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All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167465
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: iluvtwilight60 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Poor Bella pregnant at 16 :(

Edward should take responsibility of the baby how can he even think about killing a baby.Too bad.But I don't think he would do the right thing.

I hope she could be strong and take care of herself and her baby.I know too young but something should be done.

I love this story.I wish u a happy and safe trip.Please update as soon as you are back.Can't wait here:)



Author's Response:

Reviewer: iluvtwilight60 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Hi I really love this story.This is so cool...

Please send me a teaser of next chapter...

And update soon...please:)



Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.

Reviewer: iluvtwilight60 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Loved it...Can't wait to find out more.

Thanks for update and post next one soon :)



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