The car scene was so funny. I could just picture Edward diving for the phone. It was a good thing it was Jasper. He at least blushed and kept his mouth shut. Alec would have said a whole lot. Jasper just got a little closer to his future sister in law that is all.

Edward is right you can't say no to Oprah. Who would not want to be on her show? I will miss it. It was on DVR everyday. I have the Twilight show locked so it can't be erased.

I just love Edward's POV. It is always funnier.

Great ending. 

Edward needs to convince Bella to move in with him. He needs to let her know that she can sleep at Jasper's if she is scared to be by herself in his house when he is at work, but other than that she needs to be at his house. He also needs to set Tanya straight ASAP. Edward is so cute with Bella. He is a different person. He is still a Dom, but with a soft side.

Love this story. So happy for update.

I don't know who ended it, but it should have been Edward. He was not in the right mindset and he could really hurt her out of anger. At this point he does not care for Tanya. He is finished with her.

Bella seems scared of the reality of BDSM. She seems to only like the idea of it. I can't believe she freaked out like she did. She has been reading and watching videos. What she saw should not have shocked her, just maybe the location of it.

Bella just needs to know she did the right thing. Leah is a bitch and it is not Bella's fault. It isn't even Jacob's fault. Leah has only been pregnant a few months. She has stayed away from her family for 5 years. She can support her child with Jacob's help. It is not Bella's problem. She needs to forget about it. She needs to get her life together and make sure she keeps her promise to Seth. That is all she needs to worry about.

It sounds like Mojo needs his jewels removed. It will solve many problems. Who wants a dog humping their pillows that is just sick. Bella is going to be so surprized. I guess she hasn't heard his voice for awhile and that is why she doesn't recognize it. She will be so ready for a release on saturday.

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I loved the chapter. I can understand how hard it was to separate at the end of such an intensive scene. They did not get the usual decompression time together. He did not get to make sure she was alright. He had to take some one elses word. I know he trusts them, but it is not the same. Edward is a Dom. He likes to be in control. I can't wait until they find out. How they adjust fantasy with reality?

I thought that was mentioned earlier. Did he forget in the heat of the moment? I think he is overwelmed with his new knowledge that pussycat and Bella are one and the same.

I thought the press conference was funny. Bella should not have run back to her mother. She should have told her over the phone. She is an adult and Renee could have come to Washington if she wanted to see Bella.

This was a very sweet thing he did for their relationship. Edward was missing her very much, but Bella was miserable having to leave him to go to New York. She hated to have to be summoned by Renee like a child. Edward and Bella were just settling in and Renee disturbed their live. This act gave them back their routine. Bella got her Edward back even if it was only by tv. Edward knew she needed him as much as he needed her. It is a good thing he is so rich. I have come to realize that you much be pretty rich to really participate fully in this lifestyle.

Bella is not perfect. Edward has been so busy and has not had time for Bella. When he has had time he hasn't let her have any releif. It is easy  for him because he can jerk off in the shower whenever he wants to when he gets frustrated. Doms have to realize that they can only restrict cumming for so long. Cumming is a big stress relieaver. If you use sex to control stress, you need it on a regular basis or your whole life is affected. Edward went to far by forcing Bella to go too long. She was wrong to take in her own hands. She should have talked to Edward, but as her Dom, he should have known she was at her breaking point. He wasn't taking care of his sub or his girlfriend. This one was a draw.

In a way I was sad that Edward thought he needed punishment also. I understand, but it was hard to see Edward in a submissive mode. It was a great chapter. Thanks

Loved this chapter. They are perfect for each other. Both were lonely souls.

Loved this chapter 

I love this story. Can't wait for more.

I just finished rereading this story and I still love it. You have done an amazing job incorporating canon with your own creativity. Can't wait for more.

Jessica has some nerve. I hope she never returns to town. She wasnever good enough for Edward. I think Edward and Bella always loved each other, but neither was brave enough to speak the words. They both just settled until they were.

Bella has the classic case of abuse woman's syndrome. She blames herself. She lied to doctors, neighbors, family,and friends. She hid from society as much as possible so wounds could heal. I hope the judge can see all of this.

Bella can be very stupid.

Bella does not need anymore drama in her life. I hope she has a cell phone to call the fire department.

Edward and Bella are so cute. Charlie loves to give them a hard time, but you know he is happy.

Emmett didn't mean that Rose or Bella deserved what happened to them. He is just angry that David did not help  Bella. People have a harder time seeing it when the man is the one being abused by a woman. They think they should be able to get away or stop it because they are stronger.

Edward probably should have hidden the suitcases in the car. Bella is scared of her own shadow at this point of her life.

They should get married before the baby comes. She is very early pregnant and they already live together. They already had planned on getting married at some point. There is not reason to wait. All the important people are right there in that house. Bella and Edward do not need big and fancy. That is not their style.

Bella just needs to write her books. She might be ready to publish it once it is written.

Bella needs to realize that worrying is worse for the pregnancy than just about anything. She can't hold it all inside. Edward or her friends would gladly listen to her thoughts.

I hope Jessica and Edward both got closure. Jessica needs to leave town and never return.

So Charlie found out first and kept it a secret. It is a good thing he is a quiet man. Of course, they had the Emmett and Rose comic relief to take some pressure off of Charlie. Give Alice a few minutes and she will remember to ask Charlie about his present.

I hope they are close to a NICU. They need to call Carlisle asap as well. 26 weeks is like the crossover week. Some can make it some can't. Twins makes it even trickier.

It is a good place to end because you know they will be happy.

I loved this chapter. Even though I am sad that Alex was sick, it showed them as a family to the world.

They are so cute. They are at least being friends. That seems to be a bid step for them. They will get closer when the time is right.

They are so perfect together. They are both ready to date. They will make a cute family.

People need to leave them alone and let this happen at their pace.

Oh no Lauren. I hope Bella is ready for her. Lauren better not go up to Alex. I am glad that Edward is with Bella.

Well one of them figured it out. One more to go.

Bella needs to relax and realize that Alex is a well adjusted kid. He will be fine. Once she feels ready to tell him about Lauren, he will accept it. She will just be some one else to love. Kids are easy when they have been loved.

I loved this chapter. I am glad that Sarah came to Bella giving her permission to love her boys. Now Bella knows from both sides that it is ok to open her heart up all the way and just love. I think it is sweet that Brody and Sarah are in Heaven together. I am happy that Bella is more open to Lauren. This will help Bella and Lauren heal.  The boys will have so much fun with Charlie.

 For right now, it should not matter where they live. Home is where they are when they are together. Yes, find a new home, but don't worry about a structure. Home is about love.

Lauren was so wrong how she attacked Bella. She should have called. She knew Bella was busy with Alex. Lauren will learn that children come first. I hope this blowup will clear the air some between them.

Yeah Edward! What a great proposal.

They do need some Bella and Edward time. They are usually in parent mode. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Bella has had a very emotional day. She has some big decisions to make. It is a good thing she is not alone. Edward will be by her side. This time she can go on a book tour. She has back up for her boys. They could even meet up with her on a few cities over the summer and see some of the country. There is a whole world of posiblities.

I am so happy that Bella's book was well received. I love the banter between Bella and her dad. The boys rules were also funny.

That was just beautiful.

Bella should have sat down and talked to her family before she went to school. Sometimes Bella is not too smart. She knew she had to face them. Why would she want to face them for the first time at school.