Reviews by liekkio
The Woman In Black by Anonymous201406 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

She was just 21 when they met, all it took was one night and he was totally hers...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2549 Read Count: 3202
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 23 Jun 2014
Reviewer: liekkio Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a wonderful story, but I'm not sure if it's a mistake or meant to be, Isabella called Edward Mr. Cullen. Here: "So Mr. Cullen you've been hiding in your home all of this time?" and here: "Okay then Mr. Cullen, take me to dance," she said her hand extended.

And it's not "cummed" but came, if I'm right. English is not my mother language but I read stories in English for about 4 years now. I don't want to criticize, but help. I hope that's ok

I can't contact you, so it's the only way I know.

Great story again and really nice pics ;)