Reviews by Jrxoxo
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: The Perfect Girl

Hey, when will you be updating this story, I really like it

Author's Response:

Hi! I'm in the process of re-write. Because I lost my outlines and pre-written chapters a long time ago due to a computer virus, I'm rewriting the existing chapters to make is more consistent to my actual writing style, which has changed A LOT since I started posting this story. I wish I could give you a time frame, but with classes (I'm live in Ecuador and uni goes from May to December) plus other pending stories I have, I wouldn't know. I'll keep everyone posted on my blog, make sure you check it out. Once I have an exact date, I'll let you guys know there.

xoxo

Mina

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167503
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 23: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

Mystery girl for Jasper is Alice of course but, I love this fic

Author's Response:

We really couldn't write it any other :)  It just wouldn't have felt true to put them with anyone else.

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Ok now that's just cruel...and funny :)

Author's Response:

Hi there Jrxoxo

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Glad it made you laugh.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Gorgeous

Author's Response:

Hi Jrxoxo

Glad you liked the ring.

Regards, Jkazzie

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 127485
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Alright...next time, put in a sobbing warning

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661016
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward

Hurry up!!!!

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 148: Edward

Your darn right pitchforks and torches!!! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419152
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Jake

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

(Y) LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

(Y) Loved it!!,

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ahhh Charlie must suffer more!!! Tattward sexy!

Surprises by EmziBob Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Jessica comes home after a 3 year trip expecting Edward to be waiting to marry her, but she is in for one hell of a surprise. Told from Jessica's POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3430 Read Count: 5753
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: BPOV

Lol priceless!!!

Too Gay For You by Jaymili Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen, a hot-shot and hard-to-hire attorney, is looking for a nanny to watch his niece and nephew, from whom he just gained custody. If they are not driven crazy by the two little devils, they are trying to get in his ‘sexy pants’ and Edward is tired of it. Here comes Isabella Swan, his assistant’s sister, proclaimed tomboy and not able to keep a job for more than 24 hours. By some kind of circumstances, Edward comes to think she is a lesbian,therefore, in his eyes the perfect profile for a nanny. After all, she loves women, or does she?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50977 Read Count: 16512
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles

Don't take so long next time! :(

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814068
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Him still goin grumble and moan bout she not supposed to be there. Going to give her a hard time until he figures out he likes her to the point he doesn't want her showing her assets to everyone else or he's gonna fuck it up twice before he realizes she doesn't give a shit what he thinks and keeps dancing

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

NOOO!!! :(

Summary:

Something is happening to me and I'm not exactly sure what it is. Let's go back shall we? It all started when my dumb ass mother, Renee, left my father shortly after I was born. The f*@^ing bi*@h ruined my life before it even began. Now, I don't remember what happened when I was a toddler, but when I started kindergarten, that's when it all started going downhill.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23297 Read Count: 2175
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Keep writing! I'm loving the sorry already + I know this will be longer than 10 chapters because of how you have set out the story already

Kidnap101 by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 626]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has just one mission; to save her childhood best friend from the clutches of Hollywood. She's got her work cut out for her, but she'll do it, even if she has to do things that she really doesn't want to. Written purely for laughs.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11080 Read Count: 119831
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2013 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

More!!

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Her dad

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Come on! Keep going!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334478
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ahh come on!! Renee is a damn bitch and does have selfish bitch syndrome (nice by the way).

J.R

Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Leah killed Harry

Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

E.X.P.R.E.S.S.


Express is the hottest bar and lounge in Carlsbad, California. Kate only hires the hottest staff members to entice customers. While drama sometimes happens with customers, there is no drama that can compare with her employees. Rumors are constantly spread and there are no secrets with this group. You’re either accepted or not. While they seem like a dysfunctional group, they work great together. However, when relationships start to develop, things get a little rocky.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4706 Read Count: 1321
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2014 Updated: 29 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

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