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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.
Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?
Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad
I am glad that Edward's friends know now. I just hate how they found out. I would love Bella to train Rose, since a Dom starts out as a Sub. Rose needs her arse beat and Bella could beat some attitude out of her.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty One- Dante's Infereno
Edward's family is crazy. I think Edward needs to tell Emmett and Rose that they need to get their own place. They can't live off his parents. His parents are now in the knew. He doesn't have to hide anymore. It is time Emmett and Rose, who is a bitch, gets out of his place.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Four - Chutzpah
Bella just needs to get another loan. She doesn't need to be indept to Aro for anything. She has a good job and I am sure she has the books for the the Dungeon to show it is profitable. Edward might have to go to his parents if they can't get a loan at a bank, but they have to get out from under Aro.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty Six - Plan B
I think Bella should marry Edward. They don't have to marry right this minute, but they could get engaged and marry when he graduates. This will show everyone that they belong to each other in all ways. Bella can dominate in the home, but Edward should be able to show society that they are a married couple.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Seven Auld Lang Syne
Angela is such a brat. Bella really needs to write her off. She will come crawling back when she grows up. Until that time, Bella needs to stop wasting energy on her. She needs it for Edward's and her relationship.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning
Bella is lying. She just wants to hurt Edward like she is hurting. She has been hurt so many times in her life that she can't trust anyone. She is scared to love or be loved. She is a fool. I feel so bad for Edward. He deserves so much more than what Bella has to offer, but his heart loves Bella. I hope she gets her head together before it is too late. Bella can be so cruel. I find that to be true with Dommes. They are so much crueller than Doms. They have usually have been hurt sometime in their past and take it out on their subs.
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-One - What Comes Around
I am glad she fixed her mess. I think she is being so cruel to Edward's heart. She is a very bitter person. She needs to open up and allow herself to be happy and loved.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Epilogue
I am so happy that they finally got their happy ending.
Author's Response:
I made good with my word ;)) Thanks for reading, doll!! *mwah*
~K
A series of outtakes from my story Homecoming.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8352 Read Count: 2722
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I love their plan. Who would have though Dr Carlisle Cullen would be so resourceful? I always loved him.
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I think that was a great first session. I like how he asks her to be honest with him about the rules and he listens to what she says. It is not just punishment it is I am that you stopped your self. He realizes that it will take time to get accustom to the changes and rules.
Author's Response:
Yes, he has his rules and he will enforce them but he doesn't want her to fear him, he wants her to respect him...I'm giving away a small ammount of the next chapter, and what Edward thinks...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment ...lml
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96
I think the photo shoot sounded like fun. The pictures would probably be great. Edward and Bella respond so magically to each other. I can't believe Alice would go off like that to Edward. I also can't believe Edward let it continue. I hope Bella did not hear it. She will be so hurt. It would crush her. Esme should not be talking about a wedding that is not hers to plan. It is not even on the calendar yet. Edward better go talk to his mother and let her know that it is not her wedding to plan. Esme will overwelm Bella when they announce the engagement and Esme tells her that she has the wedding all planned already.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I think Edward was fair with Bella about the weight issue. Bella does not think about herself. If it wasn't for Edward's rules she would not be eating right. This is just another example. He gave her a warning. She even told Edward the weight limit again and said she could follow this rule. Bella just doesn't think of the big picture. She just was thinking of the now. I want to be done. I hope she has learned her lesson.
Leah is getting on my nerves. She gets mad at Bella for missing yoga, but Leah keeps changing the times to fit her schedule. Bella should not have to adjust her life to fit into Leah's life. Leah needs to spend time with the Cullens. These people are part of Bella's life. She should do it because they love Bella. Leah says she does as well. Sometimes it is hard to tell.
Author's Response:
It's almost like Leah wants to be her Master....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml
Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked.
Bastard!
I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”
“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.
“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.
“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”
“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark.
Oh Shit
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
This was a very stressful chapter for them. I agree with Bella they need to check out Heather. She was acting strange at the walk. The officer was also very rude to them. I wonder was it because of the playroom and the open case.
I also read Virgins and Villian, but on this site. I also read Edward's Pov, which is also on this site. You should check it out as well.
Author's Response:
I have read EPOV...I like it, but I like V&V better, I think becasue it has more Emmett in and he is a hoot ,,,lol,,,,Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”
“Don’t say that!”
I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”
Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”
Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”
“No…” why the hell would I think that?
“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
Edward needed to bring Bella back into submission. She was getting to cocky. Edward has a harder time punishing Bella for misbehaving because of her background. He tries to be firm, but understanding. Bella takes advantage of Edward's sweet nature. Bella could use a good paddling, but Edward can't do that because of her background. He is going to have to be tough of her and keep her in full mode more often. It will keep her centered.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
I thought this chapter was great. I am glad that the girls were there for Bella. She needs girlfriends as well. I still think the whole banana thing is so funny. The boys can't see their sister doing what they love their women doing to them. You would think they would want that for their best friend Jasper.
Author's Response:
Do you think?...lol...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml
The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.
“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on.
Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”
She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”
Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”
Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I like this story. I think Edward was a little shocked that she lived so close and he never saw her. Yet now they keep running into each other. That is kind of weird.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
This was a great chapter. It was nice for them to have a normal day. They learned quite a bit from each other today.
Author's Response:
They needed a normal day after the week they had, I was exhausted for them ...lol ....Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml
Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.
“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.
“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.
“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.
“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Those people are just rude. Bella and Edward have a different relationship than just Dom and Sub. Edward loves her and that is all that matters.
Author's Response:
Yes they do have more then the ...usual,,thanks for reading and leaving a comment ...lml
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
That was so funny. I can't believe neither one of them heard the phone. I guess Leah and Jacob will learn not to barge into Bella's house anymore. I can't wait for more, I love this story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review...lml
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I love his playfulness in this story. Edward is so patient and loving to Bella. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a review, here’s a teaser for you…lml
“What are you thinking about?” I turned to face his voice; he was sitting in one of the chairs, watching me. His face was relaxed but he had an intense look in his eyes. I released the lip I didn’t realize I was biting “I was just imagining being restrained and blindfolded”
He didn’t say anything at first, he just shifted in the chair, before asking “What was happening to you?”
“Mmm...”I hummed “....nameless, faceless people were sitting in those chairs, watching me struggle not to cum.” I blushed with the last word.
“Ahhh... and that would be something you would enjoy?”
I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, I didn’t realize before but the room had a smell of Jasmine and Lavender. “Yes...I think I would enjoy that very much.”
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
They are so cute together. I love how they make playful comments to each other. They seem like they will make a fun couple in and out of the playroom.
Author's Response:
Thanks, i want them to have a dynamic relationship, not just sex. But hugging, kissing and teasing. So they can laugh with each other, beacuse sooner or later the tears are going to come, and they are going to have to be strong. Anyway, thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I thought Edward was perfect and it is a good thing he is because Bella has so many insecurities and hangups to get over. Edward is going to have to be very patient. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review… here’s a teaser for you…lml
After checking the front door - out of habit - and closing the blinds in the living room, we were back in my room, naked sitting on the bed talking. He asked about birth control.
“I’m not on anything. There was no reason for it.” Edward tilted his head to the side. “I figure you weren’t unless you had some medical condition. I mean you haven’t had sex in what...How many years?” He grinned mischievously.
“I’ve had sex.” I stated mater-of-factly. His face was full of confusion “But you said you haven’t been with a man in a long time.”
“I haven’t” His eyebrows raised “A woman?”
“No!” Now he was really confused, he looked around the room, eyeing my night stand. “Oh...self-induced sex. What do you have in here Isabella?” His hand was heading for said night stand.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I know how Bella feels. When you meet the right person all is right in the world.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I am so happy that Edward is fitting in with Bella's family. That is important for their relationship. Edward was kind of mean to leave her so frustated, but it will be worth it tomorrow. Will Edward find release tonight?
Author's Response:
Edward can do what he wants, no one to answer to...lol
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment…here’s a teaser for you…lml
“Hello.”
“Hello to you how is your day?” Alice was loading the dishwasher.
“Good, I had my last class today, and now I am at your sisters.” Alice looked up “Hello Edward, I stole your girrrllfriend.” she yelled stretching out the girl. He chuckled, but didn’t reply to her comment.
“Good, I’m glad you’re having a nice day. Did you sleep well?” I could hear the amusement in his voice, and I narrowed my eyes speaking softly “Once I got to sleep, I did”
“Why couldn’t you sleep?” I could feel the heat in my face from the blush “Because somebody was being mean.” He chuckled. I looked at Alice; she smiled and winked at me.
“Well if it’s any consolation, I’m sorry I was mean.”
“Liar!” He laughed “Ah, my Bella, you know me already.”
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Bella seems to like getting into trouble with Edward. James is just an animal. I am amazed that Bella survived such a horrible marriage. I still can't believe she married him after he did that to her.
Author's Response:
she was young and dumb. With no mother to guide her and she didn't know any better. What differance did it make to her if it was James or anyone else. She thought that's the way it happened. anyway that's why I think she married him...
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...
Here's a teaser for you...lml
“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled
“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me
“Um, you know about what time” the other end of the phone was completly quiet.
“Edward you still there?”
“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.
“I could just guess.”
“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.
“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.
“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.
“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”
he thought it was love. She never saw two people in love. Parents divorced, Charlie kept Sue in the background so as not to give Bella the wrong impression.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I thought this was a wonderful chapter. I liked that it is locked with a special key. Bella needs to relax about the journal. She is allowed to write anything as long as it is not rude without punishment.
Author's Response:
She is, but she doesn't know that... Thanks for leaving a comment and reading my little story...lml
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I thought the chapter was good. I felt bad for both of them because they both wanted it to go perfectly. Edward pushed her and he did that on purpose. I understand why Bella did not feel comfortable infront of Emmett, but she better get use to it. She won't be wearing much when they go to the club. Being an exhibitionist is part of the life style, if you leave your house.
Author's Response:
Yes, she better get use to it.
Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you.. lml
Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.
“Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”
“Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.
“Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”
I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.
“Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.
“Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
What a great chapter. Bella did so good. She did well remembering the rules.
Author's Response:
She was glad Rose reminded her, and Edward made sure she had confidence in herself..She freaked out a little, but pulled it together with Edward's help... Thanks for the comment ...lml
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I am so glad that Bella got Emmett. He deserved it for haressing her all the time. Bella is going to have to speak up and say what she wants. Edward will not let her hide. She is bolder when she is around people than when it is just the 2 of them.
Author's Response:
I think there is safety in numbers and yes Emmett deserved it..lol
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment ...BTW had the men lost they would have sang, "You Lost That Lov'n Feeling' and I have a teaser for you ..lml
I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward
“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.
It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.
“What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”
“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”
I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.
“Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Bella needs to remember her food and rest rules. She is not keeping up with them. Edward has been easy on her. She will have a lot to confess. She always wants to talk her way out of the rules she broke.
Author's Response:
Your right and you know what they say --- Don't do the crime if you can't do the time ---
Because it's thursday i do have a teaser for you...thanks for the comment...lmlx8
I listened to what he said and then a thought occured to me. “You know what I think?”
He raised his eyebrows, “No I don’t, but I would love to hear it.”
“I think you are wrong…” Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned, but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.”
Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.
“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.”
Edward nodded, “You’re right I was. Aro doesn’t give them out.”
I went on with my theory while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom. “Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week you and I got together, and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now, in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright, but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you.”
“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?”
I nodded.
“And it’s working.”
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
For a night that started out so horrible, it ended out so wonderful. They were finally honest with their feelings for each other. I now hope Bella tells Edward everything. I hope his declaration of love gives her the strength to tell all.
Author's Response:
Well I don't know that Edward could handle it if she told him everything all at once...I think it might freak him out...hmmm I guess we will see. Like I said my story is a slow boil and time will tell all...thanks for the comment ...lml
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Diamond in the Rough
I am so proud of Edward for being tough on Bella. She needed it. She has been following her own own rules instead of his since the very beginning. He has been a little afraid of punishment because of her past. She needs to know that he makes the rules and she agreed to live by them. He turning her phone off was so selfish. It had nothing to do with their arrangement and has to do with their relationship. You do not cause the person you love to worry about you like that. Leah and Jacob were probably going crazy as well. She needs to think of the big picture.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I knew Edward was tore up by having to punish Bella. He had to do it though. Bella is so stubborn that she forgets about her own safety. She still does not always think she is worthy. Hopefully she will start eating and sleeping better. The phone thing is a no brainer. My kids know better than to not have their phones charged and available.
Author's Response:
I tell my kids all the time "why am i paying for a phone, if i can't reach you '...thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml
Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”
“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.
“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”
“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I am glad that Bella got to talk to Jane. She gave Bella some good insight. If I was Bella, I would be taking some long baths and making sure Edward was seeing me eat meals and healthy snacks. Whatever it took to get back to have loving from that wonderful man again. His rules are very easy to follow and Bella was a fool not to follow them.
Author's Response:
me too, I would be soaking my foot every chance I get, and rubbing it over the carpet for the friction to wear it off...lol
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I never lost faith in Edward. He is a man of his word. Bella messed up and had to be punished. She did her part and improved and the punishment went away. Edward loves Bella. He does what he has to to help her grow and take care of herself. Bella doesn't take care of herself.
Author's Response:
Now she is waiting for the next punishment to go away....lml
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
With the temper that Bella has it still amazes me that she allowed some one to abuse her. She seems to stubborn and feisty for that . Edward is so good to Bella. He tries to be fair. I hope she can remember all of these changes.
Author's Response:
The changes are subtle. Bella has a temper but she also has that submissive nature ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml
While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.
“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.
“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”
“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”
I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.
“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.
“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I think the bathroom thing is trivial. It is just to keep her mind in the right place. I think Bella needs to tell him the truth. It is funny. I would not lie to Edward and risk a punishment over something that stupid. Alice and Rosalie will embaress her sometime this weekend so who cares.
Author's Response:
The bathroom thing to me was basic, and nothing to red over ...Bella won't lie, first she doesn't have it in her and what was one of Edward's main problems with Tanya? She lied,,,he hates that...so ok ..see you thursday, thanks for the comments...lml
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I was in Washington and Oregon in September and it is beautiful. I thought they had a great weekend. Bella was so worried and I think she did great. I hope Rose is ok. She seemed so sad on Sunday.
Author's Response:
Rose was sad and Bella did great and edward is proud of her ...We went to Alaska, Washington and Victoria,BC ...it is spectacular and I would love to go again...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml
When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.
“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.
“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her
“You do. Are you hungry?”
“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”
“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”
“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled.
“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear
“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”
“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I thought the conversation between Edward and Jake was needed. Jake has been Bella's protector and they needed to work out their differences so they can work together to protect Bella. Now they are a team. They are cool. Leah is another story. I hope it improves once she is not so hormonal. I understand the whole dressing thing. He had to change her mood from girlfriend to submissive in a short amount of time. It was no big deal. Bella did great at the party so far. I could not handle the caning either. It just seems worse than paddles and whips.
Author's Response:
She has a way to go with this pregnancy ...but her and Bella will be getting to the bottom of issues ...soon
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Something is wrong with you if Edward doesn't make your panties wet. Bella will have to tell Edward about this horrible dream. It will make her stronger to face this demon.
Author's Response:
If nothing else it will relieve some of the stress and give her piece of mind ,,,thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you,,,lml
After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my uneasiness. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.
Fucking great…
She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.
“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.
“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.
“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I am glad that Bella has realize that she has to deal with her psychological and emotional issues of her abuse. She is a psychologist or therapist of some sort is she not. She seems to try to help everyone else, but herself. Edward is only going to be so patient. Bella should have Edward as soon as she got to the center about the gym incident.
Author's Response:
Isn't that human nature to take care of others before you take care of yourself ... and it's like a doctor, they make the worse patients and they are always the last to seek help ...
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Bella has to trust Edward. She says she does, but she still doesn't totally or she would tell him all of her secrets. She would feel so free if she did.
Author's Response:
your right she should and in a perfect world she would. But she's kept it all locked away and she's afraid ....I have a teaser for you...lml
We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.
“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.
“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed
“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”
“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.
“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”
What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?
“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Bella has been holding a lot of pain in and it came out. She needs help. It will kill her if she doesn't forgive herself. Edward needs to convince her to see some one. She was so out of control today. It is lucky she did not hurt herself.
Author's Response:
Bella needed to get out all the emotions she had bottled up, along some knowing that she can depend on Edward. But I don;t think the storm is over yet ...lml
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Bella was being so selfish. Edward needed time to think through what he learned. It was a lot to take in. Bella should have talked to Edward when she woke up that evening. She should have talked about the pictures. Let him express his feeling about what he saw. Instead they both held it in and it festered. Bella wanted to pretend nothing changed.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I knew they would be fine. They just needed to work it out.
Author's Response:
I think that was a work out ...lol
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
I'm glad Edward is asking because I don't see anything good in James. Where was Charlie during the dating process? He wants to get in her business now as a grown woman. I don't understand Bella protecting James. She will say she isn't but she is by not telling the truth by what happened. Her dad is a cop. He can be a cop to everyone but her. But guess what, it is time daddy grew up and faced facts that he allowed a horrible criminal beat up in daughter in his town. Bella should have been honest in the beginning and now she has dug such a deep hole can she ever get out. Does she want to always to live 2 lives?
Author's Response:
I understand what you are saying and all I can tell you is that it is very scary and humilating to the victim when they press charges. Bella has seen how the judicial system works. the way a lawyer can turn things around to make it appear like the victim somehow asked for the abuse. She doesn't want to live 2 lives...but she also doesn't want to relive the live she had before by being forced to tell all the nasty things that were done to her....thanks for reding
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
I always end up with several copies. I get the Walmart and the Target blueray dvd special. You can never have too many copies.
I think Bella is doing better, but I think she needs to have some therapy. These issues from her past keep coming up because she doesn't want to face them.then the tension builds up inside of her and she explodes.
Author's Response:
Me too...I was at Boarders at midnight then picked up Targets at 7am ....therapy? I could discuss that with you for a while, personally I think she could too..Bella has already been through years of therapy and anti-depressants. She is coming to terms with all these feelings and memories becasue of the relationship she is in with Edward. Her submission is deeply embedded in her psyche and she has to get all the other stuff out of the way to fully access it...I wanted to show how Edward talking her deeper into her submissive nature iswhat brings about the blossoming of who she truely is....( does that make sense?) Anyway that is why I'm not having her go to see a professional...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml
A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.
The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.
A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”
I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”
“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I like when they can be playful without any trouble. They have had enough trouble for awhile. They need time just to enjoy each other.
Author's Response:
Yes I would agree... however I think tey need to understand each other and what is important ....thanks for reading, here is your teaser...
Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.
“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.
“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish
“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”
“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment
“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
Maybe it is just me, but I do not know what happened during their usual. I can't get a visual. But I guess it was it was a good thing.
Author's Response:
you make me blush...lol ... Edward will tell you what happened and why Bella reacted in that way...in the mean time just know that it was a good thing and Bella enjoyed it.thanks for reading, here is your teaser...
Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.
“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.
“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish
“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”
“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment
“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”
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Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
That mouse thing is so gross. Especially since Fraternities are not suppose to haze. It is against all Greek charters. They could loose theirs. They boys just have to say no and they can't do anything against he pledge, but the pledges usually don't know this. Luckily my kids will when they go to university. It helps when you are a legacy.
I wonder who would break into Edward's house. It is a good thing he got the alarm system.
Author's Response:
That wasn't hazing, that was drunkin stupidness...lol... and gross.... thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....
“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.
“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.
“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed
“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.
“You talked to Charlie?”
“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.
“What did he want?”
As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”
“And?” I knew there had to be more
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Edward is going to laugh and maybe kill his dad when he gets the joke. I don't think Edward really likes being the butt of jokes very well. I wonder how Bella will tell him.
Author's Response:
Actually Bella was the butt of the joke, and Edward has a great sense of humor... soooo... I guess you will see....
Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.
“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.
“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.
“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”
“My Officer Hawk?”
He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.
“I could have Charlie do it.
Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92
I am proud that Bella finally admitted outloud that James raped her. It was a very important moment. It took her a long time to get there, but at least she got there. I loved how all the men in her lif circled around her not giving her any chance to escape. She is under their watch and control until further notice. She can't try anything because they will gang up on her. Edward feels so guilty for letting Bella drive. He knew better and he let her persuade him against his better judgement. Then when Bella said use me, it almost killed Edward. He doesn't want to be like James who used his anger on her. He loves her to much to do that no matter how frustrated and angry he is about the situration. Bella only gets his love.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Don't let people bug you. You can write as many chapters as you want and I will read them. I love this story and I will hate when it ends. I look forward to it every week.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...
“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.
“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”
I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”
“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.
Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.
“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.
“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
I am glad that Edward is smart enough not to trust Irina and Cauis. They have some angle. Cauis sent Irina for some reason. I bet Mike is also involved in the stealing at the club. He was mad that Edward wouln't give him the security information for the club. Edward will figure this out. Bella messed up again, but at least she accepted without arguement and did her punishment. She is doing better.
Author's Response:
She is doing much better...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml
Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”
I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”
His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”
“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face.
“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”
“Yes Sir”
“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.
“Tyler, how is the night going?”
“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”
Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”
Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Bella should just let Edward plan the weekends. When ever she tries to push her plans past what he has planned it doesn't work out the best for her. Edward wanted to be modified for the weekend. She didn't and she winds up on the end of a dog leash. Bella needs to remember he is in charge and to remember to write on the calendar.
Author's Response:
He wanted to be modifed but she spoke up before he could ... she did well and you will see her reaction to the leash in the next chapter ,,,,,
Thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you...
Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.
“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”
He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”
“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”
Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”
I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Did Edward ever find out how Jessica treated Bella in the bathroom? He needs to know the whole story. Did Emmett tell Edward that Mike was winking at Bella? He is still standing so I think not. So much drama occurred at the club. It is no wonder Bella does not like to go there.
Author's Response:
I don't know if he actuall seen Mike wink...yeah there are hundreds of people there and a few of them are causing problems, but isn't that hiw it always is... a few rotten apples ruin the whole bunch.....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml
“Are we going to talk about it?”
“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”
I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.
“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”
Was I mad at her?
I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”
Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”
The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.
My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
Bella and Edward should have grabbed a blanket and headed off into the woods. I could not stand a squeaky over soft bed, especially since their is no privacy there. I am glad that Edward has been accepted by Bella's extended family.
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Thank you for reading i have a small teaser for you....
After Bethany got everyone’s order Sue leaned over to talk to the table “You all look tired, what time did you go to bed last night?”
“What time did we go to bed or what time did we go to sleep?” Leah asked smugly raising her eyes in my direction.
“You couldn’t sleep?” Sue was concerned but Kim couldn’t resist “No there was a lot of yelling going on”
“Lots of yelling and banging” Emery added.
Before the conversation with Maggie Kim and Leah were teasing me in the restroom about how loud Edward and I were. So that meant that everyone else must have heard us too, which should have been evident by the laughter at the table. My face heated up as I tried to control my embarrassment while Edward just winked at me. Charlie on the other hand had no idea what was so funny came to his own conclusion. “I guess the kids on the beach must have been putting up quite a raucous if you heard it all the way back at the house”
Thank god Charlie is so oblivious
“Oh yeah it was a raucous alright, as a matter of fact there was two of them”
“Two?” Emery questioned looking at Kim “We must have missed the second one”
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
It was so nice seeing them playful at the end of the chapter. She might get some spanks but they won't be in punishment. They were having fun. They have been under so much stress for quite awhile. It was fun seeing the playful side.
Author's Response:
Being playful is part of being in love.. don't you think?....
Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment. I have a teaser for you....lml
Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.
“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”
Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”
“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.” I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention.
Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”
I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”
Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”
“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”
“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”
“Well I don’t know about carefree…”
Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
I am not sure about the dog collar abd leash. Her dress would not matter for that attire. That would be one of my hard limits. I am not into the subs as less than human mode. I am interested in these nipple bands. Where do you get these? I have looked for them. I love this story. Edward sure keeps Bella on her toes. Bella better keep sharp. Edward is a very smart Dom.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
I think since it is their first time there they should be just Edward and Bella. Bella is under enough stress about going there.
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I think that whatever is decided will be done with Bella's intrest involved ,,,thanks for leaving a commnet ...lml
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
It sounds like they had an awesome day. I might have to try that sometime. Edward migh want to move the bed away from the wall the next time. They should have remembered they were at a hotel and not at home. We all like to have fun and let go, but they are adults and should know better than to be rude to other guests who are also on vacation. I think hotels should have better insulation between rooms for this very reason. We pay enough for the rooms.
Author's Response:
Remmeber he saw them leaving and he thought they were gone for the night....
glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.
“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.
“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”
Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”
She shrugged “Someone had too”
I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.
The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Yes, Leah and Bella do have a lot to work out, but the phone works both ways. Bella would adjust her schedule for Leah. All she had to do was tell her when the classes were. Edward knows that family is important. He is not irrational Dom. All she has to do is put it on the calendar. Edward will work around it. Leah let this fester too much. Leah feels like she lost her best friend because Bella doesn't need her like she did before. Bella isn't weak like she was. This is a good thing, Leah is not use to seeing a strong Bella.
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Yes... that dang calendar ...lol...she better write it on there...lol...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.
“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.
Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”
“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”
“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I still can't believe Bella was stupid enough to marry some one who was abusive to her before they were married. He wasn't going to change. In the general scheme of things, Bella is very intelligent. She had people who loved her. She had choices in life. It makes no sense. Some one hit me once and that would be the end of it. I tell my kids the same thing. I can't believe Charlie did not tell Bella same.
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
I think Bella should get Seth fixed. He is going to have a lot of bad habits now that he knows that he is male. They were so stupid in mating him with his sister. They are going to have screwed up puppies. The AKC would not be happy. I am assuming Seth and the sister are mutt dogs, but you still don't inbreed, I hope Leah stops with snarky comments to Bella. Bella doesn't need Leah in her life if she can't be supportive of her life decisions.
I saw Water for Elephant's and loved it. I am reading the book now. I liked how they did the movie. It would have been confusing going back and forth in the time line.
Author's Response:
I think Bella will be getting Seth fixed ,,,,
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
It is a good thing that she has Edward and Jake. It seems that Bella can't take care of herself. She makes poor decisions and needs some one to help her be strong. Jake would have kept James away if she would have been truthful. Bella seemed to want to be a martyr and be abused. She could have stopped it and gotten away from him. She had plenty of support. She just had to choose to use it.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
Edward is probably going to kill her for showing off her breast. I think he told her that they were for his eyes only. I can't believe they sent her dog out on a bootie call without her permission. Edward has actually been very call around all of these boys. I can't believe it. I know he is working very hard to remain cool and not get over possessive of Bella. I know he is counting the minutes until he can leave and have Bella to himself.
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
I think the next 2 hours of the trip are going to very exciting. They need a little alone time. That is one thing I hate about visiting family. You are never truly alone.
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Yes that is the down side of going to a family member's house and sometimes when you go on vaction with them, they have a tendency to want to manopilize your time,,,,Thanks for reading and I have a small teaser for you...lml
“Stay still Isabella” I told her placing my hand on her knee letting my fingers glide softly up the inside of her thigh. “You are to speak freely and tell me about this morning”
Bella’s brow furrowed, I thought that meant she was confused as to what I was talking about so I prompted “At breakfast, you gave Claire a bite of food, something happened, tell me about it”
“This one doesn’t know what you mean”
Bella was over thinking she needed to let go of her inhibitions and tell me what was at the root of her reaction. My fingers drifted over her outer lips while I tried to coax the answer from her “Picture it in your head, the fork coming out of Claire’s mouth…”
“She did what your girl said”
“Yes she did and what did that do to you?’ I asked while my fingers became more insistent in their movements.
Bella whimpered opening her knees a little wider “It made your girl want to tell her to do something else”
“What would my girl have her do?”
She answered without thinking “She don’t know”
That might have been an honest answer, it’s not like Bella has had any training in being the top, hell she was just learning the roll of the bottom. But I wanted to make sure so my question became more direct. “Would you have Claire do something to you?”
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
I also think that Robert needs a better stylist. He is big time now and he needs to dress better. Especially since he is acting in serious movies now. I still love him the best. I just wish the people around him would take better care of him. I loved the chapter. I would never go to Bella for advise or have her for a class. She is so unsure of herself. How could she be a good when she can't take her own advice. She is stronger now because of Edward. She is definately a work in progress. I don't know where she would be without him.
Author's Response:
I know .. I mean "Come On..grean and brown plaid shirt,,, it looked like something my grandfather wore to work in the garden, all it needed was little white mother of pearl snaps ...lol....
Ok ... Now for Miss Bella...She is not unsure of herself, in fact she is the opposite. Bella knows herself so well that she is aware of her limitations and does not push herself to do something that she knows she is incapable of doing. She might be in a state of denial but at least it is a conscious denial, and that has to be a step in the right direction. In her spersonal life she is getting to where she wants to be, in her professional life she has already made it. Bella is a highly eduacated and intellagant woman who excells in her chossen feild. She faught hard to be able to reach where she is and it cost her dearly, yet she didn't give up. Her profession allows her to forget about herself and focus all of her attention on her work. It doesn't matter if that is at the center with a traumatized woman and children or teaching Psych 101 to College Freshman. It's the one place where she is on the top of her game and gives her all, no matter what. Where would she be without Edward? The same place she was, closed off, taking Leah's shit and selflessly devoting herself to others through her work..But you are right (personally) she is a work in progress...she's a diamond in the rough who needs to be cultivated and polished until she shines.....((ok enough about Bella))...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, until next time...lml
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 (1st half)
I think Edward was right. Everything that has to do with her submission goes through Edward first. She should not talk to Jane except for after asking permission from Edward. She needs to say, " I would like to talk to Jane about ---- would that be ok?" He gets to say who she talks to and where she goes. That is part of the submission. Edward is a very generous Dom and Bella has been taking advantage of it. Edward might have to tighten the rules.
Author's Response:
yes...you are right and Edward will be stressing that point very harshly in the next chapter.....thanks for reading...louise
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
Bella is getting brave about that caning. Edward introduced it very well, but that would still scared me to death. It sounds like it leaves very red and painful marks and he only did one full swing. It wasn't even for punishment. I don't think I could handle this impliment. More power to Bella for overcoming her fear of the cane. Edward has worked miracles with Bella. He is so patient with her.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
I think Edward should have answered his telephone. He can't get mad at Bella for not answering her phone if he doesn't. Same is true about how you act around the parents. We all want to look good to the in-laws. We want them to love us and since we aren't blood we work harder at it.
Author's Response:
OHHHHH....yeah, he can get mad at Bella for doing something that he doesn't...Theirs is a 'do as I say not as I do' relationship...Besides that at the time he was in the middle of sexing Bella up, now I don't know about you, but had my man stopped to answer the phone, i think I would have been pissed. Now I'm also going to take a chance and say that had Bella not been with him and he was say, talking with his dad or something like that, and Bella would have called, he would have answered without question....but his mother? in the middle of sex? No...that was going to wait...lol...at least I would hope so...lol....and your right about the in-laws, and because Bella doesn't really know them all that well, she kind of feels the same way Edward did in Forks...now Bella has an upper hand in that she knows Alice from school, Emmeett & Rose are close because of the lifestyle they live and Carlisle works with Bella at the Center, so she is comfortable around them...however I'm going out on a limb to say that the heart of any family is the wife/mother...so Bella really wants to keep the approval that she has recieved -so far- from Esme, and lets face it, no one wants their mother-in-law top think their a whore...lol...although Esme doesn't think that...ok enough rambling....thanks for reading,,, louise
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
You would think Bella would have learned after the first morning of vacation.Bella needs to learn to check and see if Edward's family is around before speaking. She also needs to dress if Edward is not in bed when she get wakes up in the morning. It must mean the family is around or he would be in bed with her.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
These kids see and hear way too much. It is amazing that the kids dont get in trouble more for in appropriate words or behavior. The adults need to be careful around the liitle ones. I love the openess, but I am careful around the kids.
Author's Response:
Esme is right, children hear enough garbage from other children...the school bus and playground is a breeding ground for information so it's hard to keep them innocent for long....but as a parent, that's what we try to do...thanks for reading ...lml
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
Bella needs to remember that there are many ways to have children. Edward has stated over and over that he want a future with her. He comes from a marrying family. She should not be surprized that he wants to marry. She is the one that has issues about family. Edward loves his family. She needs to realize that family is important to Edward. Bella has been talking to others instead of him first lately. She has also been in her own head a lot more lately. She hasn't been as forth coming. She is suppose to tell Edward everything and she hasn't been.
Author's Response:
And you have won the Golden Onion!!....beacsue you got it right...but I'll let Edward tell you in the next chapter, which shuld be up in a few days...thanks for reading...louise
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
I hope Bella has finally learned her lesson. Edward loves her so much. She needs to stop fight him.
Author's Response:
Bella needs to stop fighting herself...
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Even though the near future will be tough for Rose, I think it will help her heal if justice is served to her attacker. Bella needs the disapline and control that Edward gives her. Bella has never had it in her life. She knows Edward does everything out of love. Bella needs it to be strong.
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
I hope Bella puts James away for this crime. She wasn't brave enough for herself. Maybe she will be brave enough for all the other girls out there that might be his next victim. She now knows that there was already another one. There might be others. James is a preditor.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
I think Jess helped out Mike and Karen to get Bella out of the way to try and get Edward back. She is so jealous of Bella. It sounds like Karen is extremely unstable right now. I don't know what she wants from Bella, but it probably something she made up in her mind. Edward is going to have a very unhappy Bella. He may have to use some of those restraints in the playroom to keep her in the house. She can act so childish.
Author's Response:
He just might have restrain her...lol.. or use Cahrlie's suggestion and Duct Tape her to the house...lol...anyway i did post a small OT from Jes''s POV on the extra's page, so you can see moe of her motivation...thanks for reading...louise
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
Edward is going to get the spoiled brat out of Bella if it kills her. He has been so patient with her. It is about time that he tightens the rope some. He loves her so much, yet she doubts it all the time. She questions him when she knows she is suppose to trust him. He has never done anything to not have her trust. She wants to be a sub, it is time to act like it.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
Bella's biggest problem is she is stubborn and is rather bratty. It was the same with her marriage. If she wasn't so stubborn she would have admitted she made a mistake in marrying James. She would have asked her family and friends for help in getting away from him before she was beat to near death. With Edward, she was so stubborn she kept the ordeal going. She knew she was sore. She would not say yellow or red. Edward would not be upset with her. He wanted her to say it, but she wouldn't show weakness. They have those words for a reason and Edward was pushing her to use them. Bella was being bratty wanting to get her way. Edward just wants her to let him take care of her. I hope she will learn this time. She keeps forgetting that Edward knows best.
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
I knew that experience was harder on Edward than it was on Bella. He loves her so much. He hates when he has to teach her a lesson, but it has to be done. I am so glad that Edward talked to Alice. I rea;;y don't know why they let her in the club. She is so rude toward the lifestyle. She just wants their money. She is rude toward the people who are her customers. She needs to change or they should not let her sell her wears at their club. It doesn't matter if she is family.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107
Amazing chapter. Edward would be a great mentor. He is a strong strict, but loving Dominant. He is looked up to by many in the community. He should be proud of this opportunity.
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
I can't believe this all comes down to Cauis wanting stock in a tv station. He is such a greedy man. Trying to ruin people's happiness over money is so low. I wish Bella would get Emmett really good for all the teasing and torture he does to her. Edward always stops her before she can get him back. I love Emmett, but sometimes he is like a rash. I love this story and I hope you just ignore the negative comments. When you start to read one, just hit delete. It is not worth your sanity to go any farther. You work to hard on this story. If they dont' like they don't have to read it. It love it and will miss it very much when it is over. It is the story I savor when I see there is an update.
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
This was an interesting chapter. I love getting into Edward's head. His mind is amazing, so much more interesting than Bella's.
Author's Response:
I agree - Edward looks at everything very analytical and i love getting inside his head and seeing what makes him tick ....
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
Bella can't be that dumb not to know that she is in danger of a crazy person. She was updated on the latest information and she knows how protective Edward is toward her. It was only a couple of days ago when that occurred. Even her dad told her she has to be careful. Also Bella is suppose to notify Edward of all of her plans before she makes them. He can say yes or no to any of her plans at any time. He is the Dom. I will be so sad when this story is over. I love this family.
Author's Response:
Not dumb...she's just being Bella, like Edward said in his OT...her focus is only on what is in front of her - so much so that she doesn't see what's coming at her from the sides...
She worries so much about others that she can't see the danger she is in...that's waht Edward does, he shows her the danger coming at her from the side and tries to pull her out of the way before she gets hit....yes she needs to put all the stuff on the calendar, but she hasn't yet becasue there were no concrete plans "WHEN; she was going to do that..she was just rattling off all the things she needed to get done for the week...and she has a lot to do ....anyway, thanks for reading and the comments and BTW Edward thanks you for understanding his side, there were only a few who did...most are so focused on Him trying to tell Bella what to do that they don't stop to think of why...he's making the request ...until next time...louise
Date: 07 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90
I have no problem with the lockdown. I think that Edward should have had this conversation with Bella in private. It did not need to be sprung on her in front of the whole family. That was inconsiderate of Edward. Then when he tried to use his Dom voice on her in front of everyone, it was too much. Being on lockdown is a major life change for Bella and it should not have been a family discussion. She felt cornered. If Edward wanted backup all he had to do was get Charlie on the phone. Bella would not fight him. Bella was mad, but she was also embarressed. She doesn't like to be the center of attention and once again Edward threw her private matters into a family discussion. If he approached her calmly in private, telling her how scared he was for her safetly, it would have gone over much better I think with Bella. She loves him so much and she would do anything for him. He just needs to ask her the right way. He doesn't need to manipulate her.
Date: 14 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
Bella might be an adult age wise, but she is not mentally an adult. She needs someone to take care of her. She makes stupid decisions starting with her first marriage, and ending with not realizing that this situation is dangerous. She is more worried about her dogs safety that her own. I would not blame Edward for chainging her in the playroom when he has to go somewhere. It was a good thing that Jacob was there and he called Charlie. Now Edward has backup. Bella has all the men in her life on high alert. She better stop being stupid and listen to them. No going anywhere by yourself.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
I think it is time for Bella to put on her big girl panties and tell the truth. If she doesn't how can she be respected at the center. She is knowingly letting a rapist run loose in society. He is hurting more than just her. If she trully wants to be free, she needs to be safe and the only way to be safe from James is for him to be in jail. Edward can only do so much. He is going crazy with worry. He can't keep 24 hour survalience on Bella for the rest of their lives. Bella says she doesn't want to be scared and she wants to be free again, well she has to prove it by doing the right thing. The only alternative is for Edward to lock Bella up and control all her movements for the rest of their lives or James live, which ever is shorter. This is not fair to Bella, but it is certainly not fair for Edward. He will be bald with worry. Bella needs to prove her love for Edward and show she truelly wants this to end and have her freedom.
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
I hope Bella wins. She deserves a few fruity pepples and Edward always has so much control in his life. He needs to loosen up a bit and loose control. Plus Fiber One is nasty. I think I would rather eat sticks. It would do Edward some good eating some Fruity Pepples as well. He is so stressed out right now, he needs some fun and carefree silliness.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97
Bella can't say anything negative about Peggy. Bella didn't fight for herself. Peggy left her abuser, went to a shelter, stayed the 12 weeks, and went to therapy. She reported her abuser. Yes, Peggy needs to be careful and make sure she is not alone for awhile, but she has to live her life. She has already started over and she is happy. She has dealt with her abuser. Bella has not. Bella has not fully faced James and the abuse he did to her. She has moved on in many ways, but she has to make James face up to what he did to be free. It still haunts her and always will, until she does the right thing. James is still walking around a free man. Bella can give advice, but she is not brave enough to do it. Alice needs a reality check. It is not hormones causing her to be a bitch. It is a life time of being spoiled. She just can't stand the fact that Bella has Edward's attention. She is also loved by the rest of the family. Bella is the new and exciting family member that everyone is talking about and Alice can't stand it. The family spoiled her and now they have to deal with her. Bella is such a doormat that she just excuses the behavior and says it is ok. I will just ignore it. Bella needs to stand up to her and tell her that she is hurting her feelings. Let Alice know she is being rude and she will not allow it in her home ( or Edward's if Alice makes a deal about whose home it is). She needs to put Alice in her place now or Bella will be walked over their whole relationship. Bella doesn't let Leah walk over her.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
I agree with Bella about the tampon and the bathroom situation. That is the last place of privacy for a woman. It is hard to get that with children, but it was one of the first things I taught my children. I did not want them to invade my privacy, but I also did not want them to think it was ok for other people to invade their privacy. It all goes back to you are incharge of your private parts. Between Edward and Bella, women just feel gross on our periods and we don't want to share that with anyone. We would stop that whole bleeding situation if we could. It is the biggest downfall of being a woman. It is the price we pay to have the privaledge to have children. I just with it would stop after we have the children we want. On Vinny and the van, I found that part somewhat funny in that my daughter calls them molester vans. She won't let me park, drive, or be anywhere near one. She is scared to death of them and she has never been molested or kidnaped. I don't know if it is from all of the stranger danger classed at school or the news, but she freaks out if she sees one. She is now 17 and she hasn't gotten any better. Her bestfriend since the 1st grade father is a plumber and his new vehicle was a van. He had always had a truck. She saw it and came back home and called her friend and said she could not come over to her house anymore because of that van. Her dad felt so bad and didn't like being thought of that way that he traded it in. Edward needs to listen to Vinny. Someone is hanging around in a white van watching the family. Little eyes notice more than we realize because they don't worry about so many things at one time. Alice needs someone to talk to about her life. She seems overwelmed with life. She doesn't seem happy with her life. She is attacking Bella because is happy and so is Edward. Alice needs to find her peace before this new baby gets here or she will only get worse. It will so sad if the family splits because of Alice's tantrum. She needs help and I hope Jasper sees it before it is too late.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough
Bella is not going to be able to resist Edward. He knows all of her weaknesses. Bella has a big pain threshold. Her relationship with James made it even higher. Bella used her mind to get through the torture the best way she could and I am sure she did experience orgasms with James on occasions. It might have been when there was extreme pain as a coping mechanism. This could be why she can be pushed so far by Edward and then has such a large release when she does get to have an orgasm. She has been trained since all of her sexual experience was rather extreme.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100
I loved the chapter, but I bet Bella felt a little weird being treated scolded like a child. She may be a submissive, but she is still an adult to Edward. Yes, she was rude to cuss in someones house. My teenage children know better as well as my husband. If one of them slipped up, I would treat the situation differently. Double D sees Bella as a child like he sees Douglas. It would feel weird as an adult being spoken to as a child all of a sudden. It has been years since this has occured for me. I would probably feel so ashamed because I haven't been scolded in so long. I feel so bad for Douglas. As a wife of a Marine, I would never picture him as one, It was a shock, but I am glad that he found someone to love him. He had a tough life and very little childhood until he was an adult. I guess that is why he doesn't want to be an adult, but at some point he will have to live in society as an adult again. I hope he will be ok.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101
I am so happy that Edward won. Bella was being a little bratty lately. Edward needed to maintain his control of the situation. I will always be team Edward before Bella. He is the Master and she is still the novice. He should have more control.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102
Edward better talk to Charlie about this James situation. I don't care if she walked to his house and begged to be penetrated, she is underage and off limits to adults. Some one has to be brave enough to throw him in jail, so he will stop preying on young girls. Does Bella not see she is the cause of this continuing? She is allowing him to rape the young girls of her hometown. I hope she is proud of herself. Seth is so funny. I have always liked his character. I can see how Bella does not want her two worlds to meet. She is different with each one.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103
Dougie and his big mouth is getting Bella in big trouble.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104
Some of us love this story and look forward to every update. I will be very sad when it is finished. It will be like an old friend moved away.
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
I know Edward is very mad but he has to be happy as well that they have a break in the case. They are closer to getting some normalcy. They would hate to have to look over their shoulder forever.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109
Bella is an emotional wreck right now. It will be good when all the family leaves and Edward can help Bella center herself again. Bella needs to decompress before she explodes. Edward is the only one who can do this for her.
I don't know how you came up with all of these crazy twists of fate, but I love it.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
I can't believe Bella didn't check into the scholarship more. She did not get a scholarship. She got a sugardaddy. Someone paid all her expenses to get her out of Washington and away from James. This is probably the money Bella did not know she received. She was very not thinking if she thought her tuition, books, a private apartment, and expenses could be covered by ten thousand dollars. Edward needs to have the private eye look at this "scholarship" Bella received. It sure as hell was not the SANTZ. She could never meet the requirements for it.