Reviews by Azlady2003
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Bella Swan was the reincarnation of Isabella Salvatore, Damon and Stefan's beloved sister that had died tragically? She not only looks exact but due to a spell cast years ago, she has begun to remember her former life. What will the Salvatore brothers do when they find out she exists? How will this affect Bella's relationships, especially with Edward? How do Katherine, Victoria and Klaus factor in?

AU: Takes place at the end of New Moon (Twilight) and the end of Season 2 Vampire Diaries.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244615 Read Count: 75586
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Oct 2012
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Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Acquisitions

Gross but sad

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Reluctant Pallbearers

I thought the casket would of been stolen lol

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Time Waits for No One

Hot!

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Mad Hatter's Tea Party

Oh jennas gonna die still!

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Thanks for the Memories Part 1

Oh no cliffy

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Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Thanks for the Memories Part 2

Oh no who does klause have? Bella? Elena? Bonnie?

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Cooling Off

Awww you cut it off before the making up lemon lol

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Falling Off the Edge of Reason

Oh no how is bella gonna come back, she cant be dead permentantly! And if/when she comes back edward will be more possesive and on her like white on rice

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Caged Hearts

Oh bellas alive but is she her

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Unbound

Cant they catch a break

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 61: A Change in Plans

Wonder why hes not scared of the cullens since they are stronger than him

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Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 62: As Good A Place As Any To Die

Shell come back she has too

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 63: After We Fell

Damon i love him

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 443]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107087
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oooooo is she gonna kiss edward!



Author's Response:

Maybe....Come back on Monday to find out! Thanks for reading!

 

Liz :)

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Oooooooooooo i hope he makes it back to hear it

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Mike i doubt but victoria?

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Rape is a damaging thing to happen to someone and their loved ones but im glad the newtons will pay

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love it

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I hope she like him back! Lol

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh fucking mike is stupid

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

She saves him, but im sure he aint happy that she puts herself in danger to do so

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Oh i love limes but i love lemons more lol love the fight

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Mike wants edward and bella to pay is why hes meeting with j and l. So how does bella save edwArds?

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Aww poor edward didnt last long but it was stll hot

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Im trying to remember if we meet tAyna yet in any chapters? So jakes dead wonder why

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Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

So if charlie didnt cheat on renee or father tanyas child like edward thinks....how was she able to blackmail chalie?



Author's Response:

He was drunk one night and she convinced him that they slept together. Since her son looks a little like Bella, Charlie never questioned it. He just paid her to keep Renee from finding out. Thanks for reading.

 

Liz :)

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I think she'll let edward do the honors of killing mike, while she tortures j&l

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Bellas preganant her mentioning her jeans being tight gave me that idea. And i cant believe mikes moms behind this....did she rape edward?

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

But when her mom called vic she told her she didnt get pregnant it sounded like she was in on the plan & yet she says she was drugged also she mentioned james is it same james. Bella killed

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Love it

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

what the last chapter is ended on a cliffy? was bella hit was anyone else hit from karens gun?

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

They got married before the birth and after the shooting om

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 418874
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
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Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Love this chapter thinking lemons should be in hawaii. The angst isnt that bella and edward break up is it?

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Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Ive always said i need a coma to lose weight...never thought abt the loose skin. Poor bella, i agree after a trAgic tragedy u need normal

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Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Well of course they will fight and push the other away....they both went though a tramatic experiance......edward with thinking he wouldlose bella and bella having to deal with the fact her father hated her so much he would kill her

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bella isnt at all fat, hard to tell if shes chubby but according to the pic u posted shes healthy looking no fat not skinny...skinny chicks look nasty.....so lauren should shut up along withcharlie

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Im like u i don,t love myself

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Damn jacob! I think someone who hatesbella paid charlies bail

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aww bella is growing with edwards love

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Jasper hopefully becomes avgood guy andi think jake bailed charle out. I just dont get it, ive been made fun of abt my weight in elementry and middle school heck its what made me anerix, however after my parents found out and such lets just say i gained it all back but in high school, college and my adult life ive never been outwardly made fun of like bella is, if i was id have been in a lot of fights. Poor bella, we know we aint skinny we dont need people telling us, we do own mirrors and buy our clothes

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love the bj.....edwards so sweet jaspers an ass

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I want a lemon i lovelemons

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Damn cliffy i was hoping for a quickie in that alley

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I hope not trouble in the relationship andsty? Maybe jake comes back in vegence angsty?  Love the lemon but edward taking control is always hotter lol

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh lots of lemons looking fowArd to that...wonder if bella joins the mile high club...im glad the angst isnt a breakp

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

His miss piggy thought was mean...but love the lemons cant wait for public sex. So i forgot have they got engaged yet?

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Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Of course she will say yes...i like how bella has overcome and grown so much. Emotional scars take longer to heal than physical ones, so im proud of bella

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Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Love it!

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153148
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Love it im glad edward told her his feelings

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Damn cliffy damn jane

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hot lemon

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Edward used her like a whore and his note might as well been money grrr he doesnt deserve her

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Edward is the one that will be played not bella

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Edward u stupid stupid man

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Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Edward u twit

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Give him greif bella

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Were her parents murdered afterall or is the inspector callingedward?

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That inspector is working with/for jane

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That inspector is fishy

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I hope janes dead

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Hot lemon

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Loved it

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131803
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Love it

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59744
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So carlisle beats edward yet he thinks hes better than charlie and he is against abuse on women yet he abused esme. I hate carlisle

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87326
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
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Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I dont like edward but i liked how bella handled this suituation. I think alice wants edward to dump bella so she can get money out of him...shes the gold digging whore



Author's Response:

Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22.  First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing.  The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her.  Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing.  Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows.  If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable.  Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it.  Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice.  Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice.  Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control.  It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon. 
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups:  Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~

TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”

“You talked to Es?”

“Yeah, she calls me every day.  How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”

“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once.  He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier.  I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”

“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks.  “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”

“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.

“Yep,” she says popping the p. 

“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt.  Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”

“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Im glad edward handled her pregnancy hopefully he still found her sexy when she was as big as a house



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Im glad she liked the spanking but edward is controling bella by telling her how to act by spanking her not as controling mean as jasper was...if bella said she hated the spanking andwld leave if he did it again wld edward still spank her? Or was this an expermint into punishments?



Author's Response:

Well so far so good, on the earth not ending...  If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed.  If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay.  Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead.  Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment.  Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up.  Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one.  As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change.  She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect.  If Bella demanded that he stop spanking her, he would not do it again.  Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking.  Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome.  Hope you enjoy your holiday!  Kasi (&Jess)~

Teaser: 

“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.

“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.

“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”

“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving.  She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.

“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.

“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.

“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.

“Everyone is different.”

“Fine, I guess.  Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things.  But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”

I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.

We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met.  Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I do love your story and glad that edward wouldnt spank bella if he told him she didnt want it, ive read stories that had edward not taking bellas feelings into consideration. I love your teaser and i think alice gave up her baby.



Author's Response:

Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit.  Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper.  A few of you think post-partum depression.  There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters.  Things will really roll along here story line wise.  Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon.  I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon.  Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward.  They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well.  The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & Jess~

Teaser:  “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.

“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.

“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”

“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.

“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.

Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues.  My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little.  Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love the lemon as always. I knew she was gonna give him up i just didnt assume to esme.omg i wonder why?



Author's Response:

Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit.  Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper.  A few of you think post-partum depression.  There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters.  Things will really roll along here story line wise.  Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon.  I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon.  Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward.  They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well.  The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & Jess~

Teaser:  “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.

“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.

“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”

“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.

“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.

Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues.  My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little.  Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

With the whole money thing edward is acting like her dad, somthimes there relationship takes on the whole child/parent role...and he is being neglectful. I love the lemon as always. And i think alice is seeing Ben (bellas ex) thats who she never a chance too. Wont this be bellas 1st time at anal sex if edward uses the cupon?



Author's Response:

Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here.  Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread.   Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals.  A lot of you  think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters.  The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward.  These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices.  Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~

Teaser:  “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs. 

He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands. 

Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.

“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.

“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”

“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.

“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.

“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.

“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I still dont like edward....to question bella when she is telling the truth and to neglect her and hurt her is wrong. His feelings on how no woman not even bella would come before his family is wrong....if that family is poison to the person you love you sometimes have to cut them out of your life and put your loves feelings above others. I hope bella gives him the cold shoulder like he has been giving her and tell him she now needs to think...turn about is fair play.



Author's Response:

Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all.  Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story.  Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole.  So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters.  There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through.  I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We do love hearing your thoughts.  Jess & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”

“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.

“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.

“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.

“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”

“Wherever we go, we go together.  Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Oooh timid bella and bar owning edwArd sounds fun

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Love it but I wonder why bella and edward stopped at one kid

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299817
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Let's Get it On

I'm thinking Jimmy is Alice's abusive ex

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Closing One Chapter...

Wonder why he didn't take Marcus in Rio up on his offer to design her rings. Loved this chapter

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Closing One Chapter...

Wonder why he didn't take Marcus in Rio up on his offer to design her rings. Loved this chapter

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 38: The Island of Love: Epilogue

Love it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94800
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk

I think edward loves her...and im glad its pat that knows



Author's Response:

Yep, it could have been much worse.  Pat's about the best one who could know.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Past

Love it



Author's Response:

Aww, glad you liked it so much.  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office

Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

I promise, I am updating as fast as I possibly can.  I am glad you are enjoying it so much!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Living Room

I love it sad the lemon wasnt in the chapter lol and i have a feeling ppl at wrk find out about the relationship



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  I know, I'm such a tease, not including the lemon in this chapter.  :) 

You'll have to wait and see if people at work find out!  I'm not telling.

Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Terrace

Aww no detailed lemons but still loved the flowers



Author's Response:

Not to worry, there will definitely be more detailed lemons in the future for them.  And I'm glad you liked the flowers :)  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library

You tease with that lime i need lemon lol glad edward has support from bella



Author's Response:

Hey, not every chapter can be lemons.  There is a plot here, you know! ;)  Not to worry though, there will be more lemons in the future.

And yes, Edward does have a lot of support from Bella.  She might not know exactly what she's doing, but she cares and she's trying, and that goes a long way.

Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Front Porch

Love it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I appreciate that you took the time to review.

Into The Deep by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After an accident took Bella's parents, she is forced to live with her new guardian, family friend Edward Cullen. She's been drifting through life for the last year in a daze. Will Edward be able to get through to her and wake her from her living nightmare? Will her looming eighteenth birthday separate them, or bring them closer together?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11496 Read Count: 13092
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oooo love it

Charlie's Daughter by Jezzeria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella has been in love with her best friends father for years. Now that she's turning 21 soon, will she finally be able to show him what he's been missing? Told in E&BPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10004 Read Count: 1526
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2012 Updated: 06 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it very hot

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Just the beginning

I loved the lemon....how does your vampires turn people? I for sure thought one bite with his vemon would turn bella

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: In the cold light of morning

Oh no poor edward...please update soon

Too Gay For You by Jaymili Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

tgfy

Edward Cullen, a hot-shot and hard-to-hire attorney, is looking for a nanny to watch his niece and nephew, from whom he just gained custody. If they are not driven crazy by the two little devils, they are trying to get in his ‘sexy pants’ and Edward is tired of it. Here comes Isabella Swan, his assistant’s sister, proclaimed tomboy and not able to keep a job for more than 24 hours. By some kind of circumstances, Edward comes to think she is a lesbian,therefore, in his eyes the perfect profile for a nanny. After all, she loves women, or does she?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50977 Read Count: 16512
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Outtake 1 : I Promise

I love outtakes

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - I Remember

I hope esme and carisle get close to bella and love her...so who breaks the no fallng in love rule 1st, edward or bella?



Author's Response:

That is for me to know and you to find out! Thank you for reviewing!! If you have FF please tell me for the previews!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Not Only About You

Love outtakes

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles

Aww so they didnt have sex....i hope this drunk pass out together doesnt set the children back

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 7- Tying you to me

Oh my its getting good

John Doe by Lolo Eighty-Four Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

He scrunches up his nose. "You know, you seemed to like me more when you thought I was dying." I gasp, shocked and embarrassed. "I didn't think you were dying." He's smiling. Like a big toothy smile. Ugh! I can already tell he likes to mess with people. "No, but you sure thought I was in a coma and had amnesia." Dammit! He had me there. BPOV. AH. No Angst


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20465 Read Count: 6777
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is charlie swan important in this fic?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love the fluff

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was a hot dry hump..edwards a horny guy even in the hospital lol

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope hes not a player....why didnt he call bella? Im dying here.

Summary:

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A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my  banner!  

Was it wrong to want you...for so long, watch you mature from the sidelines…ripening for my pleasure? I have no right to...want...need...desire...crave your beautiful body, but I do. Fantasizing, hours about the things I could…want…need to do to you. Sugar and Spice, and everything nice…that s what Isabella Swan was made of... B&E Drabble, Canon pairings...

 

Beta´d by the Dream Team: jess2002, RAH07890, jdonovan, & famaggiolo...pre-reader: TeamAllTwilight, thanks for all your help ladies!

DISCLAIMER: I OWN NOTHING!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4090 Read Count: 19745
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2012 Updated: 25 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What are bella and edwards ages or age difference?

Summary: Past Featured Story

tglc

Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

Banner Mady By LOT 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152417
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Its aro thats her stalker huh? Or is it leah? Love the lemon

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I think bellas preggos so does edward. Looks like carlos might be the stalker. Cant wait for next update