Reviews by BeCullen
Over The Top by starfish422 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 47]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Slash: Edward is an unabashed pleasure-seeker, one of the club kings of the Seattle gay community. One night at his favorite club, he meets an enigmatic man who rocks the world he has created. Explicit sexuality/language/mature themes.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168889 Read Count: 10940
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 May 2010
Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary

"I want to make you sit on my nine-inch cock."  hehe My favorite line of all time-Bryan's and Edward's.  I am so glad to see you over here.  I really like this site so far.  Great job.  Love ya, Katie.

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Dangerous and Subversive

hehe  Great chapter and great story. 

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Confessions

I love how even in these first chapters, Edward thinks of Jasper as "pretty," "God."  He has fallen for him and has absolutely no clue yet.  Great job.

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Gift

"I want you in our - er, my bed."  hehe definately fallen for him.  Love this line also.  I can just picture Edward's face after.  hehe  Great job.

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Morning

I am addicted to Starbucks' Christmas Blend because of this chapter.  lol Definately loved being inside Jasper's head.

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - On The Ledge

oh that ledge.  Great job.

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Sidewalk

Really sweet interaction here between the guys.  Great job.

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Gamble

oh no Jasper freak out.  Well played by Edward with the flowers and nice intro with Kathleen.  Great job.

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Vancouver

Edward does have a heart.  lol  It's there even if he hasn't used it in a long while.  Your Jasper is just the most adorable guy.  Love it.

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In Jasper's Apartment

Edward loves him.  He is just too messed up to know it. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, my darling!

xoxo Katie

Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Unpleasant Memories

We find out a little something about Edward's past here and that tub. Great job. :)

Open Heart by starfish422 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

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Slash: Most of the tenants in Jasper's building were seniors who'd lived there for decades. Dr. Cullen was the exception; that alone was enough to pique Jasper's interest. The fact that Dr. Cullen was dead sexy didn't hurt, either. Sexuality.

Written for SubtlePen in the Winter 2009/2010 cycle of the Twilight Gift Exchange.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23171 Read Count: 524
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2010
Reviewer: BeCullen Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Open Heart

Great job.