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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 121984
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

PLEASE tell me that Edward and Bella will have their HEA, and Felix will be unsuccessful in stealing Bella from Edward!



Author's Response: Full length stories (this) always get a happy ending.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I'm so worried about Felix!!!!!!



Author's Response:

He shows up soon

Summary:

A three part songfic inspired by the song by Lady Antebellum. Edward and Bella naturally. Can Bella forgive Edward for what he "did"?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Historical, Horror, Humor, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6724 Read Count: 2830
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 11 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Coming Together

thank god for the HEA! I was crying along with Bella



Author's Response:

I could never leave them seperated for too long.... this couple was meant to be together! :D

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 101227
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100037
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Thunderstorm

Was there someone in Edward's past that hurt him deeply-that made him the cold hearted womanizer he is?

I would love for him to open up to Bella and change his whoring ways. Not all men can change, though-they get used to that lifestyle- never having to resist having sex with any willing woman. However, they do miss out on true love. I know a man like this-he never changed, never married.

But I also know a man who left those womanizing ways behind when presented with true love, and is completely faithful-hope Edward can change and be like him!

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23823
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

I am happy that E&B had sex!

Is James behind the muder?

 



Author's Response:

Is James behind the murder? Maybe...maybe not.  There are quite a few sick individuals in this story that might have done it.

Thank you for reviewing :o)

Popsicle Sticks by Emmamama88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:


'That which does not kill us, only makes us stronger', at least that's what they say. Bella and Edward meet as children while on vacation with their families. A lifetime of summers follow, and their relationship is tested beyond its strength. Follow their story through the years as they come to learn that each day spent with someone we love is a gift not to be taken lightly, but to be cherished forever.

Thank you to Coleen561 for the lovely banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94085 Read Count: 9045
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2013
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Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

"You've broken my heart, Edward Cullen."...You've got me crying my eyes out here.

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37007
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Shattered

Oh No! This makes me so sad

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 119048
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 80: The Future - Part 3

LOVE IT!!! So excited for the sequel!



Author's Response: Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

Edward and Bella overcome death, destruction, drugs, cheating, and everything in between. But can they withstand the possibility of divorce? AH OOC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30149 Read Count: 14428
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: A Flash of Anger

Shit!!!!!!!!!!

I think that Bella better run her ass after Edward and tell him she will cut Jacob out of life if it means saving her marriage. A spouse is more important than a friend. She also needs to TRULY apologize to Eward.

Are you planning an HEA? I can't read all this heartache, thinking that they won't be able to work it out...

 



Author's Response:

I don't want to give anything away BUT I will say I think you will be safe reading on. *wink, wink, nudge nudge*

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Getting Rid of Bella

I don't understand what is wrong with Bella. Doesn't she love Edward?

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Moving Forward

I am an Edward and Bella HEA fan.

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 655]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

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banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 303899
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Please tell me that porn star Tanya will not come between them. And will not try for a threesome, either-she is obviously jealous of Bella

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I'm glad i found you here. have been reading on fan fict

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 637652
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 50: Edward

"Are you sure you're asking how big my...piano is"...should she ask how big his ORGAN is?  ....LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was little, her best friend left her. Years later, she's trying to find her way in life and comes face to face with what she thinks is the same little boy from her past. Mobward. ExB. M for language, violence, maybe a little 'fun time' later. never know.



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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95290 Read Count: 211273
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

“Will you be our mom?”...LOVE IT! SO SWEET!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Jessica will be a splat against the wall

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That is so f*cking sad!!! Pigs biting the shit out of her, on top of everything else?

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 312574
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Our Desire


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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - My Confessions

I want to know who the hell is letting Maggie in the house-her interrupting them during sex? NO f*cking way! Why doesn't Edward put this foot down and keep Maggie out of the house?

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks

Edward is a f*ckwad!

I'm guessing you're breaking E&B up.

 

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 520]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 101823
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3- Edward's side

Will there be an HEA for Edward and Bella?



Author's Response:

aww, i'm a strong believer in HEA! You shouldn't even have to worry about this ;)

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses

The thought of Edward with Tanya makes me f*cking cry!!! I did like reading that Edward recognizes that there is still passion between he and Bella-that IS what brought them together in the first place. I think that because they married due to the pregnancy, they didn't really appreciate one another the way they might have if things hadn't started that way for them. HEA for edward and Bella, please?



Author's Response:

thanks for your review!

Yup, their is still passion between them! Don't worry, I'm planning a HEA all the way ;)

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8- The first day

This really made me cry- to know that these two have had so much love for one another and are apart.

I wouldn't trust Tanya with my kids, either

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9- Family time

My heart is breaking for Bella. She has not moved on like Edward has. Here she was thinking he regretted leaving her and the girls for his music career, when he was just regretting leaving the park...made me cry for her.  :(

I like Rosalie. I'm hoping that she'll find ou that the broken arm was on Tanya's watch and also hoping that Rosalie doesn't like Tanya.

I am hoping that Edward an Bella really talk-they have each matured so much since their break up. The attraction(and maybe love??) is still there. Things started out rough for them and they were so young and immature. Time and maturity can give a completely different perspective.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Moving On

I was wishing that either Edward or Bella would admit to still having feelings...I am sitting here crying...again.  I hope that Edward's parents hate Tanya. And that Esme tries to get Edward and Bella back together.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

Tanya is coming off as desperate, needy, pushy and insensitive..."not pregnant Yet?" WOW! She is just a girlfrend. Hope this totally turns Edward off.

I love this story, but I cry every time I read it. I am tired of crying   :(

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

Ok, so you know I have cried every chapter?  Well, I still cried, but much less than the norm-I am actually beginning to feel more hopeful. They need the extended family to push them back together. At first, I thought that Bella was the only one suffering from self-esteem issues, but I think Edward does, too. They both hold back due to fear of rejection. They never told each other "I Love You?" How sad!

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

I am worried about what Tanya has up her sleeve.

I feel so badly for Bella- to still be so in love with Edward and have to watch hm with Tanya.

Alice's revelation about pushing Edward for divorce was just painful to read. Some people think that divorce is so easy, when it is anything but easy. It breaks hearts and lives. I am hoping that Alice speaks with Edward and apologizes for that, and maybe she can tell Edward that Bella still loves him?

Hope Jamie is not a bad guy here. I hope he is nice to Bella-she does deserve it. I am also hoping that Edward will become so jealous that he realizes his feeelings for Bella and kicks Tanya to the curb.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19- Eagerly awaiting... not!

WTF? Why the hell did Esme tell Tanya to come? I thought Esme wanted E&B together? I'm so confused!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20- Hide and seek

Well, Tanya is starting to show her true colors here- can't wait for Edward to kick her to the curb!

Lucky Shot by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 314]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Have you ever imagined something so beautiful, so enchanting that it must be a dream or a mirage?"

Take a gaggle of small town gossips, the doctor's son, the mysterious new single mom, add in a lucky shot with a BB gun and watch what unfolds.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9986 Read Count: 113341
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Jun 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary:

Edward is a medschool drop-out come pharmacist who hates his life. Almost every moment of it.

The light of his coldmedicine aisle is Isabella Swan, a frequent customer and constant source of escapist sexual fantasies; he is desperate for the courage and impetus to make them reality.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10542 Read Count: 1343
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hey don't knock the'tasches! I love taking rides on hy hubby's'



Author's Response:

I love mustaches on the right man, but I am sorry, Charlie's does make him look a bit too much like a porn king/late seventies cop show star.

 

Thanks for reading and calling out my seemingly anti-'stache Edward thoughts.

 

- Allie

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language           *Banner by Falling Stars*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 47421
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

“I want a thigh.”...LOL!



Author's Response:

Ya know, that came to me as I was writing, and I just went with it.  Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading ;)  xoxox

Summary:

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Driven to Desire Entry: I had the perfect life in New York. Money, a nice house, loving husband. But still, I craved him. He was a man so close yet so forbidden. My own personal demon. My torture. My step-brother; Edward Cullen.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22278 Read Count: 13571
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Oct 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me that Edward and Bella will not go to jail. And will have an HEA!

James is a f*cking pig!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope his d*ck rots off!



Author's Response:

I can't tell you exactly what'll happen but I will tell you that there will be a HEA ;)

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am absolutely addicted to this story! LOVE IT!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 405326
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

There are more men that appreciate a curvy, sexy woman than you think!  Men take a lot of their cues from us. When Bella moves out, I am hoping that she will feel better about herself and dress in more figure flattering clothes-many man LOVE LOVE LOVE real boobs and curvy butts

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would like to volunteer to murder Lauren and Jessica!  They are rotten bitches! That is also completetely unprofessional behavior- if Bella had the balls, she could report them to Human Repsurces- could probably get them fired, too. (I'm a nurse)

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm so glad he is being so kind to her. As afar as her weight., in many areas(especially in beach areas), a person of slighty above normal weight is considered "fat"- if you're not a size 2, you're fat. Bella can't be that much overweight, or Edward would not have been able to lift her.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOVE EDWARD!

Hope Charlie burns in hell

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So glad she stood up to dickwad Newton and fuckwad Black!

I'm a nurse, and Bella would probably have signed her email, Isabella Swan, RN not Nurse Isabella M. Swan..

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 151090
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Glad Rina was not a predatory bitch-I'll admit I was worried.

Their wedding night was sexy and beautiful-GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I LOVE BELLA- ROSE TOO! I am so f*cking happy that Bella told Edward she wanted a "real" marriage. You go girl!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

"He knew, without a shadow of a doubt, that this would end in tears."...WHY? Bella has wants him-he wants her. Is it because she isn't his type: tall & blond? That is f*cked up!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Feeling so sad for Bella right now-the man just keeps hurting her with his careless words.

"That man isn’t me… it can’t ever be me.  I don’t do commitment.  I don’t do kids and happy families."...I hope this isn't true.

 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

“Don’t worry, I won’t run away.  Where would I go?  I have no one, Edward, just you, and hey, waddya know, turns out you don’t want me."...My heart is just breaking for her. Edward is a total f*cking douchebag! Doesn't he realize he has completely broken her heart? I was so happy when they married, but now I wished they hadn't.  I wish something bad on him-erectile dysfunction, perhaps? Especially if he ever tries to have sex with anyone other than Bella-like his junk only works for her-won't even work if he is fantasizing about her?

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Edward is a f*cking asshole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He thinks this " She’s mine, fuckers.". Next he has hot sex with Bella, then forces her to fly off alone to London, then tells her her probably won't see her for months. He get the award for the shittiest husband ever!!!!!!! It would really serve him right if she just took a solo trip and disapperared from him for month or two.  He is just killing her!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

PLEASE don't let Edward sleep with Jane-Please give him a non-functioning pecker- non-functioning for anyone but Bella. My heart hurts for Bella

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Has Edward fogotten he is a married man? Kissing Jane and thinking about her that way? what a douche!

I am so happy that there will be an HEA and no cheating..Sigh of relief!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I had to read this chapter twice. I think I misunderstood Edwards' intent the first time-was Edward REALLY going to tell her how he feels for her? "But with Bella in front of him… actually here in the same room with him, he knew that he could no more give her up than he could ask her to give up Swan Publishing."

These two never get a break-they are just about to talk and the alarm goes off and Bella reads Jane's texts! I have a feeling that something bad(hopefully not TOO bad) is going to happen to Bella in Italy. And Edward is her next of kin....

My heart really hurts for Bella- she must feel so betrayed- even more than before. I kinda hope she tells Rose about Jane's texts- Rose will kick both Jane's and Edward's asses.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

As much as I want that HEA-please-I can completely understand Bella here:"I can’t do this, I just can’t let him in again.  Ever.  Please let me be strong enough not to give in." 

Please? by Kallipap Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Bella and Edward have been friends since they were children. Now she wants him to help her with a rather delicate situation. How will Bella's request affect them? Will anything be the same again?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46834 Read Count: 10698
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Nov 2014
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm just not sure this Edward is redeemable. Sh was so extremely insecure in high school, and he was well aware. Abandoning her when she needed him most sent her whole life into a downward spiral. I don't think I could ever forgive him.

As for Bella...after all the tragedy on her life, that she had to deal with all alone (thanks to that SOB Edward), she is so broken. I don't know if she can ever be whole, especially after hearing Edward go on and on about his dauhgter with that rotten excuse for a human being, Tanya.

The One by naughtydreamz Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Edward meets Bella on the first day of elementary school.  Their story as told by him.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2495 Read Count: 25450
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is so cute!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

"Bonerward"...LOL!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh Baby, Oh Baby!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sometimes you just know it is right

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

He is so sweet! They are perfect together

Summary: Past Featured Story

hard

 

No one ever said parenting was easy. But, when you have a spoiled brat of a teenage daughter,  a little boy who thrives for attention, and immature parents, you could say that there family is a little more chaotic than some families, and in need of some help. It doesn't help that the town likes to gossip about them, and Mrs. Weber  is out to get Bella and little Masen.

Banner made by TwistedinMasen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64080 Read Count: 11087
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jan 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Tanya was so cruel! And she is going to totally regret the tatt.

Love the kitchen table story!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Tanya is such a bitch! Sure glad that E*B are still so hot for one another!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Mrs Weber is an asshole!  So, E&B  not going to church is an issue? Some people are so small minded! I was VERY religious when I was younger, but not anymore



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I dont't think Bella should leave Edward-even for a couple of days...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Save Tonight by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

AU - It's been nine months since Edward fled the woods in Forks, fled from her for her. Each day his willpower crumbles a little more, feeling the insistent pull to return to her side. Upon returning, a passionate night will erupt between them.

Bella and Edward


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16688 Read Count: 6745
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2012 Updated: 26 Nov 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In a Little While

WOW! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, SEXY AND ROMANTIC!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Breathless

Poor Bella!

Summary:

A cheesy romance set amongst the rubble of Apocalyptia.

July entry for Drabble Wars

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18476 Read Count: 23340
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I can't imagine being in such a desperate situation, with a tiny baby, having just given birth..



Author's Response:

It would be one messed up time!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I read his "romantic" sayings to hubby, who is currently cracking up!

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

mhnf


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 122248
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella is a f*cking idiot if she goes to Edward's ex for her GYN!!!! STUPID STUPID STUPID!!!



Author's Response:

Bella didn't know that she was the goth chick Edward used to date. She only found out when he turned out there. Talk about awkward :))

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 58327
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Carlisle needs to die

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

My heart breaks for Edward's real parents! I cannot imagine their anguish.

Falling by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

falling

Bella is just divorced when she meets Edward in a club. Can he help her heal?

 

Can she get over the past and fall in love with this amazing man?

 

falling

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124179 Read Count: 52950
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2013
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Why aren't people freaking out about the fact that Mike is stalking Bella and Edward and has the gun he stole from Bella? Shouldn't they have some police protection?

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Mike sure is a douchebag!



Author's Response:

Yep!  He's not very bright either! 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

KATE NEEDS TO DIE!



Author's Response:

Naw that's a little harsh!  She gets her just deserts!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think that Edward should get a new #

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

Banner for my story

AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

Banner made by yours truly!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 66812
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Tattoo on My Heart

I'm not happy about the tonsil hockey with Siobhan



Author's Response:

*Sheepishly shrugging my shoulders*  Sorry.  I tried not to let him do that, but he just wouldn't listen.  At least he's making progress with Bella.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Patience, My Grasshopper

I feel so sad for Bella



Author's Response:

I know!  But I promise there's light at the end of the table.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: The Flight

PLEASE update today! I'm going crazy 



Author's Response:

I'm working on it.  We'll see.  I promise it's not on purpose.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Garrett is a good-and insigtful- friend. I just wiosh Edward would realize that he IS good enough for Bella. He just needs to give her another year or two before he asks her out on a date( I started dating at 15 1/2) - can he swear off other girls for tha long?



Author's Response:

Garrett is a good friend, and I've got some good things planned for him.  As far as Bella and dating, with Charlie, that age might be pushed back just a little bit, but not by too much.  I'm hoping to slip in a few innocent things here and there before they actually start "dating."

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

From a redneck bar in Georgia to the bright lights of Los Angeles and New York. They were nobodies, but together they became America's Sweethearts. Will fame and temptation destroy them? Or will their love go the distance?    

FS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15491 Read Count: 15444
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 10 Sep 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am hoping that Edward will actually ASK Bella about Jake-he doesn't even know Jake is her childhood friend? Edward has been showing up with one slutty chick after another-what did he expect?

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's about time, Edward-you've behaved like a complete douchebag!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward is an asshole!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I hope the next chapter reunites E&B!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That is so cool of Jake to do that!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was so sweet. made me cry

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

LOVE IT, LOVE IT,LOVE IT,LOVE IT,LOVE IT,LOVE IT,LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

LOVE IT!

Second Chances by melloncollie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

banner

Edward and Bella parted ways after high school and never spoke again. 5 years later, when Edward dies in a car crash, Bella gets the chance to live out what could have been if she made a different decision 5 years ago. AH, HEA. contains adult themes and language.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100196 Read Count: 11963
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2015
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Since I've Been Loving You

I love their second chance, but I keep tearing up, remembering the beginning of the story

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: All I've Ever Needed

SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Save Me

Glad you're back, but it is so awful that this story has taken such a sad turn!

Summary: Past Featured Story

chemistry

banner made by: ME !!

Bella is in her senior year of high school.  She hated all science until she met Mr. Cullen, her biology teacher.  He is older, she is just 18. Will their chemistry last past the doors of the classroom?

This a B/E story line

I should have been patient and waited for my Beta  she is great !!

fs

 

 

 

This has been Beta'd by RAH07890


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14159 Read Count: 53113
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

More please! I've gotta say that I have NEVER had a hot teacher! Not even in college!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG! I want that house!

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 785]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 164368
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

I am proud of Edward

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

My guess is that it is Emily.

Sandy seems to forget, that although she is angry with Edward, she, Sandy is the one who chose to have sex with him, at her own workplace and also chose to be horribly rude and abusive to a patient. She was unprofessional and deserved to be fired. She never had to say "Yes' to Edward in the first place:
she is just another whore trying to get her hooks into a move star.

 

 

 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

I think it is Elizabeth on the couch. I don't think that Jasper would let Edward into his house.

I think Edward feels some remorse, but certainly not enough. Him f*cking other women(even when Bella was there for her OB/GYN appt!) when Bella is pregnant with his child would be unforgiveable for most people in real life. But this is fiction, and we ALWAYS want E&B together, so if Bella does forgive him, he is going to have to work very, very, very, very hard to earn her trust.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Is there any possibility of an HEA for Edward and Bella?



Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. and of course there will be an happily ever after for edward and bella. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

What a sh*tstorm! Edward is an ASSHOLE!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22

Well, Eddie dear, you better just suck it up and not let Jacob ruin your night out on the town with Bella! Do you want to ruin the evening for Bella? Because this very public appearance is important!

Lisa is a f*cking slut! Silvia too 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Oh shit!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder if Carmen knows Edward, and she is the one who told him?  I think Carmen is hoping to gain something by having Edward's baby mama living with her.

Irina - I would love to see her head shaved! What a bitch!

Eleazer is a sweetheart!

So worried about Bella - school is going to be hell, and she has to deal with f*cking Edward, too!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

I HATE Edward! Bella is there at the clinic and he is in the copy room f*cking some whore!.

Glad Bella will be getting a new OB/GYN.

I want to kill Carmen and that bitch, Kate

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

Die Carmen, die!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Emily is the asshole that ruined Edward!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Carnen is a crazy, conniving, delusional bitch just like her daughter(s).Edward's side of the story explains so much!