Reviews by fadedrouge
Summary: Past Featured Story

A series of accidental dates between Bonnie Bennett and Damon Salvatore stir feelings of a deeper nature than anyone would have guessed. First Season AU since  Fool Me Once. Bonnie/Damon

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Categories: The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Alternate Universe
Characters: Damon/Bonnie
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32151 Read Count: 1775
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: fadedrouge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

You seriously have a way with words. All of your chapters are absolutely flawless, and the writing is so fluid. I love your descriptions, it makes everything so smooth yet rough at the same time. If that makes sense, haha. I love how you stayed in character, most people right Damon as his cocky, suave self, but end up making him whipped like he is with Elena or Katherine, and I don't imagine that's how he is with Bonnie. You write in the differences of those relationships and his and Bonnie's, but so subtly, it doesn't have to be written so obviously and I love that. You wrote in character for Damon so well, very spot on. For Bonnie too. Very addictive to read, I feel like the transition of the status of Damon and Bonnie's relationship was written very fluidly as well, nothing out of character, or jumping the gun too soon. Best piece of FF i've read sweetie, I love it. This will most definitely be added to my favourites.

You actually have the priveledge of being the first FF that I've reviewed here! :) Most definitely looking forward to more of your Bamon works, your writing is absolutely flawless, such a joy to read.



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