Reviews by Duvi
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113997
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

Uhm...what is Bella going to do now? She must know he was talking about her. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 13 Part 5

Back on track!! Yay!! I hope being off the track meant you had an awesome summer break!! Relaxing somewhere reading or watching tv surrounded by friends and family. I'm glad your back!!



Author's Response:

I did have a great summer. Wrote a lot in the story! Can't wait to share with you guys!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

Tha limo ride is going to be rough. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

Woah....Alice!! Hubba hubba. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 5 (part 5)

He will never sleep with her even if he wants too. Edward is terrified that Charlie won't have food. I think these two will deny their feelings for a very long time. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 5 (Part 4)

Gah. Slow burn....slow burn. This isn't even a burn yet! Lol. I want her living with him now. That's what's best for Charlie and Elizabeth but I understand why they are so hesitant. Edward thinks Bella is married. Bella thinks she's imposing and taking advantage of him. Geez, can Alice be introduced already! I bet she sets everyone right and then some. Lol. 

I bet Esme can already see how attracted they are to each other. Love this story!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm ahead of you guys in my writing and I just did an entire Alice pov chapter. :)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

Well damn. Totally worth the wait. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 13 part 3

And it starts!!!!!! Yes!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 5 (Part 3)

Yes, finally!!!! She's moving in. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

Finally!!!! He's going to ask her to move in and feed him all the time!!!!! Thanks for the bonus chapter!!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 13 part 1

Tanya. Tanya would bring an infant to the Oscar's. Le sigh. I want her gone. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 19 Part 12

Ahhhhh!!!!!! I need the next update right now!!! You tease!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 19 Part 13

So hot!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 19 Part 10

Hahaha. Insert foot in mouth. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 19 Part 11

Get it Bella!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Milk Money

I can't wait for Tanya to enter the story because I think Bella is going to go all mamma bear on her. I know Tanya doesn't care about Charlie but she will care about Edward. I wonder how that's going to go down. 

Edward must feel horrible after dropping the milk! He must be going crazy in the kitchen or hallway or wherever he went to hide. I hope he pays Bella more. 

I love the updates but I hate it when I get a fake update. I get so happy thinking you gave us a double update to find out its a different picture. It breaks my heart. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 5 (part 2)

I knew it!!!! She felt bad last chapter but I knew it. He's finally going to ask her to stay. YAY!!!!! 

These two are so blind. They both already feel thigs for each other. Sigh. Love the story. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 20 Part 3

Oh, Alice everyone knows. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 5 (Part 1)

I love this story more and more!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 12 part 6

Oh, wow!!! Will she pursue him!??!? Interesting. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Finally!!! Finally!!! Finally!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 15 part 3

Forbidden. What a great word! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 17 Part 7

Poor Bella, she feels life she isn't good enough. I hate that about her. I know it can't be helped but I hate it. I guess Edward will have to show her she is more than worth it later. ;-)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 17 Part 8

I really hope Edward tells Bella how he feels. I also hope Tanya gets it through her big head that it's over. I really, really, REALLY hope Tanya did something stupid and called soemone to have sex with and is photographed. 

News Headlines everywhere will report that while Tanya was out cheating on Edward he was at the hospital with his sick son. I also hope that every one sides with him and Bella. I hope all the fans want them together. It will make their relationship so much easier to deal with. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 19 Part 14

Ugh. Need next update now!!! Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 14 part 4

They are so cute together. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Emmett, don't let Edward hear you! He might just fire you. Poor Esme. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 14 Part 1

Esme needs to meddle!! Something needs to happen. These two need to be together. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 8 Part 1

Gah, these two, does Alice have to do everything?!?!?!!! Bella needs to be the new nanny, end of story. With Edward's bad luck the new nanny will be a horrible obsessed fan that treats Bella like trash and when fired tells the tabloids everything. The guy has horrible luck with bimbos. 

thanks for the update!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 20 Part 6

He saw. He saw it all. Lol. Aw, these two need some sort of code word or sign to let other people know they are "busy." 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

That was epic!!! Sh can't get mad at a little girl who is only mimicking her voice. If anything Tanya is the bad influence for cursing in front of children. Loved it!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

Oh, he's hurting all right. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 13 part 7

Just picturing him holding Elizabeth and cooking....gah!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 3 (part 2)

I kind f sort of hate you. I knew this was a Drabble but thought, I can wait and read it once a week or every other week. NOPE. I can't even wait an hour. It mocks me, the update mocks me!!! I love this story so much. Thanks for writing. 

it keeps getting better and better. I can't wait until Bella and Elizabeth are around all the time. I just know they will be moving in soon. Especially once Edward sees where they live and how they live. It will be a blessing for the, both. Gah!!! I can't wait!!!! 



Author's Response:

I absolutely loved this review. You made me smile so big! Are we friends on fb? If not, we should be!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 11 Part 4

Hahahaha!!!! Oh, Edward. Really? I want Tanya gone!! I have a feeling she is going to stick around just to piss every one off. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 12 Part 2

This comment is off topic BUt have you seen Kellan around kids while signing he absolutely loves kids and I swear looks for them to play with. It's so cute. 

 

Gah!!! These sister are the best. The way they help each other is just amazing. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 17 Part 9

That's where the other photographer comes into play. I hope he takes good pictures of Tanya with someone else. Please!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 3 (part 1)

Omg!! It shouldn't be funny but it is. He's never experienced this because Charlie has always been so sick. Poor baby. The joys of a healthy boy. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 19 Part 15

Damn!!!! That was so good. I can't wait for more. Bella is turning out to be a little sex kitten. I love it!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 19 part 16

These two are great together. I can't wait until they are officially a family. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In order for Bella, or any other woman, to be able to sell breast milk that means her body is producing it for her own child. So, that being said, Bella must have a baby of her own. I don't have any kids of my own so I don't know the logistics. I've heard some women can't produce milk and others that dry up. I hope her child is okay and there was no tragedy involved. That was the first thing I thought. Poor Bella will get attached to this child because her own is gone. Let's see where you take this!! 



Author's Response:

You really don't need to have a child to produce breast milk. I produced before I was every pregnant. Woman who adopt can lactate. There is medication for it , and you could be lactating in less than a week. Without medicatioin, 10 to 20 minutes of serious nipple play 8 times a day, and you'd be surprised at what you could get in 2 weeks, let alone if you used a breast pump daily. It's a real thing...lol...

In response to the rest of your review, Bella does have a daughter.. a weaning daughter. :)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 (part 3)

Omg!!! I really wish I would have found this story once it was finished. It's amazing and now I'm sad I don't have more to read. Lol. I love it!!!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry! I do have lots of others. I have books published on Amazon and I have many fan fictions there!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 2 (part 4)

Booooooo!! No, Edward. Lol. Next update for sure. Charlie should be the one coming, poor baby needs to eat!!! 



Author's Response:

Edward comes soon :)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 2 (part 5)

Poor baby. Feed him already. I know this is fake and I'm still worried. Lol. I'm loving this story so much!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 2 (part 6)

Finally, the poor baby eats!!! I need more!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 2 (part 7)

Ahhhhhhhh!!! Finally, he eats! Poor Charlie. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 3 (part 3)

I loved this update. Thank god Charle is getting more food. I wonder when Bella will give him breast milk from the source???



Author's Response:

When the pumping can no longer keep up.... :D

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2015 Title: Milk Money

This story!!!! Love it!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 3 (part 5)

Its a huge update!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you! If only it was about Bella and baby Charlie NOT Tanya. Ugh. If Edward breaks up with her before the Oscars all hell will break loose. She will lie and cry and make everything about her. What a horrrible person. I'm just glad Charlie is finally eating. I know this story is fake but that was giving me anxiety. just the thought was scary. 

 

Okay, off to work. Thanks for the extra long update!! 

Hilda



Author's Response:

I'm off to work too. Big day for me. Sunday is Bella's pov again, and Saturday's update is really funny!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 3 (part 6)

He just needs to hire her already!! This guy is so sleep deprived he's not thinking straight. Meanwhile, poor Charlie is still always hungry.

You are a writing beast!!! You are spoiling me with these daily updates!!! I love them though so keep them coming. Btw, I still think Edward needs to dump Tanya before the Oscars. We all know she's cheating. I predict a paparazzi scandal next!!! They take and publish pictures of her having sex on the beach with James while her poor son and baby daddy are at home. There! Perfect. Two birds, one stone. 

Have a great weekend!!



Author's Response:

Thanks.. and I'm not taking the weekend off from posting :)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 3 (Part 7)

I loved this update!!!!! That was so funny and adorable AND Charlie has food!!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 4 (part 1)

Aw, they feel the same way and don't even know it. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 4 (part 2)

Aw, poor baby!!!! This still gives me anxiety and it's fake. It also makes me hate Tanya with a passion. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4 (part 3)

Can we leave more than obe review? I'll leave a review till i get to 500!! 

 

I don't know why. I don't have a weird fettish about it, but I can't wait for her to breastfeed Charlie. I think its the closeness and love Edward will see from a stranger, one Tanya can't bother to give. 

 

Im writing this on my phone. Please excuse any typo. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

That was so funny!!! I'm going to like Jasper a lot! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 5 (part 7)

THank you so much for the free book!!!! I love books!!! 

Gah!!! This update was great. I wonder if everyone can see Edward checking her out. He was totally staring at her boobs. LOL! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

Yeah, guys! She's just feeding him. Gosh. 

 

Buahahahahhahahaha!!!!! These two are crazy and funny and such boys. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 5 (Part 9)

More!!!! I need more!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 5 (Part 10)

The magazines/paparazzi better be following Tanya as well. They need to document her affairs. That would make me so very happy. Tanya needs to go!!!! 

 

Thanks for for the update!! I hope you have a great weekend. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 6 Part 1

Silly girl, that man is head over heels for you. I think he's going to have to work hard to convince her. How fun!!!! 

 

Thanks for the book!!! I can't wait to read it. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)

Ohhhhhhh, Jasper will have to pick Alice and Elizabeth up!!! Yay!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 6 (Part 3)

So very smart of Alice. I love that picture of her.....so pretty. Jasper is going to go nuts!!!! Thanks for updating!!! Almost at a thousand reviews, sweet!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 6 (Part 4)

Better late than never.

I'm so happy they are going to meet!!!! I can't wait for Elizabeth and Charlie to meet. Will they like each other or be jealous of Bella's time and body?? or, will they love each other like siblings and both want to cuddle with Bella. I Hope it's the sibling love. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 7 (Part 1)

I'm not going to lie. I didn't read the chapter. I wanted to be 1,000!!! 



Author's Response:

giggle... well I think you should get a prize!  I don't know if we are friends on FB and it's nearly impossible to message here. My email is nocturnalem@gmail.com  or find me on facebook. Im kinda the only NJ Cole.  (at least I hope so)  I have a heart with a butterfly profile pic :)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

You magnificent woman, you!!! I love this first meet, talk about first impressions. I can't wait for more!!!! I want to wait but it only last about a minute, unless I'm at work. Lol.

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3

He already has a nickname for her. :-) *sigh* 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 7 (Part 4)

Will Tanya show up any time soon?? That witch better stay away. Poor Charlie. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 7 part 5

Can we all just say "awwwww." Charlie is finally full and happy. thank goodness for Alice!! Voice of reason. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 7 Part 6

Yay!!!! I love Alice!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

Yes!!! They babies meet. I knew I would love it!! Elizabeth's baby!! Gah, so freaking cute!!! 



Author's Response:

Well, I thought it was a cute part of their story and I wanted to include it :)

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 8 part 3

How scary. I'm so glad your son is doing better. I can't believe you updated. I'm actually really impressed. 

 

Give ves him an extra big hug from all of us!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 8 part 6

Born to be wild...lol. Love this fic!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 8 part 7

Happy birthday!!! I hope you had a great one and that your boys treated you good. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

Please, please, please!!!! I need to know what will happen with Tanya!! She needs to be photographed in the beach with a lover in full swing of her sexcapades. Seriously, she needs to fall from grace while Edward is taking care of Charlie. I want her to suffer!!! 

I just know I'm going to love the pool scene. I wonder who is going to win. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9

Poor guy, he knew it was a dream but didn't care. Wow, I was not expecting this lemony goodness. Thanks!! It wasn't real but we got it early.  Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 8 part 10

Both of them have it bad. I'm telling you!!!!! The paparazzi need to tske horrible pictures of Tanya with another man. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 9 Part 3

These guys are so far gone. Love it! I'm still scared of the fact Tanya hasn't showed up. That's going to be drama. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

Awwwww, this was precious. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 10 part 2

Omg!!!! Buahahahahaha!!! I love the way your brain works!! I love your brain!!! He didn't see much, right. Gulping and swallowing....oh, Bella, you are killing Edward. I can't wait to read Edward's side of this chapter. He must be dying and totally jealous of his own son. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 10 Part 3

I wanted to know what he was thinking when he saw her!! Next time? They are already so good together. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 10 Part 6

Unusual as in Tanya scares the kids??

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 11 part 5

So I really hate Tanya. I thought she would be so mean to Bella and be a total bitch but Tanya is conceited she thinks everyone is beneath her. The possibility of Edward liking Bella doesn't even enter her mind. All I thought about throughout the chapter were the lyrics to this song. Geez! Tanya is a piece of work  

 


You're so vain, you probably think this song is about you
You're so vain, I'll bet you think this song is about you
Don't you? Don't You?

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

Tanya is going to be a huge pain. Hopefully Jasper has some incriminating pictures of her. I'm serious about wanting her to burn!!!!! I can forgive many things but not feeding and taking care of your own baby is unforgivable. 

 

I can't wait to read Edward's chapter!!!! I want it now. It's going to be full of sexual tension and Edward almost having s stroke a couple of times. I also think he's falling for both Bella and Elizabeth. That love is going to make him stand up to Tanya. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 11 Part 1

I know we need this for the story but I need to know what is going to happen!!!!! What is Tanya going to say and do. 

 

*I keep telling myself to wait, but I can't. I do this to myself. Ignore my ramblings and continue your slow torture. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 11 Part 2

I've said it many times before...I hate Tanya. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

Dun, dun, dun!!!!!! They will finally meet. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

I wonder how that is going to go? I keep thnking Tanya is this evil person becasue she didn't want to feed Charlie BUT after all of these updates I think she is beyond shallow. She is so self centered that Edward wanting to break up with her might not even matter to her. It would be the perfect reason to leave. She really hates being a mom and being near Charlie. However, she might black mail him to stay with her. Who knows what goes on in her head. 



Author's Response:

The fact that Tanya didn't want to breast feed didn't make her a bad mom. Even though I breast fed my kids, I know lots of good mothers who didn't. The fact that she didn't care about him makes her awful. I have a lot of fun writing her shallowness!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 12 part 1

I absolutely love these girl!!!!!! They are such good girls and I want the best for them. These boys better threat them good. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 18 Part 10

Damn Emmett, he just had to clockblock. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 17 Part 6

Hahahhahahaha!!! Finally, Bella must be so worried and needs Edward there. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

I really hope it's someone there to tell Edward about Charlie. I don't remember who's at the hospital. Maybe Emmett or even Rosalie. Anyone!!

knowing you it's going to be paparazzi and they take pictures of Edward in bed and Tanya half naked. Ugh. I'm so over Tanya. I really hate her. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

That's it! Tanya won't even try to pretend. I don't know if I'm happy or mad that it was this easy. I really hate her. 

BTW, not that you need this but I want to clarify that I hate Tanya but love your writing!!!! These updates make me so happy and I can't wait for more. Thank you. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 15 Part 6

They are so n love. People are going to start to notice, if they don't already. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 15 part 7

Oh, Edward! The only one feeling bad in this situation is him. Bella already feels like he's too big, too hot for her. I hope Bella has a great night at home with the kids while Edward suffers with Tanya. Or better yet, I hope Bella goes on a date so he can realize what everyone already sees. Edward is in love with Bella. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 16 Part 1

Aw, I loved this update! So funny and cute. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 16 Part 2

Aw, poor kid. It's times like these that you can see that Edward and Bella are the real parents. They are up with him when he's sick. They worry if he's eating and gaining weight. They love him enough to worry. 

tanya needs to go and she needs to go epically. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 16 Part 3

Seriously, please make Tanya as stupid as I think she is. Edward won't sleep with her so she finds someone who will and gets caught. Then, she will blame Edward, but with the media not only on his side but wanting him to be with Bella she will not be able to do a thing. Please!!!! Please!!! Please!!!! She needs to be publicaly shamed. I dont' want her in that house. I don't think I've hated a Tanya as much as I hate her. 

I'm actually a little scared at how much I dislike her. I wish she was killed off but that might make the media take her side. I want her gone! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 16 Part 4

Momma bear is going to come out! Tanya better be ready. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

Tanya needs to go!!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 16 Part 7

I would be so angry!!! Like beyond angry if the phone was shut off when the parent whose child is under my care is sick. I'm still waiting for Bella to turn momma bear and its pissing me off that she doesn't say anything. She is more Charlie's mother than anyone in that house and they better listen to her. Grrrr!! Poor Charlie.