Penname: sonogal [Contact] Real name: christine Taggart
Member Since: 12 Feb 2010
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Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 306128
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

We always knew Aro was sick.

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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

I hope Carlisle mixes somthing up in Aro's meds and vitamins so he can't get it up anymore or his seed is worhtless. Make is Viagra a placebo. That man is crazy and creepy. He does not need to reproduce. How does he know all first borns are his. Are the married couples celebate until the bride is proven pregnant.

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

I am so glad that Bella'a stomach growled.

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Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

I bet that man masturbates daily. Bullies usually punish those who have their faults.

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Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Aro or one of his goons is spying on Bella's every move. Alice and Bella better be very careful.

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 ĖEyes Upon Us

I hope that Jasper was the only one that saw them.

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

What a sick wedding? As wonderful as Edward is I don't know if he is worth this much living this way.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Why can't these people see how sick Aro is? I hope Charlie gets there quickly.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

I can't believe some one hasn't decided to overthrow this crazy man.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

I feel so bad for Charlie. I even feel a little bad for Felix. I think that he needs to be honest, which means tell Charlie what Aro has planned if the authority arrive at the compound.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

At least in the darkness they have each other.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Carlisle and his family need to find a way to escape. They really are not like these people, especially Aro. I hope Edward thinks of something when he is in the outside world.

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Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

I wonder what Aro is doing to Bella. He is such a creep.

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

Bella would have done better going to  Carlisle. She is in deep trouble now.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

I knew it had to be something tragic for Carlisle to follow this stupidity. He is too good of a man. He will figure a way out for his family. Some how he will get to Charlie and they will get out of this mess.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

I am with Carlisle. I am worried about Bella (Elizabeth). It is no telling what he will do to her.

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Aro has lost it all the way. Carlisle has to find Elizabeth and get her and his familey out of there. Edward needs to tell Carlisle about the flyer. They don't have much time left.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Edward should not trust James. He should not throw his live away to him either. Bella would not want that because she is going to need him on the outside.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

This was  a great chapter. I am so glad that Charlie is close. Edward was so brave to find a phone.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

This is the slowest moving story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

I hope they come back for Esme, Carlisle, Alice and Jasper. They then need to kill Aro and free the rest.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1465951
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

I am so glad that James dropped his phone. I just hope they get them before they get on the plane.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

I hope this is the end of James.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I think seeing Bella before James would be interesting. Was she strong? Was she a follower? Was she nieve? Did she have goals that James ignored? It would take the journey of Bella full circle. Bella ends the the story a very strong women.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

James doesn't seem to like the other end of the torture. I feel so bad for him. Not!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I love the ending.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3520]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1580457
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I knew it was Edward. Who else could she love. He proved that he loved her not the Barbie doll.

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36050
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Jacob drives me crazy with all of sayings. He can be such a tool. He has Charlie so fooled. He is not all innocent. It is not that he isn't a nice kid, but he is a little sneaky.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope Edward grows up a little bit. He needs to find a way to talk to Bella. She is hurting. He needs to explain why he hasn't called. He might usually be a jerk in this story, but he actually likes her. He needs to let her know.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 121978
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I just found this story and it is amazing. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Updates are slow but I promise to finish the story. We're getting near the end!

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 82693
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I guess that will teach  them to go ahead and take off the panties. I never understood keeping them at the ankles. Take them off and be free.

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Letter Banner

Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 45814
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Realization

I am so glad that everything worked out. Bella needs to realize that those parties are work functions for him. She needs to stay away from alcohol especially in public. I am glad she is off of the pills. I am also glad that they are going to go to counciling. They have a lot of added pressures as a couple.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

I can't believe they never had any children together. I think Abby would have loved siblings. Besides that I think the story was good.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 115176
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Even if she is pregnant, I would not trust that it is Edwards. She could get pregnant from anyone and just try to frame him. They could have to wait unti the baby is born and check DNA to see if the baby is actually his or not.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Is Bella pregnant and Tanya not? Now that would really piss her off. It would be bad for Bella though since she is too young to be a mom and her parents will kill her and Edward.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It is a good thing that Edward is a fast runner. Emmett might like Edward and even be ok with them dating, but I don't know how he is going to deal with pregnancy. Then he will have to deal with Charlie and Renee, who has no one to blame but herself for drugging her child without her knowledge. She could have gotten pregnant from any guy. It just happens to be an older guy who is responsible, has his own business, a friend of the family, and is very handsome.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

It makes sense for the story. Don't let people bother you with their opinions. We just have to state them. Did they ever exaplain to Emmett why it was their mother's fault or is it going to be in the next chapter?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I just thank you for sharing your story. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

We always knew that Renee was a horrible mother. Bella will probably be 18 by the time the baby gets here. She should have graduate high school.  She might have to go to college part time but I think they will be fine. Bella is better off with Edward than her mother.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love dominant Edward. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Edward probably wants to marry Bella. He doesn't need anyone to force him.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella and Edward will be better off without her mom. Charlie will come around.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Is this guy crazy? I think Edward and Emmett need to have a heart to heart with him.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am so glad you posted again. I hope the find the idiot and quick.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I feel so bad for Bella.  She has enough on her plate. She doesn't need false friends or a crazy boy in her life. 

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 166717
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What an embaressing thing to do? I thought everyone just knew how to kiss. I am glad the date went well besides that kiss.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella really needs help. I know she will resist, but she can't do this on her own.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am so glad that Edward talked to Bella about therapy. It will help her so much. For such a small town, the therapist are sure busy. Rosalie was wrong, but I hope Emmett will forgive her. He loves her and he doesn't need this pain  and hate in his heart. It is not in his nature.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I am happy that the kids got a peek at their future. I wish that Jasper could join the boys. It is hard being the only muskateer left at home. Maybe he can take the girls over to Seattle on the weekends, so they can all be together more often. I am glad that Bella found a way to be intellectually stimulated for her next two years of school. If she wasn't so emotionally imature, I would say graduate early, but she isn't ready for that yet. I hope Edward realizes that he will have to make a big effort to see her a lot. She needs to hear from him. I hope they at least Skype everyday, so she doesn't feel abandon. He helps her feel strong.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Vicky really needs to back off. She knows that Emmett loves Rosalie. The gang is starting to get sick of her. She was ok as a friend, but they are still loyal to Rosalie. Emmett will heal and realize that Rosalie is the one for him.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Post outtakes with the story. I am so glad that Emmett got rid of Vicki. She knew Emmett loved Rose even though they are having troubles they are in love.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella is doing so well. I love the relationship between Bella and Edward. It is so sweet.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

It was probably that crazy Vicky. She is jealous that Emmett didn't love her.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. You'll find out next chapter who is behid it ;0)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I would not trust her. She is probably lying. Charlie wasn't that much older than Renee. What is the age on consent in Washington? In most states it is 16.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That is one crazy family. I can't wait until Edward hears about Tanya. I think Charlie will be fine. It will not take much to prove that Jean, Renee, and Tanya are crazy.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I am glad that Bella is ok with the whole Tanya thing. She needs to get in her head that Emmett and Charlie love her. She seems to accept Edwards love.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I am just glad the drama is over. Let's get back to the story.

I loved this chapter. It was so sweet and funny. Charlie does not do well with the whole sex talk subject. Luckily the kids learn alot in school with science and health classes. Pluse there is tv. Bella is not stupid. Edward also has been very  kind and answered her rather nieve questions. I just would not want Emmett to do the talk. He would scare her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

This is getting crazier This must be Renee's dad and brother. He must be so proud of his daughter. I can't wait to her this conversation.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I think Bella needs to know that there is good genes are her mother's side. I think this is a good thing. Bella can always use more people to love her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Bella just shut down after hearing Renee's name. I hope that once she hears their story she gives them a chance. You can't be loved by too many people. They seem genuine.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I think Charlie just confused Bella more about sex. Charlies should have just talked to Esme about talking to Bella.  Some things are easier female to female. I am glad the prom was event free. They didn't need anymore drama.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

This was a great ending for this chapter of Bella's life. I loved that you decided to do sequel about the college years. I can't wait. It should be happier and Bella should just blossom with the new freedom and her love Edward.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 146740
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

This was an amazing chapter. As a parent you sometimes have to spank a child and you do it out of love. You just don't think of adult having to disapline each other. You could tell it was killing Edward having to punish Alice. It must have been hard for Bella to watch, yet she could see the love.



Author's Response:

i think sometimes adults would need it more then children. Or at least that's how it is in the story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

This is such a different and interesting story. I look forward to each chapter. Edward is so caring and loving to both of his wives.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you can see that a lot of people can't get past the events that happen to see that he really does care.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

What did Aro do when he found out? I am so glad that Edward was there to save her from that monster. I love this story. It is so different.



Author's Response:

Oh you'll just have to wait and see. I have a few ideas but am not sure just yet. I'll be sure to let you know as soon as I can...LOL Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

I think it is time for Edward to turn up his wonderful charm. Rosalie was so brave to tell her story. Alice might needs to calm down all the make overs or she might scare her away.



Author's Response:

Alice can be scary can't she. I think that Bella should be able to handle herself against the pixie if she gets out of control.

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

I enjoyed this chapter. I liked the closness of Bella and Edward. I want to hear more from Edward. What is he feeling? Yes, I want to know about this session with Edward.



Author's Response:

I am going to try to do Rosalie's POV with a side of Edward, but if it doesn't work out I promise Edward will be the chapter after that.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

Rosalie has had many trials in her life. She is stronger than she think she is. Bella needs to join this family.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

Edward tries to be so fair. Rosalie is pretty selfish. She asked for the treatment in the middle of the night. She disturbed his time and sleep with Alice. She could have waited, but she didn't so I don't blame Edward at all for dealing with her sassy mouth. He needs his sleep for work also.



Author's Response:

I agree. (I guess that's why I wrote it that way :p ) Now I know why most people only have one wife....

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

Alice seems to understand the the relationships the best. I think Rosalie still feels threatened by Bella. She doesn't want to share Edward with anyone else.



Author's Response:

Well Rose is Rose after all, she may or may not come around, you just never know with her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

I think you should write as you have been. This is your work and you know how the story should be written. If it takes ten days or 2 weeks to get the best chapter it is ok. I would rather have a complete good chapter.



Author's Response:

I know, but I'm a little bit of a people pleaser and was afraid that poeple would lose interest, so I was giving them the choice. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

Sorry for all of the tragedy in your life. I hope all is settling down. I am so glad that Edward and Bella finally declared their feelings.



Author's Response:

I know but now that the feels are out there the real drama can start. And thanks.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

I hope Rosalie is strong enough to stay at that table and work out these problems. They can make a great family, but Rosalie has to think of some one besides herself.



Author's Response:

I hope so too. EAveryone deserves to get everything that they want out of life.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

I love this story, but it seems we don't make much progress with each chapter. This chapter said basically the same thing as the prevous chapter escept for the last couple paragraphs.



Author's Response:

Sorry that you didn't like it. There are just so many different emotions that I wanted people to see, that I felt it was important to know not the others were thinking. Knowing how Bella reacts to the family is a vital part to the rest of the story that I just needed to do it in this fashion.

With that being said, now that the background is done the story is going to flow more. Don't worry this are going to be heating up very soon. I hope you can stick with it I promise it will be good.

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

I liked this chapter. I feel like they made some progress. Rosalie finally realize that she is not incharge of the family.



Author's Response:

I don't know if I would go that far, Rose will be Rose.... The history portion is over for the most part now we are going to see what can happen.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

I am glad that Bella didn't back down to Rosalie. I also liked how you explained that they made the rules. I hope Bella gets some input on the new updated rules, especially the personal ones. She is more moderate than the other two.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Bella may be quite and shy but she is not a doormat. I'm sure that the updated rule talk will be very interesting.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

I am glad that Bella found something she could do with Alice's charity. It will make her feel like part of the family. I can't wait for more Edward and Bella time.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

I am so glad that Edward and Bella got out into the world together. This will make it real to her. I am assuming in the next chapter that she will be introduced to more of the family. All of these things will make her bond with Edward stronger. The need more time together, so she can ask him questions. She asked the girls now it his his turn to answer a few for her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions

Edward and Bella are so cute. I can't wait until they get to spend some quality time together. Siob is a hoot. She would be a very good lawyer. Can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

This was a good chapter. Can you explain again which child goes with which mother in Carlisle's family or tell me which chapter that was in please? I enjoyed this chapter. I know Roselie is having problems with adjustments, but I know Bella will be the best for the family. She will be a calming force because Alice and Roselie have such stong outgoing personalities. Bella should bring some peace and hopefully children to the family. With her job, she can work from the home. She can bring stablility.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing

Rosalie got what she wanted. I don't know why she asked for them, but she asked and he delivered. Calisle has some beautiful wives. They don't look old enough to be Edward's moms. I can';t wait for the next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 61685
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations

That was such a good chapter. I could see how excited about the baby and how mad he was at Aro. He is even more determined to get home. I hope all 3 boys get home.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

Bella has sure changed her life in a short period of time. I hope they have someone to watch over Aro to make sure he doesn't do harm to Bella or any of the girls.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

Bella has sure changed her life in a short period of time. I hope they have someone to watch over Aro to make sure he doesn't do harm to Bella or any of the girls.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions

Loved the chapter. I laughed at the girl name. One of the bestfriend's name is Cherie. You don't see it spelled that way very often.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

They need to do some more house cleaning at that company. Bella needs to work from home to keep her blood pressure down. They also need more security.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front

Does Edward feel her presence like she feels his? If he does that is pretty cool.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

I am excited about the birth, but I feel so bad for Edward. He will regret missing this forever. It will take a month for him to even get a picture or word of the birth.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

Carlisle needs to get that rude nurse fired or transfered to anothered department.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

Poor Bella being scared to death. I could not imagine having to wait so long for letters. We are so use to email and instant messaging. I would go crazy.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

Bella would know if he wasn't ok. Edward is smart he will get back safe and sound. At least he was over Belgium.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

I am so happy that Edward was able to talk to Cherie. He has missed to much and that meant so much to him.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

I can't wait for Edward to get home. I miss him almost as much as Bella.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

This was a great chapter. You were right to not include lemons. It would have been too soon especially with his long trip and a cast up to his hip. Let him get cleaned up and well rested for the games to begin.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

Cherie just melted her Daddy and totally wrapped him around her little finger with one word. This was a great chapter. I loved it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

I am so glad everyone is home safe and sound. That is what happens in a fantasy world that we control. We would have hated it if any of our guys died.

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 295045 Read Count: 65023
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2014
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Suite

Bella has to be strong. They have come too far for her to be weak and give up on him. Rosalie is so selfish. What happened to her in this stunt she pulled? Did she want to die?



Author's Response:

Hi Lovely,

 

Yes, Bella does need to be strong...and Rose, does she ever think about the consequence of her actions??? *zips lips*

 

My next chapter is almost ready to post, so I hope to see you back here soon. Thanks for still reading (((hugs)))

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Harmony

Edward loves Bella so much and he needs to tell her about the soulmate search. Bella gets skittish so easy. They don't need any more problems. They already have to deal with Riley when he shows up. I hope Bella is strong enough to tell him to fly back home that he is not wanted or needed.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Unison

I am so happy for them. I think that Bella needs to get to the nearest doctor and get on birth control asap. The pull of each other's soul is stronger than their brain power and worrying about condoms. Bella should have been ashamed of herself for putting Edward in that position. She should have ran out of the shower and gotten them, if she wanted him that bad. They are not ready for children.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Interlude

Bella needs to get those other people out of her head. He act like he is happy and that is all that matters. Edward needs to be honest with her about his fear of the paps hurting her. He also needs to tell her why he won't make love to her. She will feel rejected again if he doesn't.