Reviews by WAL70
Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28899
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOVED IT! LOVE YOU TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO,SOSWEET!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love it. I dont want it to end!!!!!!!!! Love Ya

Summary:

They will pay for every hour that has gone by without hearing her voice. For every tear our lovely child has shed. For every miserable second I haven't been able to kiss my wife. They will pay...with pain.



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2342 Read Count: 1815
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2015 Updated: 30 Jun 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are a GREAT AUTHOR plz write another!!! LOVE YA! 

Jilted by vampiregirl93 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Jilted

 

Jail time, first loves, bittersweet moments and kisses through the phone. She waits for his call because she's jilted, her heart still sings for the boy who only ever smiled for her. He committed crimes and she told lies. She loves him on accident, and he loves her forever. They didn't choose their secrets, they were born into this. AH-AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14289 Read Count: 1581
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2015 Updated: 06 Jul 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: After

LOVING IT! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: After: When I'm Gone

Love it!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Before: Autumn

I love this story! Your a great writer, why are there not more reviews? please update soon.Again love it.   THANK YOU!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Most of my readers are over at FF.net, but I know so many people are here instead. I will update this soon! Its a process for me--have no idea how to use this site LOL

Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126048
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella and Emmett together is just wrong.I like where this is going now.Can't wait for next update.  THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I loved the date.I believe it brought E and B closer,Tia actually helped the situation. I cant wait for more. LOVE YOU

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I want Edward and Bella together NOW! PLEASE! I love this story so much but I honestly don't like Bella and Emmett together. Thank You so much for your great stories I love them all.          LOVE YA

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It's Edwards and he's acting like such a dick.I thought he loved Bella? I really despise Edward right now,and I hurt for Bella.Emmette had better man up and tellthe truth for once.Can't wait until saturday.      LOVE YA!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love this I can't wait for saturday!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What's  the deal with Emmette and Rose? I can't wait for xmas day.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this so much! I just want B and E to get married and have babies already.Am I making myself clear? Just kidding.NOT!!!!!! Love Ya    P.S. EDWARD not EMMETTE

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I don't think Bella and Emmette are dating. I want Edward and Bella together soon please. Love Ya

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can't wait for them to get together.LOVE IT!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

We have to wait until wednesday! I cant wait,your fics are always great.I have been a fan for years.    LOVE YA!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I SWEAR TO GOD IT BETTER BE REAL!   LOVE IT!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

NO.NO.NO. You can't leave it there. I love this story so much.Please update soon I can't wait!   LOVE YA

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Emmette finally manned up,about damn time! I think we allknew the baby was Edwards and she went to Tia's. Edward was an asshole to Bella last chapter. I hope he begs her for her forgivness.Emmette is an asshole for being a bully and lying and being a manwhore and for not telling Edward about Bella.The only nice thing Emette did was buy Bella some new clothes.I wonder when he's going to tell Edward about Rose?What a loser Emmette is.   Christ your such a great writer. You bring out emotions in me I didn't know I had!   Thank you for sharing your gift with us.    LOVE YA!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love this so much.  THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Twins wow! Love it and Tia. Edward realy needs to get his act together. He should be taking charge og the situation a bit better. Emmette is annoying and rather on the mentaly challenged side.God help them all!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I REALY LOVED THE ENDING.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm just happy there's a lemon!  Thank you

Renovations by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary:

Renovations

Banner by Mina! 

 

Isabella Swan, thirty-six, is reeling from her recent divorce from the man she thought she would be spending her forever. Her mind and heart shattered, Bella purchases a home, but in need of repair near Seattle. Bella hires two men, Edward and Garrett to complete the repairs of her new home. Will these men renovate Bella's new home or is more in store? AU/AH Full Summary inside.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28282 Read Count: 72903
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOVE!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I want just B and E together!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love it!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

hot!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love Bella and Edward together. Garrett can go home!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I cant wait for the lemons!   THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That was HOT!  THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I want just Edward and Bella together!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99372
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This sounds good.Real good.I can't wait for more!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Positive reviews like this are making today (my birthday) a wonderful day!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

The tattoo is beautiful I love it! More plz!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  More soon, I promise :)

Summary:

If Mary Poppins was Practically Perfect in every way, then Bella Swan was a God. Everything about her life goes the way she plans it. Work, money, sex. She doesn't do relationships, they always get fucked up. All men try to do is control her. But not him.. Her lover. Will Bella ever find that perfect balance of control and allow herself to find real love? AU - Rated M


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5528 Read Count: 635
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was HOT! More plzz!

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

banner

 

A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32511
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am going to love this I know. You are one of the best authors EVER! I can't wait for more.    THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

LOVING THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edwards an ass!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Are they actually going to leave the palace? Where was Edward all night?

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love the creep!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOVE IT! Your Edwards are always assholes at the start of your stories.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love it, more plz!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

LOVING  THIS SOOOO MUCH!   THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loving this so much.Update soon please I beg of you.  LOVE YA!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I LOVE THIS BUT TO SHORT!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

THANK GOD YOU RETURNED! Love this story and I am positive Bella is Carolines. Please update soon. Love ya!

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/121675/images/guns_and_pies_banner.jpg

Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper

I hope this will not sound rude but you're really dragging this out. Bella is going to be his rebound from Tanya, not fair to Bella. How did Edward fail to see how nasty Tanya is for so long? Edward must not have much self esteem....  Thank You

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth

LOVE IT! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs

I hate Tanya! Eward needs to get rid of her NOW!     LOVE YA!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass

LOVE IT! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Summary:

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It's always been said that they're three sides to every story- yours, mine and the truth. With all the forbidden sex, manipulation, lies, secrets, deceit, twists an turns around every corner, finding the truth proves to be quite a difficult task. Backstabbing and deception become commonplace... Warning: super lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68959 Read Count: 17583
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2015 Updated: 14 Jun 2016
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Doubt

I am not trying to be rude but this chapter is blank also.I don't understand what I'm doing wrong I have been a member since 2011. I have come across one other story and i I don't remember what it was called.I really want to read this but agai for me it's blank. I am very sorry. My best to you.



Author's Response:

Maybe it's your browser. My story can also be read on fanfiction.net. My author's name is the same on ff.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: First day of the Trial

UUUMMMM ITTSSS BLANK! IS THIS A JOKE?



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, are you saying the chapter is blank? 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Where's Alice?

          WTF?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????



Author's Response:

The chapter isn't blank. I left the A/N section at the top blank which makes the chapter appear blank until you actually click on the chapter and see it. 

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229528
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it! Can't wait for thier honeymoon!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LOVE IT!

Summary:

Bella falls for the dangerous Edward Cullen will she stilll love him when she finds out he's a dangerous man and soon to be head of the mafia. What will Edward do when Bella ups and leaves. Will he find her? Full of heartbreak, Love, Family and Mafia. Mobward. Canon Couples. Lemons .E*B, EM*R, A*J


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Mpreg, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5345 Read Count: 1740
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2015 Updated: 10 Aug 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 4: The Truth but I still Love You

I don't know what to say.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Epov: Her First Time

Again dark lettering and skippiny around to much.Details-first date,how they got to a second and lemon was not good.Sorry the story is in the details.One word- CONFUSED!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Meet and greet

I have a hard time reading dark lettering.Please use white it's much easier to read. I LIKE THE STORY so far. The chapter was not to long. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 3: The First Date

I have to be honest,there are alot of spelling errors. Do you have spell check?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen meets Bella Swan. She's the young veterinary nurse who still believes in true love. He's the tattooed architect who finds himself very taken with the special girl. "There's something about you... Somehow you've got to me, Little Swan." This is their story of a fairytale romance in a modern world.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101028 Read Count: 39745
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2015 Updated: 30 Jan 2016
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

That was very sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I love a bit of sweetness! 

J x

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

MORE PLEASE!



Author's Response:

Hi,

Its on its way soon! :) 

J x

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

Buying Love GIF

Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307438
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

THEY HAD BETTER GET ELISABETH BEFOR ESME DOES!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Poor Edward. You left him hanging there like the rest of us! Update soon please.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I love this. But I feel sorry for Edward,the scars and bruises on the inside and out!             Thank You for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 55

That was both very sad and very sweet. He has so much love from everyone. I hope he realises this. LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

I can't believe you left it there. That was to short!   Thank You

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

I love this story,but please I beg of you to not make this so painful to read. I know this is fiction but it does happen in real life.  Thank you!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 58

Knowing Esme she has her locked in a room with no bed, food, clothes, or medication. This is such a sad story.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

This is honestly very painful to read. I get it though. Thank You

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Bella did not have to let him leave. She could have gone with him to the nursing home with him and checked Esme out. Bella is rich she has the best security and has nothing to fear from Esme. Jasper can testify about what he went through. Bella is PATHETIC, RICH, and STUPID! This story is driving me crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!       THANK YOU

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Bella should have made him stay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 59

She can't kill Esme! Edward can't lose Bella and or his mother.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I love it. But,this chapter is way to short.I know you already warned us. But I still want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!       Love YA!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

That was to short! It was also very sad,poor Edward. Please,please update soon.Thank you for giving us a peak into Edward's life and for always sharing your talent with us.   LOVE YA

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I love all of your stories, this one I know will be just as great. I'm believe this is about his mother.My only complaint is the chapter was TO SHORT!!  More please.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I think Bella is NOT being a drama queen. She has everyright to second guesse everything Edward said. I also think Edward might be in trouble with Esme.  LOVE IT,THANK YOU!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 51

YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 53

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Thiis is so sad. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

PLEASE I love all of your stories. But do you have to make this almost unbearable to read. I honestly can't take much more,fiction or not. My father had to go into a nursing home and it was private and the COUNTY PAID FOR IT! PLEASE stop with this being so torturess. Fiction or not.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

This chapter was not so painful. Thank you!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Esme threatend him...again?

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

LOVE YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

LOVED IT! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

BELLA COULD HAVE SAVED HIM ALREADY!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

Please let them save Edward. I can't handle reading about Edwards torture anymore. I know this is fiction but this is hard to read.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Is Edward still in love with Bella? If it wasn't for her Edward would be with an actual client to be tortured by. He just does not seem to be happy about being safe, and Bella going to get Esme out of the nursing home.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A girl, damaged and lost. A boy, scarred and rejected.

 

"You are confined only by the walls you build yourself." Anonymous

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6257 Read Count: 1356
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2015 Updated: 08 Sep 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

BEAUTIFUL



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Jenn

Summary:



Banner by: AstridGreenEyes-Banners

Summary: Being born into a made family has both advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes a man has to reflect on which relationships he involves himself in.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98617 Read Count: 229012
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2015 Updated: 23 Sep 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love everything you guys write.Your so talented, thanks for writing and sharing with us.LOVE YA!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

LOVING THIS!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aro is always the bad guy. I want Edward and Bella together yesterday!! Ilove this  story,I can't wait for more.   Love Ya!

Summary:

Head over Heels

 

Can a broken boot heel mend a broken heart and lead to a HEA?

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 Read Count: 2973
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2015 Updated: 15 Sep 2015
Reviewer: WAL70 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

TO SHORT! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!