Reviews by Hanks Lady
Hostage by maryhell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

stories/35826/images/Hostage2.jpgJasper and Edward are members of NYPD SWAT and are in love. When they get involved in a gang related situation, a skeleton comes out of the closet that neither were prepared for. Will they survive? Rated NC17 for M/M loving, language and mature themes.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Action, Drama, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Hostage
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64157 Read Count: 12093
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet the Pack

Ok, this is the first time I reviewed anything on TWCS and I'm appalling slow in reading too. I'm sure I read half this chapter on Fanfic a while back and then chaos ensued and I'm ashamed to say I forgot to come back :(

Anyway...I loved the description of the team, the nick names are very fitting. I've never read a storyline like this before and it sounds like it's going to be interesting. Not to mention the luscious, steaming hot lemons! The boys are so good together, I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Oh wow - I can't believe you are reading my boys. OMG wonderful. Thank you.

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Before the storm

I like that the Volturi are the Mafia - perfectly fitting!

Emmett's hilarious, I can see him speeding and blowing things up. Wonder if he is after Rose or if he's just joking around ;)

Loved the lemon (of course) - you're spoiling us!  Really enjoying the story so far.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, Emmett is a blast in this. I have a lot of fun with him. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Totally stoked.

Glad you are enjoying it. This was my first ever story that I wrote.

Take care

 

Yvonne

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Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Damn, this had me on the edge of my seat! Poor Edward, I hope nothing awful happens to him. You know, this would make an awesome movie, I'd be glued to the screen!



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Over the moon that you are enjoying it. OH WOW for the movie reference - thank you so much. You'll have to read on to find out about Edward, suffice as to say - it ain't all roses.

Take care

 

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Wlho's Your Daddy

Good grief! What a place to leave it! I wish I could keep reading. That was a heck of a twist to find out that Marcus is Edward's father. Poor Edward, I was grinding my teeth reading about how they hurt him. Jasper must be internally tearing his hair out. I hope they can get him out safely. So loving this story! :)



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Absolutely thrilled you are reading this. Yes Jasper is tearing his hair out. I loves me a bit of manly Carlisle too in this. It ain't over yet, not by a long shot. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Take care

 

Yvonne

 

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - We're Coming

OMFG!  I swear I chewed some nails off reading that chapter. Just as I thought he was safe and Jasper got him out, you shot him! Thank God he's going to be ok, but it sounds like a long recovery from all the injuries and loss of part of his liver. Awesome chapter - I love when a story has me so gripped!



Author's Response:

Hey Sarah

HEHEHEHE - yep, couldn't resist that one. Gotta throw in a few curved balls here and there. Glad I have you on the edge of your seat.

thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Take care

 

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Our First Time

Wow, wow and WOW!  I loved the flashback to their first time, you sure write a steaming hot and detailed lemon. I LOVED it, beautifully written.

And now Ed is awake and I bet Jasper isn't going to leave his side for some time. Can't wait to read more.

Sarah



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Many thanks for the compliments, they mean a lot.

You are right, Jasper won't leave his side.

Glad you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Take care

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Aftermath

Jasper's being amazing and I wouldn't expect anything less. I wasn't really surprised either to hear that Edward blamed himself and feels that his bloodline makes him a bad person. Awww.

The part where Edward remembered Jasper whispering and breathing life into him was so touching I had tears in my eyes.

So good to hear that Carlisle and Esme support them being together too. Now Edward just needs to get well enough to be able to take care of the blue balls!



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Yes, Carlisle and Esme were never in any doubt, re their support. They want their boys happy.

Sorry about the tissue moment - warning, don't think it's the last either. Jasper is Edwards absolutely granite rock.

Blue balls will be an issue, but lemons are on the horizon.

Emmet in the interim, gives some comic relief.

Take care

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 15 May 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Let's Take You Home

Aww, so proud of Edward in this chapter - having the talk with Esme and Carlisle and then facing Marcus too. All of that must have been very hard for im; it's no wonder he has panic attacks. Can't wait for him to get home now and have some alone time with Jasper!

Emmett was hilarious in the way he diffused the situation when the Pack were in the hospital - I expected nothing less from him.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Always a pleasure to read your views.

Emmett bless him is a sweetie, he see's more than he lets on. More fun to come from him.

The worst is over for the boys - I see citrus and fun in their future.

Take care

Yvonne

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 15 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Karaoke Confessions

Oh, I loved this chapter! Carlisle and Esme so supportive of them and Jasper's proposal brought a lump to my throat. Their love-making after was so perfect and hot.

Loved the karaoke too, Edward's song choice was perfect. I liked the way they told the pack, I had wondered if Emmett in particular had guessed something was between them. I'm glad nobody was completely horrified by their revelation and Leah and Alice get to stop hiding too! Great chapter all round and now I can't wait for the wedding, although I'm going to be sad to come to the end.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Over the moon you love this story so much.

More fun to come in the last chapter. They deal with a thorn in the side.

Take care

Yvonne

 

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Striptease and Wedding Bells

Awww, loved the ending but I'm sad to see it come to an end, so I was glad to read the notes and find out there's more.

Emmett as usual, was hilarious in this chapter, I just love him to bits. I'm glad they chose him for best man.

Edward's striptease - holy hell! I'm not surprised it drove Jasper wild - lucky boy - and the Christening of the kitchen counter later was HOT!  I really shouldn't keep reading these things at work, hahha.

The wedding was beautiful; their vows were so touching.

Loved the story and I can't wait to see what's next for the boys!



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

OMG you're reading them at work. AWWWWWWWW.

Glad you enjoyed their journey.

What's next for the boys - a lotta lovin.

Take care

Yvonne

Summary:

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At the end of story Hostage, NYPD SWAT boys Edward and Jasper married. This is their Honeymoon.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Hostage
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17871 Read Count: 5380
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Aww the start of this chapter was so sweet and now they have another great place to play in - I can't wait to see what they're going to get up to in that jacuzzi!



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

OHHHHHH they will get up to plenty in the jacuzzi. heheheheheh

enjoy

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Pool

Ooh, another hot one! I loved how they did it on the pool table, yummy! They're not going to want to go back to reality and work.

The messages from everybody were hysterical, especially the one that appeared to be from Esme on first reading, hahah.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

After all the angst of Hostage, I thought a good dose of Romance should be in order. No they really aren't going to want to go back to reality, especially when they find out what's waiting. OOps

Glad you liked the messages.

You really have been a busy bunny today - excellent. Thank you for reviewing them all.

Take care

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Another great chapter, those boys are so hot together and I will never learn - I'm reading at work again! Tut!

Their discussion was hilarious, especially when they started talking about female parts. I'm all for laughing at myself too :)



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Naughty naughty. Reading at work. If I had two hot guys before me, I probably would too.

Glad you are enjoying the fluff and their observations.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Yvonne

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

I loved the picture and mirror idea - and the sexathon, obviously! They certainly were creative and the session after the 'ring of fire' was steaming!

But what a place to end! Damn! Now I can't wait to get to the next installment.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

HEHEHEHHEEHEHH - sorry about that. 2 chapters of the next installment have been written. Just got to work out the finer details of the story. Let's just say Jasper goes into protective mode.

Over the moon that you have enjoyed their story. 

Take care 

Yvonne

 

 

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Hike

Loved this chapter! The way they dealt with the offensive Teletubbies was hilarious and I can't wait to see what everyone thinks of the t-shirts.

And of course the scene in the jacuzzi was HOT! I'd been looking forward to reading that part; it was obvious they were going to have some fun in it.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Oh yeah, they are some horney boys. Who can resist fun in a jacuzzi.

Glad you liked the way they dealt with the Teletubbies, it will teach the baddies not to have pre-conceived ideas about people. Let's face it, they were plain nasty.

More fun to come.

Take care

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

So glad to still have more of their story to read! I forgot to comment at the end of Hostage how hilarious Tanya was when she discovered they were married. I'm sure it's going to take her some time to live down!

So envious of their honeymoon destination, it sounds perfect! The wrestling for which one got to do the carrying over the threshold was funny and that image of Edward under the showere...yummy! 



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Oh Definitely. Tanya was a loose end that needed dealing with. Alice will make sure she is not forgotten.

Glad you like their honeymoon destination. I couldn't make up my mind between the two, so decided to have both.

I see many more lemons in their future.

This story is all Romance.

Enjoy

Yvonne