Reviews by marchellow
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So does he kiss her? I need to know now!!!! Good chapter

Summary:

As if starting a new school away from her friends and family isn't enough, she has nuisance and captain of the football team Edward Cullen interested in her. “Hello, I’m Edward Cullen.” She took my hand, shaking it, “I’m not interested.” Bella has better balance, and respect for herself.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 154282 Read Count: 9785
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2010 Updated: 08 Mar 2010
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Perfect catch

I just finished reading this story and I must say that you are fantastic, wonderful, awesome writier! I think this would make a great book and you should consider publishing it. You made me laugh, cry and cry some more. The ending was not what I expected and I think thats why I love this story so much. I have read many many many stories on fanfiction & twcs and none have ever had a happy ending like this one. Although it may seem bittersweet that they both died I think that you showed us the readers how much love they shared and how they remained true to their relationship.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Cant wait to read more...please post soon, like tomorrow. lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I have read many stories and none have ever surprised me as much as this story. I never would have imagined that Edward and Esme would be brother and sister. Call me a big baby but this chapter had me holding back tears. I love this story and I hope you continue to have the inspiration to keep writing and surprising me.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Ooooo....Bella is in trouble!!!! I loved the chapter because it was a bit more care free and because it detailed more of what Bella and Jack's lives were like while he was with her. Not that I want Victoria to come in anytime soon but will she be coming in at any point?



Author's Response:

{Yes, Victoria will be making an appearance at some point in the future.}

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

First off I Would Like to Say That i Really Enjoy This story. About The angst, i Think it is done excessly Sometimes. i Don't Think i Could've read this story if You Would've had 4 Chapters of it. well not til it was finished. i Find That reading stories that has tons.of angst often leave me feeling depressed and tend not to read them until its completed. 

Good story and writing...cant Wait For more!

Summary:

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When you met the right one nothing else matters but what if he is the undead and you are already in a relationship>


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35801 Read Count: 5629
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- How Can You Love Me?

I Love This story!! Please Update Soon.Its definately a plot I've Never Read Before.

 



Author's Response:

Working on next chapter now and it is a unique plot.  Based on my rp character and her newest guy.  

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- How Can You Love Me?

I like Your May December Divide story. But it Seems.to be gone. i Hope You didnt Delete it.

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great Chapter But i Want More please!!

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

All I'm Asking 3 Sharon

Bella doesn’t become comatose when Edward leaves. Instead she became angry. She went on to become a world renown researcher, debunking supernatural legends, using her insider information. She even writes a book, all the while hiding from the Volturi. Imagine her surprise when she meets Damon and her entire life is turned upside down. First in a series. Bella/Damon

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Categories: Crossover, Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals
Characters: Bella/Damon
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109754 Read Count: 65778
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2013 Updated: 21 May 2014
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Gravity Pulls

i Have Never read a crossover story written so well!!! i Can't Wait For More!

Summary:

Blood Demons

Edward “Viper” Masen is the president of the Blood Demons MC taking over after a rival club murdered his father. His life is busy with running the legal and illegal businesses of the club. No time or heart for a steady Old Lady, instead he took what the Blood Succubus offered. No one would take the place of his Little Isa in his heart. The girl who he fell in love with one summer, sharing all their firsts with each other until she disappeared without a trace. 

 

Bella “Isa” Stewart, daughter of Charlie “Crusher” Swan and Renee Stewart is in exile in New York when her father catches her with a boy. Not telling why she wasn’t allowed to be with him, she is commanded to stay as far away from Phoenix as possible. Over the years her father comes to visit a few times, bringing his VP Demetri, who looks at her like she is something to eat. 

What happens when she receives a phone call from someone in her father’s club to tell her that her father is dead and Demetri did it? Then Demetri shows up at her apartment building with several other members. Hopping on her bike she heads cross country to hide out with a high school friend. Arriving in Phoenix, memories of the boy she fell in love swirl in her mind. Pulling into the parking lot to meet her friend, she comes face to face with a sexy man, covered in tattoos and wearing a leather motorcycle club vest with a president patch. He is a stranger, but there was something about his eyes. 

Can Viper protect her from Demetri and take revenge for him killing her father? How will he react when he finds out who she really is? Will they be able to wipe years away and pick back up where they left off?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31201 Read Count: 20912
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2021 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I want more!! I have always enjoyed reading your stories and was wondering if you had a schedule on your updates for this story.

Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Wonder how long it will take them to have sex.

Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Wonder how long it will take them to have sex.

Reviewer: marchellow Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Wonder how long it will take them to have sex.