I just want more every time I read the new chapter! I can honestly say that for this being your first story it's so good and I'm so hooked! Can't wait for more! 

All we know is that ots doctor Cullen like it could be Edward or Carlisle we don't know! Plus she didnt exactly describe him and why would Edward if he was married sleep with some random girl in Vegas unless he was celebrating his divorce from the skank which could be anyone from Tanya to Irina to Kate or Lauren like we don't know anything really! Which is annoying to be honest but I will have to be patient and wait and see how the story unfolds.

God I love this story so much! Probably one of my favorite mafia Edward stories! Like every week I eagerly await for the next chapter not to mention that the Edward in this story is so sexy and hot I absolutely love him! Can't wait for the next update!

God I just love this story so much! Every chapter has me falling more and more in love with the characters and the plot itself! Of course I wish the updates were faster and more often but at the same time that would mean shorter chapters and I love a good long chapter that I can read and tide myself over with until the next update! Anyway loved the chapter and can't wait for the next update! I can guarentee that the photos of Edward's so called affair are some ploy from Jacob and Charlie and maybe even Sue and Leah to drive Bella to doubt Edward and his love for her! So can't wait for a baby Masen to come! I want one so bad! But I don't see that happening for a little while until everything is settled down! Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds! I am definitely curious to know who the blonde is with Edward in Russia. Probably Tanya. But I seriously doubt Edward would ever cheat on Bella. No he loves her too much!

Absolutely loved the chapter! I love how Bella already feels get connection with Edward and that they both care for one another! Hope you update soon! 

Honestly Alice is so pushy and thats what I always hate about her character and how it always seems to be about her and what she wants or what she feels is right. It wouldn't surpise me that she pushed Edward to take back Angela because she feels they have a connection or something or that Angela wouldn't lie to Edward like Bella supposedly does with Ethan later on in the chapters even though we know that Ethan is Edward's. But it definitely showd on Edward that he isn't trust worthy or doesn't know Bella as well as he thought he did or that he relies too much on other people's opinions than what he thinks about the situation. Obviously when we reach the prologue it'll be interesting to see how he feels when he realizes he fucked up big time by not believing Bella. I doubt Bella will have moved on in those 18 months though but we shall see. Hopefully he doesn't marry skanky Angela or anything stupid like that. He's gonna feel like a major asshole though when he finds out Ethan is actually his.

So where is her piercing?  Is it on her back or what cause I'm not entirely understanding where it's located. But great first chapter! Can't wait for more!

Oh love it! Want more so bad! Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work! 

Oh loving this! Can't wait for more! Keep up the great work! 

Okay I'm gonna try and trust you on this whole Edward having a kid situation.  I mean it's totally possible that he adopted her or maybe she belonged to Emmett and Rosalie and they both died so he took Mallie in and raised her himself or she could be a foster kid or there is the chance that she is biologically Edward's and I'm kind of hoping she's not really Edward's daughter. Cause that means at some point he moved on from Bella and had another love which would break my heart and has already technically broken Bella's heart. I'm trusting you with my heart don't break it please. I feel bad for Bella though. I mean obviously we know she didn't want to leave Edward but she did, like a reverse New Moon, and now she is being forced back for some reason. I really want to know more about the past and what drove Bella to push Edward away and what Charlie is involved with and why Renee ran from him and what is forcing Bella back now and will Edward forgive her for what happened in the past and most importantly will Bella forgive herself for what she did in the past. Ugh so many unanswered questions that I'm dying to have answered! Seriously hoping though that Mallie really isn't Edward's daughter. Hope that doesn't make me a bad person...

Please tell me she actually killed him!? I will be so happy if she did cause he totally deserves it! I still can't believe that he forced her to marry him! She so better run as fast as she can and get Edward and get out!

Really enjoyed can't wait for the next update! Aside from a few spelling errors here and there this story is well written! 

Omg I'm in love! I feel like this story is going to be so amazing even if it's only around 10 chapters or so! I just took a whole semester of ASL or American Sign Language and I think it is so amazing that you guys are doing a story with Bella being deaf! Can't wait to read more!

I liked it but there were quite a few mistakes that I noticed and I know it happens but in all the other stories of yours I have read I never have seen you have this many mistakes. 

This is going to be a very long road to a HEA. I can say that only six chapters in and I am ready to throttle both Edward and Bella. Bella because she agreed to this ridiculous marriage and for not telling Edward that she wants a husband who will love her and not sleep with other women, whether they are married or courting/engaged! I want to throttle Edward because he thinks it's okay to sleep with other women when he is engaged or married to Bella, whether the marriage is fake or real, because he thinks that Bella is honestly going to be okay with him sleeping with other women, and because he is marrying Bella as a sort of revenge against his grandfather for sending him away! Ugh expect a lot of reviews of me ranting at these two characters for just being dumb, oblivious, and not just sitting down and talking with one another!

Awe yay they're finally communicating!! Thank God maybe now they'll actually talk and be the couple they want to be!