bella, refusing to play along with the others. And thank God she can defend herself against Mike's advances. Let's hope Edward can chill out enough to believe she has been left behind. Liking the story so far! 

I hope she tells him before he gets too far. She deserves to be pampered...

Ashamed. 

I was wondering if Jasper would point out that no one had ever told Angela to back off of Bella. Quite unfair!

What I would really like to see is Edward talk with Rose about all of this. He sure needs a smack upside the head. Maybe it will knock some sense into him. I volunteer. 

Time to get your head out of your ass! What a jerk. He doesn't even deserve her and we all know how forgiving Bella is! Stupid stupid man!!!

Yay! Communication for the win!

Love her! 

I just found you and this wonderful story this morning, reading all of it in one sitting. I crave more! 

I look forward to the moment when Peter realizes what he has thrown away. 

You dumbass. Don't laugh at her. This guy has got issues! With a capital I! 

Too funny! I bet I know what this "parasite" is! :-)