Reviews by sonogal
A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106302
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella is going to be her own worse enemy. I agree with Edward. They did not need that dog and once again Emma was manipulating them. She knows exactly what she is doing. Kids are smart.

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Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Riley better smarten up and report Kate. They might let him off with a deal, since he was only an accessory after the fact.

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Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I hate that Kate in lying to Emma. I wish Riley was stronger and would do what he knows is right.

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Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am so glad that Emma is back with Edward, but Riley doesn't really deserve the reward. He took too long turning Kate into the police. Bella's parents are so strange.

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am so glad that Bella told Edward that he can't ignore her to make Emma happy. Emma is being a brat. Yes, she went trhrough some trauma, but Emma is playing her dad snd she knows it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella can be so stupid and immature. She does not understand how the world works. Edward just wants to take of them both. Bella should have called her doctor. Edward will forgive her, but will be extremely angry for awhile if something happens to Mason, because she was selfish.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can understand Edward being mad at Bella for lying and putting them in danger. He loves them so much and doesn't want anything to happen to them. Bella needs to stop having a pity party and state why she didn't call the doctor. She needs to be honest. Luckily it looks like Mason will be fine.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Charlie should be ashamed of himself for thinking Edward would force himself on Bella. Bella needs help and not alcohol. At ;east she said yes to Edward. She did one right thing today.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am so glad that Bella got some help. I didn't like her drinking to feel better. I am also glad that Emma is doing better. They need to be a family without all of the stress. Bella and Edward have enough on their plates with work, school and 2 children. I hated how Edward had to find out about Jake. Bella should have told him. She was so wrong, but at least she did not do anything stupid in her depressed state.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great story. I love the ending

Collide by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We alone, a little flock,
The few who still remain,
Are exiles wandering through the land
In sorrow and in pain...
We wander in the forests dark,
With dogs upon our track;
And like the captive, silent lamb
Men bring us, prisoners, back.
They point to us, amid the throng,
And with their taunts offend,
And long to let the sharpened ax
On heretics descend

 

 

Two lost souls trying to figure out where they belong, collide. What happens when Isabella wants out of the plain life she leads that Edward wants to be accepted into? Will Edward face what he is running from to leave with Bella? Or will Bella surrender and embrace her culture?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57683 Read Count: 11066
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 04 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella needs to write Edward and let him know that she still cares for him. He needs to know.

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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward needs to be truthful to Bella not tell her the rumors. She needs to talk to her first not Rose or Emmett. They will try to send him away.

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

What are you doing? Edward doesn't want to marry that boring girl Sarah. You better get Bella back to him soon. Rose and Emmett better tell her that Edward came to see her.

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Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I wish they would be honest enough to say that they love each other. The rest they can work out.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I remember that horrible day. Thank you for the update on how the real people are doing. I hope the town has found some peace.

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Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think Edward should go see his family. Go out to the real world with Bella and they can make some decisions on their own. Edward needs all the people who love him now.

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am so glad that Edward and Bella went to his home. Esme and Carlisle will be a big help in the long run. They can do whatever they want in the futere. Edward is slowly finding a sense of peace.

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think Edward will be ok now. He was reborn. He still has work to do, but he knows he has something to live for and he wants it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am so glad they are happy. They are where they belong.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76112
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He needs to get rid of Tanya and start building trust with Bella.

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Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think he should just get rid of Tanya. I can't believe Bella is only making minimum wage. That is crazy.

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I need more. Edward needs to drop Tanya and get Bella out of the bakery.

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Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope it is Edward and he is at her apartment to save her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope Tanya is gone for good. You don't attack someone like that.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Bella is going to have to learn to trust again. She is also going to have to learn to let preople help her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

When did Bella go into the playroom? I am confused. Bella is not very friendly or gratful at all to Edward.



Author's Response:

Things will be explained about how bella was led into the PR! (:

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I still can't believe Bella freaked like she did. Edward was nothing but nice to her. The only weird thing that happened was Tanya. Edward protected her from Tanya. Bella should talk to him. If she doesn't want to do it at his house fine, but stop running.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bella is getting very paranoid. Edward wouldn't be following her if she would talk to him. She really should not have his house. He didn't do anything to her.

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary:

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Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237944 Read Count: 56336
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2022
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 29: A well-deserved holiday

I hope they can marry soon, so that nothing has to be Voltari anymore. Their  family business will be totally dead and Under Edward's family. This way the children can have his name.



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 11: The Formal Dinner

Good for Bella.  Rosalie needed that to readjust her thinking. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Rose does need to learn to loosen up a bit more in my story, but there is a reason why and i'll get to that....unless you want to see more fights between Bella and Rose before i explain?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Returning the Favor

So sweet. 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: The Next Step

Bella is very brave to put herself in this position.  Edward is going to go crazy with Bella not being with him and in danger.



Author's Response:

Edward is already very protective of Bella, but he is learning that she is way stronger than a normal female. Bella is all about the greater good and with the arragement between Edward and Bella being all about avoiding a war and blood shed, this plan is a way better course of action then what they were going to do as it means that if she needs to be recused or needs help in anyway she can get it, where as being in another part of the states they would be on their own and there was too many variables to try and work out.

She already loves Edward and his family for the help they are giving to her and her father so this is the least she can do for them, plus she can get her revenge on him for her mother!

Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Family Dynamics and an Unexpected Surprise

I love the giddiness of Edward. I hope Bella is feeling it also.



Author's Response:

keep reading and you'll find out.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Working out the kinks

This is a crazy plan. I hate that Bella is going to marry James before she marries Edward. I think Edward and Bella should have a secret wedding before the mission. 



Author's Response:

I was thinking of letting Bella and Edward marry in secret, but then the Volturi could have means to find that out and besides they will do checks to make sure she is being genuine in her decision, how ever i could have them get a tattoo of some decription that only Bella and Edward's families would know what they meant....but that is something to think about. Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 28: The final stretch

I hope the babies will not be named Volturi. They are Edward's and Bella's. They need their true family name. Who cares if Aro finds out he lost everything. He signed it all away.



Author's Response:

without giving too much away there was some things that although Aro signed them away there was a stipulation that someone with the Volturi name has ownership of it, however, the babies offical name wont be Volturi. Some false documents will have to be written though so as far as Aro knows they will have one set of names for him and then there real ones.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 30 May 2019 Title: Chapter 23: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly

One chapter with both points of view. It will keep the story moving.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 23: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly

Bella was so brave. Her hormones got the best of her, but all is good. She made them trust her even more.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Tying up loose ends

This story is so good. I hope you will do another one. I want to know about these two as a couple and as a family. 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 25: A race to the finish line, Bella style

Aro is just gross. Bella is so much smarter than him.



Author's Response:

thank you

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114430
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

Bella and Edward should start checking into other racing teams. They are racing well as a team and I don't see why they can't market that aspect. If they were on other teams they could not help but help each other. They love each other and they are going to look out for each other.

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

I don't think I like this Carlisle. He needs to change into the family oriented Carlisle that we know and love.

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Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

What a wonderful and beautiful moment for the Cullen family. I loved this chapter.

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

I loved the chapter. Bella needs to sell her house and move in with Edward. It will save them money, since she really doesn't use it anyway. We all know she will be Bella Cullen pretty soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

Bella is a good person. I hope Ben's clues can help them figure who it is that is trying to get rid of Bella.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

Edward needs to listen to those whispers and soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

This was such a nice smooth chapter. Life is nice when it is calm and all the pieces fit together.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

I am so glad that Jenks in on the Cullen side. I hope Edward will heal fast so he can race  at the beginning of the new race season. Bella should race for Edward. Just to prove to Danials that he did not win.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

I am so happy for them. They will make great parents. It is a good time to have a baby because one can work the business and one can work the track. Once the business is up and running, they both can be on the track with a baby along for the ride.

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183957
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Two lovers, ten prisoners, and one hundred freedmen, part 2

Alec and Jane are sick creatures, but did they have much of a life. I am glad it was pretty easy for them to get everyone locked up, so they could leave. It is time to go.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Two lovers, ten prisoners, and one hundred freedmen, part 1

Jane is crazy, but I think it is in the genes. I am glad that Charlotte warned Bella and Rosalie. It shows that they have the trust and support of their fellow slaves. It is time for them to leave.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: The last straw

Edward or Rosalie better get there quick.

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Doctor Carlisle Cullen

I found your story the other day and just caught up with the chapters. It is very interesting. I don't know if I like the boys being so abusive, but I am hoping that changes soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Third day in Volterra

I think Bella does not realize what type of situation she is in. I don't think the Cullens are totally free either. They are just higher up the ladder. I don't think they can leave whenever they want. Bella does know how horrible the Voltari are. I guess she needs to see first hand.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Volturi's request

Bella is being so stupid. Edward could be a friend in this horrible  place. She is making more enemies. She has no power here.

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Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: A slave trainer's obligations

I feel bad for Edward. He is put in a horrible position because of Isabella. She did a good thing for Alice, but she will have to pay a price as will Edward.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Caring for Bella

Why would she say Jacobs name? Just because of that one time it stilldoes not make sense. She should be able to tell the difference between beautiful Edward and that dog.



Author's Response:

At that moment she was in a dream so she didn't know it was Edward touching her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Jasper Whitlock

Well now we know why Jasper is sick. But I want to know how he woke up. His he a human again and not a monster who wants to torture people.



Author's Response:

Next chapter we will know how he woke up. And he won't be a monster anymore, which is why Emmett says something's wrong with him.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Alice Brandon, comtesse de Marillac

I think Jasper woke up a better man, like he use to be before his father ruined him.



Author's Response:

I think so too :-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Emmett's revenge

I am glad that Rosalie found her match. I hope Bella will calm down enough and realize that she is not in charge anymore. Edward can help her and wants to because he cares for her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: There's something about Rosalie

Bella is acting like such a spoiled brat.



Author's Response:

Somehow, she is a spoiled brat, due to her upbringing, but she's also trying to find a way to cope with what happened to her during the night; she's not her normal self at the moment.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Winds of change

I hope Carlisle keeps Jacob druged. He will be nothing but trouble. I hope we have all of the back story because I am ready for the story to move forward.



Author's Response:

I thought I put a note at the end of the chapter to announce that the story will move forward(fast) from now on, with Edward and Bella as the main characters.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: The chips are down

I am so glad that Edward and Jasper got to Bella's aid in time. Jasper needs to gain some strength so the boys gain over take the Voltari.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Freedom

Emmett and Jasper should have kept a better watch. There is always thieves and thugs on the roads. I have watched enough movies and read enough books to know this fact.  Especially since the women were naked, the men should have been on high alert. I hope Carlisle gets back to them quick since they are not going to make there destination. Better yet, they need to figure a way out themselves since they got themselves caught in the first place. They got comfortable and forgot they were on the run.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Edward and Bella

I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Me neither ;0)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Jacob is so jealous of Edward. He has never made love to Bella. He wishes he could. He gave her an orgasm, but that is it. They were never in bed together.



Author's Response:

Nope, they were never in bed, indeed, but it was just a way to speak for Jacob. He means he knows how to please her too, which Edward sounded doubtful about (implying Jacob doesn't know shit about how to please women). Jacob just wants Bella to be happy, in the end, but Edward did push his button a little too hard during that breakfast and he wanted to erase his smug attitude. I think he did a good job at it... or else Edward woudn't have jumped him. (by the way, Edward still doesn't know what Jacob did or did not do with Bella, only that he did not deflower her, so Jacob could be lying through his teeth it wouldn't make much difference)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Deflowering Isabella

They didn't have much birth control at this time. I am happy for them. they care deeply for each other. I hope they can escape this crazy situation.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Three short stories

I'm glad that the guys are going to work together. They need to take these creeps down.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Return to the harem

Will the world really be a worst place without Tanya? The girls better be quiet around Jane. Bella needs to get some sleep, so she can heal.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: The end of a reign of terror

This was such a good chapter. I am so glad that Rose and friends took care of the Voltari. They got what they deserved. It is so good that Bella is doing better than expected. It will be easier for her to travel.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm starting the translation of the next chapter right about now. RL has been a bitch lately, and it's kind of hard for me to focus on my stories, but I'm still here.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Rescue

Yeah! James and Laurant are dead. Bella and Edward are free to get married. Jacob and Tanya are gettiing married. I guess so are the other 2 couples. All is right with the world.

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

I love happy endings.



Author's Response:

Lol, I don't read stories with no happy ending :0)

Summary:

Isabella Whitlock and Breaking Dawn have started their tour. Will crazed fans, a stalker, and who knows what else break them apart? E&B, J&A, Em&R NC-17 for lemons, language, and who knows what.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156016 Read Count: 38352
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Baby, one more time!

Loved it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 42716
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The proposal

I can't believe Bella didn't say yes. How can she be so cruel. If you love someone enough to say you can't live without them then you should love them enough to marry them. I hope she gets to him in time. He has had a very horrible weak. He should have gone to the doctor to make sure that nasty girl did not give him any diseases.



Author's Response:

she will say yes. she was just... surprised.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Lizzy's birthday

I am so glad they worked this all out. These two act without thinking. They have got to learn to stop and think first.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Surprises

I can't believe Bella is acting so crazy. I didn't freak out when I went into labor. It is not like it is not a planned event. That is why you go to those classes. There is no reason to scream. That baby is not going to just fall out. She has plenty of time to get there. She should not scare Lizzy that way.



Author's Response:

That's Bella and she wouldn't be herself if she hadn't dramatized it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Outtake 2

It has to be their 4th anniversary if Anthony is 3 years old. He was conceived around their wedding day.



Author's Response:

I suppose you are right...my math skills are 'awesome'... :))

Summary:

Sequel to Here We Go Again. Bella, Edward, Carlisle, and the others are all back for a new case with the FBI. Will this be the case that breaks them all for good? AH, NC-17 for launguage, lemons, and violence.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95951 Read Count: 79390
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I hope they can keep their heads on together, since they are so close to the victim of this case. Lauren wasn't a friends, but she was some one they knew.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Mike is an idiot. YOU never call a pregnant woman fat. You really never call anyone fat. That is just rude. Mike's momma should have taught him better.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Bella better calm her boys down or Sam is going to be dead.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Edward is just going to love Bella going undercover in a club like Eclipse. He is going to be so thrilled.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

This will be an intense assignment. Bella thinks about the victims, but she needs to think how hard this will be for Edward and her team as well. I am glad she finally agreed to marry Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I am glad they got married, but I hate this assignment they are on. It is causeing them too much pain.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

This is so wierd. The different looks. Bella on a leash. I don't see her submitting.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

That was just creepy. I can appreciate the whole D/s relationship, but the leading on a leash is too much.



Author's Response:

Who was on a leash?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I would in form Carlisle of the weirdos across the street as well. I feel so bad for Edward and Bella. Even if you like the D/s relationship not everyone likes to do scenes in public. But to be thrown into this lifestyle has to very hard.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I am glad that Edward blindfolded Bella. She could forget she had an audience or at least try.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Bella always has to be in control and in the playroom she isn't. I think they need to find another way to fight this case. It is taking too much out of all of them. It is too much of a cost.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I am so glad that craziness ended. I hope Edward and Bella dye their hair back normal, so at least when they get home they kind of resemble themselves. Bella needs to have some sessions with Esme. Bella put Edward in a bad position, but I think he will be ok.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Bella thinks she always has to be in charge. She needs to let go and let Edward in or it will kill them. Edward did nothing wrong. He did not want that assignment. Bella wanted him to do it. She needs to remember that.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Bella better not be stupid.  She better let them know about this. I know she probably won't because they won't let her go alone. She needs to go with servalence.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Well I am glad that Bella is safe, but I still think she should have told someone where she was going in case it was a trap. I am so glad it wasn't.

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

How could parents just let that happen? It is like they like the lifestyle more than their child. I hope they rot in jail.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Once again Bella thinking she know it all gets her in trouble. Bella has a godcomplex. It is very sad. She has all these people who love her, but she won't let them all the way in. Bella was way out of line.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Bella should have driven to Esme and gotten help, but instead she has to act tough. She causes more trouble because of her pride and being so stubborn.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

I hope the team is on the way to safe Bella.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

This man is so evil. They better kill him since he can't go to jail.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

I hope Bella really thinks about his offer. Bella doesn't have to rush into anything. She needs to heal and find her new passion.

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

I can't believe they are yelling and blaming Edward. He can marry Bella if he wants to marry her. They are adults.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

I don't Bella will be the same. She needs some serious therapy. I also think she needs a new career. She can help people other ways.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Bella can't take on the whole world. Her family needs to realize that they put too much pressure on her.  Bella needs to talk to Esme and Edward and get away for awhile and heal.