Reviews by LilCullen454
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
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Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

So happy that Edward is feeling better!  I still want you to hang Paul by the balls because the guy deserves it!!!

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Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Can we kick the shit out of most of Jasper's family!!?????

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Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

I am kind of pissed that Bella even had the fucking nerve to stand up for that jackass!  How could she get pissed at Edward for going after Paul!  Not liking Bella much right now at all!  She stands up for the asshole and doesn't seem to give a rats ass that the asshole has ruined lives left and right!  What a bitch!

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

Still pissed at Bella!   The fact that her first inclination was to defend that bastard she used to be with just fucking pisses me off!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

So glad Bella FINALLY realizes that she needs some freaking help!  Can't wait for the talk!

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Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

So glad that these two are talking and getting things out there!!!  Can't wait for them to find the asshole Paul!!!

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Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Going to miss these two but I am really excited about "Caught in the Flames"!!!

So glad that Bella went out there and confronted Paul because she deserved to be the one that watched him get arrested!!!

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Yes he should!  He worked hard for this firm and deserves it!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101886
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Love to see that Bella is ready to take the next step and talk to someone!  Jake's gift is Edward!  I can see it now!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That was so sad!  I lost my father to cancer and it was awful!  I watched him disappear before my very eyes and even 19 years later it hurts so I can't imagine what your friend is going through. 

I can't wait for the happier times, for your characters and your dear friend.

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Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Renee is going to lose her daughter and grandkids if she keeps this shit up!  Yes lets hear from Officer Green Eyes, Nice Ass!  Very curious about the pain he is hiding!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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On one of history's darkest days, Edward finds his other half. Bella wakes to find that her guardian angel may just be a figment of her imagination. A journey of two lost souls as they find the light when darkness surrounds them.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120996 Read Count: 29995
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2014 Updated: 13 Jul 2014
Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I really think going to Forks now would be the best thing for Bella.  To many people in NY know what she went through and getting out of the city with all of those tall freaking buildings will do her alot of good.  Really sad that Kaycee is such a brat, I feel for her I really do, however she obviously needs some help with regards to her hatred of Bella just because she survived!  Her dad really needs to take some responsibility for his daughter's actions where as he is probably letting her get away with everything simply because she lost her mom and sister!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Unfortunately, Kaycee's attitude is normal. She's also still just a young girl. Time and counseling are the only things that will help.

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Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Edward - so damn stubborn!  It is the one thing that has always drove me crazy with him!  He doesn't realize just how selfish he is when he is acting the way he does.  So damn sure that he is right and everyone else is wrong that he comes across as uncaring of Bella's feelings!  No matter how many times she told him (in the book) that she wanted to be with him and be like him he just blew her off and acted like his way was the only freaking way!  The Jacob from the books was the same damn way!  Neither of these guys gave Bella any freaking credit for her own desires and what she WANTED!!!  Of course her stringing Jake along never set well with me either!

So glad to see Bella happy and making friends!  She seems in a much better place than she ever was in New York!



Author's Response:

Hehe Yeah, although in this one so far, his reasoning is her age and the traumatic past, so... ;) Thanks. :)

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Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I hope Bella can forgive Alice!  Yes she mettled but she had good intentions.  I understand Bella's anger but the least she could have done was listen to Alice and let her explain everything!

So glad to see that this Edward isn't going anywhere, at least that is what he promised.  I just hope that he doesn't fight the whole "Bella becoming a vampire" bullshit!

Thank you for making this reunion private, now they need to just pretend that they met at school I guess?



Author's Response:

She will. :) She needs the chance to calm down, and now that Edward is there, it'll help a lot, especially since she knows he wasn't involved in Alice's deception. :)

Thank you! :)

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Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

They are both so sad right now!  I can't wait until they see each other again!  Love the tattoo idea - LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh this is getting so exciting!!!  Can't wait for the face to face meeting!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. :)

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

So glad that they are continuing to talk and get to know each other some.  Can't wait for the school "meeting" and Bella dealing with the girls at school as well as Edward dealing with the boys!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

So happy for the both of these people!  Edward and Bella deserve some happiness in their lives after the hell they have been through over the last 4-5 years!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Thank you for not making Rosalie a bitch (yet)!  She is very misunderstood in most stories.

I hope Bella and Alice can get past this fracture in their relationship because I believe they will need each other!



Author's Response:

Hehehe Nah, Rose is sweet in this one. :)

They will! :)

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Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Can't wait for school!  This should be real fun!

Jake is going to phase now, I hope he keeps the good thoughts about the Cullens!



Author's Response:

We'll see. ;) Thanks!

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Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I can't wait until Lauren sees Edward!  I bet Bella's jealousy will come out like a tiger!!



Author's Response:

Hehehe We'll see. :) Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159748
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Still wondering if Jake is going to make another appearance!  He and Leah are going to have a cow about "fat" Bella getting the great husband, fantastic sex, and a baby!!!  Those two are going to be green with envy and probably not nice about it!

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Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

These two are so cute!  Is Jake going to be back?  I bet he and Leah are going to freak out when they find out that Bella and Edward are getting married and having a baby!  I am assuming that Leah can't get pregnant because of her anorexia or she is just so damn afraid of be "fat" which is just a part of the eating disorder she obviously has!  I could see those two trying to cause problems for our happy couple!

Edward - GO GET THE GIRL A RING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I have a feeling that the necklace is great but Bella was hoping for an engagement ring!

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Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So glad I found you guys here!  I was out of town and had no email then suddenly the story dissappears from FFN!

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yeah the baby is here and I was hoping for a boy!  Loved the name!  What a big boy!!!

Can't wait to see what Asshole and Bitch have to say to Bella and Edward!  I hope Bella losing her baby weight so those assholes don't have new ammo agaist her!

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Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I am going to miss this story so much!  Another great chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201960
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter- 48: My English Boy

Loved it!



Author's Response: Aww... thank you so much. :) Thanks for the review. The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by:CaiteexxGraphics

SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

She is tough yes but kind of a bitch too!  How old is Bella?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082143
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow I wonder what Renee did and who hurt the hell out of our Bella!!!???

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Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I would do it to!  Pay It Forward!!!

Finally we meet Edward!!!  How long till we find out what and the hell happened to Bella in Jacksonville?  Someone hurt her really bad for her to be having these horrible nightmares!

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Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What and the hell happened to poor Bella that she is literally running from the sexy Fireward???!!!  Can't wait to hear from Edward!

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Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Who ever this person is really hurt Bella but I just want to know if it was physical or mental or both!  Who is this asshole threatening Bella?

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Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What a fucking bitchy thing for Rose to say!  I hope she changes her tune.  Since when is it ever okay to cheat!!!???  She only listens to what Irina (the lying skank) says!!??

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Boy are these two in denial but then again Bella has been seriously hurt and she needs to get it freaking out and if she is afraid she needs to tell  someone about it!!!  Can't wait to find out what and the hell happened to her!!!!!

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Rose!  What a fucking bitch!  I really have a hard time picturing Edward as being bad in bed!  Anyway's that doesn't excuse the lying hoebag for what she fucking did!  I hope for Emmett she comes back with her tail between her legs and he tells her to shit or get off the pot!!!  If she truly changes maybe he should allow her back!

What and the hell happened to Bella and who called her??  I hope nothing happened to her mother!

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Okay, I change my mind he can hurt Renee, that bitch wants her back with this asshole that hurt her so bad and by the sounds of that dream killed their baby!!!???  What kind of fucking mother wants her daughter back with a animal like that????  Does the asshole have money and Renee wants to live on their money?  What a bitch!!!

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Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Can't wait to find out what happened to Bella!  I hope Emmett called the freaking cops because that is destruction of property and Rose and the skank deserve to go to jail or at least be forced to pay Em back!  What a fucking twosome those two are, they deserve each other!

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Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Those three in Florida deserve each other and prison!  James for the attack and Phil and Renee for lying to the police!!!  Can we beat the shit out of all of them, please???

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Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I really hope Bella gets some help even if she talks to a grief counselor!

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

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Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

Star Crossed

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82046
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Norex is going to be a huge problem isn't he?  I would not put it past that asshole to make a pact with Jakob just because he is a jerk!  So glad that the council approved!!!

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow that was exciting!!!

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
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Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Go Edward!  I have a feeling that Rose doesn't really hate Bella and that it is true that Tanya has something on her!  What and the hell did Rose do that has her so afraid of Tanya?

I hope Tanya goes away but we all know that she isn't going to go away quietly!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

God Rose is just a bitch!!!!  I hope Edward tells his parents all about those comments they should kick Rose and Tanwhore out and have the rest stay for the holidays.

 

Jake is seriously pissing me off!

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Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't wait for Edward to pull his head out of his ass and dump Tanya!  He obviously doesn't want her if he is dreaming of Bella and getting off thinking of Bella!!!  I hope Bella also gets rid of Jake quickly!  Tanya is up to something else too.  I really don't think she was in France when she called Edward the first time so why did she lie!?

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Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Jacob is acting like a child and his jealousy is just going to send Bella straight into the arms of Edward.  Then again, how much longer do we have to deal with Tanya and her attitude!?

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh hell who is it?  Tanya, Rose or Lauren? Or is it the ass hole Jake?   Can't wait to find out! 

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Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow Jake is a serious idiot!   If I was Bella I would tell his ass that We Are OVER!!!  Is he freaking delusional?   I have a feeling that he is going to cause problems!!!!!

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Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

God is Jake an ass or what?  This guy is a real piece of work for treating Bella the way he does.  I have a feeling he has been cheating on Bella all along because you know the old saying "they who acts jealous is usually the guilty party"!  Now we need to just get rid of Tanya!

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Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

How much longer is Edward going to believe his lies to himself about how he feels about Tanya?   If he really loved her like he thinks he does he wouldn't be feeling the things he feels for Bella!   It is so obvious that Tanya is scared as hell about being able to hold on to Edward and this will only cause problems for everyone.  I have a feeling that I am not going to like Rosalie to much in this story.  She has no freaking business inviting Tanya to someone else home without their damn permission and if I was Esme I would have kicked both their asses out!!!!!

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Date: 11 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Please get rid of Tanya because I am sick to death if her already and don't even get me started on that bitch Rose!!!

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Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hot damn way to go Esme and Edward!!!  Rose is going to have a fit but after the way that bitch just talked to everyone in front of her mother, knowing full well she understands French, then if she picks Tanya's side I say kick her ass out too!!!  I sure hope Rose comes around for the families sake though!

I sure hope Tanya doesn't have a key to Edwards place because that girl is vindictive enough to go set Edwards place on fire!

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yes!  I hope Rose goes bye bye!!!  Love this story!

I hope Jake gets a nice STD and his dick falls off!

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Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I loved it! So glad Bella told Jake to go to hell!  Loved that kiss can't wait for the next chapter! 

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Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Rosalie is a selfish bitch!  Instead of owning up to her mistakes she wants Bella and Edward to pay the price!  She doesn't deserve her famility and for that matter, except for Emmett I highly doubt her family would disown her.

Jacob is getting dangerous and I hope Bella tells Edward about it before Rosalie tries to use Jacob as a tool to break Bella and Edward up!