This was such a sweet chapter. It was a modern check yes or no on a note from juniior high. I can't wait until Bella sees Alice in lunch. Alice is going to freak out.

I think that is a cool twist.

Emmett can be such a turd. It is a good thing he has a good heart. Bella is going to get him back as a newborn. This is one thing she will not forget after the burn.

I love horny Edward.

I like Rebekah. She is great and won't put up with Emmett's crap either. I don't get this girl kissing girls just for fun. There is no way I would do it.

They need to watch Bella closer. She is not safe. She seems to have tantrums that she can't control.

This story is so funny.

These women are crazy. They should be happy that their men care and stop torturing get them. Alice needs to stop. Just because you are pregnant doesn't mean you can't control yourself.

Bella needs to grow up and stop being selfish. She is in the hospital because she wasn't taking care of herself and her babies. Their health is what is important. I am sorry she is inconvenienced , but the babies are important. 

I think Charlie did the right thing. Renee finally was able to do something to help Bella and her family. Bella needs to go therapy to let go of this anger. Renee is dead. It is only hurting Bella and her family being so angry. She needs to free herself of this burden. Why waste so much energy being angry at a dead person.

Finally the babies are coming. I hope Bella is normal again after the birth.

The stuff in the house doesn't matter in the long run. That is why you buy insurance. Esme and Charlie have pictures that they can get copied. With their careers I would hope they were smart enough to have off site back ups in case of emergencies for there worki computers and archives. Businesses should do this. It doesn't matter if it is a small or large one. Hard drive back ups should be done at least weekly and kept in a fireproof safe for all home based businesses. This will help them get their business side back up pretty fast. They have family to stay with until the insurance money comes throush and they can rebuid their house on site. It will take time, but the Cullens will be come through this stronger than ever. All the people are safe and that is what really matters.

Bella is a hormonal mess. She needs to calm down. Kids get hurt. I thought it was kind of funny. Boys are often daredevils. Maybe the next one will sit quietly and read books and color all day.

Bella needs to take some Tylenol. It is safe for the baby and will get the fever down. A fever is worse for the baby. Bella needs to relax when it comes to the boys. They are going to get hurt from doing crazy things. It happens and it isn't worth stressing over.

I can understand Bella being lost right now. She is nesting right now with no where to nest. She feels she has lost all her memories. She will be more realistic at how blest she is that everyone is safe as time passes. She will see that she can recreate quite a bit with friends and family help. They all have pictures to copy and share. They all have memories to rewrite in baby books. The wedding photographer should still have the pictures. Documents can be applied for at government agencies. They have insurance for the rest of the stuff. They are blessed because they have a loving family who will help them recreate their past life, while they work on building a future.

I know they had to have insurance. Why don't they just rebuild a house on the lot. It will take time, but at least they will get a house they love. They can rent a house until then. It might not be their dream house, but it is temporary.

It is amazing how the babes seem to have the answers. They don't over analyze they just see things in the simplest terms and come up with an answer that works. I hope this one will work for Bella and she can move on with her live and finally let Renee go. She has more important things in her life.

Bella's blood pressure will go down when she rests. She may be in bed, but she is not resting. She is working and worrying about that book. It is no different than sitting at a desk and doing the same task. This is not what the doctor wanted. Bella needs to remember what is truly important.

This is why Edward worries. Bella doesn't take care of herself like she takes care of everyone else. She doesn't see her worth. I hope Edward was outside the bathroom and heard her fall.

I know Bella doesnt' mean to be so stubborn, but she still isn't listening to her doctor. All she needs to do is lay in that bed and heal. She doesn't need to tear anything by moving. Everybody knows that when someone says fine that it is a lie. You would think that she would learn. I love the names.

Nothing can happen to Bella, Edward will not survive. She better just have past out.

yeah! It took long enough. Sometimes simple is the most perfect way.

I know Edward wouldn't cheat on Bella, but he was being way to polite. He should have told her he was taken and to stop flirting before Bella brought it up. It is unproffesionional if nothing else at work. I work at a hospital and her supervisor would have put a stop to it if a complaint was mentioned.

Yeah! They are married. Bella needs to disown her mother and get on with her happy new life.

Love story, so glad to see it was back. I reread the previous chapters to be fresh and up to date. I don't think they should be so hard on Edward. He works a lot of hours and when he is off he wants to spend it with Ally. He should have asked for help when it became overwelming, but Ally was not hurt or malmourished. She had clean clothes. She is happy. He took care of the most important things.

They are such a cute family. 

I really loved this chapter. It shows that Bella wants Edward as much as he wants her.

Edward is so sweet and caring toward's Bella.

I think having Alice there might have been a bad idea. She is so overwelming to Bella's personality. I think she doesn't like alcohol because Charlie is a drunk. I don't care what the age difference is Edward is sexy.

Edward needs to realize that Bella acts differently around him. I think it was a shock, but as soon as he realizes this, he will be flattered. He is special because he gets to call her Isabella.

I love it. He is being patient with her. I loved how she told him of her crush on him. I think that made him feel better. He knows the attraction was not one sided. They both want this very much in and out of the playroom. I just hope his family will be supportive.

I think it is rather sweet that he was worried about her being Catholic and out feelings about birth control. I guess he didn't realize the rest of the behavior is not really in line with Catholic doctrine, but it is sweet. If you are going to have premarital sex, birth control use is best.  I love possess Edward. It is so sexy.

Bella is going to in for a lot of fun with Edward. Her education is really beginning.

Bella is so sad, but she really has been without parents for quite awhile. She needs to realize this fact. Edward will take care of her. She needs to read the letter, so she can move forward with her life with Edward. She has to get her head together for school. Her future is about to start. The past is really over now that Charlie is gone.

Edward has no interested in anyone else. His problem is that he wants Bella all to himself. If he could get away with it, he would take his little family and live on an island. He never realized how happy he could be with just Bella and his kids. They are what keep him grounded. This is why Edward is different than anyone else in his organization.

I think Aro should have a nice girl. Carlisle has had 3 women die because of him. Aro should have Alex. She deserves a nice man, who would treat her right. Carlisle would have an affair on her just like the other women in his life.

Sonny has tried to grow up so fast. He needs to be reminded that he is a kid and it is ok to cry. Why is he reading To Kill a Mockingbird? at such a young age? That is a pretty heavy topic to handle in elementary school. I can't believe Lauren is so cold. She must of never loved Aro. Edward has so much on his plate right now. I hope he can handle the pressure.

That girl is out of control. She has no self worth. Carlisle was actually trying to be a decent guy and she wanted to act like a whore. Carlisle needs to work on being just a dad for awhile. He needs to stay away from the ladies for awhile and change his reputation. Ronnie needs to learn to love herself. She needs to work and maybe date some one outside the family.

I finally caught up with this story. I love this family so much. They might not be conventional. but Edward loves Bella and his kids so much. Carlisle needs to concentrate on being a parent and leave all females over the age of 18 alone. Carlisle needs to put his kids before his penis for the first time in his life. It is time for Carlisle to stop being selfish and leave that young girl alone. She does not need a ready made family with a preteen daughter. Edward needs to tell Mauro to man up drop the stripper and be with Alex or let Alex find a real man and happiness. Alex is a daughter of one of their own and deserves to be treated with respect just like his daughter. If I lived in this world, Carlisle would be dead for cheating on Esme years ago. I know Edward would not let some one cheat on his daughter. This crap has got to stop. Edward seems to be the only good man in the organization. He needs to expect more from his men, since he is the boss. He makes the rules. They would have less problems if they kept their pants zipped at work.

I don't blame Edward for being mad Bella. She is blaming Edward and it is really not his fault. She acts like he doesn't love his kids. He is hurting just as much as she is but he can't walk around like a mental patient. He has to hold everything together. She should be supporting him. They should be hugging each other and showing affection. Helping each other get through this trying time. Bella should not be giving him the cold shoulder. Edward was the one who was with him when it happened. Does she not realize how guilty he feels already? It is easy to love somebody during the good times. Showing love and support during the tough times, that is real love. Bella needs to stop being selfish and turn the lights off at the pity party. She needs to be the wife she is suppose to be. She was a wife  to Edward first. The children are being taken care of right now. Edward made sure of it. He needs her. She needs to remember there is not divorce, so she better get her act together and help Edward, so he can think straight. She is about to break his heart and spirit.

Carlisle is going to get what is coming to him. Esme is going to put him in his place. I am so glad that Edward saw Carlisle with Bella. He has wanted her for years, but he can't have her. He got a cheap subsitute. Esme will take care of that one. I feel for Ant.

It is going to be tough for awhile. Bella has to be strong for Edward. He needs her and it will help get her family back together faster with Edward strong. Not to be horrible, but I am not too sad that Candace is gone. It gets a problem out of the way. Carlisle will hopfully make it. If not Bella and Edward can raise Anthony. This is a war. There will be deaths.

Bella is going to be so sad about Aro. She loves him, but he is not himself. The Aro she loves is already dead. She just has to think of it that way. He is not going to get better. I hope that dream doesn't mean that something is going to happen to his kids. This will kill both him and Bella. She will not forgive him for loosing a child.

I love your story and if I were you I wouldn't worry about the people who can't keep up. Mayby they should go back and read the first part and see how it all started. It is a gritty story, but it is so good. I look forward to each update. I never have a problem when you change POV. Maybe some people aren't intelligent enough for the story. Keep up the great work and don't let the haters stress you.

Edward and Bella love their kids, so much. They really try to be the best parents and give the kids a normal life. Sonny is so full of attitude. Edward has to be tough on him sometimes. All parents hate for their kids to see them at intimate moments. but it happens. The child will live through it. You just have to be more careful. I loved Bella popping Esme. I am so sick of her. I wish she used the gun, but I know she couldn't kill her. Bella would if she hurt Edward though. Esme better remember this threat. Lauren just needs to run off with Chris and leave the kids with Aro. How can she call the kids grown? They are still babies.

I can't believe someone tried to take out Edward when he was with his kids.  If they had something planned, they should have aborted when they saw the kids. That is the lowest to do a drive by with children present. Not that I want someone to hurt Edward, but he know how to defend himself. Edward was a sitting duck. He couldn't do anything, but take care of his babies. I hope they take that car guy apart. I think that dealership should be history also. He knew it was coming. He made a deal. When they find the guys I would not be surprized if they went after their families as well as them. I understand Bella. Don't hurt my babies. My husband mignt be a United States Marine, but he is a teddy bear in comparison to me when it comes to my babies. I think it was wrong though of her to blame and freeze Edward out. They have to stay united. Don't give the FBI or the other enemies any ammunition against you. She knows it wasn't Edward's fault. He loves his babies more than himself.

Bella needed to tell Renee and Lauren off for years. It just happended to all come together on the same day. Edward didn't know what to think of it, but it seemed he found it hot as hell. Bella and Edward should burn off some of that excess energy and stay hidden in their room for awhile. They never seem to get enough alone time. I think that is one of their major problems. They don't get to reduce their stress and show each other how much they need each other enough. Taking care of the kids is great, but couple time is more important. They need to make sure they make time for themselves. They will always make time for the kids. They are great parents.

Bella needs to chill. She needs to tell Alex to grow up and stop calling her about stupid stuff. Bella needs to get a maid to clean her house or at least help her with it. She is going crazy and taking it out on everyone.

I can't believe Sonny is not with Katie. I was pretty sure they would be together. I knew he would join the business, but  I thought he would marry Katie. I thought he would follow his father's footsteps. He was critical of Edward, but we knew that he really looked up to his dad. He loved how much respect and power his dad has. He also knew his parents were very much in love. I know he wants the same thing. I guess he just has to sow his wild oats. I guess Katie wasn't willing to wait for him to settle down.

This chapter brought tears to my eyes. My Dad in a plane crash when I was 19. He missed so much of my life. I felt this way when I looked at my babies. They are now 16 and 13. They talk about their Grampa Jack like they met him. Sometimes it brings tears to my eyes. I know he comes to them in their dreams. It brings me peace.