These two like each other, but neither one is brave enough to admit it.

These poor kids are never going to forget this crazy man. They are going to need years of therapy.

Edward should have warned Bella that his parents were world class snobs. Did they not know she was coming?

I hate to say this but maybe they needed something in their lives to make them realize how much they loved each other. Now this is a littel extreme, but it is causing them to think of the important things and not the petty things of daily life.

Bella should not sacrifice herself. She also should think of Edward. He won't be able to live without her. He will blame himself.

In the past segment, Bella was a real bitch to Edward. There was no reason for her to act like that to him. As a person who usually got A s on papers and test, you can't expect people to get excited about another A. All they do is acknowledge it and go on with life. I was the one who wanted straight A s in school. They were proud of me, but they would have said about they same thing as Edward said. They would have said more if I didn't get an A. They knew I worked hard for my grades. I worked so hard because I wanted to get the results. Bella does the same thing and she needs to realize if she doesn't want to work so hard don't do it. The world will not end if she gets a B. Edward will still love her and she might be a happier person. She sounds miserable now. She can't even enjoy being around him when that is what she wants, because she is acting horrible to him over a comment about a grade. Sounds stupic to me.

Bella is so proud and stubborn. She could never just accept his love. But he never gave up. Bella needs to remember this when she gets better. Edward and her might have been having some troubles before the stand off, but he as always loved her.  She has to forgive him for the silly stuff that was going on the past few weeks, because does it really matter after what she has been through. Edward loves her. She needs to remember that fact as she is laying in that bed healing. She can't hold grudges and be stubborn.

Bella needs to come around soon. Edward has to be going crazy. He loves her so much.

They both seem to get wrapped up in other aspects of life and forget what is really important. Bella needs to remember that and forgive Edward for what she was mad at him about before the event.  None of that matters now that she has almost died. They love each other. This is all that is important.

They are all better off without their parents. They are so cruel and I don't understand how a mother can crush her children's spirit  so many times. Parents make mistakes, but these two can't seem to learn from them. They seem to enjoy watching they hurt, sad, and mad faces of their children.

They are going to adopt this sweet boy.

Edward did go a little crazy, but not as crazy as Bella. If he was going to get in trouble, he should have done it to his parents house.

Edward is right he never left. Bella left everytime she got drunk. She needs to take responsibility for her actions.

Great ending. I love to cry of happiness at the end of a story.

Jacpb cannot understand that Bella hates him now. It sounds like he has lost all sense of reality. I hope he has not started threatening Renee. Bella will not handle that very well.

I am so glad that Edward got to Jacob. He deserved some pain. He took the cowards way out. He hurt Seth, so the pack had to be mad at him as well. I don't think he was going to be walking out of the woods either way. Jacob got what he deserved.

Bella needs to realize that Edward has always feared hurting her if they were ever intimate. This whole thing with Jacob brought it out even worse. Now she has been abused and raped. He is going to be even more scared about their wedding night and honeymoon. Even though he loves her more than anything, he is scared of loosing control.

Sandra is right. Bella needs to let Edward know that she is there for him as well. He can talk to her about his fears. She needs to open up to him about therapy. He works so hard not to hear everyones thoughts. I think he is getting a vampire type of headache. He hasn't relaxed lately from this blocking. Being with Bella would probably help them both.

This case is getting to all of them. They need to solve it before they are all broken.

This story has more twists and turns. It is hard to remember what happened in previous chapters. It has been so long. Bella does not need to take the whole world on her shoulders. She needs to trust her extended family. They seem to be the only ones she can count on to be there for her. Her team is her extended family plus their mates and children. The rest of the world she doesn't need to worry about. When this mess is finished. They all need to leave and find a new career that is less stressful.

Bella needs to stop putting work before Edward. They can work on cases together, but their personnal life should be first. These strangers she keeps trying to help don't love or care about her. Edward does. She would have nothing without him.

I feel bad for what Bella went through, but she is choosing to loose everything because of it. She can be a victim or a survivor.

There seems to be quite a few dirty agents or at least not totally honest with each other in Bella's and Edward's presence. These agents returning from the dead seem to have their own agenda. I hope the good guys can figure  it out without Bella going crazy.

It is about time that Edward told her to take her head out of arse and realize that the pity party has to stop. He loves her and he is sick of being her doormat. She needs to show him that he is special to her. She hasn't shown him true love in a long time. All he has seen is neediness.

I am glad you have a plan. I feel like we are in the maze at the end of The Goblet of Fire. You don't know what is going to jump out around the next corner to confuse the situation more.

I hope Bella listens to Seth. She has to choose to live again.

Bella needs to stop hiding and spend time with her family. She will probably feel less guilty and more normal if she interacts with the people who love her. She needs a life outside the office. She needs to spend time with the children and see the good in the world. She is already the leader of the team. She should take the job, but she needs balance. She would get that with family. 

Carmen should have been in jail for what she did to Edward. Why did Esme and Carlisle put up with what happened. Both of their children were abused by adult women. They had proof with Edward. They could have kept the child away from that crazy women. I am surprized that she hasn't found someone for her. She is fifteen. The same age Edward was when she took his virginity. It is probably a matter of time in her book.

It is time for Edward to ask Bella. They are in a good place now.

I think the break will do them good. They need to get there life settled. She needs to get divorced. They need to work on the Edward and Bella side of the relationship. They can play and learn about each other. Bella is new to it so she has to learn what she likes. Once things have settled, they can make a new Dom/sub contract. They will know what will work for them because they will know how they work as a couple.

Edward has some serious explaining and groveling to do. He talks about honesty. He needs to go to the whipping bench.

She better talk fast before Jacob knows she is on the phone. Get the police there fast. Then try to call Edward.

I am glad that Tanya was there to show Edward that he made some mistakes. He should have talked to Bella outside the playroom when she could have free speech. They should have been dressed as well. He also should not have just blurted it out. He should have explained his thought process. Bella should have not yelled and run out on Edward. They were both disrespectful of each other.

I have a hard time thinking of Carlisle as a sub. It is kind of funny, that the boys never figured it out.

That was interesting. I like how Bella was firm, but loving. I hate stories where Bella is a Dom and she is mean and cruel. When Edward is a Dom he is firm, but still loving.

I actually think it will do Bella good to see Jacob in a submissive role. She won't see him as powerful anymore. Why would a straight guy have scenes with men?

Those first few weeks are so hard. Then you get into a rhythem and the babies sleep through the night. Life is good.

This is such a sweet story. Of course, we knew it was Edward. I was just trying to figure out how she was going to find out. I like this cooler Charlie.

Great chapter. Lots of lemony goodness.

I am glad that Leah didn't make a big deal about that one night stand. It would have made it more awkward. I am so happy for Edward and Bella.

I hate to break it to them. It does not take 3 months. It got off the pill was pregnant the next month. That baby is now 16. You can get pregnant if you skip 1 pill. I see it all the time. I do ultrasound as a career. When you get off the pill be prepared for a pregnancy. It can happen at anytime. They are married and want to have a baby, so it will be fine. Bella is young and fertile. She will be pregnant in no time.

They better learn to enjoy sex quieter. Once you have kids, you have to be quiet or the fun time will end. All the screaming comes to an end with children in the house, so enjoy it now.

I hope that little boy has Edward's hair. It would be horrible if he didn't. The little girl can have brown hair, but the boy has to be a little Edward. I hope they have pretty green eyes when they change. It would be a shame if neither baby got the pretty eyes.

I love this family. It is so full of love.

Bella and Edward are so cute together. They are getting closer physically. Bella needs to make that appointment Asap.

That was sweet that Rose and Bella did the video for Carlisle. It was a way to learn a little more about their soon to be dad in law. I am so happy for Bella and Edward. You just know if it is the right person. It doesn't take that long to figure it out.

You have to love a man in his dress uniform. I bet Edward and Emmett looked so sexy. The girls seemed to have all this wedding stuff about done. Yeah!

They have to stop thinking about running away all the time. Running is never the solution. They are too strong to act like weaklings.

I love Edward's parents. They understand Bella and Edward. Bella's parents should have stayed away. They are just causing her more anxiety and pain.

Bella does not need to let that other coach get in her head. He knows they are the better team. It is a good thing that Edward knows how to take care of Bella. 

I don't see what is wrong with them sharing a room. They are adults now. Carlisle nows they have a relationship and he knows Bella needs Edward. What is the big deal? This way they disrupt 2 other peoples lifes and Bella looks like a freak again. Bella deserves a fresh start.

They were busted. They just need to room together and Carlisle and Esme just will have to accept it. Bella is such a broken soul and really needs to therapy to heal. There will always be jerks in the world who will Google to find out her past. She always acts angry and until she changes people will stare. She has to want to heal.