I loved learning about Edward's family. Bella and her family needs to go to therapy so they can talk this out. She is going through so many feelings at one time.

The Swan's are finally realizing that they are strangers to Bella. It does not matter what the blood test says. They needs to become friends first. They can not expect to become family instantly. They say they love her well they love the idea of her. They do not know Bella. They love the memory on Isabella.

Bella is going to have to stop hiding. She needs to go back to her family. Carlisle and Esme love her so much. Therapy is what she needs to talk through all of her feelings. She will get through this, but she has to stop hiding.

Progress has been made, but the boys especially Emmett need to do some hard thinking. Carlisle might need to do some male bonding with them. It might set them straight.

I hope that this breakthrough with Emmett will help Bella. She needs all of her family member's support.

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Edward is an amazing boyfriend. Bella better get her head together and appreciate that boy.

At least Bella has Jasper back as a brother and friend. I don't know what to say about Emmett or Angela. I hope Jasper and Garrett can become friends. This will make it easier on Bella.

I don't know if this was a breakthrough or not. But at least she is talking about these nightmares.

I don't think Bella can be trusted alone. She keeps trying to kill herself. She is talking which is good, but she gets overwelmed. She needs to be watched.

I know that Bella is mad at the Swan's,but in a way she should also be happy with them. If it wasn't for them and what happened she would not have her family, the Cullens. Bella needs to think about would she be willing to give up her time with them. If none of this happened she would not have Emmett and Jasper as brothers. She would not have Carlisle and Esme as parents. Some good came out of this tragedy and that is what she needs to concentrate on at this point. She has 2 families. She is tha same Bella she was before she met the Swans. Her heart and soul are the same.

Bella is making progress, but she is a little dramatic. Why didn't they ask for a table that wasn't in the center of the room. Edward would have. He would have made sure she was not the center of attention.

Carlisle went kind of crazy there for a second. He is just so scared of loosing Bella. She does not realize how much stress she has caused her family by not accepted the love they have for her. I hope she is over her selfish ways.

Bella might just get her wish. She thought she wasn't worthy of being loved. She has been so nasty to everyone. She is pushing everyone away with her attitude. She shouldn't be surprized. I am so glad that Marcus set her straight. Bella is out of control. She needs to stop the pity party and realize that she has so many people who love her. There are lots of children who have no one who loves them. She could have been one of those children lost in the system.

Bella made more out of the assignment than was needed and once again hurt Emmett. He feels that she is rejecting the Cullens when she does this. All Bella had to do is write about the Cullen part of her family. She has lived most of her life with them. This is her true family, just like any other adopted child. At the bottom she could have stated that she will write a part two once she finds out about the Swan part of her family. The Swans are her biologicial family. She is being a such a drama queen about this whole situation. Yes, the Swans did not purposly put her up for adoption, but that part is water over the bridge. It can't be changed. She is a Cullen. They raised her. She was a Swan by bloodline. She is loved by both. She is a lucky girl to be loved by so many.

I think it is good for Bella to see some one who has had it worse than her. She can see that her life is pretty good and get over this pitty party that she has thrown for herself. It is time to get on with her life and live.

Bella is doing so good. I hope Charlie and Renee don't mess it up with their attitudes. They need to realize that they only get whatever Bella wants to share with them. If they can't cooperate, they can get zero Bella. Their daughter is gone. Bella Cullen is alive and well. She is willing to give them a little of herself, but on her terms. They should consider themselves lucky because not that long ago they had nothing but memories. I hope they realize this and cherish it.

I am glad that they learned how to be a family.

Bella is actually a very lucky girl. She has more love than most. She has a great future ahead of her if she chooses to be happy and just enjoy all the family she has.

What a wonderful  wedding! It was perfect to have the wedding a year later from when they really met and got to know each other. I love this couple.

Bella is killing herself trying to run from her true feelings. 

Emmett caused part of the problem by handing him more and more alcohol.  Edward messed up but Emmett isn't innocent. 

Edward needs help.  He can't handle being alone. He is good when Bella is with him. He was so strong at the beginning of the tour,  but now he is drowning. 

It is easy to say you love someone when it is all good. True love is when you stick by someone when everything it tough. 

I am so mad at Bella for ignoring Edward while he has been on tour. She knows his past and she keeps hurting him. Rosalie should have been watching Edward knowing he is upset and his demons. They call him family and friends, but do they really care about him or the paycheck he provides. 

Oh crap. When it rains it pours. Bella does not need to deal with her too.

I love this story. I am glad that Bella was strong enough to tell her story. Now it is time for Charlie to go back to Forks and get Jacob out of jail and get James in jail.

Unfortunatly, sometimes babies die in birth no matter what we do. She was having a difficult pregnancy, so you were being realistic. Don't be hard on yourself. Luckily it is only a story and no real babies were harmed in this chapter. Don't you just love that disclaimer at the end of movies. Ok back to the review. I am glad that Charlie was tough on Renee I hope he heads to his lawyer and files for divorce.

Edward told Bella that he was screening things for her. She needs to calm down. Edward loves her. She needs to allow herself to be loved.

You would think he would at least wear boxers, since he lives in a house full of females who could go into labor at anytime. I found that so funny, especially when he said go to sleep Bella.

I think this is wonderful, but I wish Bella would realize that Edward loves her also.

If I was Edward I would get in touch with Esme and have her fax the horrible letter from Renee. This should show the judge that Renee would not be a good person to let the child be near. She deserves no rights. The Newton mother is a mother of a rapist. Case closed. Edward and Bella should just get married. They will not have to worry about this crap.

Bella better let him read it. She also needas to realize that their are other scholarships. She is a smart girl. Can she live all the way across the country from Edward and her baby? For 4 years?

Edward has come a long way. I knew he would make a good father once he realize he could be one. He is a loving man. He just didn't realize he could have this dream.

If they want to be together forever, they should be married. It is the best way to say you love some one.

Edward does love Bella very much. Bella does need a little disapline in her life. She has never had any but I think she should not tell Edward how to do it or her backside will never get a break.

Bella just needs to realize she messed up. Edward takes care of her. She chose to be a kept women. She has to play by his rules.

Carlisle needs to mind his own business. Edward was not mad at Bella. What did Carlilse say to him that made him all of the sudden mad at her? If this is the way it is at his parents house Bella better not talk when he is around.

The boys fear Carlisle that is why they allow it. He has been bullying them their whole lives. Bella needs answers, but she has to know that Edward loves her.

That was an interesting predinner. Did they eat? I hope Bella gets a relationship with both of her parents, but I hope she gets a stronger one with Edward. I hope she will be more open and less scared to love.

I am glad that Bella did not get punished for the old girlfriend insident. Talk about sweet torture. If you are going to be tortured that is the way to go.

I think Bella is talking as a teenager who is only thinking of the present. If you truly love someone you don't throw it away. Yes, Carlisle is a little crazy. She just needs to bite her tongue when they are at his house. She likes the rest of her relationship with Edward. We all have some crazy relatives. Bella has to love Edward to stick around and see if with time Edward can get it to change.

See all she had to do is ask. She didn't have to threaten to end the relationship. Edward is a good guy.

It looks like Carlisle was waiting for Edward to stand up to him. 

They need to get married now that baby girl is here. If they made it through the last few months, they can make it through anything.

I hate when doctors tell patients they can't get pregnant or they are sterile. Miracles happen all the time. I do ultrasound and I see it. It causes more problems because people think cheating is going on and instead it is a miracle. Men especially need to be tested yearly if they are told they are sterile. I hope Edward goes to the doctor gets tested. He then needs to work on his groveling technique. He made a big mistake, but he loves her. She loves him. That is all that really matters.

Bella needs to forget about the baby reaction. Edward was in shock and was told he could not have children. It was a gut reaction. I know she forgives him, but it is time to forget. They love each other and that is all that matters. She needs to talk to Edward about Carlisle invitation, so he knows about it. I think she should go, hopefully with Edward. They need to be a family. She needs to move out of the apartment, but continue to work from home. She needs to feel useful and not totally dependent on Edward.

I feel so bad for Edward. I know he loves Bella so much. They are just going through a rough patch like every couple goes through and then this creep threatens her life. Now he feels so guilty. The problem isn't all his fault, but he starts thinking it is because he loves her so much. He fogets her faults.

Edward and Bella knew from the beginning that their relationship was going to have chalenges. They just have to stick together.

Who could not fall for the Cullens. They make you feel welcomed at the first meeting. I don't know why Edward and Bella are argueing, but Edward will always save Bella. No matter what he loves her. He always will.

This guy is crazy. I bet Edward is about to go ballistic. I hope some one is holding him back. Bella means everything to him.