Reviews by Azlady2003
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

Banner Mady By LOT 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152417
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love epov

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Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Welll alice and him are siblings cuz of the whole face in her clevage thing was werid 

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Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok edward sr is the owner and carisle and edward are brothers...or edward owns the club...emmette is esme and carisles son

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Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Im thinking the cullens are somehow related to the mob and those notes arent from edward

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Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So alice wants edward the note was telling bella she doesnt share meaning edward.....rose figured it out and was getting ready to knock alice out before she hurt bella?......am i right or is someone in the apt or they think bellas in trouble and were getting ready to attack but bella answered the door?

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Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmm wonder if she does leave...imnthinking the stalkers james aka creepy guy

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Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hot damnthe lemon was good

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Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

If it makes her feel better than she should involve the cops

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Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So if edward is clean...what will he do wen he finds bellas stalker

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Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oooo is leah the stalker and is bella pregnant?

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Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oooo loved it

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Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Why is edward asking bella why she didnt tell him she was pregnant, she didnt know herself, right? Loved how he asked if she would say yes to marriage.

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Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Love it and sad that theylost the first baby.

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 716892
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Oh my...so is carisle treating liz like jake was treating bella? She basicly is sleeping with him out of fear.

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Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Love it

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Oooo is senior having junior go in the slammer for his disobience

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Yeah the history btwn  his mom and godfather would be hard to digest if i was edward too

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Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Loved the lemon did they practice safe sex ie: birth control or condom? Im only asking so if she gets sick idont assume soething

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Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I hope she tells him shes pregnant soon

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Poor bella hopfully yelling doesnt freak her out after she heals fom jake

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Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Oooo i hope edwards godfather lets edward clip joshie since he sent those guys.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I hope edward is ok once hes made.

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

How can jake think bella wants to be raped i hope jake dies

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Oh no

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Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Aww he knows question is does he want her to kerp it or get rid of it....what does bella really and truly want

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Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Poor bella shes still stuck on survil mood, she was trete like a sex slave so long by jake its basicly all she knows hope she heals soon

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

I hope bella really is ok...this moment could make or break her...hot lemon btw

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I love that they are growing together

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Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

I think if they dislike a character its not that they hate the story it just means your writing has impassioned them...its a good thing. Im reading this story where i hate the writers edward because he did bella wrong but i love the story and am addicted to it, yet i hate on edward in reviews, its my way of yelling at him but to envoke emotions of love, hate, etc in readers means your writing is good. I love mobward and i always have a hard time finding mobward or domward stories. Btw i loved this chapter it let me know why edward was told to stay low

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Love the back story on liz

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

So bella pumps and gives her breast milk in a bottle? Smart. Shit is weird with esme and elizabeth like frenimies. 

Raising Ashlynn by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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thanks to teamalltwilight and le crepuscule for the awesome banners!

 

Bella meets a man who in one night leaves her body humming for more. What should she do when the next time she sees him, he is dropping off his daughter, begging her to keep her. With an odd sense of obligation, a person who never saw herself as a parent—is now moving across country with a child who thinks Bella is her mother.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30699 Read Count: 31986
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awww im gona miss them

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Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awwwlove his proposal and how he gets bella

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bellas already preggos yay!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

After edward threatened me to take my daughter i'd make him let me adopt her so he could no longer threaten me with that and so i wouldnt be living in fear

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ooo love it i hope she and alice make now thatshe can tell her the truth

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love the lemon and her response to his wanting more

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ooooo

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Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oooo i betcha edward fixes the night

Isabella Volturi by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After being left by Edward, I couldn't stand the thought of him controlling me even in his absence. I admit it was an act of defiance, but it was a decision that brought me more happiness than I'd ever thought I'd experience. New Moon AU/Canon

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93367 Read Count: 39535
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I have a feeling hes gonna have a hard time being a human drinker and bella ill be ananimal drinker for its easier on edward......just think if edward was a human drinker when they met then bella would of been drained

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oocant wait till edward sees bella

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Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hot damn loved the lemon but im a lemon whore...i do wonder who gives up their eatting habits

Summary:

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He was just doing his sister one last favor by letting one of the girls from her shelter stay with him. He didn't expect her to be so young, he didn't expect her to be so broken, he didn’t expect her to have a link to his past, and he sure as hell didn't expect to fall in love with her. 

Hurt/Comfort/Angst/Romance/Friendship/Drama

 

Banner made by: Astrid 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29165 Read Count: 13525
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aww they do need to talk

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oooo whats the plan

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cant wait to see how bellas tied to his past

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Haha ive done what whitneys done to an ex to show what they are missing

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I live in az and attics and basements are rare...we tend to have crawl spaces and thats even pushing it. But your right abt the air the vents are above.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aww so bella is roses sister....what happened to rose?

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Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Im taking it she was forced to have sex in order to survive...thats why bella thought she had to have sex with edward to live there

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Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oooo bella left

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Date: 05 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Shes at the spot were he last saw rose before he got jumped

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow poor blla

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Im glad they arent doing the steps foward then steps back dance

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Our home

Aww i dont want it to end i want more

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Re-acquaintance

Love the lemons

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Uncertain tomorrow

Hot lemon but horrible ending

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Drunken Disclosures

Haha im glad hes attracted to blla but if he wants it her hes gonna have o grovel

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Fitting in

Im sure alce was hoping they would end uptogether 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Night out

Ooo wonder how edward takes her being drunk

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: The arrangement

I still would of said no to beinghungry edwards a jerk he doesnt deserve her being kind

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Home

Ooooo

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Bad day

Oooo another fight coming?

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Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Reassessment

Edward derseve her comment abt the fiancee because he was being hurtful too

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Something different

Hmmm i cant wait till the dinner

Summary: Past Featured Story

tbw

Homeless Bella meets Edward just after being rescued from an assault. Mob boss Edward meets Bella just after being told he's out of time...he has to find a wife. Can they help each other? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36637 Read Count: 102142
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

i love it and i hope you countinue it

Summary:

second

 
Bella is a twenty two year old mother of three and a widow. Her husband Emmett gunned down in a shootout with the DEA during an undercover raid. She vows to take her children away from the life, to let them grow up normal but then she meets the new Underboss Edward Cullen who falls for her and her children but refuses to play second to Emmet's ghost. Can she let go of her past?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30219 Read Count: 11772
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2013 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Oooo love it!

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87081
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh so he must of married her and that means shes not his goomah like carlisle said

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Cant wait for more

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hot damn, cant wait for more

Summary: Past Featured Story

Detectives Edward, Emmett and Jasper are on the case of a serial killer roaming the U-Dub campus. With their sisters on campus, can they keep them safe and do their jobs effectively? What happens when feelings begin to change for Edward and Jasper? Will they be too late to save the girls they love? And who is that Killer in the Shadows? AH, canon couples.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, G8or Favor8s Read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26659 Read Count: 45587
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2013 Updated: 21 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Im guessing the killers uley

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

For a min there i thought alice girl and bellas boy would get together but then I remembered they are truly related almost siblings lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98269
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

My dream is bella escapes... I hate seeing her unhappy and in this abusive relationship. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So did edward have a feeling that she was the one and thats why he kidnapped and forced her into a relationship instead of killing her. I think I would of begged to be killed instead of forced like bella.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love it and you call to my emotions and right now i hate edward

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Seems edward only loves her cuz he controls her with fear

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hate edward, he just raped her twice and threated to keep doing it if she acted up. Edward doesnt love her at all! I would of shot him with that gun yesterday and been done with it. I love your writing and how you get my emotions going

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I would if carisle is abusive to esme as edward is to bella

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Does he really want her to be herself....you can only beat someone till they break

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edwardshould be threatened after all shes only with him by force....is it wrong tgat i actually want edward dead and her with jake when I've always been team edward

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Does bella love him? I think when she told him she hates him and doesnt love him is the truth

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So bella was ok with fucking this time...nice

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Now i like edward once he got his head out of his ass lol

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love it and the p,erfect ending...her yelling like that in the beginning would have edward threatening to beat her but glad to see edward lets bella be herself

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76800
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

If i was rosalie id already posioned edwards food lol

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake One

My heart breaks for bella each time...loving someone and them not loving u (roses case) can break your spirit but so can being used and treated like a whore (bellas case) i hate that he hits rose, i wonder if he would ever hit bella?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Misguided edward treating her like a whore hurts and kills spirits too

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272052
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Love the update. Can't wait for more....glad life settled down for you

Oh Brother by Kim Rathbone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Sequel to Oh Captain, My Captain. Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41569 Read Count: 16589
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2013 Updated: 07 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved it

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 575]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185496
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless

Im dying right now for more. Edward deserves to suffer...he is the root to all bellas problems and EZ is a coward. I hope nothing to bad is happening to bella :(



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! LOL it seems you would like him to suffer a whole lot more ;o) x x

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless

I think bella is developing Stockholm syndrome...afterall not only did she kiss him but she called her prision her home. Still hate edward but i've already explained my love/hate relationship with him lol. So she slapped bella cuz of bad mouthing jazz, hmm i never guessed that from the fb preview lol. Can't wait till next update, if edward wants bellas love, true love, and not from the Stockholm...then he has to set her free otherwise she will only grow to like him out of being kidnapped and it won't be true.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! She did say she was going home, but whos to say she didn't plan to go to her flat? :oP

Yeah Alice slapped her for bad mouthing Jazz, but I reckon she's gonna get in trouble for it now.

I agree he should set her free, but.... ah wait and see :oP Next chapter is written! x x

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless

First I have to say your story impassions me which Ilike and makes you a wonderful author anything I say is not to bash you. With that said....I'm hating edward he is a abusive SOB, who thinks he is in the right. Bellas ass is probably bruised. Jake is stupid, to ask if she can't admit shes kidnapped so to give a sign if that is the case....in front of possible kidnappers is an idiot cop move. I hate edward and my adrenline is pumping. I hope bella gets free! How she can forgive edward after he kidnapped her and hit her maybe but threatening her loved ones is the most unforgivable. I want to stab edward and i hope she does in his sleep, he doesnt love her he just wants to control her! Okay my rant to edward is done. Please update soon, I cant wait to read more. I'm loving hating edward.



Author's Response:

I have to say, thank you very much for your kind and passionate review. I was struggling after a few negitive comments wondering if I should continue the story, but you & another made me realise I should.

Yes I completely understand that Edward is an assward and it's okay to hate him right now.
Jake didn't have much of an option to ask her in front of them as Edward wouldn't let him talk to her alone and he knew that would be the case, but he won't drop the matter there.

To be fair Edward didn't threaten Charlie, Jasper did. Though Jasper only did it so it was one less things Bella would hold against Edward.

Lol glad your loving hating him x x

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless

I hate Ez and I hate edward...as I said on FB...I can't believe he thinks spanking bella against her will would make her love him and had the nerve to hold her after he abused her...on top of being threatened by his crazy uncle. Edward deserves to lose her, however, bella doesnt deserve how it happened. Fuck, who has her? Shes gonna be more tramatized by this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! LOL I thought you were waiting to read? Edward spanked her out of fear of losing her, I'm not saying it was right, but that was why he held her afterwards. It was his own sick way of dealing with it.

This however will be a turning point for Edward and maybe you will like him some point in the near future. hehe.

She is going tramatized, but when she eventually gets out the other side of all the darkness she will be stronger than ever x x

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless

Still hope edward gets shot...hopefully by bella.



Author's Response:

*spoiler* You got your wish. Thanks for the review! x x

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes...I knew if edcullen and I wished hard enough it would happen :)



Author's Response:

LOL! The power of thought x x

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Relentless

I  mostly agree with Donna. From my field (psychology) i say she has possible PTSD, and possibly major depressive disorder. However, the feelings not being real, and staying away i agree 100% with donna. I know edward probably wont, but I honestly think if he wants to know if her feelings are real and not born out of either stockholm or hero (edward saved her, so she loves him cuz he is her savior) then he should stay away while she heals and then if she comes finds him she did have true feelings. Loved the lemon.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review honey. The next chapter is with my beta x x

The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

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The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52198
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved the lemon. I have a feeling that since edward claimed bella, he will kill rose for trying to harm whats his. Wonder why bella passed out for 2 days after she had lost her vcard?