Great story!  I was a little concerned about the title, but I love Bella/Jasper so I checked it out.  I was relieved that Jasper was not the bad guy.  Loved all of the sweet relationships between the couples and the powers that so many of them had.  They had so many forces against them but overcame them all.  Great job!

So..that was fast, but they are so attracted to each other that I guess they couldn't help themselves.  He planned such a sweet, romantic date.  It must have shown her that he is really interested in her.  I love his inner monologue.

This chapter was action packed..sexting, phone sex, couch sex, and a trip to the playroom.  Wow!  I love the way he is slowly teaching her to be a submissive.  He gave her a great introduction in the playroom.  Also, liked that he was given an opportunity with another girl and turned it down.  It let your readers know where his head is about their relationship.

Ember is such a wild little thing coming from a plug and paddle.  The drive in activity was right up her alley.  He is really stepping out of his comfort zone for her and finding it to be so much fun.  She is really good for him.  Now if we could just get him to admit it...

Ember is so fun, even pushing her limits with dinner.  Her outfit is so cute and sexy at the same time.  I am glad that she was able to go to the party and get exposure to some different types of BDSM.  

I loved her response to their time in the playroom.  She is really embracing her role and so disappointed to upset him.  I must agree with her response to him calling her like a dog though.  I have never liked the degradation aspect.  

I am getting concerned about Reese.  He is a little too interested in Ember for Levi's taste.

This was a tough chapter.  I don't really understand such a strong reaction to her being touched esp since it wasn't in a sexual way.  Is there some kind of problem in his past with being cheated on or with Reese specifically?

I suppose many couples in this type of relationship hit a bump or two along the way esp with one being new to the lifestyle.  I am surprised it was the experienced one that messed up so badly.  Hopefully Olivia will be able to help her as I doubt Levi will be a comfort to her now.

It is interesting that it all came back to him in his dreams.  I agree with part of what he said about it being a beating and think that each stroke after nine, when she safe worded, up to twenty-three were a beating.  Plus the original 10 for wearing the panties seems like too much, based on previous punishments (esp with a cane).  He just lost control.  It makes you wonder if this happens more frequently given the turn of events.

I am really disappointed in how he is handling the aftermath.  Getting so drunk that he isn't going to work for a week and a half!  Really!?!  This is a very immature reaction to a very grown up problem.  I hope that he doesn't lose his job on top of losing his girl. 

Great chapter.  They really communicated and cleared the air on a few things.  He is correct on the way he handled the love side of the relationship.  She said that she has never been in love.  Has he?  My guess would be that he hasn't.  

The final scene in the coffee ship when she pressed their foreheads together and closed her eyes was so moving.  It shows that she still loves him and that there is still hope for them.

How did her parents go from arriving after ten to arriving at eight-thirty?  They got so busted.  Her parents are awesome.  I can't believe her dad was so laidback about it.  She is the baby of the family after all.

I liked the scene with them cooking together.  He is so capable all the time so the apple cutting was hilarious!  I loved the line about fairy tales and him saying that he needs her like a drug.  I love the way he refers to her body opening up to him like a flower.  He seems almost in awe of her sometimes, and it's sweet.

The lemon was hot.  That girl is so mischievous little thing!

Black Friday at Wal-Mart.  I have been there, so I could relate.  Her dad was hilarious, like a kid almost.  I liked that they ran into one of Levi's co-workers.  It was nice to have his professional life and his personal life meet up to see how he would handle it.

The Skype session was hot and a good practice run for later.  I am glad that it went well and that she told him that she needed her Master.  It is good that she recognized it and voiced it.  He probably needed that encouragement.

Loved it!  Wow, those two are so stubborn.  I am so glad that Emmett finally decided to tell her how he felt and stopped her from running away from him.  I am also glad that he stepped in and stopped her from going in the alley with Paul.  Based on her reaction later, she definitely would have regretted it, and he may have used it against her with Jacob and Seth.

I love the Emmett/Bella pairing, and this one is great since they already know each other so well as friends.  Great job!