Reviews by ALewis
Summary:

Getting the Hell Out of Dodge

Banner by LunarEclipse1

Immediately following the battle with Victoria's newborns, Bella learns that the Cullens were using her in a most malicious way.  With the Volturi wanting her to be dead or changed, time is ticking for poor Bella.  Will someone get her the hell out of Dodge?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9423 Read Count: 3764
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your stories. Keep em coming.

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923047
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Loved it!!!!! Hey Noc would I be right in assuming that it is very noisy in your head with all those voices?! LOL. Have fun with Koalababy can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

yes, i write to get them to shut up!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

OMG!!!!!!! That was awesome. Way to go Edward.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69

Aaaw man! I wanted to see Edward do something reminiscent of Matthew Perry in 'Fools Rush In' when he realized Salma Hayek was still pregnant!!!!!! Can't wait for more. Bring our Edward home.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I love it!!!!! James deserved that and more. Please tell me that Bella and Edward will get some sort of an HEA? Maybe everyone on the island would mysteriously die of poisoning and then they can escape?!!! Pretty please?!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Great chapter. Love the pics. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Loved the chapter, sweet pics!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Wow. Men get so worked up every time their woman makes one little groan. So cute. Excellently done. Can't wait for the ceremony. Maybe someone could slip them all some sort of poison then the five of them can get off the island.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

He tattooed her didn't he?! I'm guessing property of ...

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Yay I was right about the tattoo! Awesome chapter! Still wishing Alice or jasper could slip some poison in the food for the guests.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

YES!!!!!!! Oh thank you Jesus! At the beginning I was worried but thank god this ended well.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 70

Aaaaw!!!!!! I need more, please hurry with the next chapter!

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 660778
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28: Edward

Love this story, keep it coming ladies this is fantastic.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 56: Edward

OH MY GOD!!!!! And yes I read this at work!!! Does that make me a sick puppy? Okay moving on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 57: Bella

Wow just wow!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward

Yo sarge, it's your birthday... Going stateside... Seeing Bella.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 121: Bella

I laughed so hard reading this chapter and some of the reviews listing cheesy pick up lines. I have to ditto most of them for me as well. I also wanted to tell you about a situation where I overheard three men talking about me by accident.

I was walking across a skywalk downtown (bridge between buildings one story up) when I passed three men. One mentioned something about how I was capable of walking in heels so fast and another said and I quote: "I don't know about the heels but if that isn't an ass I want to grab and hair I want to fist, I don't know what is."

Considering they were fairly younger than me I wasn't sure if I should be offended or happy that some young pups found me attractive.

I asked a guy friend at work who was about their age and he told me to feel proud.

I even asked my hubby about it and he told me that he concurred with their assessment. Ha. Men are so funny!!!

Keep up the great story, I'm loving it!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 136: Edward

I want my own Sarge!!!!!  Does it count that my hubby is a police sargeant?!!!!!!  Loved this chapter especially that he couldn't concentrate on cancelling the reservation. 

MY JOURNEY by petersgirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary:

 

 

When Edward and Bella get back from Italy things have changed. Edward is restricting more and more of what she can do. Bella loses herself. She becomes rebelious Bella. Partying with the wolves, having wild nights out and going to jail. With Peter Whitlock she begins to find herself again. Join them on their journey.

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THANK YOU TO EVERYONE THAT VOTED FOR ME AND PETER. I JUST FOUND OUT THAT WE WON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


THIS STORY HAS BEEN NOMINATED FOR THE BIG HUMOR/  BEST   OVERALL   STORY   LAUGH AWARD AT GIGGLES AND SNORT!!!!!

SO IF PETER HAS MADE YOU GIGGLE, SNORT, SPIT YOUR OUT OREOS, LAUGH SO HARD THAT YOU WANT TO PEE YOUR PANTS OR JUST CHEERED YOU UP; GO VOTE FOR HIM!   MY SISTERS ALSO CRACK ME, TELL ME FUNNY STORIES AND MAKE ME LAUGH TOOOOO!!!!

I WANT TO GIVE THE NAUGHTY GIRLS THAT I MENTIONED ABOVE A SPECIAL PETERS AWARD. I AM WORKING ON THAT! YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE!

You can vote at the address below from June 25th 2012 to July 10 2012

http://awards.gigglesnort.net/viewpage.php?page_id=13            (THEN CLICK VOTE!)

 

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Thank you to everyone that voted for my Peter!!!!!! petersgirl loves ya!!!!!!



Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 81994 Read Count: 23167
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this story can't wait til it's up to date.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am so excited that this is almost caught up to date from where you ended on FF. I literally spit out Oreos and milk the first time I read that last line with Garrett - "Here use this!" CLASSIC!!!!!! Your stories keep me going!

Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for reading me again.  You made me giggle sooo much my little Oreo spitter that when I put the new MY JOURNEY award nomination on my summary page that I mentioned it. I love ya sister.

You make me feel soooo good that you enjoy my story and of course my favorite boy.......Peter!

 

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm so glad you're caught up. I laughed just as hard this time as I did when I read it on FF. got to love Emmett and his antics.

Author's Response:

You are such a sweetie. You make me laugh toooo my oreo girl!!!

I am posting the new chapter this week!

Here is a little PETER love for you!

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thank you to everyone that voted for my Jackson and my Emmett!!!! petersgirl loves ya!!!


THIS AWESOME BANNER WAS CREATED BY ELLIE WOLF. SHE IS SO TALENTED AND A SWEEHEART!!!! A HUGE THANK YOU TO YOU DOLL!!!


A really good friend of mine and a talented artist Megs (Mmismpy09) made this for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Love ya Doll!!!!

 


 

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After Edward leaves Bella is sent to live with her Mom. Phil signed on to another baseball team and they end up in Charming, Ca. Bella learns that it's not only vampires that are dangerous when she meets Jackson Teller, Sons of Anarchy, SAMCRO. Jaxs teaches her a lot about real life. The Cullens want back in her life, but Jaxs is a part of that now and things get complicated. They will be in their true forms of bikers and vampires.

 

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Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159233 Read Count: 29995
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 May 2018
Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this story can't wait til it's up to date.

Author's Response:

Thank you for coming over here to read me. It really means alot to me!!!!

This story is up to date with Fanfiction because of the two chapter authors note chapters that I posted.

I am going to post the next one today or tomarrow. I will be posting it here first. It will be new!!!!

I still have not made up my mind about posting to FanFic. I know that are just going to delete it anyways.

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!!

 

 

 

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

No no no, don't make him a vamp!!!! I like him better as a human. Now the hot forest sex with Em, KILLER!!!!!! I believe I need to change my panties *fan fan fan fan, hell I need a plug in fan I'm burning up from that!*

Author's Response:

I just love you!!!!!!

Jackson is a very strong hot strong willed boy. I don't think that you will be disappointed!!!!!!!

Thanks for after reading EM plugging in fan LOL! That is like me receiving a naughty girls award!

Wait a few more chapters until I send out loven at petersgirls best. 

Thank you for coming over here to read me.

Love ya sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153179
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Your comment in the end notes was hilarious!! Great chapter!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028744
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

I knew he'd want her to call Rose. He loves her I just know it. Great chapter and sexy pic. Keep 'em coming. (No pun intended.)

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

Yummy! More please!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 176: Chapter 176

Wow!!!!!!!! Great chapter as usual.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

That is a beautiful piece of jewelry. Your descriptions are making me want to revisit nipple clamps and such. I will have to ask my Master about that soon. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response:

Im not a huge fan of clamps, but I like my nipple suckers and my nipple trainers...

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Meet, definitely meet.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Any more of this and Butterfly will figure it out quickly that he's not human. I'm surprised she didn't gasp from the cold. Great chapter can't wait for more, say 10 more to match her 11 orgasms.

Author's Response:

They aren't really cold u know... just room temperature....

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

I definitely like a good spanking but my nipples are too sensitive for clamps. I guess breast feeding didn't toughen them up enough.

Author's Response:

nipple suckers? That's what i like, and I have some vibrating clamps that dont hurt at all... actually i dont like them cause they dont hurt enough

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 294: Chapter 294

Now chicks wow wow!!!!! Insert cheesy porn music here! Loving it. Go Edward get your groove on.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Holy hell! I feel for sweet little Butterfly. I would gladly take up the roll of cleaning every inch of Sir.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Would your Sir be willing to teach mine? Mine is a touchy feely person and sometimes I would love this type of sweet torture.

As usual, excellent chapter. I know Sir said no touching but could he at least brush through her hair? Maybe just enough to give her a chill down her spine? Please?!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Is it just me or does anyone else want to rip off the blindfold just stare at Sir in all his glory? Love it! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

Poor girl! Sir must be worried! Hope he lets her continue once she explains. Great chapter.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

DAMN!!!!!! I really gotta quit reading these at work! Now I gotta fix a situation. Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

Wow just wow!!!!!! Excellent as usual.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Yes! Not bad if I do say so myself. Much better than the taste of a man's. I especially love watching the look on my hubby's face when he watches. His hazel eyes go completely black! Got love breaking down a man like that with one tiny move. Ha ha.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

Nuh uh!!!! It's sandalwood and sex and maybe some chocolate for good measure. Great chapter

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

I love it! Tell 'Sir' good job on the name. Mine calls me his little kitten with claws. I like to scratch and bite. I'm assuming you're quite flexible with a nickname that reminds him of a butterfly.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Both, definitely both. Go easy on your Butterfly Sir!!!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Oh you poor thing! I bet your Sir gets angry from that kind of attention!!!!$

Author's Response:

um... actually he likes it... its my Ma'am that isnt too happy with it....

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Ooooooh!!!!!! Does his reaction involve the supply closet?!!!! Please oh please oh please!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

Wow! Loving it! Go Edward get possessive of your girl!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

I'm loving this but she's getting a bit Pavlovian. Will she be allowed to have a backbone or will Sir demand that she be completely submissive?!!!!!

Much love,
Kitten (with claws)

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Aaaw!!!!! No fair, she really needs to cum though.

Btw, are those papers her contract?!!!!! Can I put a suggestion for their first playroom scene? St. Andrew's cross, butterfly completely naked and Sir marking every inch of her body with his tongue. Two birds, one stone. She gets his touch and he gets his taste. Yay I like the sound of that.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

It's more than hot, it's HAWT!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Chapter! I have to agree with Butterfly, diapers?!!! I never understood some weird fixations and fetishes such as degradation, bestiality and those with an Oedipus complex. I could definitely go for spankings and a bit of bondage! Definite no on anything involving my tongue and someone's backdoor! Not gonna happen.

Author's Response:

fetishes are only weird if they are not yours.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Us usual excellent chapter. Can't wait for the scene. Oh and even though your offer is tempting my hubby already beat you to the punch but it still had me panting a bit. More, I need more please!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Aaw! Sir can be such a softy when he wants!! I just want hug him for caring and kiss him and lick him and nibble and suck and I digress!!!!! Once they scene and she pleases him some more she should start to believe how precious she is to him.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

I like the reading and blow job fantasy! Oh if only my knees weren't so beat up from years of indoor soccer!!!! Oh and the fact that my hubby probably wouldn't make it one chapter! He he!!!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Ooh, leather and on the wall as well!!!!!! (insert shiver and moan here). As usual loving it!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

You are never a disappointment. Loved the chapter it was so sweet.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Aaw! He's 'human', sneaking around smelling her clothes and fantasizing. He's so cute.
As usual great chapter!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

Obviously ther person is an idiot, I mean idoit, nope wrong again I meant idiot. I can't stop READING this story. As usual excellent chapter, I'm just as excited about him being naked as Butterfly is (well at least the bare feet). That actually is a serious form of trust for some people considering they don't like to show their feet.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

For a vampire with heightened senses he sure worries too much. Come on Edward, she's dripping wet FOR YOU!!!!! When have you ever seen a person get wet from honest to god fear!
As usual I'm loving it!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

I'm sorry about your day. I love the flower safe words. Can't wait for more but don't stress yourself. I'm sure that your Sir would be more than willing to ease some of your stress. Hair brushing always does it for me. Gives me tingles. Kisses and hugs that you feel better soon.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Wow! Yeah that got to me. Sounds like you took your stress out on poor butterfly? Still loving the story. Can't wait to here the punishment.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

That's a Hell yes for me. Go Sir! Tie her up and have your wicked way with her.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

Wow! Love the preview. Kind of disappointed that he wasn't tougher on her but still loving the story. Can't wait for more. Looking forward to the moment he realizes that she's his mate!!!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

Glad you're feeling better. Loved the chapter, knew she was a "pain junkie" so to speak. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Midnight Caller

Wow, just wow! I want Sir to tie me up, spank me, then give me such a sweet release!!!!! Yummy!!!!!! As usual great chapter! Koala baby deserves some praise as well for bringing you back to us. Kisses to you and yours.

Author's Response:

I do love my koalababy :)

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

SHIIIIITT!!!! Damn now I gotta go wake up my hubby!!!!! Maybe I'll get a bit of punishment as well as release.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

Yes, yes, yes! So ready Sir. Please.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Holy hell! I really wish my master wasn't sick right now. I need him after that!!!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

So not fair... Master is sick and I really need release. How much of a punishment do you think I'll get if I beg to take care of myself for the time being?
As usual excellent chapter, my guess is that as he pushes her limits he finds it harder (no pun intended) to not fuck her. He will finally realize that she can take it and that he can't hurt her.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

If it were me I'd be on fifteen by then! I'm just saying!!!!!!! Everyone let's give butterfly a standing ovation on a miraculous job!!!!!! I so cannot wait for my Master to get better. I begged for my own release the night before and was denied. I was given five spankings for asking. But he felt bad afterwards and told me to buy a new pair of shoes to cheer me up!!!!! Stilettos here I come!

Excellent chapter! You so totally rock.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

So his orgasm, was it from her tits or from her cleaning?

As usual excellent chapter!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

HAWT!!!!!!! As usual excellent chapter!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167

Where does the line form for the bath by Sir? I want next!!!

Still loving you and the story can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 168

Yummy chapter! I love bath time and the hair washing.
Question is it confusing being both a sub to Sir and a Domme to Koalababy?

Author's Response:

lmao... what's more confusing is that im primarily a sub to Bec, who when I'm topping, I call koalababy. I feel the need to ask her permission before I post anything about koalababy. Sir is a Dom, completely hetero, Bec and I are bi and switches.  Most of the time Bec is in the Domme role and I call her Ma'am or Mummy. She calles me belle or kitten or little girl. When I am in the Domme role I call Bec koalababy. When we are in neither, she calls me by my name, which, btw, is not Noc. If you read IR, and K speaks... K is me... and honestly, K rarely comes out anymore. I spend most of my time as either a Domme or sub. :)

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

Wow just wow! Excellent chapter.

By the way I read your response to my last post/review. I thought my life and house was complicated with sports and school and family and so on but man you win the prize on that. I'm surprised you can remember your own name with everything going on in your world.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 182: Chapter 182

If that is your Koalababy then you are the luckiest Ma'am on the planet! Great chapter, HUNGRY for more!!!!! Can't wait.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 183: Chapter 183

Sweet baby Jesus!!!!!! Now this is one hell of a way to start my morning! Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 185: Chapter 185

Loving it! Great chapter and pictures.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

Loved it. Great chapter.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

Wow, to both the chapter and the pic!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

You could never disappoint me. This was an excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't worry about the time frame inspiration will come when it comes. No pun intended!

Author's Response:

awww thanks :)  Im inspired... i just dont have the time, but I did write one more chapter, and graded two essays!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 195: Chapter 195

Gotta love it! Make your Sir sweat Butterfly! (Figuratively speaking of course.). Kisses to you. Love the chapter as usual.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 199: Chapter 199

Funny chapter. Gotta love when they all can pull something over on Edward! Awesome, reminds me of a few days earlier for me and my hubby.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 201

Nice pic! I got goose bumps waiting for what is coming next. Great chapter!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 202: Chapter 202

Still excited about what's to come, ha come!!!!!!! Great chapter. Love the pic!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 203: Chapter 203

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! The suspense is excruciatingly sweet! I want, no I NEED more. Excellent chapter. You are a master at keeping us on the edge. I love it and the picture is awesome, my fav black and whites are this kind where the shadows at a touch of mystery to the end result.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 204: Chapter 204

Love it! Awesome chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 205

My sentiments exactly!! As usual excellent chapter. More, always more.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!!!!!!!!! Men they are always so slow to figure things out! Excellent chapter, love the banner/pic. Kisses.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

Wow! Amazing doesn't even come close to describing this chapter!! I got a knot in my stomach and goosebumps on my arms! Wow, thank your Sir and Koalababy for the inspirations for this story.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 212: Chapter 212

Wow! A little afternoon delight, yay!!!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

Love it! Need more, excellent as usual.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 215: Chapter 215

Hilarious! Lovin' the frustrated Emmett. Awesome chapter

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

Hilarious! Love it can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 224: Chapter 224

Fantastic side story with Em and Rose. Excellent chapter. Love the black and white pics, absolutely beautiful!!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Uh oh! I hope he won't be to hard on her for disobeying. Or himself for hurting her. Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

Ugh! He's such a guy!!!!! Don't vampires no how to read between the lines? Of course she loves him. Otherwise she would have blamed him for the pain in her wrist.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

Gotta love the possible getting caught in the act orgasm! Love this chapter.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 248: Chapter 248

Wow!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 259: Chapter 259

Love the lilac pic. And the hint of goosebumps just makes the whole thing pop! Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 275: Chapter 275

Wow. Now that's a hand print from hell!!!!!! I have a high threshold for pain but I'm positive I would have called rose on that one as well. Loving it, can't wait for the big reveal. He he.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 277: Chapter 277

Wow!