Reviews by sonogal
It's You by Lost Twi Sisters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

Bella and Edward meet on a cruise. Both are attracted to each to other.  We'll see what happens after some fun- loving on a cruise, when they encounter each other again.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88437 Read Count: 41415
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2011 Updated: 26 Mar 2013
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

They need a restraining order against Irina and James. It will hopefully keep the 3 of them safe. I hope it is not too late.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

They need to get the custody of Anthony settle ASAP. Irina needs to go to jail for hit and run.  Edward and Bella need to get married as soon as she is healed and start working on another baby. They need to have some happiness. Irina needs out the their lives forever.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Bella is over sensitive in this story. If Edward says anything that she doesn't agree with she is ready to run away from the relationship. She must not love him very much. This is a very emotional time for both of them. They might not always agree, but running away is not the answer. In this case, that is exactly what Irina wants to happen. She wants to break them up. Bella needs to be sweeter to Edward.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yeah, Bella for standing up to Irina. I hope they lock her up and throw away the key.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I am so happy for Edward, Bella and Anthony. They are a wonderful little family with a new one on the way. They have some legal paperwork to do, but it should all work out.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Poor Anthony has grown up too fast. Hopefully, the longer he stays with Bella and Edward the kid will come back out in  Anthony. He does not need to be so stressed. I hope Tanya will sign her rights away so Bella can adopt him as well.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Edward knew she would sell her child. It is so sad, but I am glad she is a crappy parent. Anthony is going to have a wonderful life now.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Glad you are back. I think that baby is going to be here quicker than expected. Why did they wait so long to get married?

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Edward is having a anxiety attack. He could use a friend and Bella needs to stop being a bitch. She has no one in her life either. Her mother doesn't want her either. She is such a bitter person. If she tried to be friends maybe they could find some happiness. What happened in the past was both of their's fault. She was not innocent. She wanted the money and he was sick.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

As I was reading these chapters, I knew that Edward was in deep pain. That he was about to have a mental break. The whole not touching and not looking at him was a sign that he had mental issues. I hope he gets some help. Bella has her own mental and emotional issues to deal with as well. I was hoping she would have been brave enough to go to him instead of running away. I also have questions about Bella's finances. She lives in a dorm so she has no rent or utilities. She should have been able to save money from Edward. You only pay tuition at the beginning of the semester. She may have a carpayment. But some weeks she was making $1000. Plus she had her hotel job. She could not have that many expenses when she is too busy to shop. She should not have gotten behind when she quit that fast. She should have created a slush fund. Her old bar job she did not make $1000 a week or even $500. She should have been ahead of the game.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Bella needs to be honest with herself before she criticizes or questions Edward.

Heartbroken by Camilla11 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

carlisle, Edward, Bella and Esme

On Isle Esme Edward feels compelled to share with Bella something about his past and his sexuality. Slightly OOC but fundamentally in Canon.

“ I knew that, had he wanted me in his bed, I would have gone along, exactly as I went along with his feeding choice, despite the cravings I tried to conceal from him. I wanted him to approve of me, I would do nothing to endanger our relationship.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4869 Read Count: 1323
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2011 Updated: 30 Apr 2011
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Secrets

This is a very interesting view of why Edward left Carlisle in the early years.



Author's Response:

Yes, Seventeen is a difficult age even in the most normal circumstances. Poor Edward, so confused. I'll post next chapter early next week. Thank you so much for R&R.

Summary:

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Somethings... You Can´t Take Back...

I hate that Bella had to go through this ordeal, but it maybe the best thing for the welbeing of the whole family. It caused Edward to realize that he has a serious problem that he has to deal with now or he will loose everything. I just hope that with Esme's help that Bella and Mac can forgive him for his sickness. Edward is sick. He is not an evil or cruel man. He hates himself more than anyone else hates him. He has to forgive himself first.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

I love this story. I think Edward is doing everything he can possibly do. Bella needs to look in the mirror. She is far from perfect. She must have a heart of stone, if she can be so unforgiving. Bella needs to get her own therapy. Edward needs his kids and he is being very generous for letting Mac stay with Bella. I think she needs to come back to his house if Bella doesn't start thawing out that ice cold heart of hers. School will be starting soon and Edward should be the one who helps Mac in the evenings and hears about her days. Bella can get her right after school, if Edward is at work, Then Edward can pick her up and take her home for the night. Edward needs to work on their bond as well.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: When the Music...

I feel so bad for Edward. He needs some serious help. They need to find a place for him where he can't leave on his own will for awhile. He has to face his demons and forgive himself. His little girl needs a little therapy herself. She can be mad at her dad, but she can't hate him. She is the only thing keeping him sane.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

Bella needs to call a therapist. Edward loves them and he is trying. Is she? I think Edward should bring Mac back home with him once school starts. The school is in Forks. Seatle is a long way from Forks for a daily commute. Bella needs to realize that she is very stubborn and not perfect either. Edward has been through a lot. He is going to therapy and working through his problems. Everything does not have to be Bella's way. They have to compromise to make a family. Bella needs to thaw her cold,bitter heart and forgive Edward. Mac has and Parker loves him as well. She can live a lonly existence or have a family. The choice is hers. Edward is learning how to love more and more with each session. He is forgiving himself for his first wife's death. He wants to be the best dad to his kids. He want's to be a good husband to Bella if she will let him.



Author's Response:

I assure that Bella may be being a bit stubborn now, but she will get the help that she needs!  I hear all that you are saying, but, in Bella´s defense, Rome wasn´t built in a day!  Edward has had years of dealing with his issues, it is great that he´s finally getting help, but shouldn´t Bella be given a little time as well.  No matter what, she just can´t turn off the hormones in her body, she´s dealing with a lot right now.  And as far as Edward taking Mac away, isn´t that what got us into this mess in the first place?  Next one is with betas, we´ll just have to wait and see what happens!  

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo Here´s a little sneak peek at the next chapter:

 

“Hey there, buddy,” I cooed softly while I swayed Parker back-and-forth in my arms.  “Daddy sure did miss you.  Did you miss me too, P?”  I asked, sitting down in the glider that was in the corner of his hospital room.

 

I´d stripped, and took a quick shower in the on-call room, donning a pair of dark blue scrubs and a yellow disposable hospital gown before I entered Parker´s room.  You could never be too careful, and I didn´t want to expose my little guy to any unnecessary germs that could possibly prolong his stay. 

 

I knew that Bella was anxious to our little guy home, but for me, Parker´s release would be bittersweet.  Parker going home meant that I wouldn´t be able to see him everyday.  I hadn´t realized that I was crying until a tear splashed against his little blue cap-covered head separating into what seemed like a thousand individual molecules.

 

Feeling the need to explain to my son why I wouldn´t continue to see him every day, I slipped my finger in his tiny hand, relishing the way his little fingers wrapped around my large one, and started to speak.  “Well, P,” I paused, fighting with the lump that was clogging my throat.  “You´re getting so big, daddy´s so proud of you, sweet boy, proud that after everything he did to your mommy that you´re healthy, growing big and strong, and soon you´ll get to go home.”  I bit the inside of my cheek, trying in vain to hold back my sob.  Unsuccessful in attempt, “I´m so sorry, son” fell from my lips in a broken cry.  “It´s all my fault that you´re in here; I will never be able make it up to you, but by God, I plan to die trying.”

 

Parker´s eyes fluttered open, staring up at me as if he was offering me a tiny piece of absolution.  Though some may not agree, and argue that it was gas, I´ll swear to my dying day that he looked up at me and smiled.  Beaming up at me with rose-colored cheeks, and a twinkle in his eye, in me, my son saw no wrong. 

 

I was his hero! 

 

Just the mere thought of that made my heart pump wildly in my chest.  Not that it was even remotely possible, but in that moment, my love for this tiny innocent creature in my arms seemed to quadruple in its intensity.  Clutching his delicate little body to mine, I held him as tight to me as could without causing him harm.

 

All too soon, my phone was vibrating.  Without even looking at the screen, I knew that our time was up for today.  Once Bella returned, she and Mac would be here for the rest of the night.  Bella was such a good mother, making time for both of our children. 

 

Even though it was against hospital policy, she insisted that Mac be allowed spend the night in her brother´s room; having me for a father and  Carlisle Cullen as your grandfather came with many perks that we had no problem using.

 

Parker´s suite was state of the art, and if not for the obvious knowledge that this was a hospital, you would think that you were staying in a suite at the Fairmont Olympic Hotel.

 

Being a children´s hospital, we had several rooms that were setup for long-term care, making families feel like they were at a home-away-from-home when their child was hospitalized long-term for chronic illnesses. 

 

Bella and Mac were able to sleep in a comfortable queen-sized bed and the room even had a small kitchenette complete with a microwave and nice-sized refrigerator.  That way, Bella had plenty of liquids at her disposal to keep her hydrated for breastfeeding, and Mac could have juice and snacks to tide her over during the day.

 

Like I said, it was the perfect set-up!

 

Reluctantly, I stood to my feet, trying not to jostle the sleeping infant in my arms.  Taking care with his wires and IV, I placed a lingering kiss atop Parker´s head and gently laid back in his bassinette. 

 

The door opened, and I didn´t even have to turn around to know who it was.  I knew that when I didn’t immediately respond to my mother´s text, she would send my father looking for me.  A strong hand gripped my shoulder, giving it a light squeeze.  “I´m sorry son, but it´s time,” he whispered solemnly. 

 

Even though he didn´t agree with my actions, he was still my father. 

 

And when I hurt, simply put, he hurt too!

 

Leaning down one last time, I brushed my lips against his cheek.  “I love you son, be a good boy for mommy and sissy tonight.  I´ll see you soon,” I promised, praying that it was one I could keep.  “I hope...”  Unable to stomach the look of pity that was sure to be in my father´s eyes, I turned and walked out of the room without so much as sparing him a backward glance.

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I am so glad that Bella finally showed some kindness toward Edward. He has been blaming himself for everything. Bella should be ashamed of herself. Did Edward not blame himself for enough stuff that was not his doing? Claire made all these sef-sacrificing decisions without talking to Edward and when she and their baby died he blamed himself. It was all Claires choice. She wanted the baby so bad. She thought it was worth her life. She did not expect the baby to die as well. Edward did not get a voice in the matter. Claire would not have listened even if he did voice his concern. She was determined to get pregnant. Now Bella is letting Edward walk around thinking he is the keeping is family apart because he can't be forgiven. That is so selfish of Bella. She should of told Edward or at least Esme that he is forgiven, but she has some demons to deal with before they can be a healthy family. That is what you do when you love someone.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

Loved the chapter. Can't wait for more. I missed the story.

Summary:

This is just your basic New York City love story. Crappy apartments, menial jobs, and low standards place Bella Swan in the pathway of love. Rated M. Canon couples with my usual OOC cast. AH. eventually E/B

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71053 Read Count: 26606
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2011 Updated: 25 Jul 2011
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: When WASPs Buzz

Bella has serious problems. Why would she make out with Marcus who she says she does not like. That is both cheap and cruel. I am glad she beat up Tanya. These two need a come to Jesus meeting. They both like each other and using other people is not the answer.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Edward Scissorhands

Bella is so blind or stupid. I wish some one would clue her into reality.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Jax and his Motorcycle Momma

These have to be the sadest people. How did they not learn to communicate and become teachers? Bella is the worst. I would not want to be her student or have her teach my child. Her soul is empty.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Big Me

Well I am glad they finally told each other the truth, but I don't know if I could deal with some one vomiting on me. That could be a deal breaker. I can't even deal with my children's vomit.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Matrix

Bella better not break Edward's heart. She can be a bitch. The sweet Bella better stay around and not hurt him.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Inside the Box

This was the end of how they got together. Now is the story of how they loved each other for the rest of their lives.

Summary:

Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 144026
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Great story except for the last 2 lines.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Five Months Ago

Edward is fine, but Bella is a royal bitch. Just because she  was abused doesn't give her the right to treated people horrible. She should be mad at Angela and not Edward about the first day sex. Emmett should support Edward against her royal bitchiness. He is suppose to be Edward's friend

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Bowling and Redheads

I'm so sad about Edward's peen. It should be left alone. Why mess with perfection, especially since it's not his choice.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella's whole attitude has changed because Edward has loving feelings toward her. That is all she wanted. She wants to be loved and cherished. Edward has asked for her forgivness for his previous behavior. They will make it with time and patience.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward  is showing her he loves her with his actions. This will do more to win Bella's heart than forcing himself physically. Bella will want Edward physically when she is ready.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward needs to be firm but kind. He needs to talk and explain more to Bella. She needs to realize that she is better off with him than Aro or someone else. She does not realize how bad it could be if she was with some one else.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I think it was a diversion to get Edward away, so they could steal Bella. Aro will get her back. Edward is going to have to leave his Dad's business with Bella if he wants to keep her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I thought Bella did well. Edward is not mad at her. Rosalie is making things worse. Bella will adjust once she realizes Edward won't hurt her if she is loyal to him.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think in time Bella will learn that Edward is not a bad guy.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think Edward is being very patient and Bella is better off than with Aro. Bella needs to talk to Edward and figure out how they can work together to make their lives work. How can Edward make Bella's life better in his world? Because they left the family business, Edward has no choice but stay involved. Do they not see this? They need to support him better and help him hold on to the human side of himself.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hope Emmett and Roselie realize how important Bella is to Edward. Yes, he got her in an unethical way, but he has come to love her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Edward better be so careful of his father. He is crazy. Hopefully the rest of the family will stand up for them to Edward. I wonder if they all left the table in support or did they stay and fight for them.

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen

I am glad that the party went well. I think Jasper will be back to see Miss Alice.



Author's Response:

Something might be there between Jasper and Miss Alice!

Thanks fro reading.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty Three

Renee might not like the relationship, but she should support Bella. Carlisle is not a bad person. He is just older. It is not like he is a bum. Molly seems to get into mischief when she is not with her mother.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing!

That's Bella's point.  When seh sees Carlise she doesn't see age, shes love.  She sees home.  He has proven himself that he isn't just fooling around, he really does care about her and Molly. 

Molly didn't mean to run away, she didn't want Zoe to get lost.  Doesn't make the circumstances better, but still.  She isn't running away.

Thanks again fro reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter Forty Six

I think that Jacob and Bella should buy the house and they can  rent it out if they want to make it an investment property. They are not ready to cut all ties to Forks. They want to bring their families back there and show them their history. It is a beautiful place to go to on vacation. If they can afford it why should they give up their home just because their mom is a flake.



Author's Response:

sorry for the lng delay in response....it has been a crazy few months.  I hope you have continued to read what has been posted of the story.  The last chapter will be posted today!  thank you for beign a long time reader (I'm pretty sure you have been there since the beigning, right?).  Hoep you enjoy what is left!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty

I feel bad for Edward. He is the odd man out.



Author's Response:

Edward is going to try adn step it up in a few chapters.

Thanks for the review....I'm working on the next chapter now.  Hopefully it'll be up sometime this week.  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Carlisle is wearing a ring. I hope. Bella could use a friend. Molly sounds cute.

Author's Response:

Over the next few chapters we will be getting to know Carlisle and Edward a little better.  We will also see Bella turning to someone who knows her well and is a friend.  Every time I hear the name Molly I picture a a littel girl with curly hair who is just so innocent.

I hope you are enjoying the story.  more to ocme soon.  Thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen

What did Bella think was going to happen? She is dating some one older than her parents. People will talk. She is dating the exhusband of her professor. This is not a good move, especially since she is not a nice person. Bella better get used to the criticism and looks from people. I must admit this is the first story where I like Jacob. Molly was acting like a brat. She should not be allowed to talk to an adult like that. It is not cute to be rude. Jacob as a right to his opinion and he should never be lectured by a 4 year old. Bella is not being a good mother if she hasn't taught her to respect her uncle.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.It's ot so much the talking that got to Bella, it was the tone and harshness of it.  Esme isn't a nice person.  I didn't mean for Molly to come across as a little brat.  I was actually thinking of my niece who is five, lecturing my dad abou thow bad smoking is for him.  She actually said, "people who smoke are stupid.....but you're not stupid.  it's just s stupid thing." It was actually funny and I was trying to kind of replicate that.  I'm sorry if that got lost in translation.

I hope you keep reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Bella should invite Edward to have coffee. It is during the day and in her place of safety. She needs to have fun according to her whole family. It is a good way to start.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Bella and Edward will be talking a bit more in the next chapter...wait until you see!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Bella jumps to conclusions and Angela is no help. Bella needs to communicate better.



Author's Response:

They are like two gossiping old ladies! LOL. The next chapter should be up over the weekend.

Thanks for reading adn reviewing!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

This is weird. She is dating a father and son. She needs to stick with the son. As much as I love Carlisle, he is too old for her.

Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for your comments and for reading.

This is the first story that I have ever written like this.  I have no idea how the hought popped into my head but it did.  I usedto have a straight outline of how I wanted the story and now I'm not so sure.  Things iwll pick up and become more insteresting in the upcoming chapters....I hope you'll stick with it and enjoy it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

I think Bella handled the Edward situation all wrong. She should have talked to him in person. You don't email some one with this type of information. She was already blowing him off because she did not respect him enough to talk to him face to face. She said Edward was rude. I don't think so, he was protecting his heart. She was the rude one. Edward is a sensitive person. Carlisle even said he was. Does Bella really want to be Edward's step parent?



Author's Response:

hi,

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.

Bella didn't have Edward's number and wanted to talk to him immeditly.  She thought email would be at least some way to communicate with him.  She also didn't want to being the subject up in class.  I agree with you when you say you think Edward was just protecting himself, he was.  He has been hurt badly and doesn't want to put himsel in the situation again.  Edward isn't out of the picture.  He'll be back.

I'm hoping to finish the next chapter before I have to leave for work.  Fingers crossed!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

I still think Bella is being a fool. Carlisle is too old for her. You should not date some one older than your parents. That is just gross. Edward didn't do anything unforgiveable. Bella must have a hard heart, because she is not perfect either.



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading.commenting.

I hope you stick around and continue to read the story.  I'm not going to say which way it is going to go, but it is far from over.

I appreciate your feedback and your views of the story. 

I'm hoping to update mid week, but it might not be until next weekend.

thank you again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Jacob will probably be tough. That age thing is creepy. I couldn't date someone the same age my children. That is just wrong. Carlisle is a sweet guy, but he needs to find some one at least in her early thirties. She can still have children, but is older than his kids.



Author's Response:

Jacob will be total bug brother.  The thing with Carlisle is that his relationship with Bella is going to be really only his second that he has had.  Teh first being with Esme of course.  H eisn't looking at age, he's looking at someone who he gets along with and can enjoy things with.  We'll see what happens down the road.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen

I am glad that Edward and Bella talked. I can't believe how nasty Esme is. She is so bitter.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading/commenting.  Esme is well....she is bitter and cold and just not nice in this world. Edward adn Bella....well, they are talking...for now.  Things in the future might be changed by that!  Stay tuned for an update soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Out Take Two

Edward and Alice will be better off without her in their lives. She is such a bitter woman. Too bad that Edward is such a good person, because she really needs to be reported to the university for her activity with the students. It is so wrong.



Author's Response:

Esme is a bitter, mean woman.  Unfortunitly, even after the next out take, things with Esme are far from over.  I'm very excited about the next chapter....the OT....Imight even post it tonight...we'll have to see....I have real world stuff to do....booo!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Outtake Three

I would love for Esme to loose her tenure. That would leave her with nothing. It would serve her right.



Author's Response:

Esme isn't gone so there is still time for her to get it.  Thanks for the review/comments.  Next update should be this weekend!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Eighteen

Bella is getting bolder.



Author's Response:

Yes she is.  She wants to move on with the relationship, but she is holding back because she is scared.

Thank you so much for reading/commenting.  I am hoping to have the next chapter up this weekend.

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Nineteen

I am with Renee. If my daughter was dating a man older than me, I would have a problem with it. I love Carlisle, but not for Bella, unless she is looking for a father figure in her life.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I hope that even though you aren't a C/B fan, you are still enjoying the story.  Also, I want to thank you for being poliet.

I'm about to update the next chapter.  Take a look if you want.

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter Forty Four

I am glad that Vicky didn't ruin the getaway. Carlisle and Bella needed some alone time. It is hard being a mom the second time. Bella is lucky that Liam is a good and easy baby.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm in the process of writing the next chapter.  It will be updated soon.  Thank you for sticking with the story! 

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty Two

I hope Edward finds someone better than Bella. He deserves to be happy. Edward should be someones first love.



Author's Response:

Edward will be key in something upcoming in several chapters down the road.

Thanks for reading.  I just updated!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Four

I hope the peace remains in the family.



Author's Response:

There will be some peace...for now.  I'm hoping to update later tonight.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Twenty Eight

Did they not use protection?  It is not like they are young and don't know how to use it properly.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting/ reading.

They apaprently did not one time.  I'll get more into it in a few chapters.  This is going to linger for a chapter or two before we find out if she is deffinitly with child.

I'm working on the next chapter now.  Hopefully nothign tragic happens like deleating the file or battery running out of juice!

thanks again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Twenty Nine

I think Bella needs to stop being an all or nothing type. She just goes off. She didn't even listen to Carlisle. She is acting like a child. She should have listen. I have always been team Edward, but in this story it is too late. Bella needs to stop being a brat and listen to the man. He has done nothing but prove he loves her. What has she done to prove she loves him.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading/commetning.

Bella is in emotion overload.  She's just settling back down from almost loosing Molly and Jacob is hurt.  She feels guilty that eh isn't there ofr Jacob.  She is going through something with Esme and her grade.  She's emotional.  Should she have listened to Carlisle, maybe.   We'll have to wait and see what happens.

Also, your review means a lot to me!  You are the second person to say that you usually don't like the B/C pairing and are B/E perfered, but you sre sticking with the story.  thank you, that really does mean a lot.  I'm hoping as the story continues, you'll stay that way!

the next update should be today at some point.

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty

I would never trust Tanya. Bella is a fool to trust her. She has stated that she wants Carlisle. Bella is just scared of being hurt that she is going to be the one that does the hurting first.

Author's Response:

thanks for taking the time to read and comment on the chapter.

Bella is very much afraid, which is why she believed Tanya.  Yes she admitted she wanted Carlisle, but Bella didn't know how much. She assumed the worse and kind of let her feelings and emotions take over instead of thinking rationally.  We'll find out in the next chapter what really happened between Carlisle and Tanya.

I'm almost done with the next chapter so maybe by the end of the week it'll be posted!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty Five

I don't understand the cops letting Molly stay with them for 18 days. They should have figured something out by now how to get her back safely.



Author's Response:

The police were straigizing.  It'll be touched upon in the next chapter. I cna't wait to finish and post the next chapter!

Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty Six

I hope Alec gets off easy since he took care of Molly. He tried to help  her get home. I hope things quiet down a little bit for this family.



Author's Response:

We'll find out about Alec in the ent chapter, which is going to be posted tonight.  things are going to quiet down just for a little while (after all, there still is Esme and Renee's attuitude to deal with).

 

Thank you so much for reading,

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty Seven

People keep making excuses for Bella being mean and rude to people in her life. She gets upset if anyone crosses her. She is not as nice as everyone thinks. She is spoiled. She expects everything to go her way because it always has. The men in her life have always bend to her way. Carlisle was right. She needs to talk about her fear of leaving Molly. She has known Emmett and Rose forever and she still could barely let them watch Molly at her house for one night. They use to watch Molly all the time. Molly is fine. Bella needs to get help or realize that she is going to smother Molly if she doesn't get over this fear quickly.

Author's Response:

First thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.

I don't mean for Bella to come across as rude.  She is insecure and frankly is just scared.  Bad things seem to happen frequently in her life so basiclly she just shuts down.  That is why she thought not going out would keep Molly safe.  She did come to her senses and did leave Molyl with Emmett and Rose.  She just needed a push in that direction and thanks to Emmet, she got it.

I do hope you will stick around.  i should be uploading the nexxt chapter very soon.  It is a lot lighter than previous ones.

Thank you again for your comments and for reading,

Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter Forty Five

Renee is as selfish as ever. This Phil is a creep. This is not how you introduce yourself to a family. I think they should buy the house and then just write off Renee as a loony bin. She has chosen a man over her children. This is something a parent is never suppose to do.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Renee just wants to be happy and she thinks she has found it with Phil.  Jacob and Bella know she isn't happy, which is wy they were arguing.  Renee thinks if she packs her life up into boxes she will be happy again.  We shall see what happens!

I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully it isn't too long until you guys have an update.

Lisa

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter Forty Seven

The police officers are also going to need to talk to Bella and Molly. I don't know why she doesn't just change her shirt and go down stairs. She needs to bring the torn one also. She can't hide from it. If she wants to help Jacob, she needs to get her arse down stairs and talk to the police. She can't hide upstairs.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter Forty Nine

This was a great ending. I will miss them. I wish we would of found a happy ending for Edward. I feel sad for him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you.

I did just kind of leave Edward hanging.  I didn't mean to.  I want to think that he found love in NYC and is very happy.

I don't know why but I really like the Carlisle/Bella pairing.  I like writing them too.  I'm sad to see this incarnation of them go too.  There was a lot of drama in this story and they most certianlly deserved their happy ending.  I am currently working on a Bella/Edward story but I have an idea for another C/B, I'm trying to work out the details.

Thank you for reading and taking the journy with me!

-Lisa

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74927
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

They are so cute. I am glad that Edward helped Bella keep his mother undercontrol about the wedding.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Bella needs to learn to communicate with Edward. She goes off half cock and he thinks she is mad at him, so he should stay clear. It is not getting the results she wants. She talks to everyone else except Edward, unless she wants sex from Emily. She is sending off the wrong signals. They are not ready for marriage until they can communicate better.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Everything will be fine between them. It just takes time. Bella just needs to realize that Edward needs his own time table to heal. She can't force it. The therapy was good advice.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can't believe they didn't think about Mike when they sent her to Forks. Charlie better call in all of his IOUs and get a search party looking for her. I have been on a flight from Georgia to Seattle. There is a lay over and it takes forever to get there. Edward and Jasper are going to go crazy with worry.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think they need couples counceling because they both went through this trauma in different ways. Edward should talk to his dad,

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Bella has such a temper and does not like it when she does not get her way. I think it is called being an only child and when you get two of them together, trouble.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love Edward. He is so funny. His reactions to the different situations make me laugh.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella was so funny. I hope they catch Eric and can pin more on Mike to keep him locked up longer.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I don't see why they need to rush and get a new house. I think that should wait until they are pregnant. Bella doesn't seemed to rushed either. They need to get married and get the new business going. Edward will overwelm Bella with too many changes. She is not used to not worring about money. I liked the cheerleader surprize. They are a cute couple.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope Bella can move past the fact that she killed some one. She had to or she would have been raped and possibly killed. Edward could have been killed as well. She needs to think of the greater good of the situation. I can't wait until Edward and Bella can cocentrate on their new home, business, and wedding.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I felt bad that Alice, Rosalie and the Moms took over her wedding day. I am glad though that she rebeled and went barefoot. Why wear heals on the beach. I thought the vows were funny,but sweet. These two people need the time away after all the drama and stress. Are they going to stay living in Hilton Head or are they going to build/buy a new house in Savannah?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella has gotten adventerous. Alice is crazy to spend that much on shoes. I dont' understand it. She should have the shoes put away so the dog can't get to them if she spends so much for them.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue

I loved this story so much. I didn't want it to end. so I didn't read this chapter for awhile. I live in Georgia, so it was extra special to me. I loved the spark and friendship between all of the charactors. Edward and Bella could have not been any cuter. They faced real issues with love and respect. I can't wait for your next story. I have you on favorites.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: When the Shit Hits the Fan Fiction

Edward now has a backstage pass into Bella's thoughts. He also saw  what a jerk he was from Bella's POV. He already knew he wanted to change, but I think he is more motivated.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress

I think everyone important knows now except Bella. She is going to feel stupid when it all comes out. I hope she laughs and doesn't get angry. She may think the joke is all on her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks

I hope Edward and Bella handle Mikes big Mouth well. They need to tell everyone that it is a inside joke between the two of them and drop the whole subject. Bella needs to stake her claim on Edward and stare down Jessica. She needs to keep her eyes off of Edward. Edward needs to make sure he lets Jessica know that he is not interested in her at all.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Word Processing

I think the response from Bella encouraged Edward even more to change. He knows what kind of person he wants to be because he has a goal in mind. He never thought of a happily ever after, but now he thinks it would not be a bad thing with the right person. Bella has opened his eyes to a whole new potential to work towards.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B

What a great chapter. I am glad that Bella finally got to see the real Edward. I hope he is here to stay. That other guy didn't fit him very well.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five

Bella and Edward got Emmett back good. I am glad that Angela could tell that Edward is really trying to change.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan

I hope Bella got to the part in her story where Ethan made a huge change and was a great guy. Bella has been so mean to Edward in her story, where Edward has been very nice to Bella in real life. I hope she clears this up soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?

Bella has to know what is going on especially after the last part in the backyard. Emmett and Alice are not quiet people. Bella has been watching Edward like a hawk. She could probably read their lips what she couldn't hear. Bella is an observer of the world and Emmett and Alice are big mouths.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: A Review Reply from Starlighted.net

Edward must have been so excited to get this lengthy email fom Bella. He will have to up his game and work even harder to be the best Edward and man for Bella. You know that is what he really wants to be.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em

Alice needs to calm down. She would not want Edward all up in her business. She needs to take to listen to him when he says he is changing. She also needs to trust Bella. She is a smart girl when she wants to be. She seems to have a level head in this story. Alice looked like a fool out on the patio. She needs to trust her brother. She says she loves him.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces

There is a lot of secrets and sneaky stuff going on at this party. Bella is pretty smart she might figure out that many of her readers are people she knows. They better be careful how they respond or come clean. I think Bella and Edward are cute and are doing just fine on their own. I hope all these people don't interfere and complicate things. They can really mess this if they try to manipulate the situation.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Pieces of Me, Pieces of You

I am glad that Bella accepted Edward's explanation. Edward would not want to hurt Bella. He is working so hard to impress her. He wants her to like the real him, not the one he made up to be cool in college. The real Edward is not a tool. Edward just forgot how to be himself for awhile.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: The Importance and Portents of Dreams

I think the party has been a big success. Edward should be fine telling Bella about the fanfiction, if he spins it right. Bella already knows that his parents know how they met. He could mention that his mom reads fanfiction and noticed the similiarities of the story and their meeting. She will be embaressed, but then they can laugh at it. Edward can tell Bella how everyone reads fanfiction, even Emmett. Edward can tell Bella how he checked out her other stories and he was impressed by her writing style. Edward has charm and knows how to use it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Falling Into Place

I am glad that Edward has gotten Angela's approval. That was a big step forward for him. Bella should have known better than to use staples on posters for her classroom. Teachers use posters and other art work over and over again and staples damage the corners. That is why you put them up with art gum. It doesn't mark up the walls or damage the posters. Plus most schools walls are cinderblock, so staples don't work. I like seeing the playful side of Bella and Edward. It seems that his friends don't get to see this very often either.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures

Everyone needs to leave so they can actually talk and not through music. Edward needs to clear the air after he has declared himself madly in love with Bella. Hopefully she will be so happy about the first part that she won't be upset about the fan fiction part. She should just laugh it off and be glad that she is so popular. Just think all her friends read her stories and they didn't know it was her. She should be flattered.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: The Last Lap of the Night

That had to be one of the funniest chapter endings. Bella swooned. I didn't know girls did that anymore or ever did in reality. I love this story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: The Second part of a First Kiss

Bella can't be that clueless.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls

Edward better set these blond bimbos straight and quickly. He needs to let them know he is off the market and that all his free time is taken by a brunette with brown eyes, so don't call or come by.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

While Edward was being so honest and Bella was being so forgiving, he should have told her about the fanfiction knowledge. He should have aired out all of the dirty laundry.  Then the air would have been cleared for a building relationship.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

Edward did a great job with the picnic basket. I love mine. It makes a simple date very romantic. It was a good move to charm a simple girl like Bella. I am glad it is heating up a little between these two. They are both about to combust with frustration.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Ed and the Real Girl

Edward and Bella are so cute. From your discription, Edward was just dashing in his work clothes. He may be hot for teacher, but the teacher is equally hot for the business man.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Blockbusters, High School Grads and Sophomore Girls

This was a very sweet chapter. Do they ever figure it out?