Reviews by vfloyd
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.





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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1253894
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: vfloyd Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Just wondering if this story has been updated somewhere because we got so close to wrapping it up and getting all the answers, then nothing here for over 5 years. Is it going to be completed?

Reviewer: vfloyd Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really enjoyed the dual POV's.  Lets you know what both are thinking for a more complete story.

Reviewer: vfloyd Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Where are the OT's?  I'm all caught up with the story chapters and need something to tide me over till next week.  I got the recommendation for this story from Amazon discussions, and have read all 90+ chapters in a week.  I usually don't like FF because I like to keep the original characters clear in my mind.  As I read this I do not picture Bella/Edward as Kristen/Robert. I think you could totally sell this if you changed the names.  


Oh, and I agree, I hope Bella wins the bet.


Author's Response:

on the extra's page... which appears as another story

You can also view it and all the picures plus some exta things on my blog

Reviewer: vfloyd Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

I'm just it always this long between Chapters?  I started reading this story after a friend recommended it.  Read the first 90+ chapters in a few days.  Totally immersed myself in the characters, the plot, the emotions.  Loving it very much.  However, since I got "caught up" with the chapters, there have only been 2 or 3 more posted.  We seem to be coming near the end and I'm dying to see how it turns out.  But at the same time, my head is no longer into the story like it was because by the time the next chapter is posted I've forgotten what happened before. Thinking I may just have to start over once the entire story is finished.  

This is not criticism in any way, please don't take it as such.  I know we all have lives to live.  I'm loving the story, just dying to see how it turns out. I've read several books since the last chapter was posted, and miss the intensity of these characters.