I loved this chapter. It was a wild one with so many things going on. I loved the engagement party. It was so sweet of Edward. I would love another outtake of Carlisle and Esme. They are becoming a very interesting older couple. They sure know how to spice up their love life. I understand how Bella feels about selling her art especially the ones of Edward. But unfortunately, that is how an artist makes money. Hopefully she has prints of them all so she can always remember each and everyone of them. She can journal what she was feeling when she was creating them if she needs to feel closure with them. Bella will have to learn to handle her success. When you are ready for the vote.I vote yes to a sequel. I love this story and family dynamics.

Sorry for the bad week. The chapter was great. I suspected she was pregnant. I hope she did not drink too much punch. Alchohol and early pregnancy do not mix. I am glad that Edward is a great Dom because he was so in control of that scene. He just let Bella think she was in charge after they left the sitting room. The wedding was beautiful. I can't believe Bella still can't put her faith in Edward and realize money means nothing to him without her. He want to take care of her, not buy her. It is part of how he shows love. He wants her to be stress free about something he can control.

This was a chapter that had some steamy moments. Edward on a motorcycle is so hot. It is no wonder it took them so long to get to San Diego. Anderson and Brian probably got sick of waiting around. I am glad they worked through more of Bella's issues. She sure went off the deep end.

Alice sure went crazy. I was proud how well Bella stepped up and helped calm the situation. I loved the baby name. That was one huge baby. Emmett and Edward are very close. Bella's mouth gets her in trouble. Edward has to do what he is comfortable in doing with and to her. If he doesn't think she is in the right mindset or if he isn't then they just need to be Edward and Bella. She should not question him on that point. Bella was going through a lot of stress plus she was injured. I do agree that Edward should have got her on being sloppy on her daily duties. He was being to lenient on that point. She was acting spoiled. If I can't have it all, I won't do any of it. I am glad they are getting back on track. Edward needs to be tough on her because she will try to cheat the system.

I am so happy that Edward is getting back to being the Edward we all know and love. Men are all babies when they are not sick and not themselves. They make the whole world suffer with them. But you just have to love them and pray for a quick recovery.

This can continue forever. I love it. I am so happy for them. Bella needs to stop doubting herself and Edward. I think she finally got it. I am happy for Alice and Jasper. They will remember this Thanksgiving. Alice has to cause the drama. I can't believe Carlisle went a little crazy. It is not like him to start hitting his sons. It's not like they all don't have an active sex life. He knows how Alice got pregnant. I found that part so funny. Thanks for the entertainment.

This was a great chapter. The family is happy again. Jasper and Edward are working toward their life long dream. Bella was being bratty again and Edward got her staightened up again. Everything is back to normal in the Cullen's world.

I love this story so much and I almost hate to read it because I know the end is coming soon. This will be so sad. Alice is such a brat. Bella let her off way to easy, which is why she is such a brat.

I am so glad that Bella and the babies are going to Montana. It is hard being a family separated, especially when their is a skank lerking about.

Breaking Dawn was the best so far. Rob/Edward was so hot. I melted. Bella/Kristen looked the most beautifula and the worst I have ever seen her as well. The wedding was so touching and I cried when their song played as well.

So much happened in this chapter, I don't know where to start, but I loved it. I loved how Edward took charge in the birth, but then needed Carlisle when it was over. It really was sweet. Did  Nicholas turn out to have green eyes and brown hair?  I think the girls should all share a nanny. That way they can all get a break when they need one. They all want to work at least part time. They will some one that they trust. They can work some D/S time in as well. It would be a win for all.

I was so surprized to see this outake. I loved this story and this was such a treat.

What a way to ring in the New Year? Edward will never look at his piano at work the same way again.

Who could resist Edward? I don't like the sound of that phone call. Post again soon please.

Author's Response:

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If I was Bella, I would be moving in with Edward for a while. I would have that whole room emptied. I would need all new clothes. I think in the long run Edward and Bella should knock out the wall between the apartments and make one big new home.

That was so sweet. That is a great engagment story for Edward and Bella to tell. That is what I tell my guy friends when they ask how to ask their girlfriends. Will you be proud to have the story told over and over again? If not try something else. This has never failed them yet.

Every Edward and Bella story needs a meadow for them so enjoy alone time. I am glad that other families do the mathing pajamas. It is just not Christmas eve without it.

What exciting news Alice and Jasper had to share. You can plan a nice wedding in now time. As long as you have the the money to spend you can have a nice wedding planned in just a couple of weeks. There is plenty of friends and family to help.

Wow. when they decide to have kids they go all out. Four kids in a little over four years. I hope she has help at the store. Did she turn the apartment upstairs into a daycare for all of the Cullen babies, so they can be around them all day while they work?

Why would he tell her something so important while she is driving. Not the best Edward move.

Since it sounds like Edward doesn't know she is pregnant. I guess she is planning a way to tell him.

Bella is so selfish. I agree with Alice. Edward said those things before he fell in love again. He has changed so much. He has learned to love again and she threw it all in his face. I feel so bad for the position she put Emmett in.

It is about time. I really want to kill Bella.

I understand why Edward is overwhelmed. I also understand why he feels betrayed by Emmett. Edward asked him over and over again about Bella. Edward will go to Bella he loves her and Charlie.

I loved the story. I can't believe it is over. Edward has super sperm. I can see them with even more children in the future. It is a good thing they like children and are rich.

I understand Edwards few. There are some scary apartments in around colleges. Landlords don't keep them up because they know they are for students. I would try to find somewhere else. It is not worth not being safe or being bug ridden. The trial is over maybe they could live back on campus if it is cheaper or check into renting a bigger house with Alice & Jasper or Rose & Emmett. I would not just settle when they have a place to live.

Yeah! Jacob can rot in jail.

I am glad that Esme was able to fix up the apartment so it wasn't tacky. It was nice that the landlady would work with them, but I don't think it was nice to use trickery. Bella would not have liked it if Edward did it to her. No one likes to be manipulated.

I hope Edward is watching out for Johnny. Bella is not safe when he is not around. Edward is so cute when he is jealous of the whole audience.

Bella's bar is going to be better than ever. It will be busier with the publicity.

Why was Bella alone? She should be watched.

It is about time.

Renee is a sad women. She will never find happiness. Edward needs to take James out.

If I was Bella I would be happy that Renee was not my mother, but I know she is sad about Charlie. I know that his promise to Bella is the only thing keeping Edward from killing him.

Yeah! They are finally married.

I wish all men were so romantic and helpful.

I can't believe Bella was so stupid. She knows better than to act like that in public. I wonder if it is because she was around Renee. I can't believe she would act that stupic just because she missed Edward.

I hope Bella can find something to make her happy and live worth living. She can't continue being so depressed. She is giving up being happy. She has forgotten that she was happy loving Edward. They have the means to  adopt many children. They are extremly lucky.

Bella needs to let her body heal and just love Edward. Miracles happen everyday when it comes to having babies. The doctor who checked her out was looking at a still healing damaged body. No one knows what can happen once a body has healed. She might have to have a c-section if she gets pregnant or stay in bed. No one knows. Bella just needs to heal first.

That was perfect.

I love this story. I feel so bad for Edward and his family situation. I wish they could figure a way to get him out of it.

Bella is so lost right now. They took her Dad away and she can't get in touch with Edward. She needs Edward now.

He needs to get a good lock on his door and stay away as much as possible the next 6 months. His parents are crazy, but at least the police now know they are. They will kind of keep an eye on things. It is there job and they are Swan's friends.

I knew Charlie would not make it. I was hoping for his death because he was suffering. Sometimes when you love someone you hope for their death so they can be at peace and without pain. Charlie would not want to live like he was in that hospital. He was an outdoorsmen. He fought a good fight and now he is free again.

I think Bella is beginning to heal and realize she can continue to live.

It is about time the police got envolved in this house of madness.

Darn, I was hoping that he was going to go live with Carlisle. He doesn't need those crazy people anymore.

I think the chapter should be from Edward's POV.

Cauis should be ashamed of himself. He knows she is sick, but even if she wasn't sick he should not touch any of these kids. I hope she will be able to perform. If she is only there a week  shouldn't she be done with her treatments while she is there. She has had 3 and she has 3 a week.

I am so glad that Edward and Bella have made such good friends in New York. They need all the love and support they can get.

This is often a stage. Hopefuly once she rests and eats her energy will be better. She needs to be refocused. She needs to have some tests done to see how the chemo is working. The treatment itself will almost kill you.