Reviews by shannen
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: shannen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

I looooooooove your story!!!...Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease write a new chapter soon. The waiting is kiling me.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. LOL =) We're happy that you like.

RL is kickin' our asses big time but we'll do our very best to post soon.

Thank you for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.

~Jells

Reviewer: shannen Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

oh really  anoying...it's not like U post new chapters very often and then put this crap:(. I did get it is April fools' but not nice are all.



Author's Response:

We so needed the laugh while writing this. RL can be stressful. Real chapter will be up in a bit. We weren't going to leave you guys with nothing at all. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: shannen Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Proposal

Thank U so much.  I really have a good time following your story:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the support! :)

xoxo

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: shannen Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Adaptation

I really like it but is too short....

 



Author's Response:

There's not much I can do about the length of the chapters as I'm just the translator :0)

Reviewer: shannen Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

love it!!!!!!!!!!! please more....

Summary:

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All Bella is looking for is a quick drink after a bad day at work, but when she runs into Edward Cullen--her high school crush--she decides to play a game with him. If she can keep herself from falling for him, she can walk away and leave him wanting more.  But Bella might find that losing the game is the best thing that ever happened to her...

Rated for lemons/language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6739 Read Count: 2234
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2011 Updated: 13 Nov 2011
Reviewer: shannen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Drinks After Work

I really enjoyed.....really good!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am so glad to hear you enjoyed it.  I had a great time writing it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: shannen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise

i'm loving it...please keep it coming :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.

We know that the more the story develops the more we all want Edward to just post haste stop going to Aro’s club.  I wanted to give a clear run down on the girls that he sees there, so that we can keep things straight.  Edwards’s girls at Aro’s:  Sally: sex addict 27 tall she about 5ft 8 red shoulder length hair thin and tall. Likes roll play.  Irina: 6ft tall slender and Blond Hair to her cheek bones like rough sex and anal sex. 29 years old.  Carmen: 5ft 6 long black hair enjoys being controlled by men, average weight and size. Likes BDSM and being restrained.  Maria:  5’5 180 pounds curvy and thicker than other girls.  Sandy blonde hair, cute features and very large breasts.  More relaxed and sensual.  Edward only sees her maybe once a month, sometimes longer than that between visits.  He controls her too, but it is all about sensual and erotic pleasure with her than it is about rough and controlling hard core sex.  Some question if he chose Maria the last time and more often, because she reminded him of Bella.  Truth be known Carmen would be the one who resembles Bella the most.  He is not with Maria to pretend she is Bella, but because from Maria he gets the softer more sensual erotic side of sex.  Edward had made the decision a long time ago to make himself this untouchable person, and when it came to the girls most of the time he went with the hard core domination side of the act.  I can’t say that Edward’s visits to the club will cease right away, but I do assure you that soon our professor with the extremely dark view of all women will soon realize that he just can’t do it anymore.  He may be smart and he may be a lot of things, but sometimes when you shut yourself off, it’s hard to wake up those pieces of yourself.  I hope that this helps a little in the explanation of Edward and his tainted views.  I will tell you this, I just got done with my part on a chapter where he comes clean with Bella about what he did when he spent time at the club, and telling the truth can be quite cleansing.

Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

 

 

Chapter 9 Teaser… Subject to changes during BETA process.

“Mr. Masen, I don’t mean to be rude, but where are we going? Do you need me to work at your house today?”

I shake my head as we keep walking.  “No Isabella, as you know all my employees have to have a medical check.  I am accompanying you to yours.”  We stop walking when we arrive at the bus stop. I look at Isabella who is looking upset.

“Mr. Masen, I didn’t bring any money with me.  I can’t afford to have a medical check, I am sorry.” I look down at her and frown.  There is something in her expression that tells me that it’s not just money she is worried about. I look up seeing the bus coming to a stop beside us.

We both get on, but this time I lead her to the seats at the back.  I motion for her to sit and I sit next to her, leaving a little room between us. “Isabella, I set up a medical plan for each of my staff including you. Your medical is a part of that so you don’t have to worry about payment, it has already been covered.” I am not really lying, more like stretching the truth a little. “I know that you don’t like people too close to you, for that reason I am taking you to see a dear friend of mine.” I smile thinking about how to explain Carlisle. “His name is Carlisle, and he is much more than a friend to me.  I guess you could say that he is like a father figure. He is a very compassionate man, and he has an amazing ability to relax people. He will not hurt you. I would never allow him, or anyone to hurt you.” I didn’t really mean for what I said at the end to come out, but as I looked into her eyes it just came out.  She looked me right in the eye for much longer then she usually does.  I watch her reaction and notice her bite her lip, as she nods her head.

“Will you stay with me, the whole time?”  She asks, as her eyes fall to the floor. 

Without meaning to, my hand moves to the underside of her chin.  I feel small sparks on the tips of my fingers as I keep my fingers against her skin.  These are those same comforting sparks I felt the night of my panic attack, I dismiss it.  I slowly tilt her chin up, making her look at me again. “I will stay with you, if that is what you want.  This is your choice Isabella.  I know that I have been ordering you around a lot, but this time it is your complete choice and decision.  If you wish for me to stay in the room with you, then I will.  If you want me to leave, then I will.  This is all about you, and what you want.” 

She keeps looking at me and I could feel her shaking a little, but she never pulls her face away from my hand.  “I would like you to stay in the room please, Mr. Masen.” I nod my head letting her face go.

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

mhnf


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131962
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: shannen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thank U , I really enjoyed your story :)