Reviews by Lead69
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

Looking forward to finding out just where you are taking us with this story, I'm thinking dark, dark path.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blessings

Does anyone else wanna smack some sense into this woman LOL

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Promises

I am really liking the ability to drop in a picture into the chapter.  What do they say "a picture is worth a thousand words." 

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35938
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Diversion: Jacob's POV

Well ... I had a couple of hours to kill and this filled the void quite nicely.  Enjoying a little J/B.  Looking forward to reading more.  :) Lea

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV

Edward who?

Loyalty by ysar Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapters 33 & 34: Mischief.

What kind of friend would Embry be if he just stood by and let Lauren come in between Jake and Bella? (One-shot)

~If you asked me, Jake was lucky Bella even bothered to come to him about it instead of just dumping him. And now he was too scared of stirring up trouble and upsetting Bella to do anything about it.~

~The pack was lucky, too, because dealing with Jake when he and Bella were on the outs was no picnic. But a call to Leah and a trip to Forks High would solve everything.~

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2589 Read Count: 318
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Loyalty (One-Shot)

Damn it I was looking for a one shot to recc and now it looks like I'm going to have to read the whole damn story now LOL.  I like your Embry although his guys logic has me a little worried.

Summary:

Cottages At The Cove Banner"The hottest love has the coldest end." ~Socrates.

This was my entry for the Black Balloon Angst Contest. One-shot that will be continued with a few more chapters.

Bella & Edward

AH

*TOP 20 FINALIST*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9432 Read Count: 458
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2010 Updated: 07 May 2010
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, Bella POV

Possibility of continuation huh?  Well I'd be back for more.  Well done!  A little angst reading never hurt anyone, right?!?! lol

Writing Exercises by fiberkitty Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

A collection of my writing excercises- some drabbles, some longer one-shots.  Various pairings and subjects. Each will be noted.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6671 Read Count: 2951
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 21 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Writing Exercises

Go Bella!  Hell who wouldn't want the hot Texan lol.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chlorine and Chocolate

Seth/Edward eeer I can see it, I just don't like it.  Did get a giggle out of neat freak Eddie. 

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Black Leather, White Lace

Now this I enjoyed.  I love the Emmett/Bella pairing - brother and sister my arse lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews!

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Beach Discovery

You got me a good one with this one Bella/Rosalie hmmm yeah that could be fun lol.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Kitchen Cougar

So Esme has never been my favourite Cullen but hell now I want to be herLOL.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Honey

What a nice sticky mess to be in.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Lesson of Control

Seth/Jasper works a little better for me lol.  Damn fortune teller wife.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Missing Puzzle Piece

LMAO - Poor Emmett

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pandemonium

Payback is going to be a bitch Jasper.  Lovin these drabbles.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Up

Aww sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews!

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ruined

Funny how we see tops and bottoms differently.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Twister

Who knew so much could be going on while playing Twister. Thanks for the read.

Summary:

Day-walkers don't often go to Fangtasia, but when they do, Eric demands tribute for safe passage. What is Jasper willing to offer, and can Eric make our favorite cowboy get down on his knees? Support Stacie Author Auction one-shot vampire slash. AU.


Categories: Crossover, Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Other Character, Jasper/Eric Northman
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5187 Read Count: 795
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 21 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't normally do crossovers but this I enjoyed.

Never A Choice by mkystich Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

How do you stop a murder when it's out of your hands?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 973 Read Count: 339
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I didn't go WTF but a did let out a very appreciative "N-I-C-E-!"

Well done Kris.



Author's Response:

Thanks bb! It's great to get reviews from authors I look up to. Thanks for the love and have a wonderful holiday!

Big Hugs, Kris

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74014
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?

Love having the Big Man back.

Kids and their scheming lol.



Author's Response:

You in this family there is no such thing as minding your own business. ;)

Thanks for the review

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

Wow the bitches from Alaska def did bring it.



Author's Response:

What's that saying?  Don't start something you can't finish.  They picked the wrong family to fuck with.

Thanks for the review

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- And Then There Were Three

Yeah I nice Rosalie... I'm trying to like her lol.

The big man, far wiser than most give him credit for.



Author's Response:

No one ever gives Emmett credit.  Just cause he is a kid at heart doesn't mean he doesn't pay attention.

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Choices

Is six months, one year, five years long enough - it would be very hard being emotionally involved to pull the pin.



Author's Response:

It really would.  What is the right amount of time?  Is there ever one?

Thanks so much for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart

Responding to Carlisle singing - interesting.

Loved that you rocked The Police - you have taste there lady lol.

 



Author's Response:

Believe it or not, this was one of the first scenes I thought of as I began this story.  And thanks, I have an eclectic collection on my iPod. ;)

Thanks for the review

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

I didn't cry (I am a bitch though) but I liked how you gave closure to both Edward and Esme.



Author's Response:

Don't feel bad, I don't cry often either.  I really felt that in order for Bella to move on that she needed to be okay (as okay as she could be) with Edward's death.  I must have rewritten this chapter at least three times before I was happy with the finished product.

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces

The Big Man always adds to the party, its good to have him back.

So no going back to Forks huh? I've been there its no great loss lol.



Author's Response:

LOL, damn girl, you are harsh!  Don't hate the Forks...hate the wolf pack. ;)

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

PS.  I'm glad you like my story...I would be afraid of what you might say if you didn't. ;)

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- A Race Against Time

Nice twist - Bella being unreadable to all the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Only for now.  I think of it as a short circuit in her shield combined with a lack of will to live.

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Exodus

A total emotional break for Bella - what's going to be able to get through to her?



Author's Response:

It will be a tag team effort.  Edward in her heart and Carlisle on the outside.

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's

Esme gone huh? I'm cool with it, as she is not exactly my favourite character.



Author's Response:

I hate to say it, but I always feel like Esme is expendable.  ;)

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

I met Peter in May'10 - such a gentleman but much shorter than I expected lol.

 



Author's Response:

He truly is one of the good ones, isn't he.  I agree, meeting him was fantastic, but I would have loved to spend so much more time with him.

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

Karaoke LOL

 

OMG - the declaration.  What now?



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks for the review!

Nickey

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

Loving the lip-blocking - a-n-t-i-c-p-a-t-i-o-n oh yeah.



Author's Response:

I don't often write slow burns...but I am having fun with this one.

Thanks for the review

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

bcd

 

To their families, Edward Masen, and Bella Volturi hate each other. Their secret relationship isn't the only thing they are hiding.

 

*Will be part of a Multi-Shot Series*

 

Rated for explicit Lemons and Violence

 

Banner by the lovely ViiolentDelight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10234 Read Count: 27918
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Behind Closed Doors

Interesting.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Behind Closed Doors

13 minutes, huh? Hard and fast isn't so bad.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Behind Closed Doors

Hmmm, the plot thickens.  Jasper is always a good guy for me, so now I'll have to see where this leads lol.

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nope.

Always the good guy to me.

Kinda sorta.

You tell me lady.

Thanks or sharing.

 

Educating Jasper by emmzz75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 121]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ej

 

Bella is a highly successful sex surrogate. She is professional and used to dealing with men and women with complex sexual problems...but nothing has prepared her for what happens when shy and broken Jasper Whitlock walks into her life. AH OOC Non-Cannon pairings - Jasper/Bella


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19377 Read Count: 24177
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2013 Updated: 15 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Lead69 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Interesting start. I look forward to seeing where you take this.