Reviews by ariawolf80
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366741
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: ariawolf80 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 64: The Name Game

Babies! Awesome :)

Wonder how long the Tony nickname will stick. I'm bettin' that not long after some calls out for Toby and Tony comes running, or neither come and claim that they thought the other was being called, Tony will be out and Anthony will be in. (I'm of the firm belief that parents should try calling a potential baby name out before settling on one, see how it rolls of the tongue since they'll spend more time chasing after their kids and calling for them than anything once their mobile). And I think of Toby as a dog's name, but only because my grandma had a dog for over a decade named just that, so pay me no nevermind. Besides, I've always said I should name my kids Thing 1, Thing 2 and Hey You, just to make it easier on myself :)



Author's Response:

ha ha! Thing 1 and 2! Somehow, I don't think that would translate well once the kids go to school :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: ariawolf80 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Name suggestions from your obsessively devoted fan (though I don't realy review, sorry :O) ):

The obvious choices would be Edward & Elizabeth, because they are not only common, almost exected, Royal names, but they are also a nod to cannon Edward's human parents. Plus, Isabel & Isabella are the Spanish versions of Elizabeth

Mariabella (a rare English name combining Maria & Bella) is a neat reversal of Bella Marie. Annabelle would be another reference to her and is derived from Amabel (meaning lovable). Angela or Angelle (or its variants), because of E & B's tendency to refer to each other as angels, and Angelina is both an English & Spanish name. Alethea was coined in the 1600s, so is time appropriate & pretty, and means truth, which considering the rumors surrounding Bella's pregnancy would be fitting. Clare or Clara (clear) for the same reason, and the latter being a Spanish & English name. Carlyn (a form of Carolyn), which is a from Carolus (Latin form of Charles), is obviously similar to Carlisle & could be a nod to both their fathers (despite her distaste for him in general, Bella would have been raised to respect her father). Esmeralda, an English & Spanish name that means emerald, for if she has Edward's green eyes, plus is a tie to Esme, though it might not have been a common name until after Victor Hugo. Eleanor was a popular name & at least 2 queens had it, including the wife of Edward I.

Ambrose means immortal (a nod to vampires). Boniface (as a middle name), which was popular in the English Middle Ages, means good fate and I believe is the formal name SM uses for Carlisle, or something like that. Anthony because of Edward's middle name & its history of Roman Emperors & Christian Saints. Eric/ck, meaning "ever ruler." Edison means "son of Edward" and Edmund "blessed protector." Julian was a popular English name from the 13th century on, derived from Julius (as in Julius Caeser), which comes from Jupiter (Roman Zeus). (Gillian was the popular feminine version of the name). Frederick means "peaceful ruler."  Harold means "leader of the army."

I was going to suggest Grace, in deference to canon Bella's lack of it as a human, but it was actually popularized by the Puritans in the 1600s, and the Puritans were reviled in England at that time.

I think I've inundated you with enough suggestions for now, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter! :O)

Summary:

Bella and Edward leave Forks to go to college in New England, accompanied by the whole coven. We enter a world of romance and mystery where the two vampires discover that life as students can be very eventful.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68455 Read Count: 4220
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Oct 2010
Reviewer: ariawolf80 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: First Day on Campus.

Um, I'm having trouble swallowing the idea that Mike, or anyone, could have snuck up on Emmett & Edward while they were feeding.  Edward's mind-reading ability aside, they would have detected him with their other senses long before he could have gotten close enough to see them in action.  I assume, from the timeline placement of this story, that canon is true for this too. In SM's stories, Edward tells Bella he will never take her hunting because they fall into their instincts & vampire-ness when they do, which means their senses actually become more acute, and remember, their natural prey is human.  They would have smelled Mike the Human immediately, and possibly even diverted their attentions to him instead of the animals, the way Bella did on her first hunt in BD...so, I just thought you should keep that in mind.



Author's Response:

If I'm following you, even SM got it wrong when Edward took Bella hunting the first time. They both should have jumped on the humans who were on Bella's path area instead of going away from them. 

Summary:

Bella, Alice, and Rosalie Swan are looking for the person who shot their father, Charlie, and left him for dead. The Cullen boys, Edward, Emmett, and Jasper, help them but will the person they're after get to them first? AH&MA E/B,J/A,EM/R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102591 Read Count: 42475
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: ariawolf80 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm confused. Why would telling the police and the press knowing ruin their careers? If anything, the publicity would boost them...



Author's Response:

Because the press would never leave them alone. Right now, they have no clue who is after her. Plus the police hadn't found anything in six months. I promise it will make sense:)