Reviews by Mick
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

okay, I am liking this more than I probably should. This is what I get for submitting a question to TSO' email, sucked into yet another great fic! Thank you!

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Okay, was I the only one that got creeped out at the sentence in the chapter notes that said 'Now.. I would like to test our ALERT system... so when you review... be sure to say. "I GOT MY ALERT"...we will see if our little endeavor is up and running.'

I got chills thinking 'is this what they want me to say and will I be allowed to keep reading if I say I didn't get my alert. What does Father Aro want me to say?

THIS IS ONE DAMN GOOD CREEPY FIC!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

I have to say, I hope Bella is pregnant and I hope Carlisle gets severly pissed off.  I think this is my first review for this story, and I have to say...abuse aside, this is a really good story.  It seems like one of those that you could go on and on with.  Some stories get old around the 40th chapter, but this one shows no sign of slowing down - I love it!  Thanks so much for keeping it out there (here).



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with my story. I originally planned on it being about 25 chapters but somewhere along the way I think I created a monster. lol  We are nearing the end though so things will start to happen quickly

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

We talk about your fic a lot in chat.  Jst proves that it doesn't have to be sunshine and rainbows to be a great fic.  This is one of those fics that I keep going back to...It's just that good.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

okay I put down the pitchfork...and chewed off exactly three nails on this chapter alone.  Thanks so much for writing such a thrilling story.

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

I think I know who is behind door number 1...i am afraid to say his name out loud even.  Poor Bella - I hope I am wrong.

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

please let it be...now that Edward is free from Carlisle, I hope that he will in turn free Bella from himself.  And of course, if true love comes back to you, it's yours to keep...I hope?  Thanks for writing another great chapter!

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Heya Mic,

I would love to see the original story, along with new material - who can beat that?  I loved this fic and am sad to see it end so I vote for you to continue and go ahead starting with Esme and Renee.  Thanks so much for sharing your writing.

Mick

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awww, she wont even speak for Jasper? Now even after all she's been through, I feel sorry for Jasper?! Twisted.

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

and with the first paragraph of this chapter, I forget to feel bad for Jasper. I like the way you described her wedding ring as a symbol of purchase, it's brilliant. 

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Finally, a chapter that shows a glimpse of hope for Alice. Thanks so much for writing another great chapter.

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Angst away! Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

I'll be continuing this story after the holidays

Bella's Gift by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Bella only wants one thing for her birthday. She has always been the strong one. She’s been dreaming of a tall, dark & handsome man who can take charge. Could he be real or is he only a dream?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5269 Read Count: 2734
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO! And on that safeword note I am definately crawling into bed! LMFAO - I have already stayed up reading and reviewing way more than I intended, what can I say? Your writing kinda sucks the reader into it. Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your writing always makes me realize that no matter how bad real llife seems, things could always be worse. After TPW, I am ready to sign up for another ride with this fic. Thanks so much for sharing your telented writing!

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Bella. See, now I have to go to the next chapter or else I am going to leave her permanently stuck in Angstville in my head. Thanks so much for sharing your writing.

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

lmao at the pitchfork wielding villagers and YAY for TWCS. Thanks so much for continuing your writing and not caving in when they were messing around with TPW!



Author's Response:

I learned early on the best way to handle a bully is to not handle them at all.  Thanks for reading. I'm working on the next chapter now.

Reviewer: Mick Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

okay, I need a description of the ring? I know its late but I don't see a mention of a ring and if that bastard stole the ring off Edward's dead body and is passing it off as his own for Bella I am gonna have words with him and see how HE'D like to be kicked down the slopes - and I usually LOVE   Emmett! lol, you're so twisted!



Author's Response:

It's too easy to make SM's evil characters the bad guys. I prefer to take the characters we all love and show their dark side. Emmett is my favorite.

Oh and the ring? LMAO! I didn't even think of that one.  No its not the one he gives her. Remember he said it's a 'decent' size diamond, but not impressive.  doesn't mean he doesn't still have it somewhere.  :)