Bella was great fight back. I hope she can stay just as strong. She should go to college and study psycholgy and help victims of crime. As smart as she is she probably could earn a couple of degrees while she is there with her friends. She would also make a great doctor. Since she already read the books.

This is such a wonderful yet painful story. I have cried a bit in every chapter. She has told Emmett and hopefully she can open up to Edward.

Bella had a big day. She held Charlie's hand, hugged Renee and stood up to Jessica and Lauren. She is getting stronger. I am so glad that Edward is there for her. You can tell how much he loves her and she trusts him. Hopefully soon she can tell him everything and their love can grow.

I know the nightmares are horrible it causes Bella to get more of the story out, which will help her heal. I am glad that Edward was there to help her sleep after it though. She will be ready to face school if she has her 2 guys with her.

It must have killed Carlisle having to inflict pain on Bella for over 2 hours. Why would she not at least take a topical? Why does she want to go through more pain? She knows Carlisle would not hurt her on purpose yet she made him do it to help her heal. That was actually very crual of Bella.

I hope Bella listens and stops pitying herself and starts helping herself. She says she doesn't want people staring, well don't freak out on the floor. This causes people to stare. Bella would stare too. Bella is stubborn it is what allowed her to surrive. Now she has to use it to heal herself.

I am glad that Bella has Garrett on her side. I hope she can at least write to Edward and her friends.

I loved that part. Edward needed to see and love all of Bella. She needed to know Edward loved all of her. It was a beautiful scene.

You have got to love Angela. She seems to sense the scanks and calls them off. I am so glad that Garrett came clean with Bella. It was a little late, but at least she is healed enough that she could forgive.

I hope with this new evidence that these people never see the light of day again. I bet Edward was just thrilled to meet one of Bella's rapist. I bet he wanted to kill him as well. Bella, Edward and Garrett need to get to Brazil and do some more healing.

Bella is jumping back faster and stronger She really is doing much better. She forgets that everyone has setbacks. I can't wait until she hancles this Tia girl. This will help her get stronger and more confident.

I loved the pancake scene. I laughed so hard. We also had pancakes for breakfast, so when my husband asked me if I wanted pancakes I lost it. He thought I was crazy. I told him I would tell him later when there wasn't little ears.

The whole town has been changed by this man.

Author's Response:

Yes, they have.

This has been an amazing and emotional journey. Thanks.

Did they take Edward's and Bella's time so they couldn't get married? That was a funny twist.

That was a tough match. Bella should have won it though. I hope Edward did well.

Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Bella needs closure. She doesn't have to be close to them, but she has to tell them what is on her mind. Carlisle needs to respect her and Edward. They respect him and Esme's relationship.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Winning the fight doesn't matter as much as all of the other things they have gained.

How can it be time for an epilogue. There is still so much to cover. Are you getting bored with the story and just want to finish it quickyly?

I love how emotional Edward gets. He is so sweet.

Thank goodness. Bella could not handle much more stress of Edward not knowing her. Edward will probably always carry the guilt of this week in his heart. He loves her so much. He will not forgive himself for not remembering her even if he did have a head trauma.

Edward's mind was not on his work. I hope he just past out due to his arm pain and he doesn't have head trauma.

I just found your story and love it. I understand Bella freaking out when she could not find Leah, but she should have been relieved when she say her. Leah was holding Edward's hand and was happy. This should have been a clue to Bella that everything was alright. Leah freaked out at Seth's touch earlier in the day. She also should have noticed that Emmett a police officer was calm. Bella is going to give herself a heart attack if she doesn't calm down. Her anxiety is not going to help Leah at all.

Aro is such a jerk. Bella should just freelance. They can afford to do that and then they can have the flexible schedule for the baby and Edwards life.

I liked how  the case worked out. I can deal with Jacob being Bella's friend as long as he is not trying to break up Bella's and Edward's relationship.

Bella can't keep a secret. Rose asked her not to tell Edward and she ran home and told him about being asked to being a godfather. She talks about Edward not being trustworthy. Bella is a gossip and an eavesdropper. Edward was just really scared and had to work through some issues. He also received some very bad advice from her brother. Bella needs to realize that she is not perfect. Edward is not either. No one is and as soon as she realizes that their lives will be better. Edward should not have to worry that she might leave at any moment if he messes up.

Loved the chapter. I hope Tanya gets the help she needs and leaves Edward alone. Edward should propose to Bella at his house, that would make a good memory.

I loved the scene at the gravesite. I love how close Edward was with his Dad. It doesn't change when they die. You still talk to them they just answer you differently. Thyey answer in how you in dreams or a sense of wellbeing after a conversation. Edward and Jane will understand this more and more as time passes.

Is it the 2nd anniversary of when they met? It can't be the first since the baby is almost one. It sounds like a good date and a pretty time of the year in Boston.

Esme needs some therapy. She makes everyone suffer because she is not happy with her life. She needs to understand that she has to choose to be happy. She has all the ingredients for happiness. If her attitude doesn't change she won't  make it through cancer treatment. Being possitive is half of the battle.

I loved it. I can't believe Bella didn't have a baby right away. She should have thrown the birth control away the day of the wedding. I also can't believe she got so sucked into work. She was so worried about Edward and his career, which he gave up for his family. It is a good thing that she married such a wonderful man to take care of the children. He raised Charlotte most of the time from what it sounded like. I hope Bella slows down with the birth of Carlisle Samual. She needs to realize they don't stay little for long, but work is always there.

Edward is still the Edward we know and love. I love that aspect of your stories.

I love getting into Edward's head. It is more fascinating than Bella's. He loves Bella so much. It is amazing what he does for her.

I love being in Edward's head. I find it more interesting than Bella's.

I love that he was in the diner with the Swan family. Carlisle and Esme's reaction was priceless.

That was so funny. Charlie scares Edward. I am so glad he was honest. Charlie is like Emmett. They are both big teddy bears. They like to act tough.

It was nice to learn a little more about Sidney. He is a cool dude.

Edward should have told Bella about the meeting with Tanya before he went to bed. He knew pictures were taken. Men just don't think sometimes.

Emmett is such a nut. I love reading both sides.

Loved finding out what was really going on in Aspen when Bella wasn't there. Edward is so  wrapped. I love it.

Everytime I read about Edward's meltdown I want to cry. He loves her so much and does not want to mess up her life anymore. Grant you he was a little dumb in what he did but he did it out of love. It was not stupider than Bella acting like she did. She should have been angry and not acting like a victim again. If she didn't keep having these weak meltdowns maybe Edward wouldn't think his life was too hard for her to take. The Emmett and Rose need to stop babying her. She needs to grow up and fight for herself.

Bella is an embaressing drunk. It is good thing that Johnny was a good sport.  I love Edward's point of view.

I loved this Disneyland chapter. It is funny everytime. I am like Emmett and Alice. It is my favoirite place on earth except I go to Disney World.

Edward needed the little talk from Papa C. He should have said it years before and maybe he wouldn't have the reputation and the Tanya situation. Edward has been used by the Hollywood system, but he should have stopped it because it caused nothing but pain for his family. I am glad Papa C gave him his little pep talk. Dads need to do that every so olten.

I loved how Edward and Emmett fought for Bella's honor. Charlie finding out about Edward's sexual experiance is funny every time.

Author's Response:

Thanks.  poor Edward...the his embarassment never seems to end. 

Edward is so patient with Bella. He chastizes himself when he gets aroused, but he is so amazing. I hope Bella gets over her inhibitions soon. She has to know Edward loves her and would never hurt her. She has to trust him. It is time to get over her past if she wants to grow and have a normal adult future.

I love reading Edward's view. It fills in the blanks and is sometimes better the second time around. I think I liked this chapter best in his view. You could just feel all of his love and his anxiety waiting for the big moment.

The press can be so cruel to people. Edward did not deserve to be treated like bad. I never understood the presses need to out people. Who cares if people are gay or not and if they are it is their news to tell when they are ready. Edward made some mistakes in his youth, but who doesn't.

I am with Edward. I could have done without the jock talk about dicks. No wonder guys are clueless about their friends. They don't really talk to them about anything important. I would have hated to be sitting next to them in the restaurant. They were probably very loud.

I love the part with Edward taking care of Bella's creepy guy at work. He did it with a lot of class.

Poor Edward. He just needed tiime to think. He wasn't pushing her away. He was needed to think how to fix this mess. Everyone at some point needs some alone time to think. Bella needs to respect that idea. Not everyone is clingy like she is when they are in trouble. Edward has been a loner. He will gi to her when he is done thinking things through. Then they will talk and plan. It is just a different way to deal with stress.