It is great seeing the happy, but tough Bella.

The connection between Edward and Bella is getting stronger and stronger. It is almost as if their souls have fuzed.

The only one putting pressure on Bella is Bella. She needs to give herself some slack and relax. She is her worst enemy.

I think Bella should go find Rosalie and Alice and hit them for no reason. Then tell them to ask Emmett and Jasper why they were hit. Does this make sense, no, but neither does what they boys did. Maybe they would finally understand that you don't beat someone up because they love your sibling. Those boys are pretty dense when it comes to this topic. Maybe their girls can help them see the light. If they don't, they may loose Bella because she is going to choose Edward. It sounds like there is little reason to come home.

Bella needed to tell them what she felt. She can't hold her feelings in anymore. She has to take care of herself and Edward. Her family is on there own. She can't be responsible for their happiness as well.

Maybe there is hope for this family.

They really are so cute together.

I had a feeling they were there, since they had a personal note from Carlisle. They should have been there for the wedding. Carlisle and Esme are the most important family members for Bella and Edward. They are a young couple, but after all that they have been through I think they will have a very successful marriage. Now they just have to finish school before they have children.

This team has done very well for a first year team. There should be no question about keeping the team. They are winners.

Yeah Bella! Emmett and the rest deserve the same treatment. They better back off or they could really lose her. Renee call Bella selfish, has that lady looked in the mirror. I know Carlisle and Esme did not mean to start this shit storm. Bella and Edward are at school and they don't have time to deal with their issues. Edward and Bella just need to state their views and tell them to like it or leave. They can be escorted off the campus.

I hope Emmett, Jasper, and Renee can finally understand. I believe Bella when she said this is their last chance. She can be happy with just Edward, Carlisle and Esme. She is finally living again and not just excisting. They should be happy that they have a happy Bella again. Emmett and Jasper need to worry about their own relationships. Those two should have married their mates years ago. They are lucky they didn't get dropped on their butts for not legally declaring their love.

Yeah!!  For the team and for Edward and Bella. 

I feel sorry that Alec is always under the shadow of Jane. He basically lives for her and she doesn't care for him. Jane just uses him. If he was loved he might use his gives for good instead of evil. I wonder on Twilight if there is a way to reabilitate him  since he seems to want to leave Jane.

I am really enjoying this story. You have put a lot of thought into this concept.

I like this solution for Alice and Jasper. Alic was never one for sharing.

Everything seems to be running smoothly in Forkington. The only dark spots seems to be Jessica and Lauren. They need to be bonded soon. This should keep them from roaming right. Bella needs to gain some weight if she is going to support a baby. If she has a baby bump and hasn't gained any weight there is a problem. The baby is taking all of the nutrients from her. She needs to rest and increase her food intake like Edward said.

I like how some things on the planet is old fashioned and some are modern. I think Jasper needs to use some of the lust he feels coming off of Edward and Bella and use it toward Alice. If he did maybe she would be pregnant by now. Why don't the other boys get animalistic when they bond with their mate. Shouldn't there be roaring going on all over the Cullen property.

They seem to have weddings every couple  of weeks in this community. This seems to keep the ladies busy with all of the dressmaking. Alice should be happy. Bella should be happy going to the library. She loves to read. I hope they can find Mike a good mate. He needs a good wife.

I love how devoted the mates are to each other.

I am a little confused. Jasper is going to bonded to Cassandra just like he is bonded to Alice. He is going to have 2 wives. She is not going to be just a breeder. She will be another wife.

You have to love, love at first smell.

I can't believe we are almost to the end. I love this story. It is so original.

I can't believe little Alice carried twins. Well, they got their happy ending.

Bella handled that situation better than I thought she would. Edward is so good for her.

I love this story. They are so loving. The baby has such a pretty name, so I hate the AC thing. I love how Edward always goes by Edward. It is such a strong name and gives him character. They are not even giving the baby a chance to know his name.

Yeah! She is free to be with her family.

I can see them with a total of 5 kids. They have 2 older ones and 3 little ones. They are so cute together. They just can't help, but make beautiful babies.

I loved it.

It was sweet to see a young more carefree Sonny. He was still independent and too mature for his age but not as closed off.  He seemed very close to Edward. I hate that they lost that closness. They were tight knit little family.

I had forgotten how needy Bella was in the beginning.

They were bad before now that they have total intimacy they will never want to get dressed. They might want to check into getting Bella's apartment sound proofed and his office. I am so happy for them. They made it and I am glad it was everything they dreamed it would be.

I will miss them.

Bella might be a virgin, but she is  not young and they have been preparing. They are very in love. She definately could handle this type of weekend.

I hope their aren't any cameras in the office or at least Edward remember's to turn them off during playtime. It looks like great minds think alike for Edward and Jasper. I love this story.

This is starting to get creepy. I thought Bella was not to be left alone. I don't trust Quil and Jessica being there. Especially since they were not on the original list.

I feel so bad for Edward. He is used to being cotrol of his life and now he is at the mercy of crazy people. I hope Jasper can freeze Bella's accounts so Renee can't get anything even if the drugs do work on Bella. Jasper sure is well connected.

I am so glad that Bella is safe. I think Charlie and Jake crushed Renee. I can't believe the story is almost over. I love it so much.

Yeah! The babies are coming. I know it is early, but this has been the longest pregnancy and I haven't been the one on bedrest.

Glad everyone is  doing good. I wish one was named after Edward. Maybe his siblings will name a child after him.

I saw your lastest update and decides to start this one again, since it has been awhile. I forgot about the triplets, Can you believe that? I read so many stories, but I usaually can keep all the facts straight. But I could not remember anything passed they were pregnant. I love this series. I am glad to see you are working on it.

Please update soon. We need to find out if the babies and Bella are ok.

Where is the sneaky Alice that we all know and love? Here is what Alice should propose to her family to suprise Bella and Edward. Alice and Jasper will "adopt" one child. Emmett and Rosalie will "adopt" another child. Eseme and Carlisle will  "adopt" the third child. Each couple will buy a crib and dresser as a shower/baby present. This will help Edward and Bella so much. It won't be charity since everyone gives baby and shower gifts. Those babies need Godparents anyway. Everyone wants to help them and this won't feel like charity. They need to have the shower early anyway because they want to do it while Bella still feels good. They don't know how long she will hold the pregnancy. She will not feel very sociable later on when she is large. All of her other friends can buy all the other stuff. I forgot Renee can buy the changing table and stroller. These are the major purchases which are stressing poor Edward out. The sooner Edward sees that they are covered, the sooner he can slowdown a little bit and help Bella when she can hardly walk. Bella is going to need him by her side.

You are never ready to say goodbye to your Daddy, but at least she knew it was coming. It is much worse when it is a shock. Loosing a healthy vibrant 51 year old man that you talked to a few hours before is much harder than than loosing someone who you know is sick and is at peace with God. I have had it both ways. It makes a huge difference.

Now Bella has to do what she is told to do. They will watch her sodium level. She was eating way too much bacon for some one with blood pressure issues. Bella hates being told what to do, but now it is critical for the babies. I know she is bored, but the babies are worth it.

I am so glad that they worked through their rough patch. I think Bella would have recognized Edward's traits in Anthony if he really was Edward's. Edward has very distintive traits and why would she wait almost 6 years to tell him. I hope he is not Edward's child, just so he won't have to put up with the mother for years to come. Edward and Bella would love the child. He would be innocent.

Does Bella not realize she was raped? One thrust or more, rape is rape. I hope she pressed charges. Edward should have too for assault. Were the police called?

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When are they getting the blood test. If the child is his, I hope he asks for full custody. The child does not need to be with some one who doesn't want him.

Edward over reacted to the call and should not have hurt Bella, but Bella caused part of the anger by packing and trying to run away. She should have given him some space. He was wrong to be over agressive sexually. I hope they can work this out.

Bella should not have packed and tried to packed. She should have just given him space. Running is never the way to go. You hold on to love.

Bella needs to realize that some people and Edward seems to be one of these people who need to be by themselves for awhile when they are upset. They have to think things through, calm down, and then they can talk. Bella needs to learn to respect this about him. She needs to stop getting upset about it. They just handle stress and anger differently. If she pushes it he might say things that he will regret because he is not in the right frame of mind. Does this child look anything like Edward?  There should be signs.